Liked the story. I just wish it did not rushed. Am looking forward for more.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story and look forward to hearing many more, thanks 👍🇦🇺

There it is. The jaw set with grim determination. At least they aren't zorgons.

Great story loved it

Small pet peeve, you can't call any other planetary system a solar system, because our sun is technically called Sol, as in The Solar System and when the guy in the book is fighting the alien the book says they were rolling around in the lunar dust! No! Only the dust on our moon,Luna, can be called Lunar dust. Andromedan system is correct term and the dust would be moon dust until named. Peace out,ya'll!😂😂

Nice story. ty

I really enjoyed this story thank you

Thank, thank you. I enjoyed that

Granted the pronunciation needs some work on certain words. However, the overall cadence is well done. Enjoyed the story.

Was rather good I enjoyed listening

Like the story well done ❤

Thanks for story!

Great story

And Hernande's mom called" dinner is ready" and Hernandes left his toys on the flore. The story feels more then rushed

Nice. Needs to be longer so you can realy connect with the characters

I like the story keep it up

Did the Edenites really make an alliance with 3 earth humans and let them almost run/control the alliance?

love the story

How many Times can you bring One person back to life.

Decent enough story, I liked it. That being said, the author needs to work on keeping track of deaths of characters and other plot holes.

Controlled chaos? That's an oxymoron if I've ever heard one.

I liked the story.

How the Hell is Corvus still alive after the Quantum Forge atomized him?

Wait just a few minutes back corvus was atomized how did he spring a trap

Again STOP! 500K years and just as they wake up it so happens mow the humans are noticed? Sigh...

Good story, but it leaves some points open, what happened with Earth any ancestors left (other than from the Prometheus)? How has Corvus been revived?

It started off okay but when you got to the leviathan... nope. I'm done.

I like the story

19 minutes in and they have been attacked and found more humans also in stasis along with the ability to defeat the shields of a war class ship with a transport ship. Also the moon had no air yet the dead ship had enough air to bring people out of stasis.

So after 500000 years you can read the name Corvus on a suit ???? And he steaks english ???? Bullshit

Wow this one alien just won't die. I know they killed him twice and yet he comes back again and again. In other words the book sucks.

Interesting… I’ve given this a listen.. now I’ll go back to reading Heinlein and Asimov

There is no continuity. The big bad warlord got vaporized and then was leading an attack 2 minutes later on new edan.... a girl who does a suicide mission and the main protagonist ran off without her suddenly had her in his arm and taking her to safety to be saved from her injuries. Out of all this the most unbeleiavble thing was that changing the fuel a machine uses suddenly gave the machine reality changing effects....... Either this is a fever dream of a 14 year old. Or some lefy leaning college student who doesn't think continuity matters as long as they can use as many words as possiable to try and sound smart.

another storie out of sequence - please fix this

The quantum forge is a behemoth yet they can move it in a shuttle

This is almost religious in nature. It's a story that gives obstacles just like the story encounters adversaries. Plot repetition, same phrases rearranged on a plane of story narrative with a smattering of bright story resolutions.

I advert started advert listening advert but advert too many advert adverts. Advert every advert 3-4 advert minutes advert.

Wait up didn't corvis get vaporised in the forge room and then reappear later or was that just my imagination?

Great story, but a million ads I mean come on bro greedy af

Ridiculous number of commercials.

Basically a Mass Effect Andromeda rehash

500,000 years REALLY!

Omg, slow down with all the advertising. Ridiculous.

Some very noticeable holes in the storyline, not least the the confusing flip-flop of principal character genders and the unexplained reemergence of an atomized Corvus, Basically, there's way too many convenient discoveries and revelations used to feed continuity to the storyline.

Why is everyone named Hawkins

i lyk da story

The air erupted on an airless moon?

What's the title?

Commercial every 60 seconds

movie name please

There's some logical inconsistencies in it, and a few glaring chain-of-events mixups, but overall a decent story. If you use 1.25 playback speed, it flows better too.

the only thing more boring than reading an action story is listening to somebody else reading one

Too many frequent interruptions! Outta here

This needs to be a full length series of books

Please proofread. Many words sound almost alike.

Who reads it? From the outset, it sounds like an AI - in which case, I won't bother.

nice with the humans not being silly op at the start , though... last ditch hoppe for a whole civilization.. yee , that cargo hold would have hade not just purpose built hardware and heaps of compacted just ..junk.. for raw resource or 'scrap low tech improvisation' , but also what ever could been crammed in so.. nice plasma guns , here is my panther with excessive ablative heat shielding covering it and some nice uranium enhanced 'dumb' munitions , then agen the tech to make that kind of cryo tech.. the ark ship should have hade a nasty drone swarm hiding in the dark that sweep in the moment boarding ships nocked out the arks power wich actually not would have needed to been built at launch either , the ship should been told to snatch what astroids it could on the way in to enlarge material stores not to mention spending half a million years stable in system should have hade automated systems expand those basic resource redundancy and security efforts

I'm not sure where to start with this story's stupidity. Or even the shit that doesn't make sense. And don't get me started with the stupid characters making even stupider decisions...

Sorry I'm going to be a downer here, I stopped at 40 minutes. First if you go 500,000 years into the future, you are not going to run into a ship that launched 100 years before you who just so happened to also had a system failure and no one woke up for a long time. This has to be an AI base, and if you are going to do that you MUST edit it carefully. Promethius which launched 100 years before had more advanced weapons? What the hell is a colony ship doing with weapons in the first place? Fix the things that make no sense then record it using a humans voice, the AI voice is ok, but it stumbles in its pronunciation of words.

2 ADDS EVERY 6 minutes spoiled it BIG TIME for me had to keep clicking them off there's MAKING A LIVING and taking the PISH greedy greedy piggywiggy bad NO SUB from me no i don't want add blocker,,you ever read the small print,, bummer

Good grief youtube! Every two minutes an add. This sucks.

Excessive amounts of advertisements which broke up the story far more than necessary. AI voice cold and detracts from the story causing me to "zone out"

Man this is poorly written. They jump around to different setting with no explanation on how they got there, introduce equipment with no in depth description of what it is or where it came from. The story line has potential but the story has gaps bigger than the grand canyon

These ai generated stories man

I despise this thing that this author has for bring dead people back to life. It happens almost every story I read by this author it's ridiculous and asinine.

Doom and gloom tripe. The person surely is a card carrying democrat. Excessive

Utter nonsense.

Lots of diversity characters in this story. It’s kind of a turn off. I’d prefer to just hear normal names…

The battle was won... but the ....is far from over. Im done. Same story over and ever!

Tired 😢of his AI voice ruining every story.

I like the storie love syfi

I cannot stand AI voices... Ruins everything

This is very poorly written

Narrartor is pathetic. Mispronounces simple words. Story is dull and to mired in cliches. Gads it's bad.

How many times does Corvis have to be killed? Not to mention Zephir.

Far too many ads to enjoy 👎

I like the story