Control | ROTTMNT AU Animatic

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Жыл бұрын

Hi so there's this show about turtles who also happen to be ninjas...
idk how this will do so im gonna hold off on writing out my entire au lmao
EDIT 2: Fic link is here:
archiveofourown.org/works/437...
EDIT: Oh wow, this is CRAZY validating to see people liking this so much. I'll talk about my au since so many people have asked
Draxum kept 2 of the turtles (Donnie and Raph) and Splinter got the other 2. Donnie and Raph basically grew up in a stricter regime as you can imagine, and Donatello was HEAVILY favoured by Draxum. Raph definitely has daddy issues because of this.
Don and Raph LEFT Draxum at a super young age (around 10 year old equivalent) after meeting Splinter, Leo, and Mikey and realizing that their family is WAY more stable and comforting to be around.
This animatic takes place in the first AND last episode of ROTTMNT season 1 in accordance to my AU; Donnie is "reunited" with his dad (who he still loves) and Leo struggles to come to terms with the fact that Don can still love Draxum as a father while still being his brother. There's a lot of family dynamics in this au that I'd love to explore in different ways (more animatics probably). Don't worry, it's not all angsty!!

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@sagefrost_dragon8742 Жыл бұрын

I feel that Mikey and Leo would definitely have meaner thoughts towards draxum if they were raised by splinter. I’m also guessing Donnie loves draxum because he was favored.

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

you positively nailed it!!

@Lyrmony Жыл бұрын

I like to think Draxum and Donnie think alike in some degree and that would be even more obvious since he was separated from the fam except Raph. Raph probably felt left out and therefore a reason why he'd be more inclined to betray Draxum and stay with his other brothers. I'm not sure of his relationship with Donnie, but it would be nice to see them interact whether for angst or hurt/comfort purposes. Cause' let's face it fluff for this kind of AU might have to take a backseat until after sh*t blows the fan...

@Shtickyaight Жыл бұрын

frrr

@gracebowling4083 Жыл бұрын

I am in love with this. I really like Donnie and Leo’s movements. They feel like how they’d act. We didn’t get to see much of Mikey or Raph, but I’m interested in seeing their half of the story animated. Another thing I’d like to note, Leo’s shoulder shimmy EEE! Why do I love it? I love it.

@Shtickyaight Жыл бұрын

frrr

@autisticdoggo. Жыл бұрын

Nobody: Leo: *dramatic shoulder wiggle*

@dragonsman4733 Жыл бұрын

You know, this actually makes me question who would've been the better father for Donnie whe they were growing up. I mean, yes, Splinter is occasionally a good father, and yes, Draxums evil, but they have two opposites to the kids. Splinter probably would have been a better father to Raph, Leo, and Mikey, in this scenario, because they have enough traits of Lou Jitsu to get noticed. Strength, (raph) flamboyancy (Leo) agility (Mikey) and when you put Donnie in there, he doesn't quite fit. Because he has traits more from draxum. Intelligence, with a mix of slight mad scientist, put in there. This would obviously give him more attention from Draxum, and less attention from Splinter, simply because he isn't interested in those things. whereas with his brothers, it's the exact opposite. And if Donnie had to chose between having a father who loved him for his mind, and unique abilities, Vs a father who loved him, but didn't get to know him, he'd probably choose the first one. anyways, sorry for this rather long character essay, I shall take my leave. Your animatics really good, btw.

@roseville412 Жыл бұрын

Wow 😳 that is so in depth, I never thought of it like that. I love reading people's analysis!

@chihiroisabelle8680 Жыл бұрын

I feel like Draxum would have been a better father TO Donnie-in the sense that Donnie would have been happier if he'd been raised as Draxum's son and protege. Draxum would have understood what Donnie needed in a mentor and would have nurtured his talent. And he absolutely would have given Donnie the attention and praise that he desired. But I feel like he would have been the worst father FOR him. Donnie already has so many issues with empathy and impulse control. Draxum would not temper that and would give him the tools to make it all 1000% worse. He would have a very hard time figuring himself out and feeling happy with himself outside of Draxum's lab. He would not be a confident and well-balanced adult. Not to mention that, considering what Draxum literally made him to do, he would end up doing some very terrible things.

@Scarlet_Starlight Жыл бұрын

@@chihiroisabelle8680 Same. I think he’d be a good teacher and caretaker physically speaking, and he’d really nurture the science-oriented aspects of Donnie’s interests and personality. BUT! He’d be a TERRIBLE parent. Or, at the very least, a terrible father.

@anna.owo. Жыл бұрын

I think in rise splinter does favourite Donnie without showing, he does consider him the funniest guy and Donnie is the one who seeks his approval more

@dragonsman4733 Жыл бұрын

@@anna.owo. well, I guess there is that. But I'm still betting its probably Leo, due to him being the obvious favourite of Splinter in some other versions. **cough** 2012 **cough** doesn't even try to hide it **cough**

@Reineydraws12 Жыл бұрын

I love the moment Leo has, even though Leo hates Draxum, he’s important to Donnie, and Donnie is important to Leo. Leo sees he’s upset and doesn’t think twice after that. Love that visual storytelling

@itz_lilac7989 Жыл бұрын

Can we please appreciate 0:41 I love the way that Donnie is standing with his staff like that! 🥰

@CreativelyCAN101 Жыл бұрын

OMG THIS IS SUCH AN INCREDIBLE AU IDEA- this animatic is so fluid and flawlessly well done- everyone feels in character and Donnie’s history with Baron makes sense especially since he doesn’t want his dad to get hurt 😭

@sarahfarr7400 Жыл бұрын

I feel like Donnie (in this concept) would have a lot more love for Draxum than Raph would considering how he was shown more love by Draxum than his older and least favored brother was. Honestly, I fail to understand how the favoritism didn't turn Donatello into a spoiled brat that lived to rub Raph's face in the "Dad loves me more than he loves you" trash heap. I have been watching too many text-to-voice story videos about entitled people and about how favoritism destroys families.

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

Donnie never saw the favoritism for what it was, he genuinely was so young during all those years that only raph really remembers the BAD parts.

@starlight8828 Жыл бұрын

I think it would be because favoritism isn’t exactly what is happening and its more like Draxum puts more stress and tasks to Donatello but he praises him more for that and Raph feels Donnie is the favorite but instead Donnie actually has no idea what to do or how to tell anyone bc Draxum would have told him that is the LEAST he can do to be USEFULL and that this is WHY HE WAS MADE that it’s the bare minimum and reminding him that 24/7 and if by any circunstance Donnie thought “Why me and not Raphael?”(I don’t really think he would think that but i’m not quite sure) Draxum would be like “Because he ain’t flawed like your softshell” And if Raph tried to talk to Donnie to ask him if he was okay or to even tell him how did HE felt Draxum would call him weak by having or expressing feeling

@starlight8828 Жыл бұрын

srry i didn’t saw there was already an answer i guess got carried away i’m so sorry (๑•́ - •̀๑)

@Haydennn22 Жыл бұрын

HELP 1:00 TO 1:03 IS SO COOL AND FLUID I LOVE IT SM

@riverivy6628 Жыл бұрын

I would like to kindly request the entire story please!

@aya_7876 Жыл бұрын

Wholy f@ck thats a good plot!!!! I love that scene of donnie asking him to save draxum like that FELT cannon and its very hard to make something FEEL cannon. Well done *fast clap*👏

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

wow!!!!! what a compliment THANK YOU

@mellcnimx Жыл бұрын

OOOO?? NO IM INVESTED!! THIS LOOKS SO GOOD!! THE ANTICIPATION IS INCREDIBLE, THE EXPRESSIONS ARE PHENOMENAL AND THE MOVEMENTS AMD TIMING IS SO ON POINT GOSH IT HAS ME ON EDGE!! I MUST KNOW MORE!!

@carrielajeunesse5776 Жыл бұрын

I love this sooooooo much, I love the brotherly love that Leo shows to Donnie, and it was just good regardless

@peachcream8471 Жыл бұрын

I love that donnie's battle shell looks like huginn!! Did he design it like that so he could feel closer to his father?

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

yes! Huginn/Muninn were his fav uncles / babysitters and clearly they still love him too ( 0:34 )

@professionalscribbler Жыл бұрын

I DIDN'T NOTICE THAT THANK YOU FOR POINTING IT OUT OH LORDY I LOVE IT

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

Due to popular demand (lol) the au has been added into the description!!

@Z.4chry Жыл бұрын

Sir maam i NEED YOUR SPCIAL MEDIAS PLS DROP THEM

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

@@Z.4chry twitter and tumblr specifically for rottmnt: leo-kinnie !! my full blown art twitter is @mahtopaha

@aya_7876 Жыл бұрын

Is this written out bc i MUST read this like MUST MUST PLEEEEEEEEEEASE

@snakehascake Жыл бұрын

BANGER ANIMATIC AS ALWAYS!!! I am fascinated by this AU please tell us more

@user-ni2tb8ry4n Жыл бұрын

OH. MY GOD. does this au have a name???? is this fan fiction???? will you have something else on this au??? God, I fell in love at first sight! this is amazing! I've watched it many times and I want more

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

Yes and no. The au is called Parent Trap and there is no official fanfic yet ^^. I will DEFINITELY be putting out more of this au.

@NotTodaySatanMaybeTomorrow Жыл бұрын

Just read the description and I ✨love✨ your concept ! Not to mention how cool and full of life the animatic is, it’s incredible !

@superspartan8086 Жыл бұрын

This is actually really really cool if super interested in seeing what happens next

@merpwerp22 Жыл бұрын

I love Donnie’s battle shell so much!!!

@spamlevant Жыл бұрын

arches browarches brow arches BROW I AM ARCHING MY EYE BROW [compliment]

@gbee8263 Жыл бұрын

I LITERALLY BEG YOU, PLEASE MAKE MORE OF THIS AND PLEASE LET ME READ YOUR AU. I AM IN SHOCK OF HOW GOOD THIS IS IM BEGGNG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.

@thatsn0tverycashm0ney88 Жыл бұрын

MORE ANGSTY TURTLE BOYS!!!

@wanderingwildlife6639 Жыл бұрын

The style and movements and energy (pun intended) are immaculate!!❤

@euphoricberries Жыл бұрын

HOLD ON???? THIS IS AMAZING, I SAW THIS ON TIKTOK AMD WAITED FOR THE FULL VERSION OF IT OMG

@420RadioLord Жыл бұрын

You actually reminded me to upload my rottmnt au stuff lol!

@KaidaCresto Жыл бұрын

IM SCREAMING THIS IS FUCKING INSANE HOW. I LOVE THIS THE AMOUNT OF EFFORT AND THE SMALL ANIMATIONS AND THR AU ITSELF AAAAAAA ITS SO GOOD EVERYTHING ABIUT THIS IS SO GOOD YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF YOURSELF

@teejaykaye4357 Жыл бұрын

THIS IS SO SICK god I already yelled about it on tumblr but the pacing the framing the expressions?? Immaculate on every level

@bravechamomile172 Жыл бұрын

I am SO invested in this now! And all the frames, the pasing, tension AAAAAAAAH 100000000000/10

@marykateralston7235 Жыл бұрын

:0 this is amazing!!! I love when donnie jumps down from the railing the moments are so cool!! Love this animatic

@starcycle4308 6 ай бұрын

THAT'S SO GOOOD!!!! THE EXPRESSIONS ARE SO AMAZING AND LEO'S ATTITUDE IS ON-POINT! DONNIE PLEADING FOR LEO TO HELP HIM AND LEO'S LITTLE SMIRK WHEN HE GOES TO HELP AHRHWAJSHHEHANDNHWHQHSBS I WASN'T GONNA OBSESS OVER AUS TODAY BUT I GUESS THAT'S WHAT WE'RE DOING

@samanthad9543 Жыл бұрын

This was amazing and I desperatly need more

@schistre6631 Жыл бұрын

Nice animatic!! Would love to see more of this AU

@sharkfiinn Жыл бұрын

HOLY CRAAAPP DUDE IM OBSESSED THIS WAS DONE SO WELL!!!

@AceNotAnAttorney Жыл бұрын

How dare this be the only au animatic up so far!!! /j no but seriously this is awesome can't wait to find out more I love this concept and your art style is amazing its incredible how well animated this is!!! I'm incredibly interested in how you imagine Donnie magic working since we never really got anything from the show/movie

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

IM SO GLAD YOU POINTED OUT DONNIE'S MAGIC i have a very fun ( angsty? ) backstory for why Donnie has his mystic magic so early on ( even before his brothers 😉) so i hope to express that in another animatic somehow. Or maybe a fic!! (TYSM!!)

@serenadesteven971 Жыл бұрын

OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO COOL!! YOO THE STORY WAIT! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I LOVE IT SO MUCH OH MY GOODNESS! BRO DONNIE BETRAYED THEM!

@yourstrulykira Жыл бұрын

THIS IS SO COOL I CANT STOP WATCHING!!

@brerrycomb Жыл бұрын

This is so COOL!!! Question!! QuestionS! How come Donnie is favoured over Raph, as Raph is the big strong one? Donnie is usually the weaker brother, this is even in the show. Does Draxum prefer Donnie due to his intellect? ALSO is this a fic or comic I could read somewhere? This concept is BRILLIANT!

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

Raph DEFINITELY is the bigger and stronger one out of the pair, but he's also the most hesitant to actually hurt others for no good reason. He's got a pretty good moral compass (Being with Drax didn't change that about him), but DONNIE.... Donnie likes being chaotic and creating new weapons. Drax likes Raph for his strength and intimidation factor but he Loves Donatello for being smart and cunning. Besides, Donnie can fight pretty good with his tech!

@kirasigncomics Жыл бұрын

I love this so much

@Cosmiczmd Жыл бұрын

BROO THIS IS SO GOOD IVE WATCHED THIS ON REPEAT LIKE IT FEELS LIKE A REAL ROTTMNT EP! OK I NEED TO READ THIS AU😭

@josclynmccaleb9848 Жыл бұрын

This was amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next.

@isadorafonsecacarvalho9882 Жыл бұрын

I NEED MORE OF THIS AU!

@artistfromthevoid4203 Жыл бұрын

I love this animatic an unhealthy amount I NEED TO SEE MORE IF THIS STORY LINE

@shanmaolynx Жыл бұрын

YESS!!!! ROTTMNT!!!

@chocolatesugar-lovage9678 Жыл бұрын

*THIS IS SO GOOD*

@frenchfries7412 Жыл бұрын

EMOTIONAL DAMAGE 😃 I NEEED MORE

@anabellesaric5952 Жыл бұрын

No words, sounds, or movements can explain how much I love this it's like I wanna squeeze it and push my palms together so far that my hands bleed THIS IS SO GOOD AAAAA

@expensive_b9093 Жыл бұрын

WOW!! I got here an hour after it posted!?!? IM SO LUCKY!!! I wanna know the whole story so BAAAAD😩🥰

@adventure9947 Жыл бұрын

You have literally became my favorite tmnt animator in just 1 video 😮

@Anonymous-ml8qb Жыл бұрын

THIS NEEDS 6 SEASONS AND A MOVIE! IM IN LOVE WITH THIS AU CONCEPT :DDD

@CanteSkuya Жыл бұрын

NETFLIX HIRE ME TO MAKE THIS AU COME TO LIFE

@Scarborough_fair Жыл бұрын

I LOVE IT! I want more NAY I need more! Amazing animatic!

@user-kq5lb1pq6r Жыл бұрын

this is fantastic!! u clearly put so much work into this. also i lovee the song, halsey 5ever

@dontask9000 Жыл бұрын

This is so beautifully made wow!!! I love this idea of an AU

@mysteryninjawarriors6374 Жыл бұрын

One of my favourite parts in this is that after seeing how destressed Donnie is at seeing Draxum in danger, Leo doesn't protest any further and just goes into action. Because at the end of the day Leo wants to protect and care for his brothers under all those jokes and he's not going to be the one to sit back and let Donnie cry like that when he can do something (and the fact that Donnie asked him to help). It was such a short moment but to me it felt so in character and just showed the brotherly bond so well! Thank you for sharing your amazing creation!

@alipenn5302 Жыл бұрын

What is this au???? I love it already!

@yaaaaasfire9621 Жыл бұрын

Wooo i love your animation and even so much detail when donnie running w his power up and the reflection in Leo's eyes

@stepeva5859 Жыл бұрын

Draxum favoring Donnie would make sense, since the first time they met Donnie was the only one who really landed a hit on Draxum. They were all pretty much rookies in fighting a really strong entity, yet Donnie managed to land a hit. Donnie has potential and Draxum see's that more than he sees his brothers. It would also be a win win senario, Donnie gets advanced alien tech while Draxum gains a warrior

@squarepotatoes Жыл бұрын

I love the expressions so much I can't get enough And also the like, movement? Of bother the characters and the flow of the scene Also the dutch angle on shredder??? *Chefs kiss Idk why i love sheer terror and distress in my fave characters but i literally can't stop watching this

@citsune1322 Жыл бұрын

I love this so much it's absolutely beautiful and I'll definitely be keeping up with this fic!

@Tea-toons0w0 Жыл бұрын

More plz~ I would love to see more animations of this au 🥰😍🤩

@mercykondenar9374 Жыл бұрын

Stunning. The subtle changes in the facial expressions are fantastic. Also a great concept.

@SaphireRacer Жыл бұрын

I’m in love with the concept of this au! And I’m defiantly going to read the fanfic attached! Amazing work

@penateink7413 Жыл бұрын

Oh my, this is gorgeous!! The story is so well thought out and I read some comments asking about the lore, this is so well thought through, and then the song choice is so nice!! Also, the way you draw the turtles is amazing!! And even if it’s an animatic, the movements feel so natural and in character!! I have to check out ur work

@420RadioLord Жыл бұрын

I want morrreeeee!

@squarepotatoes Жыл бұрын

Love this so much! So well animated! And shows the hard to navigate feelings of someone still caring for a parent that hurt them

@Trash_Eat3r Жыл бұрын

Alright I would LOVE to hear more about this au it's so freaking interesting. Also love your art style ✨

@Pookie145 Жыл бұрын

I’m obsessed!!! Can’t wait for pt. 2 if you do one!

@Aurora-kt1co Жыл бұрын

Jesus Christ I am so impressed by how much fluid animation is in this. It's honestly gorgeous. I see all the effort you put into it and it's incredible!

@veronicawexel1291 Жыл бұрын

Bruhhhhh the shots in this are so good, damn.

@lemonzest6988 Ай бұрын

I love how Leo agreed to save Draxum despite disliking him, and when Shredder threatened to crush them both, he got slightly in front of Draxum to protect him, because even though he'd rather not save him, he knows hiw much Donnie cares about him and that makes him worth protecting at any cost.

@trixie7759 Жыл бұрын

THIS IS SO COOL OMG!! Love the idea of Donnie being able to activate his powers because of that!!

@noahnastovich4534 Жыл бұрын

THIS IS SO EPIC!!!! I haven't read the fic, but maybe I'll check it out! This animatic looks AMAZING OMG

@Dallas.Speicher-Ramirez2025 Жыл бұрын

Leo's "Come here often?" is perfectly in character. I can 100% hear him saying this.

@musicalocelot470 Жыл бұрын

Omg this is amazing! I need more! More of this AU and your beautiful animating!

@harpie_raven5889 Жыл бұрын

sTOP I LOVE YOUR ANIMATIONS SO MUCH OH MY GOD YOU ARE SO TALENYED SND THIS AU IS BEAURIFUL I LOVE IT!!

@sashisachigray8687 Жыл бұрын

YOOOO you are SO talented ??? this is so clean !!!

@kallamigmarre6137 Жыл бұрын

DAAAAAMMMMNNNN!!!!! Okokok i love this! No, i ADORE THIS! Love the song, love the story, the face expressions, art just everything. Chefs kiss~

@ELLIGUTS 11 ай бұрын

THIS IS SO COOL??? I AM COMPLETELY TRAUMATIZED AND FEEL LIKE BAWLING MY EYES OUT BUT THIS IS SO AWESOME OH ME GOSHH

@a_lien Жыл бұрын

This looks so amazing!!

@sagefrost_dragon8742 Жыл бұрын

1 hour ago!!! I want more nowwwwwewwewwwww

@siakouts7965 Жыл бұрын

1:04 LEOSAGI REFERENCE??? ALSO WELL DONE, THE MOVEMENTS ARE GORGEOUS!! AWESOME AU

@tmaxim2651 Жыл бұрын

yesssaaa- a new fic to feast on! Thank you for blessing me with this!

@LinkyMew Жыл бұрын

EATS YOUR ART. OMG SKUYA I LOVE YOU /P

@raynakousoukio7217 Жыл бұрын

The expressions are soooo GOOD. Like when Raph was hurt when Draxum told him he expected better things from him, Leo took his defense or when Donnie cried, because Draxum was about to get killed, Leo rushed to save him. It's like the actions makes sense, because of the expressions the characters made. SOO GOOD!!😍😍

@hummingJ_ Жыл бұрын

DUDE THIS IS SO COOL!!! I AM RACING TO GO READ YOUR FIC NOW WOOWOWOW

@SCREW_TITLES Жыл бұрын

I love this au because it’s more of the after math of a separated au which I would love to see more often cause they would be heavily affected by being adopted by splinter after living with one of the bad guys their whole life

@volatilechemicalz Жыл бұрын

Please tell me there's going to be more of this, I love this au so much I am obsessed I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT also I love the animation, it's smooth and you can clearly tell what the characters are feeling between frames also also I could see this donnie relating to the song numb little bug by Em Beihold so much I've already made so many brain animations you have no idea

@MajjesticSquid Жыл бұрын

*You have unlocked a new watcher*

@magbinious 2 ай бұрын

this is some seriously professional work...🤯🤩

@aynDRAWS 9 ай бұрын

Leo's little shoulder shimmy- its so cute!

@kiroava6277 Жыл бұрын

The only thing that could make this animatic more perfect than it already is would be a fic to go along with it. Oh wait, there is one! 11/10

@yaaaaasfire9621 Жыл бұрын

BROOOOOOOO I DIDN'T KNOW YOU WROTE THAT FIC I LITERALLY WAS CURIOUS AND THEN SAW I'M SUBSCRIBED aw man hyping me up more 😂 (tho like no rush 👍)

@mothbutgay Жыл бұрын

woah I got literal CHILLS!! I LOVE THIS SM

@jaelyyymar8071 Жыл бұрын

Absolutely beautiful animation! That run cycle is 😘

@chibichestnut Жыл бұрын

HECK THIS WAS SO GOOD, THANK YOU.

@devynbastos5945 Жыл бұрын

This is amazing, I didn't know what was happening at first. But it was so cool

@starcycle4308 4 ай бұрын

I'm back to watch this for like the 7th time. I always end up rewinding to obsess over certain frames or catch expressions. Still amazing

@Xx_AceofSpades_xX 10 ай бұрын

HOLY- I just finished the fic and watched this, knowing about how Donnie’s ninpo is painful to him and the shock on Leo’s face after he sees that Donnie has mystic powers I- wow.