Alien Galactic Council: "Ceasefire!" Humanity: "What? We're Just Getting Started!"

Alien Galactic Council: "Ceasefire!" Humanity: "What? We're Just Getting Started!" | Sci-Fi Story

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Humanity finds itself embroiled in a fierce galactic war against the Kriv'axian Empire. When the Alien Galactic Council calls for a ceasefire, the humans, united under a common cause, refuse to back down, determined to prove their newfound strength.
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@nielcasicas Ай бұрын

Wait, a mere captain is representing all of humanity, and also giving orders to an admiral and a general? wtf is going on?

@jagernavet4468 Ай бұрын

That's what happens when people write stories without any clue as to how the military rank structure is.

@terrygerhart6878 Ай бұрын

You did not know he is not a Captain, he is a Capitan. Higher than high, mightier than mighty. Besides Brandon called in and the AG at Galactic headquarters was fired.

@bbryan1973 Ай бұрын

Meanwhile in the NCO ranks…”Specialist Riker ordered Sergeant Major Vance to retreat because the tension was palpable”.

@josefhyatt2780 Ай бұрын

@bbryan1973 the tension is ALWAYS "palatable" in these stories!!!!😂😂😂😂😂

@geofthompson3844 Ай бұрын

@@josefhyatt2780palatable? Or palpable?😂

@joanwagner2538 Ай бұрын

The writer does not seem to know where a captain is placed in the chain of command. 😮

@CryptidsRoost Ай бұрын

Because majority of these stories are written by AI, usually ChatGPT

@oliveriobarro4505 Ай бұрын

Captain is a O-6

@joanwagner2538 Ай бұрын

So much for AI being so Smart 🙄

@STB-jh7od Ай бұрын

It's been done before, using lowest ranking soldier available to represent one side to humiliate enemies during negotiations.

@chesleychris Ай бұрын

@@oliveriobarro4505 In the Army a Captain is a 0-3

@CryptidsRoost Ай бұрын

You can tell these stories are mostly written by AI, usually ChatGPT coz names etc are almost always the same... James, Zara, etc and ships are mostly called Resolute or Indomitable lol

@josefhyatt2780 Ай бұрын

The human troops fueled by adrenaline and determination....BS! WE'RE FUELED BY COFFEE AND HATE!!!! 😂😂😂😂

@tonyv8925 Ай бұрын

And, fresh pop-tarts...lol

@brettread6373 Ай бұрын

As a Brit l really think it was a backwards step when they stopped the Rum ration in the armed force's The Dutch issued Gin hence Dutch courage ( I think that's right)

@STB-jh7od Ай бұрын

Damn Skippy!!

@mikehenthorn1778 16 күн бұрын

And the Marines are fueled by crayons. Lol never be the work that has to be done before a crayon snack and a nap.

@josefhyatt2780 16 күн бұрын

@@mikehenthorn1778 Leave the red ones alone!!!! THEY'RE MINE!!!! Semper Fidelis and as always YAT-YAS!!! PALADIN SENDS

@williamballard5520 Ай бұрын

Space is an area of endless blackness, broken by small pinpricks of light. So, how do you start a battle at dawn?

@glitch_the_dragon Ай бұрын

They more than likely didn’t mean literally. I personally believe he is saying that for the sake of the moment. Others may take it differently, though.

@bobalicious2696 Ай бұрын

It's ZULU time, duh! Otherwise known as GMT.

@steyraug96 Ай бұрын

You've heard the expression, "It's 5 PM somewhere," right? 😉

@pauljanetzke 11 күн бұрын

Don't start the mower if you don't want ALL the grass mowed. And to quote TFE, "It's never a war crime the first time."

@oliveriobarro4505 Ай бұрын

As am listening the command structure is backwards

@ramonalejano671 Ай бұрын

Martian a bipedal insectoid with an exoskeleton? I thought there's no plant/animals in Mars. Is this setting not in this universe or not in this times? A mere captain giving orders to an admiral and a general?

@mr.frederickson329 Ай бұрын

The spelling errors in the text window are hilarious.

@privateperson5054 Ай бұрын

Aside from the horriable military refrences, why did the council care about the deaths and downfall of the agressive empire.

@yeetsahoy7867 Ай бұрын

Probably for balance of the galactic order, like if this one is replaced will it be replaced by someone worse or will the void be filled with multiple others causing more war, chaos and death. Only the writer would know

@privateperson5054 Ай бұрын

@@yeetsahoy7867 Thats the point. The writer should have written the answer.

@colindempsey470 Ай бұрын

"Appointed representative," would indicate that he's been empowered in this situation by a higher power (president, legislature, commander in chief), to have primary command over this situation. Not a stretch that he could order those higher in the chain of command in said situation.

@TR1P0DL1F3 Ай бұрын

Retreat? He'll, we just got here.

@uweporth9337 Ай бұрын

Why would you put troops on the ground when you can just destroy the shipyards from space.

@sdragut Ай бұрын

I'm not even half way through. I'm greatly enjoying the story line. finally something different

@MrSciFiUniverse Ай бұрын

Thank you for your feedback!!!! 😊💯

@thomasspeetzen7658 Ай бұрын

Admirals and Generals commanded by a captain, must be a James Tiberius Kirk wanna be

@SlicerJen 8 күн бұрын

This story was painfully simplistic.

@scottj4462 12 күн бұрын

I thought they were going to attack the supply lines, not the shipyards, but then they did just the opposite.

@terrygerhart6878 Ай бұрын

The new AI stories are getting better, still a lot of rambling story but still palatable. Read a Harlequin romance novel intend for women who came of age in the 50s 60s 70s and 80s, not my topic of interest but readable and well written. So to will AI reach this level of authorship.

@garygough3158 Ай бұрын

Harlequin tried their formula on SF too, ref "Laser Publications" . Give an outline to a ghost writer, send that to a committee to remove large words, anything controversial or thought provoking, publish. Total waste of paper and failed spectacularly.

@prbnstn7538 3 күн бұрын

A space battle that launches at DAWN!? Sheesh

@TheSilverKK Ай бұрын

A choke point in space? Do writer know the vastness of space?

@rainemiller5016 Ай бұрын

Play stellaris, and you'll get the idea of it

@TheSilverKK Ай бұрын

@@rainemiller5016 will try thank you

@steyraug96 Ай бұрын

Paired black holes, perhaps, orbiting each other, in a sense? Multiple Meteor fields?

@chesleychris Ай бұрын

We had those as a Paratrooper when I was stationed in Italy, they're a little spooky, lol

@steveeidmann Ай бұрын

Why is an Admiral and a General briefing a mere Captain? A VERY junior officer?

@pauljanetzke 11 күн бұрын

In navy parlance, at least in the in the US, a Captain is the equal to a full bird Colonel. Most future Earth stories use naval ranks for the spacing fleet.

@steveeidmann Ай бұрын

Even if you consider him as a Navy Captain, which is in the army a Full Bird Colonel, he is still Jr to an Admiral and a General.

@fredmaxwell9619 7 күн бұрын

A f'n Captain in charge again and not an Admiral or General but both reporting to a Captain. Shove this story where the sun does not shine.

@williamhussey9036 Ай бұрын

YES! Noone seems to really understand military ranks, esp the Navy (a captain is equiv to a colonel), not a general

@intruderone234 Ай бұрын

when does a captain order an admiral

@barelyasurvivor1257 Ай бұрын

In AI Stories, and people ignorant of Military Ranks

@KM-et8wc 19 күн бұрын

You need to fix the rank structure.

@kennethabagis8392 24 күн бұрын

Was wondering how a mear captain was giving orders to both an admiral and general. This is not how the chain of command is done captains are lower than a general or an admiral. Someone didn't do here homework 🙃

@fredmaxwell9619 Ай бұрын

The story concept was good and the flow not bad, but the execution was bad. As others commented a Captain representing the Earth then ordering Admirals and Generals around is totally BS.

@Johnist1983 Ай бұрын

Should have answered that there would never be true peace while yheir Emperor lived.

@tzmmm Ай бұрын

I dont mind the ai voice over, but these ai stories are all the same bro. 😭

@ghimmy47 Ай бұрын

You need to forget the words "determination" and "resolute". They're like a drug to you. Your writing can't progress with them. Get a "thesaurus".

@edwardroche2480 Ай бұрын

This is a whole lot better than some of them they use the same words hundreds of times to describe the same events

@vickymolinar4248 Ай бұрын

Future things change

@josephwiese1114 22 күн бұрын

"We strike at dawn" WTF? In space there is no dawn... SMH

@ronnielittlerock7208 Ай бұрын

"We strike at dawn" has no meaning in space

@ccConcerts Ай бұрын

Well I've officially listened to enough of these to learn that when the author uses the word palpable the story is mediocre at best.

@danielh6015 Ай бұрын

why is a ship's captain telling an Admiral and a General what to do

@tonyv8925 Ай бұрын

Ship's Captain has exclusive authority on his/her ship.

@danielh6015 Ай бұрын

That is true but he can’t order around an admiral nor other captains , which is what he is doing . An admiral would lead the squadron of ships with each captain having control of their specific ship. This isn’t happening here

@TheDurid1 Ай бұрын

6:50 AI.... Not drivel. But shows an amazing lack of understanding of the setting and its own 'worldbuilding'.

@maximusmeridius1240 Ай бұрын

Great battles are ahead for humanity this is just the beginning, it's our DNA. 😊

@tr66tr66 Ай бұрын

What a crappy ending

@JohnGee123 Ай бұрын

What I'm more interested in is that every story I've listened to from this channel either has a chunk missing or starts over from the beginning somewhere in the middle. Thumbs down, again!

@jagernavet4468 Ай бұрын

Like most of these stories creators ..... they have no idea of the "Chain of Command" or of positions of top command officers. I've listened to dozens of stories with mere "Lieutenants" as executive officers. That would only happen on a very small command. And there are always the same tired phrases and dialogue in every story.

@igregmart 7 күн бұрын

Nah. Unconditional surrender is the ONLY right decision. Right at the moment of probable total victory this Human leader blew it.

@kennymonty8206 Ай бұрын

If you would use real voice actors instead of AI, I'd respect this.

@ericshutter5305 Ай бұрын

minute stories ... written in 1 minute without any knowledge on the subject ...

@Hanovaphist Ай бұрын

Weak Ending WTF is this Peace Talk. Alien Lizards Attack we WRECK THEM.😊

@bobalicious2696 Ай бұрын

I don't think I've listened to one of these stories yet that hasn't used the word "cacophony." Also, whoever, or whatever, is doing your auto-text sucks. The same words get misspelled, incorrect words on the screen that don't match the voice, etc. Also, when referring to a Naval ship, or star ship, the first time the name is used is U.S.S. xxxx, thereafter it's just xxxx.

@alt3241 7 күн бұрын

Too many errors to bother with .

@FloatingFatMan 17 күн бұрын

Wow... At least decide how you're going to spell the alien race consistently in the captions... So sloppy. You'd think they'd teach ChatGPT how to spell...