Level link: steamcommunity.com/sharedfile...
Song link: • Teminite - Hold On
The creator YT link: / @mizuthecyandrago
|-FeedBack-|
- 0:26 to 1:18 and 3:25 to 3:54 the lyric is well to big it very distracting and hard to see the short cut scence also maybe some are off sync or some overlapping (maybe try to make it smaller and change some animaion too)
- 1:02 or 1:03 I can see th BG appear before the flash
- 1:18 that face expression is very weird it look mre robot than a dragon. maybe use scale on the eye?
oh speaking about dragon let look at the design
[▜Aesthetics▛]
■ = important
□ = only my opinion
-Color-
meh I look fine I guess
-Theme-
□ dragon? or kangaroo? I hard to think because that mess up wing
-Detail-
■ the outline need to be same thickness specially the ear/horn and the tail
■ in later part you see his mouth but the teeth is not attach in his mouth
[▜Final Thought▛]
it look okay-ish but they are still have problem to fix
- 1:50 the bullet disappears and not off the screen
- 1:59 and 2:47 to 2:59 I feel like the text chat is not parented so it make it off sync
- 2:00 to 2:05 some bomb are off sync.
- 2:16 to 2:45 if it is a cut scene make the player gone it look kinda odd to see the player in a cut scene.
- 3:16 to 3:25 the flash look weird maybe use instant?
- 3:22 ah did he say or the player say since the text chat is gone.
- 4:25 and 5:02 they aren't warning for that circle wall.
- 4:30 please tell the player to go up.
- 4:45 the zoom out is way too fast and too far away.
- 4:56 the saw warning is too slow.
- 4:58 the warning is slow again.
|-Final Thought-|
it look very rush. they are good thing like the animation it not bad for a beginner. but the gameplays is a bit unfair like slow warning, lack of warning, ZOOM and some attack are too fast. the cut scene at the beginning is hard to see because the lyric is too big.