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Hey Mr Everything English, thank you for the video. I dont mean to be questioning anything in the video, everything you said i agree with and is correct. But i just cant help but to feel like perhaps AQA itself is a little divided, and conflicted, just because at my school, last year, ppl used your priest plot, and they got flagged for plagiarism. So yes AQA has said, pre-plan your story, but i guess its just them contradicting themselves. In our mocks, we got our papers marked by an external examiner, that was an AQA examiner, who actually marked down, basically half the year, because many ppl had used your pre-planned plot (which i love btw, they're amazing!). So yes although AQA themselves have said themselves that you can use pre-planned plots and use inspiration from other ppl's work, i think its just the fact that they're a little inconsistent in what they say which was very evident in the past couple of years with the whole advance information ordeal, which actually left many students misinformed, as the exam simply did not adhere to the information that AQA themselves gave, and i think the same thing is happening here. I guess what im trying to say is that just because AQA has said it, doesn't mean the examiners have said it, who often just dont listen to their own organisation, and thus why i think many ppl are right in telling us to avoid using pre-planned plots. Could you please help me out with this?

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what if you want to make a description about the image ?

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Are the other eng lang 1 questions that you went through only for aqa?

if they give you 2 description prompts, can you just write a narrative? my teacher told us to not differentiate between a description and narrative - write the same thing for both

How do we use ideas from section A if you told us to do Question 5 first?

inspiration does not mean copying though

Sir your right and these other teacher in school or on youtubr just makes us more confuse

So can I again use Priest and the God story idea in this exam and will it be fairly marked?

I used a plot from a book of mini stories I read, but I obviously changed it into my own words, Will I get marked down ( it was my mock not my exam)

I’ve only done the description, so I feel like I can’t do the story at this point since I don’t even know how to format it. So is it possible to pre plan a description?

what structure follow within the paragraph when I make my story

Sir will i be fine to take the idea of one of your tiktok language paper 1 Q5 38/40 idea but use different words ? or is it plagarism

HELP! Do you recommend the picture/descriptive piece or the story? I have seen mixed opinions on which one is better and I am stuck on which one to prepare for (I have mostly been doing the descriptive piece though).

do you think it would be good to do a dual narrative on one character who is rich and one character who is poor in the same city and describe how they view the world. then have the poor need to steal from the rich but very descriptive

Wait sir can I use this plot? I used it today and apparently I can’t????

how could i pre plan for a description?

how does one start planning for a story? Do I plan one big one or do I just plan different characters(mother, father, child )and settings (sunny, raining) that can be used for any story?

SIR! What if they give us two description questions, as it said in the video... if so how do we adapt the story plan we made?!?!?!?!?!? [URGENT]

im gonna talk about a guy waiting for a text

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would you be able to do a story with a dual pov? like if you keep switching between characters?

Sir, are we allowed to use ideas from the picture to include in our won story?

Does this apply the same to eduqas

Me entering the exam memorising folklore so I can write Taylor Swift lyrics: 😌

So can i copy similes and stuff from the source for my creatice writing?

Hi sir, can you use the priest story for WJEC Eduqas exam board too?

can we make a story and then get chat gpt to change and adapt some of the language and use it in our exams or is it plagarism

just finished my paper 1 exam and I wrote about one of my oc (own charactar)

How would this affect grade boundaries?

How can you pre plan the story tho if you dont no what the question is gonna be ?

GOAT ❤

A student developing their own characters and themes before the exam is one thing, copying the Amazon package narrative idea is another.

Should I still watch this if im doing Edexcel?

AQA said we can get inspirations from section A to answer Section B, but you told us to answer section B first. How do we get Inspiration from Section A that we haven't answered. Please I am confused who should we go with?

the gta reference in the thumbnail

So it’s really not plagiarism this means I can use priest story in my year 10 mock

Can I not just copy source A

Sir Can I use Chat GPT to generate a story and can I copy it ?

So can you actually use the priest story in your exams and will it be marked properly ??

How do we pre plan?

What if we have a story, can we adapt it to the narrative statement given on the exam or is that not acceptable? 😭

so can you use your own ideas or do you HAVE to use section A ??

ima watch Netflix and get a 6

What does Edexell say?

Priest Tory is the reason I got a 9

So the story doesnt have to relate to the question?

what does it mean to prepare a character ?

what’s going on ?

is it stupid to do question 5 first?

Hi sir if i copy someone story from google and paste that in my exam do i get the plagiarism

Wish me luck 🍀

positive or negative?

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Can we still do priest story or not sir?

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nah what priest was gonna save me

Bro why is he analysing the words top tips

Is it fine if ur story is kind of bland but has lots of language techniques? ❤

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