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The table illustrate the amount of money where it was spent by police in 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain while the pie charts depict the percentage of this spent on each category. Overall, the majority of money was spent on salaries and the budget increased within one year. It is clear that 75% of money spent to salaries in 2017 whereas this percentage decreased to 69% in 2018. Budget which was allocated to buildings and transport remained at the same level at 17%. Also, there was a sharp increase in the category of techonology from 8% to 14%. In 2017, the total amount of money used by police was 304.7 millions of pound and this rate went up to almost 319 millions of pound in 2018. Moreover, national government category almost stayed the same throughout the year. However, local taxes experienced a sharp increase. In 2017, 91.2m pound allocated for local taxes and this money increased to 102.3m pound in 2018. Finally, other sources such as grants saw a slight increase by half millions of pound between 2017 and 2018.

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The table and the pie charts provide information about the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table illustrates the sources of funds and the pie charts give details about expenditures. Overall, the total police budget increased from £304.7 million to £318.6 million and the national government being the biggest contributor in both years. The highest expenditure was on officers and staff salaries although it was decreased by 6% in 2018. The National Government was given 175.5 million and 177.8 million in 2017 and 2018 respectively. The second majority of funds were received by local taxes which were amounted to 91.2 million in 2017 and 102.3 million in 2018. Other sources granted 38 million in 2017 and increased by 0.5 million in 2018. 75% of money in 2017 and 69% in 2018 was spent on staff salaries and 17% of money was accounted for buildings and transport which remains unchanged in both years. Expenditure on technology was 8% in 2017 and nearly doubled in 2018 in to 14%.

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There's a superfluous technic used. That's taking the table for a paragraph and the pie chart for another paragraph. But the issue im almost considering is the fast nature. Please can you help us take it normal so that we crap the excellent styles I see you possessing? You have an incredible performance

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Hello ma'am Can I use inflow and outflow of budget fund ??

The table and pie charts provide information about police budget for the years 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.The table represents the source of money while the chart illustrates how this money is distributed. Overall, the majority of this budget’s source is provided by National Government, whereas the most significant part of this money is spent on officers' and staff's salaries on both years. The total funds rose from $304.7M to $318.6M within a huge contribution of National Government with amount of $175.5M and $177.8M respectively. The largest growth between years 2017-18 in these sources of funding is local taxes which increased by $11.1M and went up from $91.2M to $102.3M. The budget’s funds were spent primarily on salaries which slightly declined from 75% to 69%. Technology expenditures barely increased about 6% while buildings and transportation funds stayed at the same level of 17% between 2017 and 2018.

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The table illustrates the amount of money which spent on different kind of sources in one area of Britian between 2017 and 2018 while the pie charts depict how this money was spent. Overall, the total amount of money which allocated to different sources increased in one-year period and salaries comprised of most of the spent. First, national government spent 175.5m$ in 2017 and this increased to 177.8m$ in 2018. Moreover, local taxes experienced the biggest rise among others from 91.2m$ to 102.3m$. Police budget which 38m$ allocated to other sources such as grants also had a slight increase from 38m$ to 38.5m$. Also, the total amount of police budget saw a significant increase between 2017 and 2018, from 304.7m$ to 318.6m$. Officers and staff salaries consisted of most of the money in both years and in 2017, the percentage for salaries was 75% wherease this rate declined to 69% in 2018. Finally, building and transport remained constant while technology category saw an increase from 8% to 14%.

Hi Lilie what's the difference between proportion and percentage in terms of usage.

So informative and precise. Kindly touch the listening & Speaking tasks too thanks though/

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Please make a video of task 1 line graph ( consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to 2015)

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Hi sister, in the detailed paragraph 2 you have used: the proportion decreased from 75% of the total to 69%. Have you used 'total' as the total amount was given in the table or can we use percentage points instead of the total?

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Is it okay to write t304.7 like this? Or in stead of writing t, total should be used?

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The bar chart illustrate the proportion of American people who consumed fast food in restaurants in 2003 and 2013. Overall, people in USA ate fast food either everyday or never in 2003, 2006, and 2013. Moreover, majority of people preferred to eat fast food once a week or once or twice a month. It can be seen that, not even 5% of people in USA did not eat junk food everyday in 2003, 2006, and 2013. Moreover, same trend can be seen for the people who never tried eating fast food at below 5 percent except in 2003. Notably, about 15% of people consumed fast food in 2006 and 2013 whereas in 2003, this rate decreased to approximately 13% in 2003. On the other hand, majority of people preffered consuming fast food once a week at just over 30 percent in 2003 and 2006 except in 2013 at about 27%. In addition, 30% of people who had habit going to fast food restaurants in 2003 decreased 5% in 2006 and again in 2013, this rate had its peak level at almost 35%. I hope this gets at least 6.5

if I would be explaining a table, I would just tell the number of rows and columns of table will mention the headings in table and simply describe what's written in it other than describing what increased and what decreased. And about the pie chart, I would have described the colors of each part while mentioning it's name.😭😭 I really need to practice more than I thought to understand the concept in details.

Overall, the total police budget increased, with the national government being the biggest funder in both years.

Hai Sister Can We make introduction like this👇 The table illustrates how much money allotted for the police department in particular area of England and the pie chart shows where the money is spent in the year 2017 and 2018

Thank you Lilie for this video .... by the way can you do a small favour please ... there is no video about two part essay types in your playlist . Book 15 ... Test 1 ...task 2 ..i am really struggling for making structure for this type of essays.

Need more videos of essays and task 1

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In terms of ecpenditure, salaries remained the primary source

Hi why did you use t3million and other digits? What does it mean? Can you please tell

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Can we use "At the beginning " and "Moving further" in 1st and 2nd paragraph resp ... ???

I hope you will have a lesson about the line graph in 10:11 of the video.

Hi. if i write 130 words in writing task 1, but i write everything in the correct order, how many score can i get?

From where we could buy cambridge book 17... I am going to attend the test on 11 th of august

Hello, sister, can you please make the video about Reading.

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Mam I am watching your video but actually I am getting many problems with the ilets task 1 or 2 and I am preparing for ilets pleas mam give me some suggestion how to I improve my score

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is it too long for task 1?😆

explantion was good and i really taught too much of this video. but i really dont like how you pronounce some words... nice job

Try to speak little bite low.

The table and the pie charts provide information about the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table illustrates the sources of funds and the pie charts give details about expenditures. Overall, the total police budget increased from £304.7 million to £318.6 million and the national government being the biggest contributor in both years. The highest expenditure was on officers and staff salaries although it was decreased by 6% in 2018. The National Government was given 175.5 million and 177.8 million in 2017 and 2018 respectively. The second majority of funds were received by local taxes which were amounted to 91.2 million in 2017 and 102.3 million in 2018. Other sources granted 38 million in 2017 and increased by 0.5 million in 2018. 75% of money in 2017 and 69% in 2018 was spent on staff salaries and 17% of money was accounted for buildings and transport which remains unchanged in both years. Expenditure on technology was 8% in 2017 and nearly doubled in 2018 in to 14%.