Essay Writing| Essay Writing Tips| CSS Interview| Prof. Razi Abedi| FPSC

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Essay Writing| Essay Writing Tips| CSS Interview| Prof. Razi Abedi| FPSC

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Essay Writing is challenging yet a fulfilling task. Though there are many who teach it, the best essay writing tips are those that are given, in CSS interviews, by a teacher who has not only taught essay writing but has also set essay papers for FPSC exams.
Prof. Razi Abedi has mentored generations of CSPs. His name needs no introduction when it comes to CSS exams. He teaches English for CSS exams. He has also served as FPSC CSS Examiner. Ms. Fatima Batool has interviewed Sir Razi Abedi to find answers to the questions that bother students across Pakistan. Known for simplifying preparation, he has given precise and straight-forward answers to the questions that aspirants of competitive exams often ask.
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@MuhammadFarooq-ox6uq 3 жыл бұрын

"Simplicity is not a weakness, it's an achievement. (barri derr ky baad ati ha)" ~Prof.Razi Abadi

@engrmuhammadnadeemabbas9068 3 жыл бұрын

❣️

@alymurtza 3 жыл бұрын

I respect the humility of Ma'am Fatima in front of sir Razi who has been her teacher throughout. She is being so respectful to him as we can see that from her body language and tone. I think, along with learning English writing, students also need to learn humility from these teachers. Their conduct and behaviour with their elders/teachers is an example for students of our age/era. I am writing this because unfortunately, I have seen that nowadays students feel if they pay a tuition fee to a teacher, they become free of their responsibility of respecting them. Teachers teach us manners too they deserve our utmost respect. Respect for ma'am Fatima and sir Razi Abedi sb.

@roybird3866 3 жыл бұрын

He himself is so precise and brief.

@dr.zhivago2326 3 жыл бұрын

After watching three times the clip of FPSC examiner's, i have reached to the conclusion that a thousands of aspirants-for-years efforts depends on the "mood" of the examiner. It is a strange logic how the examiner decides the "future" of the aspirants based upon his good or bad mood?

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

This is sad, but true. In the absence of a marking rubrics, the system continues to be unfair at times.

@dr.zhivago2326 3 жыл бұрын

@@FatimaBatoolcss Thank you so much 🙌 Madam! 💐

@umairsikandri6429 2 жыл бұрын

Kamal ki batey ki hy Sahab ny par mood ki bat bohot ajib ki hy mera essay to 2 bar pas huwa par ye precise ufffff

@linguafranca7834 2 жыл бұрын

3:31

@AliRaza-vw7gi 3 жыл бұрын

I really like how respectful madam is toward her teacher. #respect for #Madam_Fatima_Batool

@meerumer6292 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you mam for clarifying the myths regarding CSS. Your efforts are really meaningful to especially for students of backward areas. Love and Respect from GB.

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

My pleasure

@AhmedAli-pz1hu 3 жыл бұрын

My mentor and a great scholar I have ever seen in my entire life...love and respect for this great personality 🧡

@PakistanPeaceObserver 3 жыл бұрын

Bohat khub 👏, what a pragmatic personality he has! Lucky to listen to him. Tremendous! Thank you.

@ghulammurtazagmdahar 3 жыл бұрын

Your effort is highly praiseworthy Fatima Sahiba 👍

@drmushtaquealikeerio4314 3 жыл бұрын

Teachers are always teacher at any stage of life. Find this video very helpful in clearing many misconceptions.

@muhammadawais6328 3 жыл бұрын

I love how humble she is in front of Sir Razi

@pioneeronlineacademy3164 3 жыл бұрын

How lucky I am that I am your student mam. You always try your best to provide us best stuff and guide us in best way.

@WajidAli-jx5ks 3 жыл бұрын

He nailed it when he said css is a lottery.

@tanvirkhan5488 3 жыл бұрын

Last three minutes are best. You should be the leader of your life.

@zainsiddiqi2749 3 жыл бұрын

Your videos are quite informative and a source of inspiration for someone like me, who was quite skeptical about the css preparation owing to the lower percentage of the passing candidates. It is always a pleasure to listen to sir Razi Abadi.

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Glad it helped! He is the real source of knowledge

@Balochan Жыл бұрын

Lots of love from hyderabad sindh for sir Razi abidi...My mentor and great teacher... Missing those days in lahore.

@maisumhussain8051 3 жыл бұрын

One question that should be asked to him was: Which type of mentality of students need to prepare for CSS?

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Ah, that's a good question. Next time perhaps

@aghakashifali1183 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks alot Ma'am for arranging such a quality discussion.

@MuhammadBilal-ns4pi 3 жыл бұрын

Ma sha Allah. Good to see a mentor giving regard to one of the greats of the field. Good work Ma'm

@fazreh1077 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you mam. Students needs more sessions like this.

@rashidfaiz77 3 жыл бұрын

An excellent interview ..... specially about essay writing on KZfaq ..... before this i was extremely confused, every aspirant set his/her own opinion ....

@masad5418 3 жыл бұрын

May Allah bless you with great health and honor sir. You have humbleness and simplicity indeed❤️

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Amin

@irfangujjar5375 3 жыл бұрын

@@FatimaBatoolcss Aoa... How are you?...

@Sandhukrk 3 жыл бұрын

The legendary Sir Razi Abedi Sahab. I've been his student. A great critique of the literature.

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Indeed

@lizawasique7436 3 жыл бұрын

Is is available to students in Islamabad

@lizawasique7436 3 жыл бұрын

He*

@csspmswithalienhandsinalie6903 3 жыл бұрын

At where institution???

@rabiaafzal9792 2 жыл бұрын

Immense thanks to Ma'am fatima for conducting such a beautiful interview.

@faheemulhaquetunio4629 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for bringing rizvi sahab in front of us . God bless..

@athariqbal5548 2 жыл бұрын

The great mentor . I think one of the few teachers that love students more than money that too in an expensive city like Lahore..

@iamsyedmraza 2 жыл бұрын

The blessing, you feel while listening 2 Legends is 🔥😇

@Englishforcss 3 жыл бұрын

Love you sir l. Teacher like you are the blessing of Allah for students

@notacinephile3270 3 жыл бұрын

The video was awesome, but here is a tip for you to improve audio quality in the next video. There is a famous software by Adobe named “Audition”, it gives a creator plenty of choices to select from the “Effects” option, and it smoothly reduces the background noise. _______ Thanks in advance 💐

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you. We will use it in future.

@shahasgharkhan4313 3 жыл бұрын

Great to watch my ideal teacher is interviewing her ideal teacher.👍👍👍

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you!

@shahasgharkhan4313 3 жыл бұрын

@@FatimaBatoolcss My supreme pleasure.

@sohailafridi66 2 жыл бұрын

But Ma'am, as Sir Says, that the introduction must begin from the topic directly. However, according to your lectures, intro must start from 2-4 sentences general statement, then specific. Which to follow. Plz clarify.

@ilmkadarwaza6849 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you mam for sharing such a wonderful interview.

@ayazmir7219 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much Mam for managing a best plateform for our motivation.Sir Rizi Abidi is so straight forward personality. May Allah bless him a long life.

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Amin

@waqasbhatti3328 3 жыл бұрын

Ya Allah enhein Salamat Rakhna ❤️

@Essentials-of-Current-Affairs 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks ma'am. U'r struggling for aspirants.

@naqvi34 Жыл бұрын

Pratice only .No short cuts to be at home in essay-writing.

@IrfanAli-ih2pb 3 жыл бұрын

Worthe wacthing video Pro Sahib and Mam!

@parrypacker401 3 жыл бұрын

Great job fatima apppi g

@nazukpari1173 2 жыл бұрын

Its really appreciated work Madam Allah blessed you in every turn of your life ameen jazak Allah

@mshahzadishaq4523 3 жыл бұрын

Ma sha Allah Great Effort Thanks for Inspiring Us 😇

@maqsoodullah6202 3 жыл бұрын

Masha Allah you are doing great job and ur videos are very helpful and Informative for all students.. Keep it Up madam

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks

@MudasirHussain1032 3 жыл бұрын

Ma'am, your videos have been amazingly helpful. May God reward you for all the good work that you are doing. Thank you so much.

@zainbaloch1153 3 жыл бұрын

Very informative & helpful ! May God bless you both. Ameen

@junaidkhalid6380 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks 😊 for providing us to listen experienced words.

@dr.zhivago2326 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much Madam! Eid mubarak too! 💐

@hunainghouri1768 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks for this helpful interview

@mohsins2018 3 жыл бұрын

Biggest lottery of the country , unfortunately . But i will not stop preparing ; i will strive hard . I will pass it InshaAllah. I have firm faith that my efforts will not go in vain.

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Inshallah

@mohsins2018 3 жыл бұрын

@@FatimaBatoolcss madam answer a query kindly, if this exam is a lottery, or luck based, then how come one candidate qualifies it twice, in some cases thrice?

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Well, it is luck in Pakistan as checking here goes without rubrics. However, luck doesn't work in all cases.

@Lets_goo123 3 жыл бұрын

He described the reality of CSPs and culture of government jobs.

@abidullahofficialyoutube7927 3 жыл бұрын

Sir is a gem..

@alinawaz7581 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much Ma'am!

@ashrafkhan1030 3 жыл бұрын

The best mam I have ever seen

@bilaluddinkhan8824 3 жыл бұрын

Very informative. Thanks

@drfarhan7839 3 жыл бұрын

Mashallah mam .....Really helpful video ..

@SajidsEuroVentures 2 жыл бұрын

My University teacher, brilliant teacher. ❤️

@mhamzaaqeel5411 3 жыл бұрын

please invite other examiners of essay too. This video is excellent.

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Not all speak about the discrepancies in the system.

@mhamzaaqeel5411 3 жыл бұрын

@@FatimaBatoolcss Alright I got your point. Thank you

@hikmatullah9630 2 жыл бұрын

Appreciate your efforts as teacher.

@wanderer.madiha23 2 жыл бұрын

I can't understand what uncle is saying under mask have some hearing issue . kindly can add captions to your video and if anyone can elaborate

@ZeeshanAlirao 3 жыл бұрын

Nice talk... Thanks mam...

@Infacts534 3 жыл бұрын

I'm congratulating to every Pakistani. By the grace of almighty creator, Now Pakistan is going very well in economic growth according to current statistics.

@Essentials-of-Current-Affairs 3 жыл бұрын

Thesis statement: Identification of the topic. And candidates approach.

@lawbyfaranbhatti6667 3 жыл бұрын

Great Efforts Mam👍👍👍👍👍

@cssrelatedvideosahmed8678 3 жыл бұрын

One another question that should be asked;students who prepare CSS at home what should be their approach ?

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Read and discuss.

@taseensyed6772 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you for the rare talk.

@aamiraliabbasi4490 3 жыл бұрын

Madam, you are doing a commendable job. Madam, do you take online essay classes as being away it can help a lot?

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Online classes are there. Next session is starting from 6th June. For details 03219424492

@ghq3730 3 жыл бұрын

An intellectual of his own kind Razi Sb is maker of men.

@parrypacker401 3 жыл бұрын

Last points are to valuable for me😀😃😃😄😄

@sweetnadijan17 2 жыл бұрын

Beneficial video, wonderful mam

@agbaloach131 3 жыл бұрын

Great...

@globalreach8535 3 жыл бұрын

*Thanks for bringing this on board*

@misha.k8565 3 жыл бұрын

I can't believe! At such a level, examiner's mood count but how much is the probability of such cases?

@syedalizamin88 3 жыл бұрын

Helpful!

@parveenabro1079 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks for this video. I need to get my essays checked by physically visiting teachers. Any best teacher for this whose focus is on individual students?

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

You may get your work assessed by Prof. Razi Abedi himself.

@parveenabro1079 3 жыл бұрын

@@FatimaBatoolcss thank you so much. Is he in lahore what is the process to get registered?

@invictusenigma9468 3 жыл бұрын

I revere you both mentors but on hand you refrain from verbosity and on other hand you prefer complex words in objective part for competition

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

That is the pattern of your paper, and can't be helped even by the paper setters till the format of evaluating the knowledge of English language is changed.

@its_anosha_khan 3 жыл бұрын

anyways , Thankyou so much ma'am for this video💓

@khurshidanwar4181 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you great

@taimurmunir2228 3 жыл бұрын

Wow Amazing 🥰🥰

@muneebakram9647 3 жыл бұрын

great personality

@its_anosha_khan 3 жыл бұрын

baat he khtm hogai yahan pr... That CSS IS THE GAME OF LUCK 😁 ITS A LOTTERY 😭😂

@aurangkhantareen8897 3 жыл бұрын

Ma'am you need that detachable cell phone mic which gets attached to collar. It will solve the problem of voice in next videos..

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

I'll get that. Thanks

@huzaifahassan1935 3 жыл бұрын

Mam dose he teach now?

@maahnoorsuhail5528 3 жыл бұрын

Ma’am I am preparing for CSS 2022 and I really want to get my essay checked from him so could you please inform me about his residence where I can go and get my paper checked if that is how it’s supposed to be .

@sadianaz8562 2 жыл бұрын

Do you find him? If yes please let me know too.

@akhterzeb4420 2 жыл бұрын

me too

@saeedchishti.3357 2 жыл бұрын

Nice

@BilalAhmad-eh3hk 3 жыл бұрын

Really appreciate your efforts mam, but the sound quality is not good

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

It will be better next time.

@saifullahbaloch5052 2 жыл бұрын

Love and respect ❤️

@fakharali1710 3 жыл бұрын

Assalam o Alikum.... Respected Madam, I hope you are doing well at your home. I would like to ask that *how we build our imaginative writing skills* means whenever we need to write an Essay or paragraph we need to *imagine first and then we write*. Madam, if you think *it is essential please make a short video about this* Many Thanks Regards:- *Fakhar Ali* *I am waiting for your reply desperately*

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

Imagination is something related to creative writing. Here, in formal academic writing, the students are supposed to argue, analyse or explain a situation. For this strong argumentation skills are needed.

@fakharali1710 3 жыл бұрын

@@FatimaBatoolcss And how we build these skills, (by watching moveis , reading eng newspapers, reading books or by reading editorials or novels of foreign writers *paulo coelho* or many others) ..........Thanks For Your Reply Respected Teacher.

@athariqbal5548 2 жыл бұрын

Salute you sir

@hussaini2316 3 ай бұрын

Life lessons

@FatimaBatoolcss Ай бұрын

yes we have

@ABDULREHMAN-sq8yo Жыл бұрын

Essay ma simplistically nahi likha jata, hat topic depend krta ha essay ke nature ma

@rameenfatima8649 3 жыл бұрын

Thanku so much Mam💕

@aftabahmed6030 3 жыл бұрын

Mam aek video cv writing pe bhi banaen bohat problem face karna parh rahi es pe ?

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

@advnaveedkhan5725 3 жыл бұрын

Sir qualified css written for three times. Was it a luck or consistent exertion?

@FatimaBatoolcss 3 жыл бұрын

He is a well versed writer, and has a very sound educational background. In his case not getting selected was his luck.

@advnaveedkhan5725 3 жыл бұрын

@@FatimaBatoolcss a good writer doesn't guarantee one to be a good administrator. Let's put in this way that he wasn't fit for administration.

@Lost_Literature 2 жыл бұрын

Plz somebody Write in the comment that what is he saying about the essay issue? His voice is no much distorted

@abdulmoiz6317 3 жыл бұрын

Any whatsapp group for css 2022?

@umairayub4440 3 жыл бұрын

Mam what are main 4 parts of essay? due to low quality sound not clear voice

@dr.zhivago2326 3 жыл бұрын

Moreover, what is the examiner said about "Peshawar University" yet not understood. Please elaborate if someone knows that comment.

@fahadarshad9187 3 жыл бұрын

They do not fail students by giving 34, 39 marks etc. The either pass or give very low marks upto 24.

@dr.zhivago2326 3 жыл бұрын

@@fahadarshad9187 oh i see! Thank you so much 🙌! However, i am the student of Peshawar University. Therefore, i requested for confirmation of that comment.