Sorry for the little bleep at the start!! youtube really doesn't like swearwords at the start of the video.. ANYWAY A THOUSAND?? I LOVE YOU ALL SO SO MUCH!!! PART TWO COMING SOONNN

nays comment streak #4 CONGRATS ON 1K!!!!! you worked so hard and im proud of youuu also happy early birthday wish you the best tmrow

Hi there, it’s the writer. Thank you so much for filling my script! When I received your message about the fill, I got super excited. I am sorry it’s taken me a few days to write this comment, though. I was battling a cold over the weekend, and then I had a few things to catch up on. But, I’m here now! I appreciate your patience, thank you :) As for your performance, you did an excellent job of capturing this character’s personality! He was meant to be condescending and fiery, and you certainly brought those elements out. What I really loved how was measured and stable your voice remained, even when the character was frustrated. While it would have been easy to fly off the handle and lean into the aggression, you kept your tone even and controlled. That was very impressive. You also built palpable tension between the characters! I found myself shivering from all the tension - it was perfect. As soon as the character revealed why he thought the listener kept spilling coffee on his shirts, you lowered your tone and made the character seem infinitely more seductive. I thought that was absolutely brilliant on your part. There was a nice transition from the irritation in your tone when the character was outside of the door to the flustered tone once the character was inside and saw what the listener wore to bed. I enjoyed listening to your shift in tone there; that was very well done. Ah, I can’t wait to listen to the other half of this; I’m sure you’ll kick up the spice even more!

First -Nikolle😊