My husband was listening to this as I happened into the room and only caught the last 10-15 minutes. I was mesmerized because we are going through some lawsuits now. Yes more than one, with the same person. Thank you for putting this on here. I will definitely be watching your others to see what I can glean from them.

good info, I had a head injury at a major event in Orlando Florida on commercial premises in a building soon to be torn, and I was introduced to how poor the communication, confusion and incompetent attorneys are when a case is not cut and dry. particularly premises liability. I do not trust lawyers; licensed liars.

Thank you for explaining your style. I agree that the introduction “old school style is old!” l guess l assumed it was proper as pro se. I really like the way you write persuasive sentences and get to the point. It makes the case immediately more relatable and understandable.

This was great! I’m not a lawyer so everything was very informative. It seems as though you’ve taken a lot of time to review your old writings and understand how you can improve your writing. Thanks for including the things that you’ve done different from past to present and why. Good stuff! Thank you. 🙏🏽

first time watching your vedios, and I can confirm that I am like 50% perfect than where I was Yesterday. Thanks be blessed I am trying to fight for my case as pro se, because the law firms involved decidedvto defraud my discrination case. Taking advantage of my level of education, nation of origin and language bsrrier

You are a brilliant Attorney.

Thank you for being so detailed, you truly helped me understand exactly how I show should draft my motion as professionally and impactful as a Pro Se Litigant.

Sir, you are terrific. I'm pro se, in of all things, a probate litigation case. Thank you for the insight, the style, and for being a dog lover. Your neighbor in South Carolina thanks you.

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ChatGPT is very good at drafting motions, but you have to know how it should be done. ChatGPT is very literal and will not provide any more than you ask for.

Thank you for this important information. Very helpful in my first year of legal world

totally agree that motions, in fact next to all submissions, should be written from the point of view of the substance and merits of YOUR case, not the opponent's. otherwise, like in sports, you're playing according to the playbook and rhythm of the other team. and also you might inadvertently entirely neglect important points in your favor. that includes using your own terminology, avoiding labels and subtle biases e.g. through specific wordings and implied meanings of the other side. it's also important to avoid inadvertently conceding facts and circumstances at the basis of the opponent's arguments, by only superficially focusing on the arguments, if those arguments are actually overtly or implicitly based on flawed foundations. motions are also, particularly when the case may not be going so well for whatever reason, very important for the appeals stage. motions reasonably not granted could be grounds for appeals, particularly when it's evident that new relevant aspects/materials or arguments are prevented from being introduced into the case.

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His cod piping is exquisite you can tell hes been practicing in front of the mirror

Excellent analysis. I'm Jeff Cook from 5:18-cv-01436-KK April 2022 Jeff Cook (Pro Se) v San Bernardino sheriff. I sued the sheriff for 4th Amendment violations and had a great filing attorney for the first two years. The SBDA, of course, tried to drag the case out as long as possible, it happened in 2017! If I had filed motions for everything that the DA did that was illegal, the case would never have come to trial. I had a Pretrial determination that specific dash cams from two sheriff vehicles were admissible, but the DA never provided those recordings.

This information was very helpful. Inplan to use it in my case as a Plaintiff, pro se.

I'm not a lawyer but thought it was extremely well formated formulated also I agree about "old English" style is just out dated. Proper and persuasive , nice presentation

Excellent tips. Is there a way to find formats acceptable per state or are there motion writers that can be used?

8:06 “look at me I’m a lawyer “ yet the video never started😂

You reference a legal brief writing formulaic outline that you use for writing legal briefs. Can you share a copy?

This was amazing thank you Do you have more on opposition to MSJ pro se

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you want a case , i man have been evicted but in my possession still i have the raised seal land grant to i man , also have lived and maintained the property from 2002-2022 , something you wanna help with ? thanks in advance

Thank you for this precise information. I am currently helping my adult son, who has ADHD & PTSD, with his California criminal case as his PD had badly botched his case during pre-trial but not objecting to heresy testimony. His trial date is Feb 2, 2024, I want to learn what we can do to suppress this testimony in an ongoing 3 year case resulting from a false arrest during a simple 'health check'. If you can help please let me know. Thank you kindly.

This is amazing!

Here comes now I always include that I like it

If you felt that you didn’t want to put more of your time into a case but the plaintiff was willing to do the work himself would you still help him try not to reach his best settlement

i need help how to get relief

Read the book How can I not defend those people I'd like to just pick the first people to sit down for a jury

THEME, WHY DO LAWYERS ALLOW THE COURT TO LIE TO JURIES??????

I HAVE A WRONGFULL JUDGMENT FOR A CAR ACCIDENT CASE I NEED TO FILE A MOTION TO DROP THE CASE

Motion to dismiss???

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How do I get a copy of your cheat sheet?

It appears that if you were to consult 1000 lawyers, each one would hold their unique perspective on the appropriate way to draft motions.

Can u help me write

Really the court was ok with this

Hardcore Nesset flashbacks

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Only a fool has himself for a client, spoken by a lawyer and politician, both well known to be the very defintion of 'LIARS'. Yet our propagandist overlord refer to him as "Honest Abe', bullshit.

Writing is hard.

Motions can be struck down! Try (Affidavit) because, if it is not rebutted, then it stands as law! But be in your proper person. ALL CAPS NAME is not the way to spell; ALL CAPS is improper English. Never hire a lawyer, they do not uphold the Constitution! Read: GENERAL CIVIL ORDERS of July 4, 2014; & CIVIL ORDERS June 10, 2014. Last: How can your Represent yourself, when your already there? Key Word: Re.

Want to improve your channel - get to the point.

I'm not an attorney but thanks for your tips. If I ever write another motion to a court, I will definitely use your ideas. 2024-0430