*how* and *where* to give your opinion in discuss both these views//ielts writing task 2

how and where to give your opinion in discuss both these views//ielts writing task 2

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The question used in this video is from Cambridge IELTS 6 Test 4 Writing Task 2.
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 Essay Structure
01:12 Body Paragraph 1- Discuss Other People's Opinion
05:22 Body Paragraph 1- Give Your Opinion
07:14 Body Paragraph 2- Discuss Other People's Opinion
09:11 Body Paragraph 2- Give Your Opinion
10:21 Introductory Paragraph
11:43 Conclusion Paragraph
12:11 Key Takeaways
More discuss-both-views essays: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/di...
Example-led paragraph by IELTS Simon: www.ielts-simon.com/ielts-hel...

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@mdtamimiqbaltalukdar8864 Жыл бұрын

I was looking for this types of video, where and when I should state my opinion. Thanks a lot one more time.

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@sonampeldendorji2020 Жыл бұрын

In discussion essay, it’s always good that you provide your stand at conclusion not in introduction.

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

No, your opinion needs to be clear throughout the entire essay.

@sandraguillenslaby195 Жыл бұрын

In an argument essay you expose/*discuss both sides or views* and then give your opinion (at the end, usually by the strongest argument), letting the reader aknowledge both sides arguments (without your opinion influence) so you WON'T DEVELOP THE ARGUMENTS BY YOUR POSITION but GIVING THE REASONS OF BOTH SIDES and then expose your final position with all the information given. In this case we are talking about a ✨balance an argument IELTS question✨

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Thank you for your amazing and beneficial videos. Can you explain how to generate ideas and find examples to write in an upcoming video, please?

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listening to news podcasts would help.

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@KainsazEdits Жыл бұрын

Please upload positive and negative one ( + & - are similar to agree and disagree one?)you are wonderful teacher as well as helping so many of us in free. thank you very much 🙏

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Yes, the two types of questions you mentioned are the same. You can read positive-or-negative-development essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/positive-or-negative-development/

@KainsazEdits Жыл бұрын

@@LilieIELTS thank you lilie i got advantages outweigh disadvantages on exam day :⁠-⁠)

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

@@KainsazEdits That's great and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.☺

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@sagargurung8672 11 ай бұрын

In writing task 2 discussion essay. If the question is "some people say its better to have single law system throughout the world but other say its should be free to make their own laws in the country " in the first body paragraph can I disagree the first point and write the disadvantages of having single law system in the world ?. Or will I loss the mark ?

@adityaveersingh8856 Жыл бұрын

Thanks for the wonderful video....👍👍 I have a doubt that you have used risks and changes so many times, will it effects our IELTS score?

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

I don't think it will. I used different collocations, e.g., "make changes" and "resist change". Don't worry about repeating an individual word, especially when that word is a key word.

@adityaveersingh8856 Жыл бұрын

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@joyzyjazzyjeboomjae4893 11 ай бұрын

This kind of question were come up on my IELTs yesterday huhu...i have a mental block on Task 2...i take my IElts here in Hong Kong.

@LilieIELTS 11 ай бұрын

Don't forget to come back and share your test result here.😊

@faizaa4859 Жыл бұрын

Hi Lilie !! I have this question about word count in ielts writing. Would you please tell me about it. Question is : in ielts writing do they count prepositions and articles as words or not?

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Yes, prepositions and articles are counted.

@someone_boring6099 7 ай бұрын

Could I ask if the score will be affected if we don't recommend IELTS format of Introduction Body paragraph 1 Body paragraph 2 Opinion Conclusion

@liuoanu 10 ай бұрын

notes: all four paragraphs have to talk about our own opinion; body paragraph needs main idea; body paragraph: topic sentence includes main idea, explanation (not necessary), example, own opinion; 2:52 singular they

@liuoanu 10 ай бұрын

Take, for example...

@liuoanu 10 ай бұрын

example-led paragraph 5:10

@nikeshbedari9479 9 ай бұрын

I want to make Introductory paragraph like yours but i failed to think of two strong main idea for this question : is newspapers good for learning news or other media.

@LilieIELTS 9 ай бұрын

Yes, but instead of reading newspapers, I like to listen to news podcasts.

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Your video is attracting

@rakibhasan4328 10 ай бұрын

There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. It says measure means plural. Do i need to write one measue or 2? Could u plz make it clear??? I Didn't see this type of question before.

@oceanstyle6169 4 ай бұрын

Good day teacher.Can we send you our essays so that you checked and sent your feedback?

@mohdahadalikhan5171 Жыл бұрын

Appreciated

@mahdis...7821 Жыл бұрын

thank yooou.🥰

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Welcome!!

@khumoyuunn_ Жыл бұрын

Hi first of all video was usuful for me do you have video about "positive or a negative development" ???

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Sorry, I don't but you can read sample essays of that type on my website: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/positive-or-negative-development/

@aimbot569 Жыл бұрын

Love it

@farhanasharmin5244 Жыл бұрын

Plz tips listening how to improve

@omjwad2661 8 ай бұрын

Can I say these expressions "the long-term' and "the short-run"

@soniyalama5949 Жыл бұрын

i am having a hard time connecting my main gist-like topic sentences, thesis and also how do i generate ideas? And I absolutely find your videos very helpful. Thank you so much

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

You're most welcome!😊

@deepakgarhwal5837 Жыл бұрын

Can you made a video on sentence formation ,mean structure which help me to get 7 band

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Hi, I recommend focusing on developing your ideas. In this way, you naturally write good sentences.

@deepakgarhwal5837 Жыл бұрын

@@LilieIELTS mam how to develop ideas,can you help me 😇

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@felixvanzy4593 Жыл бұрын

Please ma'am, why is it that you gave only one reason when the question says reasons meaning that there should be more than one reason. Secondly, is it advisable to write 2 different reasons in a single paragraph?

@amulgurung1879 Жыл бұрын

Can you please answer me this question that i gave my exam today but while doing task 2 i wrote it from backside of the sheet and i realized after completing the sheet l.I didn’t have enough time so i cut the first part of answer sheet with pto and wrote the remaining answers in the next answer sheet it is valid or not could you please help me :( ?

@ekwuemesamsonejikemuwa7644 Жыл бұрын

Not valid

@ChamiJay-cp1lc Жыл бұрын

the thing we disagree with should come to the 1st para? and the thing we agree should be in 2nd para?? is this the method? if not how can we decide it please help me

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Yes, that's the way to answer a discussion question.

@peeyooshk4180 Жыл бұрын

Advantage outweigh the disadvantages SA please

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Here U go: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/mcWZgNh4xq-8lGw.html

@dhanrajsinhmatiyada5340 6 ай бұрын

can we write our opinion and main ideas in introduction?

@LilieIELTS 6 ай бұрын

Yes, of course.

@mariyamjeewa1460 Жыл бұрын

It is necessary to write article or year in the example?

@mohammed90158 Жыл бұрын

Actually no, you can write from your own experience or from your daily life

@_.dhruv02 10 ай бұрын

But I can’t grasp ideas to explain like I am not able to generate general reasons 😢

@Ram-hn8zf Жыл бұрын

I taking classes from an institute and they are telling me that you should give only opinion in intro and conclusion for outweigh as well your opinion essay

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Hi, there are many ways to answer an outweigh question. Does the method you learned from the institute allow you to explain why the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? If it does, perhaps it works too.

@fuwadahmedsunny2534 Жыл бұрын

I think this structure is good for me. Introduction Body 1 - Idea 1 Body 2 - Idea 2 Body 3 - My opinion Conclusion

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Yes, that would work too.

@fuwadahmedsunny2534 Жыл бұрын

Thanks

@manpreetbrar4327 7 ай бұрын

Should I write my introduction after body paragraphs even in the real exam please

@LilieIELTS 7 ай бұрын

I took the computer based tests in which I was able to write body paragraphs first. But of course an introduction should precede the body paragraphs.

@manpreetbrar4327 4 ай бұрын

@@LilieIELTS I left roughly 4-5 empty lines to write intro and wrote it later. and scored 7.5 in writing and 8 each in all other 3 modules.

@LilieIELTS 4 ай бұрын

@@manpreetbrar4327 Congratulations on the high scores! Did your introductory paragraph occupy all those lines? Trying to figure out if having empty lines would reduce scores.

@navigatebiomedical3639 Жыл бұрын

@Lilie IELTS Thank you so much mam 🙌❤👍your writing skills and helpful advise are invaluable mam. I still have a doubt and request you to guide me as it will help me a lot,my doubt is in "Discuss both the view and then give opinion- academic writing task 2" ( I watched your insightful video but still have a query. I find it more easier to write ideas when I use method you explained at 3:57 minutes (individual para and supportting one view backed with examples and no opinion); therefore, Can I write in the format below: Intro paragraph. paragraph 1 (only 1st view, no opinion) paragraph 2 (only 2nd view, no opinion) 3rd paragraph( just my opinion in one sentence starting with I strongly believe...and no examples ((1st query: is it okay to do this and make a 3rd paragraph only for opinion 2nd query: examples needed in 3rd paragraph?))(examples here can increase the word length much more) Conclusion para Thank you, Regards,

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

I'm sorry I've never tried your structure in an actual exam so I don't know if it works.

@navigatebiomedical3639 Жыл бұрын

@@LilieIELTS okay mam than I try to do it as you explained in the video. Thank you so much once again💛🙌👍👌your youtube channel should be rated 1st among all others. Thank you, Regards,

@Panor-cu3iq 8 ай бұрын

I can’t reached the IELTS essay bank website

@LilieIELTS 8 ай бұрын

Why?

@Panor-cu3iq 8 ай бұрын

@@LilieIELTS no idea it just keep on verifying

@akhilreddyakhilreddy5140 Жыл бұрын

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@vishnuprasad7028 Жыл бұрын

Can we write comfort zone

@shaima6131 Жыл бұрын

Hey mam. I have a doubt . Shouldn't we want to give examples for body para 2??

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Hi, yes and there is an example in BP2. My example is super successful people and organizations. If you want, you can rephrase it to something like "take for example super successful people and organizations" or "consider super successful people and organizations".

@windsofdestruction 11 ай бұрын

is it okay to write quotations in task 2?

@LilieIELTS 11 ай бұрын

Yes, I think it's okay.

@AbishekChand Жыл бұрын

mam how to download PDF of writing task 2 from your pages

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Hi, there is no pdf, but you can read sample essays on my website: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

@AbishekChand Жыл бұрын

@@LilieIELTS thank you ma'am ❣️

@samjhanawaiba7229 Жыл бұрын

Writing task-2 (test -3) please

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Hi, you can read sample essays on my website: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

@watchofficial6602 Жыл бұрын

One thing is noticeable that you did not describe the introduction in a conventional way, the way you used to write for other paragraphs like chunking from question.. Why is this the case?

@LilieIELTS Жыл бұрын

Hi, you can definitely break the original into chunks to paraphrase. Read it here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/some-people-prefer-to-spend-their-lives-doing-the-same-things/

@watchofficial6602 Жыл бұрын

@@LilieIELTS Yes..😊