Thank you for the constructive criticism! Was it the Voiceover quality that was too wonky or was the background music too loud?

@@HistoryIGuess few things. You've added some sound effects in but with headphones on these are quite a bit louder than the voice over which is a bit jarring. Not sure what software you are using but you can set a max audio peak and level your audio so that the sound effects are the same volume as the rest of the audio. The voice over is a little rough round the edges. You can look at your microphone recording settings and try recording in a small space with less echo which should help. You've honestly done such a great job and I really don't want to put you off the amazing work that you've done! You should be really proud. Got some advise from a professional once which was "people's ears are more easily offended than their eyes". Basically if the visuals are good but the audio is bad, people are less likely to watch it over something with good audio but bad visuals. You've put so much amazing work into the animation that I would hate to have that let down by the audio. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh, you really have done amazing work and I'm looking forward to seeing your next video

Of course! I'll mark it down!