If acting consisted of delivering all your lines very slowly and in an unemotional monotone, these people would all deserve Oscars.

This reminds me of an early D&D game. The players enter a bar just on the edge of the wastelands. They don't know each other. For some reason, a fight breaks out, and they end up helping each other out. Afterward, they head out together to start their life of adventures together.

Soooo like I'm watching almost every day. IJS....the synchronicity of it all. BRILLIANT JOB AGAIN, GUYS!!!!

This was great! I hope to see a sequel. Really liked the personalities of Alex and Fray. Wonderful film.

That was awesome! What a rush! I'm instantly a fan!

Well done, me likey, definitely a nod to heavy metal mag....perfect 🤩

True talent. I masterpiece that today would be viewed as possibly outdated. However, man respect man. This SciFi short is a diamond in the rough.

Pyhät tulipallot! 2014 ?! Toivon, että olet työskennellyt jatko-osan parissa, koska TÄMÄ on kuuma ominaisuus ja ansaitsee sarjan ja / tai pitkäkestoisen elokuvan. PARAS lyhyt mitä olen nähnyt kuukausina. Bravo! ************************* Holy fireballs! 2014?! I hope you've been working on a "sequel", because THIS is a hot property and deserves a series and/or a feature-length movie. BEST short I've seen in months. Bravo!

Very nice, great set, costume design and casting. Can’t wait to see more from you.

Looks like a beginning of great friendship :) I want MORE!

Great video, I was left wanting more episodes.

Thx for posting. Steampunk is cool! Really just caught on. Reminds me of Heavy Metal magazine. I would like to enjoy more of Fray! 👍👍

Loved it. No matter the rougher parts, overall I enjoyed this. ❤️

Wonderful! I kept thinking to myself "there's something about their voices - was it dubbed?" Then I see you're from Finland. Its just the way they speak English. Its a pity the first one wasn't longer. I find myself wondering what Fray and her partner will get up to next. Thank you so much for sharing, and here's to your continued work.

The set and lighting for that bar was top notch. Thanks for posting.

I appreciated it, i think it's not for everyone, i didn't understand really the whole context, but it seems that the important point was the new relationship they were building each other.

This would be a great series!

I would like to see more of this crew. Pirates of the Caribbean meets Guardians of the Galaxy.

Great job guys. I love it

Bwahaha just watched this again for the first time in a couple of years. Being involved in this project is one of my favorites memories from my time in Finland. Could the acting have been better? Sure. Dialogue? Most def! But this is an amazing project, with a great crew. And I mean, c'mon, set design, editing, overall production value! Thanks so much @hmcindie for everything! PS- I'm one of the actors with the charisma of a wet paper bag, as one of the haters below described us. Lol. That shit is funny!!!

Nice story. With a lot of the junk that is being created today on mainstream television this is a refreshing story. Would like to see more of this!

I Loved this Short Movie.

Loved this.

8:35 "What the hell is this?" "What?" -Gestures to everything

SISU!! That was a lot of fun! Please make more. Great english language usage- exotic, cool and tough. And Fray: yowza!! Cheers!

This has real potential, but also needs a lot of work. I hope you produce more episodes and make each one better than the last. You know what needs to be improved.

I would like to see this one as a series or a movie.

I think the showdown scene would have been more convincing if the heroine actress had been directed to act just a bit uptight or a tad worried instead of just matter of fact as if no risk was involved, but overall I could feel myself getting sucked into it all. A worthy effort to be sure. Wish I could have been a part of it. Thanks for sharing it.

This has great potential. I wouldn’t classify it as steampunk, though.

Amazing cinematography and lighting!! well done, liked and subbed ;)

Great characters, great short!

Good movie. I loved the way his gun blew up on him. Well they got thrown out of the bar with nothing for their efforts. Love the way she just gets up the spunk to go on and try something else. I wonder if she will ever get her money?

Great film. Would like to see more. Thanks.

I would totally watch this as a series

"Congratulations on graduating Villainous Boss Antagonist School. Here is your complimentary huge snake. Wear it with pride."

Thank you for putting this out. It was a lot of work from the crew and the actors. You did really well, considering it was no/low budget, and that it was 7 years ago... The ADR... I, personally would have preferred the dialog be natural, native, with subtitles. Cut out some of stuff that doesn't add to the story, like the glass looking and booze sloshing at 6:02. Add some diegetic sounds, even if you have to use on-set microphones.

Nice, very cool looking forward to seeing more

Lots of various types and scenes... a learning process

Kinda reminds me of FireFly!! I was hoping he would say "but at least I got the money" and show her the pouch the snake guy put on the table.

I want to see more episodes of this. I want to see more of this chick and I want to know more about her relationship with her backup in the bar.

Enjoyed it! :) A little slow, but SUCH potential. Hope to see more of FRAY. Thanks

I shocked myself and enjoyed this acting a bit hammy but would make a great series xx

STEAMPUNK ? saw only punk, but have some good moments with fails mostly, that was fun

Amazing sci-fi simule...enjoyable

Loved it! Main characters have chemistry and liked the guys and girls acting even though it was short. I really liked the action scenes and bet if it had a great script it could be really great! I’d love to see something else made

Nice. I'd say more on the sci-fi side than steampunk, but nothing wrong with that. It'd be a good pilot for a series or teaser for a feature. An interesting world. If there was more, I'd watch it.

Loved it! Nice work.

Moody, Bladerunnerish, very entertaining.....and good soundtrack....Do some more!

Loved it. Nice and gritty.

Brilliant. Another fantastically grim work from Finland, where the Soviet Union is always just next door.

great short film, It kept my interest right through

Great movie. All its faults are what made it special. When you guys make the next one don't change a thing!!! 10/10

Very enjoyable! Many a good friendship has started over a bar fight.

i used vic vapor rub on my nail and yes it is growing out, back to a healthy nail, used it every night

Lots of fun to watch.

Not to bad. Hope they will bring us more

To be honest, minus a few things here and there I personally would like to see a full length with a decent budget and enough time of course. Plus Fray hot as hell and kicked some ass.

Positive side - Big effort to get the audience into a known story line. Negative - No background information leading into the scene nor characters. Fighting scene, could have been either longer and more fist fighting or shorter if everybody has guns. or fists and as soon as any side begin to lose, then the gun start to pull out. or a hand granade and everybody dies. Positive again - characters are played by good looking actors or not so depending on what side of the line they are. Anyways. even though it is not a great short clip, i vote for a like for keeping the sci-fi short film movement alive. Note, put a bit of science or factual in the clip, that makes SciFi movies great, like a plain drama as First Signal

Waoo!. This is excelent. I love the ending sound tracks where can I download it.

Very funny in a delightfully gritty, ultra camp sort of way! Sergio Leone would be proud. Well, hey, my opinion. 'The Good, The Bad, and the Really, Really Ugly' in space with a female lead. Could be a success on the big screen if promoted correctly. A potential cult favorite. Try Kickstarter!

rabbit I hate watching a good short that I can't continue, pretty good boys

Wish someone would make a full length movie.

This had a lot of potential if not for the stale lines for the characters.

Great job guys, if this had been a full lenght film I would have watched the whole thing. The voice dubbing was a little bad, but the cinematography more than made up for it. Keep it up, I want more!

Nice team....I’d love to see more

This was so lit! Y'all should put that outro track on soundcloud or something. Would've liked to see a few vampires getting dusted but loved your style nonetheless. :) Thank you for coming through when LURK didn't -_-

Awsome... Epic wonderland

Is this a "proof of concept" or a pilot for something potentially bigger? Previous comments on the cardboard acting are spot on, but if it got commissioned, a good director would kick them into touch. The setting, and writing are pretty good though, straight out of a comic. It left me wanting to see the next episode(s)!

please do another one....i like Fray.....i want more

15:30 "Im in, all three inches. Cant you tell?"

Really like this concept you should make more plenty for you to build on could be a good series

... & ´ still remember that "Weapon -Fiasco" ! But it was in the "Old-City", damned it. !

Good movie. Hope there will be more

"Give me a drink, the usual". Are you kidding? And of course a worm! I'm wondering now how many cliches are going to be in this movie!

Cool, that was really good.

I liked it and I am old timer sci fi well done

Well it's some of the worst dialogue I've heard in a while. The acting I think suffered because of the horrible dialogue. The rest, directing, cinematography, action, editing, etc. was fine. I would say Mikko Lopponen (who wore many hats in this short film) should try directing some things he did not write. Good films start with good stories and good writing, and that is where this one went bad. Otherwise I think it could have been good with a better blueprint to work from. I say this because I think I see potential in Lopponen's directing abilities (and even the other hats he wore), just not as a writer. Not trying to be mean, but I watch a LOT of films my whole life and tons of shorts since KZfaq explosion, and am very detailed so I try to separate what's being done. I see a short film that suffered because of writing...fix the blueprint and I think you end up with something much better!!

Good un its class.. worth the time.

I enjoyed it, thanks 👍🏻

If you made this film....The possibilities would be endless. What is stopping you?

You've got something decent here. Hope you get the funding to progress this to a higher level.

best sci fi short film

How they get Jeremy Remmer to act in this? Hix commitment to the role is amazing. He must have put on at least 75 pounds for this!

Not bad!!!!! Give us more!!!!

Cool ! Anymore of this Fray story line ?

Enjoyed the short,looking to see the full length soon?

Great concept. Steampunk is an awesome universe. This is an effort that doesn't make it somehow.

Very cool! I was hoping she got her item back during the fight. :D

great choice of cast - not just 15 uni students of same wirey build.

"Is it dangerous?" xD

This was brilliant. It reminded me of comics I read growing up like Strontium Dog, and other 2000 AD sci-fi steampunk comics. The acting was better than some of the people here moan about, I mean if you want bad acting go watch Arrow, some of the actors in Arrow that play the villains need acting classes.

Cool little short. I think the music competed with the dialogue a bit. But, I liked the cinematography and graded look.

👍👍💓✌👏👏 Excellent !

Enjoyed it. End left for more episodes. have the actors work together more and tighten the script and youv'e got a series. Goodluck.. :)

Very interesting! Good blocking and framing, decent cinematography, sound design and a curious script. My thanks to all involved in your 'little no budget sci-fi short film'. It's refreshing to see what new talent can create outside of the mainstream. I sense this is not the last we'll see of Fray? Have you considered crowdfunding for future projects? I've worked as a support actor on various low budget projects. medium budget TV shows and films and high budget Hollywood trash (well I have to make a living and I have bills to pay), but I always prefer working with a smaller, dedicated crew with a vision. Good luck to you all.

Good stuff!

The villain was awesome !

Want more of these two

This is absolutely amazing. Such potential.

Alright.... we play it your way.... this time