I remember the night this video was posted. It makes me feel old seeing it's 9 whole years old now.

I really liked this pasta. Spoilers. Kid is brave enough to go out AND smart enough to get a gun. Kid actually finds the place. Kid enters and actually finds her alive. Kid wounds it and ESCAPES. Kid lives to tell his story, and most amazingly, continues to live afterward. And a pretty good ending.

This kid has much bigger balls then me Him: *Goes and tries to save his friend* Me:"Well good bye Jess love yah but i wish to live"

That fucking rabbit set up the whole thing.

That was actually the best Creepy Pasta I have ever heard. Almost flawless. And terrifying to boot. This would be so intense if made into a movie.

there are just some stories i listen to over and over again and this is definitely one of them

This would make a great movie.

I love this story. This is the first horror story in like... 7 years to actually make me feel fear for the protagonists and empathy for them. Also i like how they survived. Its great to have the occasional creepypasta with a... bittersweet ending. I dont want all of them to be like that but its nice to find one that is.

*Here's a Nice. Long. Hard, Throbbing,* ... Creepy Pasta for you guys to help kick off your summer vacation!!

"I continued my cautious journey into the depression." I feel that bro.

This was one of my favorites hands down!

The relationship between the creature and the main character is really well made. People believed him and worked with him. It was a good ending with him being the hero. And the creature at the end felt like it was giving him a nod of "well played"

Every few years I come back to this narration. It’s the first creepypasta I ever sat through and it’s probably one of the biggest catalysts for why I enjoy reading as much as I do today. It doesn’t try to do anything crazy or out of the box, but somehow that works in its favor. The simplicity of a boy venturing into the woods to save his abducted friend by a grotesque monster is just classic enough to draw most people’s attention, and it certainly drew mine. Can’t believe this story, and this stellar narration, will be 10 years old next year. Can’t wait to come back then for another listen!

This scared the shit out of me the 1st time I listened to this, seeing as it was about 2 in the morning, and my house is surrounded by woods..........

My new favorite. I never get to hear scary stories that end like that. it's extremely refreshing

God, I love this story! (Spoilers below) Part of me wants there to be more pastas with this nomadic creature, other part doesn't want it to become cliche and overused like Slendy. And it's so refreshing to see the protaganist not only surviving his encounter, but chances being that he never sees it again, despite it knowing full well where he lives.

is is the type of story I like best, the ones where the would-be victims fight back.

I stay up all night listening to you MCP!!! You're my hero!!!!!

An oldie but a goodie. Come back to this story every so often and it’s still a unique one.

"Stare that beastie in the face and really give him hell!" -Jethro Tull

You probably only ever get one chance in your life to be a hero, don't waste it

Normally when reading creepypastas they have absolutely NO effect on me but when you read them they actually give me goosebumps, and it only happened today with two stories I listened to. This one and Boxes. Not many can get me creeped out, let alone scare me with this stuff but you did, and for that I congratulate you good sir ::3

I remember listening to this several years ago. Around 2015 or 2016. I remember being disappointed at how there was a happy ending. I considered it cheesy, corny, campy, whatever other words you want to attribute to it. But listening to it eight or nine years later (Too lazy to do maths atm) I appreciate it. It's a horrifying creepypasta with a heart warming ending, and I honestly don't think we get enough horror stories like that.

STILL..ONE of my FAVORITES EVER!!! Mr.CreepyPasta ..This one made me fall in love in your work 4 years ago!! I searched and searched..and FOUND IT..THIS WAS THE ONE! Respect&Regards my man!

Wow, this is the first one to make me afraid to close or open my eyes while watching. Very well written. Normally these things don't scare me but this one had a certain realism that I could not get over. And the narration voice is somewhat soothing and charming thought the story but it also adds a creepy setting. Very well done.

oh CRAP and I'M GOING CAMPING FOR 3 WEEKS IN THE SUMMER!!! AND I HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO GO *goes to a corner and sobs*

Its rare to see a story where the voice gets away from the foil whilst still remaining this tense. Its also nice to see a creepypasta monster that is not OP, a more instinctive beast with actual flaws. An instant classic, couldn't recommend it more and your narration certainly did the superb atmosphere justice. Truly professional and gripping. 9/10

idk why but i have not listen to your creepypastas for a long time your voice for them are the best Mrcreepypasta

My favourite intro out of them all :)

Lesson= Don't EVER go in the woods without a gun!! There's always something in there that wants to kill you!!

I like his narrations now but this was the golden age for creepypasta. I like this quality of audio.

That was a masterpiece, both in literature and the way it way told. You have an amazing talent Mr. Reader. I've never experienced such a rush from a story telling. Amazing.

My first creepypasta :) still love it!

What's the song at 29:30? I've been looking for it for a while now, but I've had no luck

Dear god, One of the best creepy pastas i have heard yet. Keep up the good work MrCreepyPasta.

Part of Chuck Norris' childhood, 'Nuff said.

This has got to be the best creepypasta and the best horror story that I ever heard in my entire life. This deserves to be a movie and get some oscars.

By far the scariest story I've heard yet. The only one to actually scare me. You had me jumping at shadows all thirty five minutes!

Hands down one of my favorite CP's narrated by one of the best in the business! Thank you!!!

This is one of my favorite creepypastas :D

Am i the only one who thinks this story is beautiful and amaizingly scary at the same time

i love all the music you use in your your videos so calm and soothing

I don't have many, but this is definitely on of my favorite stories/youtube videos so far and is the reason i subscribed to you. Very good job on your part MrCreepyPasta.

I hope your taking notes slendy

Alternate universe: (black people) Jesse got kidnapped by the it, then the boy would get his gang and go into the woods and hear POP POP and the monster would start screaming in pain because it was being shot and shanked

I love your voice, its so clean and clear and I love listening to you tell stories xo My favourite one will always be Anasi's Goatman story and I listen to it every night I go to sleep. No matter how many times I hear there is always something new I hadn't heard the first few 100 something times.

Just recently found this one and I have to say, it's probably one of my favorites, well written, and narrated. Awesome job!

Squint your eyes and turn your head to the right; does anyone else see the Ninja Turtle, or is it just me??

how is jess still alive after getting mauled to the point where you can see ribs

This one reminds me a lot of my boyfriend and I. We love animals and nature, I love rocks, we're both back country hicks, and my name is Jessica. I first read it a long time ago, and it's good to see someone that I'm comfortable listening to has narrated it. C:

this is the best creepy pasta i've ever heard. the narration made it so much better.

a story of the raw, profound power of love.

What's with the slow motion dial up tone in the background? (Some where in the middle of the video if you want to hear it).

Wow! I've been listening creepy pastas day in day out for the past half year, but this... This! Really tugged me along for a adrenaline filled chase! Also offcourse due to the flawless and expressive narration by MrCreepyPasta! Kudos Good Sir!

Wow, very well written, loved it. Felt this kind of tension, ache in my head almost through all the story...

Yay happy ending for once

Oooh NOOOOOOOOO it's the FENDER MAN

Please keep doing these. I love your work!

By far my favorite. The motif of sound is really well used. The rising action is set perfectly and soft break for romance hits home. A perfect example of great CreepyPasta!

"It discovered it's meal had been stolen..." *giggidy*

Every 23 spring for 23 days IT gets to eat.......... like if you know what I'm referring to.

This is one of my favorite creepy pastas because it has real quality on a technical level, you can tell someone that has at least somewhat studied writing put a lot of work into it. Reads like an actual horror novel. Great structure.

This could be my new favorite Creepypasta

does anyone know the name of the song that starts at 29:27

I live deep in the woods 5miles to a small town

Dude, your voice is perfect for this kinda thing never stop making these vids man just dont do it or even think about it

I have never encounter a scary speaker more talanted on youtube than you MrC.P You are truly a legend so keep it up! P.S thanks for the sleepless nights!

Here in 2022 who else here for nostalgic purposes?

Well I WAS going to ride my dirtbike tomorrow on this new trail I found but Nevermind...

Every now and then I go out of my way to find this and can't remember the name but your voice is always the way I can find it.

Your narrating is perfect in every way

It's my birthday today, can I get a hi from Mr. Creepypasta?

this creepy pasta would make excellent Manga sieres

This would make an amazing movie! The whole thing was just so well composed and you voice was the icing on the cake!

This was one of the first creepy pastas I ever listened to going on 9 years ago still my favorite longer creepy pasta

3:27 I DONE IT?!😒 IT'S, "I DID IT!" "I'VE DONE IT! "

I love that piano piece it's one of my favorites classical songs ever..such good atmosphere added so much to the song..I also appreciate that you don't cut out your mistakes it adds to the panic tone..

This is just golden. I love it.

WAY! better love story then twilight

I'll draw a circle around me so it won't attack me. (At first I thought this was Slender xD Kind of reminds me of him...)

This was such a good creepypasta!! I fangirled so hard at the kiss... Don't ask. By far my FAVORITE creepypasta I've ever heard!

Great reading!!!!! I love the sound effects you use (the bells at 15:51 were on point!)

I'm ghetto you see if I see that type of sh*t I run pack my stuff and drive to the ocean get a boat to New York get a taxi to Cali catch a plane to Hawaii and swim to a unknown island

Slenderman! :D

I'm glad to be a member of your channel Mr.Creepypasta

Anyone else coming back to this gem after looking for it in 2019?

I bet that monster is just Donald trump

soo... the rake?

Very engaging way of storytelling - thank you!

I always come back to this one.... this is my favorite creepypasta

This was great! I even teared up towards the end. Great Job!

By far the best creppypasta I have ever heard

This is without a doubt the best Creepypasta ever

Great story, good amount of creepiness, and a good ending. This is probably my favorite creepypasta, ever.

This was awesome! I got goosebumps at the end!

This and anasi’s goatman story are some of my FAVORITE pastas out there. So scary yet so captivating

This story was better than most of the ones I've read in my lifetime. Infinite Kudos to you, author.

Pleassssseeeee longer creepypastas!! I love these!

oh shit bro this was so intense and the monster sound effects were awesome!

Probably one of the best Creepypastas you ever read.