"I...HATE the breath of evil plotline...'' Me: Yes. good. continue...

Bumblebee saying "snudoo" carried the arc

I think it would also be nice to add that rather than meeting Luna in the epilogue at the end of the second arc, Moon has a vision of pantala, or at least the silk wings, and maybe in the new epilogue of arc three we see Moon and her friends arrive on pantala to set up a theoretical 4th arc about the two continents reconnecting

give the breath of evil some breath mints ong

I now dub this the Cyprus Pantala AU and I will be writing with it because it’s awesome!

From what I remember, we are told that the Chrysalis in Jewel Hive goes around like the Scooby-Doo gang because of how "nice" Lady Jewel is.. But that in Bloodworm Hive the Chrysalis is, so we are told, more of an actual resistance movement that helps carry out a terrorist attack. So, perhaps, an alternate book 14 could be from the perspective of a member of the Bloodworm Hive Chrysalis. Both showing the abuse they get, and the desperate methods they resort to to resist. As a book from the perspective of dragonets, obviously this would mean sending child soldiers into battle. It can show the commencement of the burning. The protagonist could see a troop of Hivewings try to salvage the wingless Silkwing dragonets as the structure falls apart and, reluctantly, stops fighting to help with that... So when it comes to negotiating between the three tribes to stop Wasp, the first hurdle is to make sure the Silkwings from the different hives don't start fighting each other. Just think, one of them seeing the Treehopper / Tau relationship and having absolutely the worst reaction. Because unlike how the two Leafwing factions that reluctantly tolerate each other, the Silkwings could be outright violent. Edit: Also, if you're going to bring back the flamesilks, you need to make Admiral want to simp for Wasp and stay there as everyone else agrees to leave. Seriously, WTF is wrong with that guy!?

UHHHH THIS ARTWORK IS ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!! THIS IS MY FAVOURITE ART YOU'VE EVER MADE YET!!

I'd also like to say if I would write an arc 4 it would focus on the rebuilding of pantala (this is going off the original story) and would focus on fact that the Hivewings were basical Germany during ww2 and extemist groups would try to renestate Wasp to the throne, and Phirryia being the western powers would have to act as a peace keeping force there and deal with the problems in thier own kingdom.

Oooo, this’ll be interesting! I liked how the third arc started off, but i feel like it went downhill after the poison jungle, lol😂

Great video Cyprus! This is wayyy better than the arc 3 we got, and I think most of us hope that arc 4 will have more of a arc 2 flavor. Anyways, great art and great chat!

for me, i liked the whole “breath of evil had its own consciousness and mind”. it held the faint edges of a native species fighting against an invasive species, and failing, then slowly evolving to take back its original environment. back during the waiting-for-book-fourteen-to-release era, i had the idea of the breath of evil puppeteering a dragon corpse to act as a “i’m one of you, trust me” kind of thing. i sorta want to go back and try to flesh it out more as an alternative story line, but im not sure how

I think Cricket having a character arc similar to that of Judy from Zootopia is a great idea

Very sudden beginning! 😂

Honestly I love both plotlines. A look into Hazel's mind would have been pretty interesting, and to have Luna's fiery personality back would be amazing. And Wasp remaining the villain with no evil plant would be great.

One of my favorite videos you’ve ever made!!!!!!! I love this idea, and although I love the writing of book 14 by itself, I do agree that it stand out at lot, this is such a beautiful idea!!

I would have loved to read this plot line so much more than tui’s. I do adore book 14, but it most definitely falls closer to a legend than a main series book. I hope arc 4 brings back the passion of the first 2 arcs!

I freaking agree!

honestly when I first read this arc I didn't think much about it and enjoyed it a lot, but thank you so much for this video I love your interpretation so much more and now I can think a lot more critically about it and I realize all that was missing. I did like hearing about the history of the humans of Pantala and Pyrrhia in the original books, but don't think it had to be the main point and the breath of evil and cottonmouth and lizard really was just a stretch and didn't make sense. I would LOVE to see the full version of your books they would be amazing!! (hint hint) ALSO CAN I JUST SAY THE ART 🤯🤯 you continue to inspire me so much and THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL ILY

3 mins ago wow I love your content keep up the good work Cyprus don’t give up your art has massively inspired me to draw my own dragons thank you!

Love your art! keep up the good work! tysm for inspring my art! and who would you consider your favorite character ?

I didn't love Arc 3... But i might have with a few changes similar to this! Great job. I would miss the scavenger reveal and seeing Pyrrhia, but from a story standpoint, I'm inclined to agree a few changes would have been nice

Love this art piece so much! I feel like you really captured the friendly, playful, yet serious relationship of the arc three main characters! I also really enjoyed listening to your insights regarding a such a controversial and flawed plot. I look forward to you next video!

Pretty Art :D And I like how you rewrote the 3rd arc :) really interesting!

Maybe Lizard/Freedom could still be in this rewrite of arc 3 but as a hybrid baby between a hive wing, a silk wing and a leaf wing as a representation of the freedom and union the pantelan tribes now share.

Petition to let Cyprus rewrite Wings of Fire officially:

yayy im here within the first 30 minutes! I love your content, by the way! Your such a good artist and everything you make is so cool and creative!

This was so great! We love you Cyprus!!!! Keep up the great work!!! :)

Something I think arc 3 could have done better: GIVE US WASP HIVE CHRYSALYS

I do believe you are right. On all of it, actually. Especially on the Cricket personality. I would have loved seeing her realize Hivewings might not be all that great and mighty as she grew up learning. Book 14 (like you said) was completely random. It was a good read; it was interesting. But did not quite work. Finally, I would have LOVED a Hazel book. That would have been great. You were right again about the last book. Lunas Pov did not quite feel like a great last book. I loved Dusky (he's a good target for potential future books), but overall the last few books were not the best. This was a great video. Have a Blessed week Cyprus. Hope you're doing well! :) 🫶🏼

I definitely enjoy this *way* more!! This is awesome, plus wonderful art! Love the channel.

This drawing is so cute, btw I love ur art and take a lot of inspiration from u.❤

I feel like Tui had to include the trip to pyrrhia to fulfill the prophecy and tie in the idea that not one tribe is better or worse than the others like the pantalan dragons think, she had to include the pyrrhian dragons to show them that you need everyone to work together to solve this problem and that our differences make us stronger together I feel like that was a big message in this arc.

oh I LOVE your rewrite ideas!

Wow! THE ART!!!!!! IO’S DESIGN AAAHHHHH!!!!

I love your artwork, Cyprus! I also loved your rewrite for Arc 3, because your version is what I was desiring when I was reading the books. I wish the OG Arc 3 showed more of Pantalan diplomacy and rebellion without Pyhhria needing to be there. If you want to actually write the story, I would be all for it! I also think it would've been interesting, inspired by other ideas, where the LeafWings hated fungus as some type of evil presence and that it was a forbidden practice to speak to fungus. Then in Arc 3 they find the Breath of Evil itself was a fungus that went into the brain. Queen Wasp finds this out because Hawthorne was practicing the forbidden "dark" arts. It also would make more relativity to the zombie fungi we have in our world where the fungi take control of insects such as ants.

I love this idea of a new arc 3! It was really funny because I was thinking about if I got the chance to re-write arc 3 what would I do and I was like Cyprus please make a“rewriting arc 3” video! And you did! I think that this could also include Pyrrha in some way but I’m not sure how. Thanks so much for making this!

The rewrite was very interesting and fun to hear about, you made a lot of good points, nice job! ✌️

Omg YES YES YES! Cyprus your so well spoken and intellectually smart! I love hearing your opinions and stuff it’s very interesting and cool! I COMPLETELY agree with you on these❤ your thoughts are so amazing omg- couldn’t say ANYTHING better then u did

love it and the art is amazing

I was feeling really sad and somehow this cheered me up. Thanks!

Thanks for your thoughts on the matter! It is always so interesting to listen to your opinion! Thanks for sharing your thoughts and art!

Wow! Just wow! I’ve watched you before but I still don’t know how you draw so good!

Yay! cyprus is back!

I absolutely love the art! Let me just say your probably one of the best cartoon dragon artist around! I so agree with the rewrite! I love Io’s design btw!

Love your side of the story! I agree.

I LOVE YOUR WORK SLAY

I loved this new ending and LOVE YOUR ART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, i think having a actual resistance would make the ark soo much better, I think Moon would still have a vision and possibly try to get there, but get there once the wasp-killing is over to help the Silkwings sort out who's their new leader. I think it'd be fun to see Io or Luna as the Silkwing queen, but there are a lot of dragons who'd be great too. You did great Cyprus, I liked your idea a lot more than the original lol.

I would love to read this!

AHH your art is amazing and so wonderful! This arch 3? Better! Lol! Thanks for posting and keep up ur good work! ❤❤❤

I really enjoyed this, but if you were to write it I would enjoy it if you somehow included Lizard/Freedom cause I think her character had real potential, maybe as a hybrid prisoner instead of a half-dead 5000-year-old dragonet, anyways on the whole amazing job and I love your writing and drawings, especially what ifs!

So glad your back! please do a late easter special on dev-art?

I really like this AU as someone who despises arc 3's conclusion. This would also set up arc 4 as the kinda rebuild of Pantalan civilization and the two continents connecting. Amazing art btw 🤩

Great ideas! Honestly, I’ve thought about this on my own for a while. Maybe I should write my own video?

I LOVE the art SO much!!!! Awesome work! 😁 I love ark 3 but I do agree with some of that

I'd love to read your version of this arc!

I do agree with your AU version of Arc 3 of Wings of Fire, i was reading 14 and 15 soon after the books came out and was bored and was no longer being hung onto by the tension of scenes in my head like the first 2 Arcs. I would've loved to see more tension within Arc 3

I love how cute you made Luna and Swordtail!

That cold open 🗿🗿🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶

I think it's amazing that you express your own opinion like this and with some points, I can agree but at the end of it all I love the 3rd arc just as much as the rest of the series maybe even more. love the art it's amazing how talented you are! 🥰❤

Your version is so much better! I hated books thirteen and fifteen but I would love to read yours!

I love love this idea

3rd arc was my favorite but you have a lot of really good thoughta and critique i 100% agree with. v fun

YAY

Ik😊

I agree, not because of the plot line but because the other arcs are just better with better characters. Also, I changed my pfp to your art because it’s so good! I LOVE your art style!

As a writer myself, I could never really quite figure out what went wrong with the end of the series, but you explained it perfectly! I love love LOVE your solution, it just fits the series so much better and I would totally read it in a heartbeat. Do you have any books of your own out??

I love the 3rd ark and I’m ngl I clicked on this video for the art because OMG ITS STUNNING

Yes 3rd Arc of Wings of Fire and agreed and also nice video Cyprus 👍🌟

i LOVE the way you rewrote it, you should totally write it and post it on AO3 or some other site (only if you have time or if you even want to) it would be awesome!!

I think this is a great remake! One thing that I would change, is keeping the loss of animus magic from the epilogue. Excuse me if she did/did not change that, was kinda half in on this vid, but me and my friends have brainstormed this awesome fourth arc idea, revolving around the loss of animus magic. Even if this isn’t fully canon, there are many paths going forward with this ending! Will share rough story draft at 300 likes

This sounds like such an interesting plot line, and something I definitely think I would have enjoyed more that the books that we got. Of course there are many things that still need to be covered, but you would have to write the books to cover them, so overall I think it’s a very interesting plot

I honestly gave up on the series after I finished reading book 14. It just got so basic, but this! This was so good!

Best line of the day- OF this video "I...HATE.. the breath of evil plotline...'' lol i agree with book 11-13. And Yes Book14 felt like a Legends book or a different focus from the pantala (kinda like we are taking a break from the Arc 3), i had to stop reading and didn't read book 15 in fears it may ruin the "What it could be" for arc 3. and how you talk about how Arc 3 should be, Yes I would be down to hear a full detail write :D and see the drawn pictures of the scene, by your hands or by the fans Love your work Cyprus and, the artwork you did is cute, a real moment to show the fighting is over and peace and joy can enter on Pantala once again. Does leave me question what is by the mountains or how Hawkthorn got turn (could be manipulation or Hawkthorn had enough and made something to bend to Wasp will)

Loved the 13th book

Yesss the legend posted woooooooooooo!

I love the whole series and I just finished book 15 today. I agree it wasn’t the best because most of it was taken place in the abyss and kind of confusing but I love it anyway.

I do like how the two continents meet so, maybe there could be a second epilogue (I’ve seen it multiple times in other books) where Moon still has her vision of the other continent. Epilogue of book 10: Still the same until she goes to the beach (alone). Moonwatcher gazed at the ocean, it seemed to be endless but she *knew* the other tribes were there. The other continent. Without realising she stretched her wings when a familiar voice spoke behind her. “Going somewhere?” She turned around and there was Qibli, she squeaked surprised. “Vision?” He asked looking at the ocean. “Yes, I believe there’s another continent out there with new dragons.” Qiblis eyes widened and he stumbled back, which didn’t happen often. “New dragons? New continent? Alright, I’m coming with you.” Qibli blurted. Moon knew she wouldn’t be able to convince him, but she was also grateful to have her partner be with her on this journey, she didn’t even know how far the continent would be!… that might be a problem. “Okay, let’s get ready and tell our carers where we’d be, I’m pretty sure we’d be gone for a while… plus we don’t know how long the trip would take. So we are going to have to prepare for multiple days of flying in the air. Qibli rolled his eyes, “Yes yes, Uhm… what if this was just a dream? And… we end up flying all the way around the world and once we finally find land again it’s actually the other side of Pyrrhia?” He pointed out. “Valid concern… you still coming with me?” Moon asked, “Of course!” Qibli smirked, “Let’s go surprise these new dragons!… with more of us! One of each tribe!” Moon exclaimed, she thought it would be nice to introduce all of them to the other dragons, but Qibli raised a better option, “Or we could just bring Kinkajou to show off all the tribes, so we wouldn’t need to pack for seven dragons.” “Good point.” Moon sighed. Before heading back to Jade Mountain to prepare for takeoff, she glanced back towards the ocean one last time, remembering the dragons who looked like bee’s, butterflies and leaf’s. Epilogue of book 15: (Gonna do this in Kinkajous pov since we don’t have one of those yet) The journey was long, a little too long. But alas, Moon, Qibli, Kinkajou, and Tsunami (Animus magic doesn’t work still) spotted the largest chunk of land yet. “This… must be… it!” Kinkajou exclaimed. “Almost… there,” Tsunami grumbled (Why couldn’t she be happy about this? Were the first dragons in THOUSANDS OF YEARS! To reach this place!) They could already see a group of dragons at the shore watching them, great, new dragons! Kinkajou beat her wings faster, anxious to arrive as quickly as possible, which she did. By tumbling out of the sky into a green/lime dragon who shrieked with surprise. “AHH! WAIT- who are *you?* Are why did you come out from the sea?” She asked, her eyes widening in surprise as she saw my scales shift to a pale yellow which symbolised me being in pain now, but also OMG OMG WE REACHED IT YAYYYYYYYYYY!!!!! “Hello! I’m Kinkajou!” She yelled, still on top the lime dragon. The others reached the shore just then, Lime stopped looking at me and her gaze instantly went to Moon, (I know she’s great and all but WHY MOON? I’M THE ONE WITH THE COLOUR CHANGING SCALES!?) “Oh my Clearsight-“ She gasped, and so did the other weird looking dragons, she counted six in all. Most of them had four wings (FOUR? ISN’T TWO ENOUGH?) but a couple had the proper amount of two. Then what Lime said finally was processed by my brain, “Clearsight? How do you know her?” Kinkajou asked finally getting off of her and helping her up. She began to stutter and Moon stood there awkwardly (probably reading their strange little minds). All the dragons stood their frozen, Pyrrhians scanning the lost continents tribes, lost continents looking at Moon in awe (AS IF THERE WEREN’T THREE OTHER DRAGONS WITH HER!). To snap the lost continent dragons out of their daze, Kinkajou shifted her scales to Moon’s, (even included the silver teardrop scales by her eyes, that was how dedicated I was to the role of Nightwing). “Okay, listen up! What *are* you? How do you know who Darkstalkers girlfriend is? And… WHAT IS THAT CUTE LITTLE DRAGONET CALLED?” She shouted, pointing at a little beewing (sounds appropriate giving her yelling and black scales). An older beewing snatched her up into her talons. One of the two winged dragons stepped up. Looking at her face, Kinkajou knew that she had a permanent stern face (which I see a lot of from the best queen everrrrr) that was now quite pale and in shock. “You came to *our* continent! You answer *our* questions first!” She stammered. Qibli nodded. Moon still froze trying to cover up her scales with her Nightwing wing. 5 likes for pt 2 cause I’ve got no time to continue at the moment

Totally agree, the arc definitely needed some type of change

Ever since my reread of arc 3 I've been itching to try and rewrite it and put my own spin on things. I am glad I'm not alone in that want.

oh my gosh I love the paws on the feet so much

how you started the video LOL i agree but do like 3rd arc tbh i find it still quite good

Originally I thought that the other plot was better than yours but now I'm with you on this one 😅

OMG!!!!!! I LOVE IT!

I really like this rewrite

I love your version of arc 3

Also, I never really thought the 3rd arc was that bad, but hearing YOUR book idea, I think it is much better. It is a lot more clear, and I love how you keep it on the same track.

would love a bit of both your rewrite and the a bit of the original plot

While I fully understand your point of view (and really like your take on the plotline), that wasn't what was in my mind when I was reading the books. I see, retroactively, that I was more impacted by arc 2 than 3, but I very much did like the multiple lore/world building we were presented with, with the icewing animus artifact and the gut wrenching info of the life 5000 years earlier. Oh the tears I gave to Freedom. I vividly remember planning to knit that scene with all the tribes, between the continent, and Freedom, finally liberated. That's why, in my eyes, even if it's not the best writing, it will always have a place in my heart.

your art is absolutely stunning! !! the only thing is that i do not know who the blue silkwing is on the very right corner though.;)

l feel the same about arc 3. I have not read it but my sis has and she told me about it. 🐲

You should make this in to a book

You’re so amazing at art!!! I freaking love this- just one question, who’s the silkwing in the farthest right?

I can't watch this cuz I'm only on book 12 nooooo 😭

I think Hazel being a more promident character is a good idea.

Ngl I enjoy both ideas especially since as you said we got little update for Pyrrhia but I wish there was more winter content, hell maybe even he goes with the group to save silk wings and leafwings

I love it!

I absolutely ADORE arc 3, but your version is SO MUCH BETTER- My opinion on the cannon plot: Book 11: Alright, could've been better, but still good. I'm just really happy that we were introduced to new tribes! Book 12: Absolutely love it! But again, could've been better... I just like how Bumblebee exists there, and also how we finally found out part of how Wasp controls the HiveWings- Cricket is one of my favorite protagonists tho :D Book 13: SUNLOW>>>>> And I loved how we finally got to see how the LeafWings had been living all those years, from the divided tribe to the dangers of the poison jungle. Also, Bumblebee>>>> Book 14: Probably my least favorite book in the arc, simply because of how little happens. I could literally summarize it in one sentence. 'Paranoid, inexperienced queen finds a magical ring that puts her through irrelevant character development while unfamiliar dragons escape to her continent.' Book 15: The first few chapters were okay-ish, but the rest... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Day 5 of asking Cyprus to make a what if Qibli accepted Darkstalkers offer! :3

I would 100% read this new arc! ❤❤❤