Achilles IV | A Sci-Fi Horror Creepypasta

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Story: Achilles IV | A Sci-Fi Horror Creepypasta
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Hello, I am Magnetar. I reside within the Void where space and time become indistinguishable. It is here, too, where I can hear tales from all across the multiverse. Tales of horror, future technologies, AI, Aliens, cosmic horror, world-ending catastrophes, apocalyptic events, space, and more.
So, if you're brave, join me in the Void. Listen to their screams, their pleas, and their stories.
But remember - Astrophobes be warned
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Magnetars are some of the most mysterious of all heavenly objects and only one in ten supernovae create these dense cosmic dynamos. Out of more than 3,000 neutron stars discovered to this date, only 31 total magnetars have been confirmed, making their strange existence extremely rare.
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Пікірлер: 116

@magicpyroninja 2 жыл бұрын

To be completely honest I don't find any creepypasta stories scary. It's more like I like to see what creative new things people can come up with since Hollywood is creatively bankrupt at this point

@bkup1332 Жыл бұрын

I agree, less scary, more creative.

@louisbrugnoni7639 Жыл бұрын

No one gets scared but we enjoy the stories.

@andreamccaffrey9891 Жыл бұрын

@N why? yup ted the caver, thought to be one of, if not the first creepypasta. Really really good. There are a few others tho. The hidden webpage would definitely be one, it’s absolutely terrifying. And u can definitely find lots that aren’t necessarily “scary” but very dark and disturbing

@joshquivey6990 2 жыл бұрын

ONLY Eleven security breaches? Sounds like a normal day at Foundation Site 19.

@joecarr6985 2 жыл бұрын

Magnetar.... excellent Narrator , stories are gripping full of horror & wonder couple of my favourites are"We built a Gateway to a star" & Proxima Centaury is not a star" ...... Outstanding MAGNETAR.....thank you..

@harryrundle7897 2 жыл бұрын

that ending was cathartic as hell

@windegoeq2 2 жыл бұрын

Can't wait to listen and nap

@nookleer Жыл бұрын

Ok that story was dope. I almost wish it was longer. This would make a tense movie.

@SamiKotiranta 2 жыл бұрын

Friday and Magnetar... Oh the absolute bliss😍🙏👍

@warrenreid6109 Жыл бұрын

Great story. Had me captivated all the way through. So glad I found this channel.

@evazauner 2 жыл бұрын

when i hear a new story from magnetar, i automatically give a thumbs up!

@BearPawification 2 жыл бұрын

I love your branded intro. It reminds me of old school Toonami.

@warrencromwell4282 11 ай бұрын

Outstanding!!! Really dug it!! Captivating!!!! More, please.......

@flappy7373 2 жыл бұрын

the background magic is really nicely, smoothly done. i barely notice it's there, it just kinf of floats in my awareness somewhere, making the tension/action/fear moments feel more.. visceral or engrossing maybe.

@magicpyroninja 2 жыл бұрын

I think it's entirely possible that the planet landed on that just had piles of resources laying around might have just been a regular planet at one point and the expanse ate everything and left nothing but piles of inorganic material

@magicpyroninja 2 жыл бұрын

And then further into the story I'm validated by the main character😂

@Leon187. 2 жыл бұрын

thanks for this long creepypasta

@morticialechatnoir6884 2 жыл бұрын

Wow, you have the best voice for this kind of stuff!

@nevasoba5953 2 жыл бұрын

This is a well written story, and ur are reading it superbly.

@ronway7280 2 жыл бұрын

Your simmering rage covered with complete condescension at the end was magnificent!

@mastertek383 2 жыл бұрын

MAGNETAR!!! My man.

@dchardinaycole5944 Жыл бұрын

I’m so happy I found this guy❤ I have so much to binge listen

@elypowell6797 7 ай бұрын

Yeah he is good but check out Viidith22 when you get bored then check out Dr Creepen. Lighthouse Horror is really good too.

@ma.carmensarmiento7661 11 ай бұрын

The story reminded me of Alien. I was rooting for this guy, like I did for Ripley.

@tknight6132 2 жыл бұрын

1am should be sleeping but I have to know the story ends love it 👍

@MrsCaranAmy 2 жыл бұрын

Just a marvelous space travel story. Great plot and ending. Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend.

@cecilbennett2549 2 жыл бұрын

Yess! Two days in a row!! I'm stoked!!

@fredericramstedt545 2 жыл бұрын

Magnetar, you incredible bastard, this was yet another fantastic narration. Thank you!

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

So happy you enjoyed it! 👾

@elypowell6797 7 ай бұрын

Magnetar, you're a good ole cock knocker! Love the stories.

@grimreaper6557 2 жыл бұрын

Nice act of Defiance. Great story and thank you Magnetar for posting it =)

@johansomeone1948 Жыл бұрын

That nano tec sounds exactly like a alien nanobot weapon.

@chadp363 2 жыл бұрын

Yyeeeeeeee. I like this one a lot. Thank you sir

@legendteller4893 2 жыл бұрын

You killed this, dude. Loved this story ;D

@Krigarkaj 2 жыл бұрын

Whoopity whoop! 😅 Good thing to wake up to.

@luckyrobinshomestead 2 жыл бұрын

I heard this one before a long time ago, but I think you did a better job with it, because last time I thought it was like the story-teller couldn't get into it. I never feel that way when you read them. Thanks for the hard work you put into these.

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

Glad you enjoy, thank you for your support 👾

@TheStuart-of-Cosby Жыл бұрын

Hey Brother thanks for another awesome narration. Hope your weekend is going well and good

@friendlyman9032 2 жыл бұрын

This was beyond great...just so good..hit it out of the park.

@thomaslowe4774 2 жыл бұрын

If only the Goonies were on the ship! This brave man could have lived!

@kevincaruthers5412 2 жыл бұрын

Pretty good. Thanks for sharing!

@TheNerdCorporation 2 жыл бұрын

Great job as always magnetar! 👌😀👍🏻 and thanks for not announcing something at the end 😘 keep up the good work! And btw i was wondering if you know about if there are alot of good deep ocean horror stories that has never been narrated? Cause those and stories like this are the best ones 😏

@Spectre1776 2 жыл бұрын

Magnetar I've been really enjoying your take on the Breach series but this is one of my other favorites can't wait to listen to it man 👽

@lexecomplexe4083 2 жыл бұрын

Wait this is a series? :O

@Spectre1776 2 жыл бұрын

@@lexecomplexe4083I think it's 12 parts

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

Achilles isn't a series, Breach is @Lexe

@Spectre1776 2 жыл бұрын

@@MagnetarYT dude Achilles was an awesome story

@richardhamilton9223 Жыл бұрын

This channel go hard. Magnetar you different in a way thats needed Salute my brother 💫👑💪🏾💯

@MagnetarYT Жыл бұрын

🫡

@mjskinner9288 2 жыл бұрын

Thanks for blessing us with another story. You and yours stay safe👾 🤙

@bubbafrump74 Жыл бұрын

Ensign = en-sin...sorry. it just sounds really Goofy if you've been in the military, and chances are, alot of your listeners are vet's. I love your narration, and I'm not trying to be a jerk at all. Thank you very much for the story's. You're my favorite of all of all the creepy 's on KZfaq. You do the most scifi too. Thanks again.

@jessem.burnside8584 2 жыл бұрын

Wow. Excellent Sci-fi.

@robertgoode6713 2 жыл бұрын

Reminds me of the last time we visited lv-426.

@jonny_gage 2 жыл бұрын

I love sci Fi horror stories!

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

I love you

@srmj71 2 жыл бұрын

Awesome! Again!

@0therun1t21 2 жыл бұрын

Jumped right on this!

@zyrxom Жыл бұрын

For reason I think this Jericho company has already been taken over by AI

@novaremix3412 2 жыл бұрын

thanks! this video helped me finish my project that due tomorrow:D

@squidlipssupreme168 Жыл бұрын

Really cool story

@johnfromdownunder.4339 2 жыл бұрын

Awesome 👽👽👽

@damirserbanovic 9 ай бұрын

this was amazing!

@SHADOWXIXX 2 жыл бұрын

Jericho a subsidiary of Weyland Yutani

@AG-en5y 2 жыл бұрын

Great narration excellence story🔥🔥

@nielsjensen9771 2 жыл бұрын

Awsome story

@justindunlap1235 2 жыл бұрын

dang that was a great story, and some top notch narration as well.

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

Thanks for your support 👾

@justindunlap1235 2 жыл бұрын

@@MagnetarYT no thank you. I just took a peek at your library and I think I may have found my new favorite creepypasta channel.

@lastofthe4horsemen279 2 жыл бұрын

Love stories told from the logs of a crew member and this one didn't disappoint. Great job Magnetar.

@pelgervampireduck 11 ай бұрын

I'm confused by the ending. was the ship and the expansion thing destroyed or not?. maybe I should listen to it again.

@adamfox1669 2 жыл бұрын

Excellent!

@michaelsurber2923 2 жыл бұрын

I was just waiting for Samus Aran to show up and save the day

@cherryclarke4704 2 жыл бұрын

SUPERB 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤

@0therun1t21 2 жыл бұрын

At least they're not Tribbles.

@dchardinaycole5944 Жыл бұрын

Thanks!

@susanhorn6401 2 жыл бұрын

Outstanding!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@johnhoon7069 2 жыл бұрын

Yeah that could be any large corporation in the world and some countries that I can think of

@WALKUREX 2 жыл бұрын

Love it

@jackabsolute5525 2 жыл бұрын

Reminds me of the movie Life. But about 10x better.

@evolution031680 2 жыл бұрын

Gelatinous Cubes are always a pain in the ass.

@kphizzle9569 2 жыл бұрын

You're on fire lately.

@henriqueribeiro8167 Жыл бұрын

Cargo comes first and the life of the Crew second for the corporate overlords? Is this based on a real story or what?

@indigobreeze2138 Жыл бұрын

Wow, honestly too realistic as far as distpoian corporate protocols are concerned.

@johansomeone1948 Жыл бұрын

Right the cargo came first indeed, right in your corporate faces.

@jystme2437 2 жыл бұрын

Of course its a great story and narration ❤but I've been looking for I and 2 and 3 🙄 there is none why use 1V so cruel 😌🦋

@stubones 2 жыл бұрын

Excellent story but I felt end was a bit of a let down.

@lokilockness2970 2 жыл бұрын

So far Amazing can you do the Alian books

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

I have been thinking about that, but I don't think they're in the public domain. With that said ... I could risk it for my fans? 😅

@lokilockness2970 2 жыл бұрын

@@MagnetarYT risk it for the biscuit as we say in Australia. Much love this sorry is epic it’s nearly finished and I’m so sad about the guy :(

@lokilockness2970 2 жыл бұрын

@@MagnetarYT just finished it I like to think the ship is gone

@ETOILEPHANTOME 2 жыл бұрын

That’s a dumb computer. It shut the entire crew with a deadly organism, has the video footage of their deaths and no more interactions of any kind with them and still doesn’t understand that they’re gone. 18:49 what happened to priority to the mission?

@mrdeer111 2 жыл бұрын

💖💖💖

@BlueSkyCountry 2 жыл бұрын

There are no words in the English language that I absolutely loathe more and look upon with nothing but scorn, than "wish", "hope", "positivity", and "positive vibes". These are words only uttered from the mouths of lazy and incompetent idiots. Awesome story by the way. Military and space sci-fi is among my favorite genres.

@Blue_4-2 Жыл бұрын

⭐🙂👍

@kzrlgo Жыл бұрын

10/10 reading. 4/10 writing.

@jimmyshrimbe9361 2 жыл бұрын

☀️🌚☀️

@CNinjaa 9 ай бұрын

All your base are belong to us 👽

@godemperorletoatreidesii7457 2 жыл бұрын

Didn't Dr creepin do this story too lol

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

Damn, I didn't realize stories could be read by only one person. Lol, fr tho, so what?

@godemperorletoatreidesii7457 2 жыл бұрын

@@MagnetarYT it's wasn't criticism just a comment for the sake of the algorithm 😂

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

😅😜

@user-jl8mp6lg4i 8 ай бұрын

Friendly ?

@chocolatefrenzieya 2 жыл бұрын

Double check pronunciation of "ensign". Or watch some Star Trek. :) Also check "aberrant".

@MagnetarYT 2 жыл бұрын

There is the American and English version of ensign. So. 🤷🏽‍♂️

@Michael_Breiter 2 жыл бұрын

What moronic company gives such low priority to the TECH SPECIALIST? Is Jericho a subsidiary of Weyland-Yutani? The UAC?

@privateperson5054 2 жыл бұрын

Yea ... Another story without an ending. Who is going to give me the weak ass excuse that its better and leaves things up to my imagination ? Play a table top RPG when you want that. Lazy author just not finishing the story. This style was cool in the 30s 40s and 50s but just like smoking we know better now.

@Jester123ish 2 жыл бұрын

Re-listen to the very first intro, it gives you a pretty good clue how things go.

@privateperson5054 2 жыл бұрын

@@Jester123ish Things are "left to the imagination" a good indication is not good enough its just lazy.

@jaredbryant8297 Жыл бұрын

@@privateperson5054 grow up

@privateperson5054 Жыл бұрын

@@jaredbryant8297 How is that juvenile, exactly ? You claim to know so lets hear this tid bit of "wisdom" we all know will be lame. But go ahead basement troll share your marvelous insight.