Ancient Human Supercarrier Awakens, Stuns Galactic Coalition

Ancient Human Supercarrier Awakens, Stuns Galactic Coalition | HFY Sci-Fi Story

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Ай бұрын

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@rdb9912 Ай бұрын

Vortis loves slamming his fist against the bulkhead huh.

@garysuarez9614 Ай бұрын

And faces be contorted with eyes blazing.

@marysmith-ps7uj Ай бұрын

And the ships "bristling with weapons" crap! Someone write better scripts and let an actual human read them. Geesh!!😮

@Perurikun Ай бұрын

"The engines burned with a fierce determination" 🤣🤣🤣 does that mean the engines are alive? 😆

@timblack6422 Ай бұрын

Why does this feel AI generated? Disjointed quite a bit.. some elements didn’t make sense with what was stated earlier in the story

@holarndius Ай бұрын

It is AI generated, using a series of "Prompts" to guide the generation.

@drakkonis1 Ай бұрын

@@holarndius Yeah. I've listened to a few of these stories from this channel and had to wonder about that. So much repetition in so many of them, for instance. The same paragraphs written over and over again in slightly different ways. Huge, gaping plot holes, scenarios requiring plot armor thick enough to ward off a supernova. I hate being critical, but if this is actually a human author, he or she needs the criticism so they can improve.

@ianmccardle330 Ай бұрын

I was initially excited and listened to a few of these. But the phrases constantly repeat that drives me nuts. Problem is hfy is everywhere and I cannot find sites that are alternative. I certainly shows the massive limitation . I have listened t a few extremely good stories but completely different narration. No repetition and great stories. Perhaps the people doing this are trying to do something good. Kudos. But it's not good

@drakkonis1 Ай бұрын

@@ianmccardle330 Try stories from Agro Squirrel Narratives.

@vanguard9067 Ай бұрын

@@ianmccardle330I listen for “beacon of hope”, “testament to human…”, and “indomitable will” as clear evidence of AI generation. AI seems to love those phrases:-)

@ericcastillo4026 Ай бұрын

So at the start of the story the ship was waking up and powering weapons and shields, but then engineering was suppose to "bring back weapons and shields" so which is it? And what does an obsolescent ship from a race that was defeated would have that the advance species that defeated them would want? This story makes no sense at all.

@Anarxur 11 күн бұрын

So Petrov is told to stay on the ship. Then Petrov dies in combat because he was not on the ship. Then Petrov is back aboard the ship having escaped the self destruct. Wut

@kingolegos Ай бұрын

How did the alien guy figure out about the hidden human colony anyway?

@Perurikun Ай бұрын

you beat me to it! 🤣

@digger66a Ай бұрын

When Aliens develop a Planet destroying Weapon its called Doomsday Device. Ehen Humans do the same its just called a necessary development.

@kingolegos Ай бұрын

Of course! We have to teach the Xeno-scum to know their place.

@duotone69 Ай бұрын

Cause the villain always tells their plans.

@cab8866 Ай бұрын

Try keep text with audio.

@TheCardolan 6 күн бұрын

what happened to the boarding parties? The retribution had numerous boarders on it when the humans awoke from cryosleep. Those never got dealt with and spent the entire story on board doing something?

@jamespseaman4136 Ай бұрын

There’s always got to be Supersoldiers!

@FictionFrontiers Ай бұрын

Tech eons ahead awakens sleeping titan. Our species' daring knows no limits!

@craigsawicky1643 Ай бұрын

Little boys play at Mine's Bigger. As soon as the Enemy made a statement concerning one's Death, the response should have been "Fire!". From that point the Battle escalates or ends.

@kconnor4568 Ай бұрын

Ok I give up. What the hell is 88 supposed to be for?. Why have several commentators just put 88 on ?

@TheNilsolov 9 күн бұрын

88 is a telgraph short for Love and Kisses. 99 is the opposit.

@marysmith-ps7uj Ай бұрын

Too bad they don't have black alert and simply disappear. That wwould scare the hell out of the norcadians.

@leewilliamson3424 Ай бұрын

In a galaxy far far away 🥷🤺

@ChadLetourneaurhavoc Ай бұрын

wait a sec Petrov was left on the ship wjile the Cap did the RnD mission how did petrov end up on the mission

@darkcloudrider359 Ай бұрын

Where can I get that picture for a desktop?

@Perurikun Ай бұрын

💯

@MrBobby6343 Ай бұрын

88 this is so entertaining

@michaelburke750 25 күн бұрын

…echoing through the void of space… WTH? No… just no.

@TexasWpodApe 6 күн бұрын

I am 667 like and 88.

@duotone69 Ай бұрын

How big is Vortis’s wrist?

@ronaldwildman7296 Ай бұрын

The wording is off from the person or AI generated script. Blessings

@lynneclark5313 17 күн бұрын

Why did they have to mix up the end? 88

@caryking5382 Ай бұрын

All over the place. I tried to listen, but it's soooo bad.

@paulacornelison243 Ай бұрын

I only listened at it. I was busy doing other things. Worked great for me. Anything missed was because I wasn't listening.

@caryking5382 Ай бұрын

Let's start with the first 10min. How is it possible...... story starts with the ship being hit with boarding pods. Why you ask? They're being boarded. They ignored it and somehow escaped being surrounded by an entire enemy fleet to then capture a enemy scout ship, that happens to be too close to a hidden human outpost, that happens to to be close enough for them to enacted said capture. Then to begin interrogation of the scout ship's crew, while not addressing the situation with the multiple enemy boarding parties still on his ship. BTW, they just woke up and recovering from long term cryo sleep... First 10min of a "All over the place" story that had nearly 50min left in it. You must have been really busy.

@kconnor4568 Ай бұрын

This story is full of lies, falsehoods ,repeating scenes, and plots that after the story was told and everything was over, then you start a different scenario where key characters die and previously dead characters are brought back to life. I stopped really paying attention to this not even 10 minutes into the video. Well, I guess this is one hour of my life that I will never get back.

@lairbear3611 Ай бұрын

Omfg bro. Half of this story was just rewriting the same line in different ways to pad the story. Like in HS when you would fluff the words of a report by saying "there were many settlers in this area. The amount of settlers was vast but more arrived yearly. Over the years many new people continued to settle the area". OKAY BRO WE FKING GET IT! Besides that my man must have forgotten plot points cause i swear to god he would retcon what he had alread written without giving 2 fks if it held continuity. Horrible story. Good idea with potential, horrible execution.

@Rick-lb8sm 11 күн бұрын

He also needs to learn the meaning of the word fate