The one thing we must take from each of these stories is the Freedom is not free ... we must be vigilant every day against those who would srip those freedoms from us.

"I liked the story." This had just the right amount of stress and reward.

Those poor poor tables, the true victims in this story.

"we'll toss you out the airlock and let you breathe vaccuum..." BRUH...LMAO The story-telling is on point. 💯💯

I only made it halfway through. That was about when it seemed the author ran out of plot and started to resort to word salad.

Question: Why do Sci-fi writers routinely omit current human military abilities, such as using air-power, or beyond range of sight attacks, to take the battle back to hand-to-hand combat like everyone is fighting WWI all over again -- only with Aliens? For example, the bunker assault should have gone like this: "Sir, there's an entrenched bunker filled with enemy soldiers." -- "Well, son, I don't like it." -- "Yes, sir, deleting bunker immediately." I mean, hell -- they could just take that out from orbit since they are so "advanced".

It was a nice story but the second half kinda a devulved into anime-like "We defeated a lvl 99 but oh no there is lvl 999 and then there is lvl 9999 and so on..."

Just surfing and found this ,great story

What I picked up in the beginning from basic story, I thought was a great idea. And that was the humans come and relieve a conquered hero. We got acquainted with the main guy Javine, the position he and his people were in, Javine's iron will and readiness to sacrifice all to find a way to save his people, What seems to be the good humans come to the rescue and try to make an everlasting peace with the galaxy. And we get an opportunity to explore the good and bad sides of humanity through the eyes of an alien. That seemed to me to be a story worth almost 3 hours of listening. I haven't seen that before in these novellas on line here. But I have only been doing this 1 or 2 stories a week for a few weeks. The problem is the story seems focused on the main guy Javine and a constant repetition of his challenges and solving those challenges with variations of the exact same words. We get a constant repetition of "...this is what he fought for, and his willingness to die for..." and "...take the fight to the xyz with everything we got..." and "...if they won't stand with me, I'll stand alone..." and so on and so so on and so on, and so on, and so on. I am sorry, but at 1 hours and 10 minutes, I have to bail. The story of a view of the human race, both good and bad, could easily take 2:42. The story of Javine about 30 or 40 minutes max. I give you an A for creativity, and urge you to continue to write. Someday we'll be buying your bestsellers on Amazon. You just need to get your storytelling skills up to match your ideas. And that comes with practice and repetition.

Well done, enlightens the imagination and endless possibilities that our minds can conceive.

Great story I enjoyed all the twists and turns, write more.

New drinking game. Everytime you hear “he knew the road would be long” take a drink

Remember to take a drink every time you hear “fate of the galaxy!”

this stops making sense after 1.5 hr , its starts feeling like another story is stiched into it.

Děkuji za příběh😁

So far halfway through and I liked the first part. I was good with the beginning of the middle but how many times do we have to hear "it was going to be a long and daunting task" or about ten versions of that. Could have shaved twenty minutes off without hurting the story. Going to finish it, though, as I think it will be worth it. Might be a long a daunting task though!

The first story I found from this channel I still like the most.

One of the best online stories I’ve heard!!

" I liked the story" A very interesting and thought provoking Science Fiction Story. Well worth listening to and perusing. 💪🏻🙏🏻✨

This story used to be 10 - 14 minutes long and left you wanting more. I regret that desire

please continue the fantastic story ASAP I Love Content ❤❤❤❤❤😂😂😂😂😂

Couldn't get all the way through the story. You lost me when things became too general. They gathered evidence. What evidence? How did they gather it? Details. I need details.

Brilliant just brilliant,love the space tails and who knows one day it could become fact , ,but will the good guys really win in the end ???. Keep your stories coming,, Philip...

Excellent story, greatly appreciated.

good tale

KZfaq is getting such a trash! Every 30 seconds - a hour of ads!

😊😊😊thank you very much for a great story.dmj

For anyone interested in a channel that doesn't steal stories look up "agro squrial narrates" read by a human and cridits given to the original creators with links so you can read their other works.

Yes I like this story 😊

This is the first story ive seen painting the humans as evil for the genre not bad

I liked this story very much.

I Love the Story Gordon - Australia

I Love the story.👍🏿

Over all a good story, but I have one big issue. They snuck into a barracks of sleeping soldiers and went from one to another whispering to them. 1) where is the midwatch guard? 2) They whispered to a lot of soldiers (apparently) and none of them raised the alarm - not likely. 3) As dawn approached , they just sneaked back out. I know about "suspending belief" for the sake of the story, but that was too much for me.

Definitely a good story...😎

You've been reading Doc Smith. Well done.

I watch those stories in background while playing Stellaris. Best COMBO WOMBO ever

The story lost it's way at times, but overall, very well written and a story that deserves to be expanded into a full length novel.

Thank you I loved it❤❤❤

listened straight through!

Definitely like the stories. Please keep them coming. Thank you

The fate of the galaxy, etc, Yada, Yada. Strike that line from all your future stories for cripes sake!!

Like the story

Interesting that someone could describe the shadow "demons" that dwell in the void between the worlds. Thank you 😊

Thank u ❤

Good story..each main point was stated repeatedly, but good story. Just take out the repetitive statements.

Excellent story ty.

It seems as though everyone in the comments has missed the true message at the heart of this story. Humanity is not on a warpath of revenge, and the Threen are not mindless warmongers bent on genocide. No, the REAL moral of this story is about tables... tables, and podiums, and any other serviceable horizontal surface. THOSE are what Javine really wants to see destroyed! If he had not seemingly pounded or slammed his fist on every single table that had crossed his path, than he had not completed his mission in life. Those cycles spent in isolation while seeking out the Humans steeled Javine's resolve... He swore to himself, to his broodmates, to the Balkan gods themselves that every table in this spiral arm of the Galaxy and the next would tremble in exquisite terror at Javine and his fist!

Great story!

Cool to think we're actually the OGs and not the aliens.

I liked it, it was a great story growing in magnitude.

I realy liked this story thank you.

This is someone else’s story but with a few words changed i heard this on another channel

I like this story. Thank you!

Good story

I prefer science fiction stories about humans that don't suck can we please have a story about people in space where it isn't some god-awful global warming lecture I like these stories because they're about camaraderie and heroism

Great story

I loved this story, and it’s message, at least the message I get from it” si vis pacem para BELLUM” if you want peace prepare for war!

All the advertising 😢.

nice story

Enjoyed the story

This one should have come to a end at about 1.5hrs. But it just keeps going and going at 1.75hrs I'm calling the ball and moving on.

This story was great until about the halfway point, and then at the 2/3 mark, went over the cliff. Way too much "and then in an evening, he talked the enemy super soldiers into starting a rebellion and the power of FRIENDSHIP saved the galaxy".

Very great keep it up

I liked the story

Love this story my dad would have said it was a Western in space

Captain Steel of the Retribution? Gotta be the coolest name I've ever heard

To the author of this story: the species named Threne has been misspelled throughout this story, occasionally spelled three-n. Your AI narrator also tends to misspell some words as well. Why not just hire a voice actor to narrate your stories instead? That would also provide a more nuanced presentation with better emotional input as well.

Well done 👏

Did AI write this? It's very repetitive

I think the tables in this story have a solid basis for a class-action lawsuit. While the road ahead is long and dangerous, they will triumph with strength and courage. .... ugh what am I doing??

cool starry bra

Is there a playlist where I can hear all of these stories in order they took place?

i like the story

Is there an order to listen to all these stories

Good story killed by the amount of dam commercials

This story disappears up it's own backside halfway through.

Drinking game level Impossible : Drink Everytime the word "but" is used

Way too repetitive. Win, find out there's a new danger, find a new deus ex machina ally, win, find out there’s a new danger… Really poor writing, and so many compliments from people who don’t know better. The only saving grace was that this "HFY story" was bereft of humans, and ended up a Javeen FY story. Would have been great to see Javeen's best bud mentioned again, someplace.

This was an amazing story. Thank you for sharing it.

I liked the story.

I like the story

I dont agree with the purity front or whatever but this jarvis dude watched his race almost get exterminated. "His beloved galactic community" ignored his pleas for help then told them to fear humanity and he did. So humanity game them something to fear

I liked the story 😊

At the end you lost me completely. You expect me to believe two "godlike" beings that have existed for several centuries can't deal with a group of zealots on their own?

I liked the first unification arc, but then it was a new copy-paste conflict like star wars: the illuminati strike back. A ton of shadowy umbrella organizations that somehow supercede each other 🤷

I really like the story

there were a LOT, a LOT of "heknew the road ahead was going to be difficult with difficult choices" repeated OVER AND OVER agian... I wanted to like it but seems it only said "it was going to be difficult" and then jump on the conclusion without explaining the freaking choices.

So was it to destroy an annoying enemy as they first said or protect the weak?

one mistake... normal fighters cant have hiperspace engines , to big for their size, so on an hiperspace jump, they would be inside bigger shipps

I liked the story 🎉

To many times the writer repeated the text "see this through no matter the cost "

Star field needs more ship parts /cock pits guns space suits like halo or mass Effect mabe ones like the book forever war and maybe light sabers more knifes serated and rovers

All of these scifi stories tend to share the same gaping plot hole. They assume that all these brutal species were able to master FTL space travel without figuring out robotics along the way. Why would a species need biological slaves when robots exist?

How much shit does Javine need to go through?!?

a more pictoriol would inprove ones channel ! good luck ! bless!

Sadly this story mirrors the United States 😮

❤️❤️❤️❤️😀

Chilled Me to the bonè

So many technological advancement in 2hrs time so many changes in name. Felt repetitive. Well history often is.