Don't publish, internal use only (set to "Private" mode). Wait for release of shorts collection!!
Monica is lead on process. This is #1 on the list to go live when final review.
** OCTOBER RELEASE **
"Ever Been to Disneyland?" by CLINTON STARK
Cut 29 - review cycle 3 - sound 2nd stage
From Mike:
- reduce volume of music at end -6db
- add some kind of light at beginning / slow music intro ... then shot of oil painting and opening...
- slightly boost opening soundtrack / reduce phone noise
- slightly boost NASA dialog scene 2
- 0:58 reduce chant -4db
- add open clip (Loni from SJ art walk way back - this is SI, pause/skip, then bulb of some kind, etc.) music queue... then into scene with Clint painting & phone
Also I pulled in feedback and the 5 other shorts from Jill up in TO. So she has some stuff, not sure about the whole thing really, but what can you do? (Clint: work on writing :)! )
Hi there, maybe think of way to emphasize theme - not random, stuffed animals? What would best convey the feeling? Story. Tempo. Editing.
More soon, you need to check out the online classes I linked back,
Coming along!!!
J.
And some roll-ups from the usual team ... you should see David's reaction... priceless. Either that or things are heading off the raills reallly fast what to know then... he sent you a bottle of wine soo....
- wigs are good
- stories are better! lol
- maybe get inspiration from artists / painting/ fish / big ideas / compose, then think composition
- Clint: negative light! (will do wonders you'll see)
- one word...... ugh, acronym: ADR
- I'm hearing intersting things about that diner scene.... feel free to include me in review on that one too..... might want to do a roll-up of theme so can be like a "collection" you know maybe every year then
Deadline for others, can write/or email in to M: October 5, 2017.
Thanks all, keep it coming!