How I Got a First Class in Every Essay at University Using This Paragraph Structure + Examples

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00:00 Introduction
01:00 Mark Scheme Requirements
02:40 Topic Sentence
05:10 Evidence
08:00 Analysis
10:50 Conclusion
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@DrAminaYonis Жыл бұрын

If you need help with structuring an essay and for some first-class academic phrases or sentence-starters, you can download my 8-page complete ESSAY WRITING template here ~ thepagedoctor.gumroad.com/l/esssaywritingtemplate

@giftydansoaa4889 Жыл бұрын

I want to know if you can reference or cite in the introduction when writing an argumentative essay. Thank you

@ajadisodiq3991 8 ай бұрын

May God help you abundantly. Thanks a lot

@mwakananyangwe7943 Жыл бұрын

Dr. Amina you are so good at what you do. I binged on your videos last academic year. I used to be stuck in the 2:1s whenever I wrote an essay but after watching a lot of your videos I got 1sts in all the modules in my second semester and ended up graduating with a first class. I am so grateful for you xx.

@molisemichaelsebatana8231 Жыл бұрын

I teach academic literacy at a university in South Africa 🇿🇦 and this video was the perfect example of what I want to teach my students about writing a strong paragraph. Thank you so much for your videos!🙏🏾

@damianbackwood260 Жыл бұрын

Your videos are so useful! My first assignment (research proposal) was a fail. I realised a d recently been diagnosed with ADHD. since then, after the support from uni but most of all from your videos I had 3x B's from other assignments. Still room for improvement. But with your help I'm not as scared for my dissertation anymore

@bebelaureful Жыл бұрын

your advice is gold. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. Very much appreciated.

@beckyfereira5701 Жыл бұрын

Thanks so much for sharing this I’ve been waiting for this for ages 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾

@courtneycraig1976 4 ай бұрын

This has been incredibly helpful! Thank you for the tips!

@kgomotso__precious Жыл бұрын

Thank you for an insightful video and also sharing with this information with us ❤️

@kingdushawn 6 ай бұрын

This is a very understandable and helpful video! Thank you!

@Laura-mu9ky Жыл бұрын

now commenting on this video over half a year since I first watched it to say thank you so so much Dr Amina. I just finished my intercalated degree as part of medical school, and ever since I started following your structure, every essay I wrote at medical school (bar one of them where I didn't really understand the question) I scored over 70. I just finished my finals now and don't know what grade I got yet, but I am very confident that thanks to your teaching I managed to improve my writing and researching skills. I really appreciate it. I feel like this kind of information should have been taught to us from first year! But now as a third year I am very grateful to have come across it. Thank you again!😊

@Laura-mu9ky 11 ай бұрын

update: I managed to graduate with a first class degree! Thank you @DrAminaYonis

@user-fc2qq7eo7g 2 ай бұрын

Thank you thank you for your videos!!! I'm a second-year psych student from Australia and I struggle with writing. Thank you for explaining this! Btw I watched a few of your videos last year for my lab report and got my first-ever distinction!

@savinmuntadi1083 Жыл бұрын

My goodness! Thank you so much.. I was struggling with my literature review but you've just explained it all too well making it so much easy for me.❤❤

@SoulfulRose Жыл бұрын

Thanks for sharing. Much appreciated

@asmabano7087 Жыл бұрын

I can't thank you enough for this video. I qualified as a nurse 10yrs ago. I'm now doing level 6 asthma course. Iv done my 1st essay and after watching this I think I may av 2 make a few changes

@bahaa8947 Жыл бұрын

Very helpful. Thank you

@jeann.248 Жыл бұрын

Thanks Dr , keep it , good video

@YaanJanqasa Ай бұрын

Very insightful, you simplified it so well, i might just have found a new hobby, writing essays! God bless you

@antmancan6408 Ай бұрын

Thanks for posting. I will be implementing this technique in my upcoming dissertation. I will let you know how I get on when my results are in. And I'm looking forward to checking out your future videos.

@ciaraduffy4217 Жыл бұрын

Hi Dr Amina, Thank you so much for making these videos. They have been extremely helpful😊. I would love if you could make the video on choosing information from a research paper as evidence, like you mentioned at the end of this video. 🙏

@bishaarmohaned1935 Жыл бұрын

Lovely topic thanks

@gaynorcraig5331 Жыл бұрын

Fabulous explanation, thanks so miuch :-)

@ayses3851 Жыл бұрын

I look forward to this

@ebylove3631 Жыл бұрын

Very helpful Amina

@musoseven8218 4 ай бұрын

Thank you, wonderfully put💜✌️😊👍 I love the way you describe sentences etc as beautiful your passion and joy is inspiring. My best paper at post grad level, has, thus far in my life, been equivalent to a B+. How did I achieve that? No clue. Do I know the subject? Yes, it was also my job too. No one at college or university - especially with my dyspraxia and lower spectrum dyslexia - ever sat me down and showed me how to write a paper. Same at work. I'm now considering academic endeavours again, your video makes perfect sense, thank you - although I've yet to figure out what universities want in terms of the whole format and their phraseology has changed a little too. Thanks again ✌️😊👍💜

@h.a.a4009 Жыл бұрын

Very helpful thanks Amina. Could you please make a video on how to do the Analysis part in more details 🙏

@ip3931 7 ай бұрын

As ever, thank you.

@amaoforiwaankrumah8842 Жыл бұрын

Just watched how to construct meaningful excellent sentences. Will apply in my academic writings ✍️

@joyjoy5326 Жыл бұрын

Thanks Doc

@ilyasm.m.hundubei152 4 ай бұрын

Thank you dear amina

@aeronation7465 Жыл бұрын

Thank you dr amina, I've just began my msc psychology (after almost 10 years away from academia) course and your videos are super helpful. Would love a video on how best to read papers effectively.

@aneesaidrees2532 4 ай бұрын

It’s 2024 and I’m in your shoes. I hope this helps me coz I’m freaking out from cluelessness

@neemaingabire Жыл бұрын

Thank you

@Sheena1234ization Жыл бұрын

Yes this is good content

@OO-jg7iu 5 ай бұрын

Thank you. Yes i will like to know how to pick points from a paper. Please share

@mercychepngeno5732 Жыл бұрын

thanks alot

@RobertOmwaHSC Жыл бұрын

Thanks

@Sheena1234ization Жыл бұрын

Amina for essays in your modules. It is expected to give evidence, however, the lecture content is the evidence we need. Therefore for my module I'll only reference outside reading not mentioned in the lecture notes

@momammad9552 Жыл бұрын

Question: my uni has taught us not to suggest anything in the introduction of a research paper - everything should be derived from existing literature. The analysis part of your structure sounds like it would be contradicting this - any advice?

@rianeon Жыл бұрын

Thank you so much. I have had my exams deferred due to some illness and Im sitting my exams this august. It's the first time I am writing a timed essay.. Does the evidence part relate to exam essay say for example for pharmacology exams??

@EimanVI Жыл бұрын

Omg absolutely loved that video. Can we be friends in real-life Amina? I'm a French teacher. MashaaAllah may Allah put baraakah in your business

@maryamsfanshhh721 Жыл бұрын

Thank you sis tmrw is my essay competition 🤪soo it is very useful 👌😌☺love frm srilanka 🇱🇰💥 where r u frm sis? 🙃

@twoofcrows9322 Жыл бұрын

Absoloutely love your videos, really need it since I'm finishing my masters thesis. A bit beside the point, but is the website you're a part of kind of like those websites where you write essays for students? Would it be considered cheating if you would rewrite or restructure papers for people- wouldn't that be unfair?

@DrAminaYonis Жыл бұрын

Really good question. I founded The Page Doctor, it’s my company. We never write, restructure or change any part of your written work. We offer 2 things - firstly, a 1-1 mentoring consultation where you sit infront of one of our PhD researchers and they’ll help you plan your essay and address any questions you may have regarding it. The second thing we offer is proofreading and feedback which entails checking English Language and clarity, which, can have an impact on overall clarity and for many students where English is not the first language, this is unfortunate. The feedback aspect is similar to what your prof *should* be providing you - telling you how to strengthen a paragraph or discussion. But we will NEVER write or add anything to an essay. We are also endorsed by a top London Russel Group university, so for sure, this wouldn’t be the case if we were providing a service that wasn’t ethical. Hope that answers your question! 👋🏽