Edit: One clarification! My painted fusiliers are not done! Since I'm so new I've been focusing on getting things ready for the table, but I have not spent a lot of time drybrushing, edge highlighting, or any other advanced techniques. I hope to get to that later 😊 Thanks for checking out my video! I think my lore delivery still leaves a lot to be desired... but I'll keep practicing and improving the more lore videos I do 😁

Doing great - I really enjoy your enthusiasm. Your painting skills are getting better bro! If I can make a game changing suggestion - look at some magnifying glasses/headset; they help tremendously and chicks dig em too Keep up the hard work dude - I really enjoy your down to earth style

Great job on those models!

Overall, I think this was a good video! It was a real improvement over the last one and I thin you did justice to the unit that sold me on Cities of Sigmar. But to give a minor note about the intro, if you want to talk about the current rules/gameplay of the unit you cover, that's fine, but I'm not sure you *needed* to bring up the nerfed interaction with the Warforger in the intro at least. Secondly, if you're struggling with camera focus while looking at the sprue, here's my suggestion. Keep in mind that I'm not a camera/editing "expert", if you went through the effort of painting the heads in sub-assemblies, take a picture or do a slow, level panning or dolley shot of the heads set up on those wooden dowels, whichever gets you the best, most consistent focus. It might break up the "live unboxing" feel you're going for, but to me, you might as well kill two birds with one stone by taking pictures or shooting video of your process while you either give reccomendations on how to sub-assemble the models, or just conduct your general review of the kit and is parts. Next, I think you did well in painting such detailed models, and I think your transfer work was excellent. However, I do hope that you add a bit more detail to this paint job. Because, on the blackpowder squire specifically, his arms are just solid black, so it looks like they weren't painted at all. If you want black cloth as part of your scheme/style, that's fine, but in order to pull it off, you *need* highlights and color variation along the folds and/or in the recesses, at least for something that takes up as much space as the whole arm and shoulder. I don't add highlights to the black cloth bits of my Stormcast, but those are folds in between armor panels or at the bends of elbows or knees, mostly hidden areas that don't need it as much as something more front-and-center like the Squire's arms. Without those highlights to give the cloth definition it'll look flat, or, like I said, unpainted.(the same generally applies to other things like black armor and, for your army specifically, the wrought iron on top of the Fusilier's pavises or other Castelite shields) I can see your painting quality is definitely improving, and I dont want to bog this comment down with *every* single little suggestion I'd make to help improve your painting. Not only because I don't want you to think I'm coming down too hard on you. Getting models built and painted to any standard is something to be proud of and I don't want to take that away from you. But also because the painting isn't the "main focus" of this video. So I won't harp more than I think I need to. But if you'll indulge me on just one more point, I would also reccomend drilling out the barrels of your Hand-Cannons on your Fusiliers. When the front of the barrels are flat like that, it just doesn't look great. You can do it with a pin-vice or hand drill and while it might be a little tedious, it pays out dividends to the quality of your finished work. Finally, I think your presentation of the Lore for this unit was great overall! You gave a good intro to the faction writ-large before jumping into the details of this specific unit, which I really appreciated! There's just one tiny note I'll make that I think could have elevated the intro that much more. When you bring up that the Cities don't have the aid of nature spirits like the Lumineth, the reference image you used didn't have any of the Nature Spirits or the Elves that learn from them. It's an incredibly minor point in the grand scheme of the video, I'm aware, but I think simple details like that will go a long way to improve the quality of your videos. Now if you couldn't get a decent image of some Stoneguard, Windchargers, and/or one of the Elemental Spirits, I'd understand. But, even if I might be *too* pedantic bringing it up, I still wanted to mention it. I hope I helped you out in some way with this! Even if a good chunk was somewhat nitpickey. Keep up the good work!

That looks great! How did you get thar deep red colour? I might get into cos when second wave arrives... Maybe this or next year? I think cos were a success for GW.

I don’t know what your setup or budget for YT or anything is and I am no camera expert so take this with a grain of salt. But I think your camera is struggling a little to keep focus cause it looks like your desk setup can be better lit. There is a little bit of like waviness that occurs in the background of some of the shots in the video and from my (all be it little amounts of) experience that is from a lack of light and the camera trying its best to make up for it. I think getting another light you can setup when you record could help with some of the camera problems you have been having. If it doesn’t help I’m big sorry. But also more light is always helpful when painting so can’t go wrong with more lights I guess