That piano sounds really good to me

Bravone :)

I feel like you're prioritizing voicing so much that you're skipping your technique. Practice the coda's thirds and fingering slowly until muscle memory, and don't rush Also experiment with better fingerings from time to time to see which ones you can "remember" more easily, and which ones are most comfortable for your hands

Is it deliberate that you accent and break up every single note of the main theme? You even bob your head forward with every single note.