How To Improve Your Rap Wordplay In 3 Simple Steps (2021)

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How To Master The Art of Freestyle Rap In 2 Weeks or Less (FREESTYLE COURSE): freestylefortnight.com
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How To Write A Rap On Any Topic In 20 Mins. Or Less (FREE VIDEO COURSE): freestylefortnight.com/rapona...
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How To Improve Your Rhyme Schemes Playlist: • How To Improve Your Ra...
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In today’s video, we’re going to show you how to improve your rap wordplay. If rap wordplay tips are something you’ve been looking for, this video is going to help you TONS. We’ll break down how to improve your rap wordplay using rappers like J. Cole, Eminem, and Kendrick Lamar to help your punchlines in rap. So, if you’re been wondering how to write better rap punchlines, this is the video for you!
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TIME STAMPS:
0:00 Overview
0:46 Freestyle Course
1:17 Secret #1: Exaggeration
2:16 How Eminem Uses Rap Wordplay
3:14 How To Improve Your “Lyrical Visuals”
5:42 How Kendrick Lamar Uses Rap Wordplay
7:02 How to Improve Your “Massive Metaphors”
9:19 Secret #2: Compare and Contrast
10:03 How J. Cole Uses Rap Wordplay
10:35 How To Improve Your Lyrical Contrast
12:05 Comment and Download!
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Secret #1: Exaggeration
Now, perhaps the easiest way to “spice up” your bars when learning how to improve your rap wordplay is to insert more “exaggeration” within your raps.
Exaggeration in this case would mean adding more of a ‘larger-than-life’ personality in bars when describing your life and lifestyle within your tracks.
The reason this is important is most new rappers have boring lyrics because they just say directly what they are thinking with no kind of creative flair, no wit, and no lyrical dexterity.
In this step, we’ll have you creating bars thin air using lyrical wordplay structures from Eminem and Kendrick Lamar.
Now two key methods to improve your abilities for exaggeration with your lyrics would be:
Lyrical Visuals
Massive Metaphors
We’ll cover “massive metaphors” using Kendrick Lamar in a moment, but let’s first look at what lyrical visuals mean and how we can use the work of none other than Slim Shady himself to help you in this process.
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@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

COMMENT With 2-4 bars using the concepts in this video! Also, remember to look at this: How To Master The Art of Freestyle Rap In 2 Weeks or Less (FREESTYLE COURSE): freestylefortnight.com -- How To Write A Rap On Any Topic In 20 Mins. Or Less (FREE VIDEO COURSE): freestylefortnight.com/raponanytopics -- How To Improve Your Rhyme Schemes Playlist: kzfaq.info/sun/PL64p83Iz6-6H90yvsmgf8OBBnz-Zosrtj ---- TIME STAMPS: 0:00 Overview 0:46 Freestyle Course 1:17 Secret #1: Exaggeration 2:16 How Eminem Uses Rap Wordplay 3:14 How To Improve Your “Lyrical Visuals” 5:42 How Kendrick Lamar Uses Rap Wordplay 7:02 How to Improve Your “Massive Metaphors” 9:19 Secret #2: Compare and Contrast 10:03 How J. Cole Uses Rap Wordplay 10:35 How To Improve Your Lyrical Contrast 12:05 Comment and Download!

@trayvonharris5668 2 жыл бұрын

I needed this imma get the program when i get my check💯

@DrTae233 2 жыл бұрын

I hop on the scene, they ain't even seen me coming, I guess I'm obscene, took all the bodies and the now the scene looks clean

@sunboy3766 2 жыл бұрын

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@PawsBoff 2 жыл бұрын

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@jakesnapp8680 2 жыл бұрын

I been feeling the rage Like a ape trapped in a cage Blowing up like Sudan Hussain Locked in like a sniper takin aim Since you wasted yo days Playing those games

@benschmidt1038 2 жыл бұрын

Sorta just a mix of both but: My career is blowing up, today I turn my life around Everybody listening now, from lower city to upper town My strength comes from my dedication, that's why I am on the rise While I was working on my music, you were home it's no surprise

@hiphopraisedme949 2 жыл бұрын

I'm diggin the bars. I got those free beats. Get your freestyle on.

@dscvwcwefasf3094 2 жыл бұрын

yo that last line actually good man

@spongebob8157 Жыл бұрын

My career is blowing up, today I turn my life around Everybody listen now, lower city, upper town Strength from dedication, that's why I am on the rise I was working on my music, you were home it's no surprise ^^^^^ I fixed it for you. You gotta match the syllables so it doesn't sound jumbled up. Good job though.

@beaglebye 2 жыл бұрын

heart empty, my soul cold, my drink too. thought that I was winning, I guess not, I lost you. add another point to the list of things i can’t do can’t ever forgive or forget, and can’t keep you.

@xexeed1363 6 ай бұрын

I like this one

@Adsterr Ай бұрын

keep it up homie, love the flow

@mga5561 2 жыл бұрын

While I was writing lyrics you was working with fractions I was doing both, a higher level and I was still passing

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

Nice

@dontkomply3169 2 жыл бұрын

Them layers tho

@XXROCKANDROLLPOWERXX 2 жыл бұрын

I'm the king of the sea, the Aquaman of bars Your deepest waters are a breeze, my kiddie pool is Mars My lyrics, a trident, a torpedo of facts Cooked like 3 Michelin stars while you played Ratatouille, cooking with rats.

@KamoheloM___ 2 жыл бұрын

Get the hell out of here 🔥🔥

@XXROCKANDROLLPOWERXX 2 жыл бұрын

@@KamoheloM___ damn thanks haha

@khalifortegabeckles338 2 жыл бұрын

That was hard 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

@wweornun9 2 жыл бұрын

That was hard asf

@reikostrange3254 2 жыл бұрын

That was nasty, gj :)

@daquaviusvontaviusjr436 2 жыл бұрын

if you have enough energy to type your lyrics in the comments you should have enough energy to write them down in a journal

@stacyaugust7524 Жыл бұрын

the typing widens the playground for flow writing ya know.. type a word and write a word.. but idk just 2 sense not saying one is more efficient everyones different

@stacyaugust7524 Жыл бұрын

true but pen and paper takes discipline fr .. also if your mind is like some.

@bassekaman8315 Жыл бұрын

Journals get lost b you need to learn em all off by heart

@daquaviusvontaviusjr436 Жыл бұрын

@@bassekaman8315 i write mine out once and just remember them after a bit

@santasgotgifts Жыл бұрын

Can’t lie I’m always losing shit so I write in my notes app💀

@victorotache6968 2 жыл бұрын

Am a victor, i conquered my demons They can't see me, i tied their eyes with ribbons My lyrics are weapons, i use to fight evil thoughts, to redeem love We think too much, we at war with ourselves, we need freedom Pick up the pieces, stitch the cut and meditate for peace to calm the storm

@danielherigstad6054 2 жыл бұрын

The timing is as good as always

@WolfJax 2 жыл бұрын

What's a good DAW to use to make my own beats

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

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@filipbitz2471 2 жыл бұрын

@@WolfJax FL Studio ! Also, I can make beats for you .

@WolfJax 2 жыл бұрын

@@filipbitz2471 I'll check out your beats and I'll consider your proposal. Atm I'm dealing with some things. Long story short, I'm homeless but work 2 jobs. Once I'm a little more stable I'll be more able to do that and we can discuss business. I'm subscribed to you now so I'll be in touch.

@Unic-gu5jf 2 жыл бұрын

Ong🤣 I been practicing wordplay💯💯

@VoudoTheKing 2 жыл бұрын

I prevailed hell, as I fell on my arms and knees Kept moving forward through the horror, kept it 100 like ah centipede

@jayyy1677 2 жыл бұрын

Damn 🔥🔥🔥

@05florida 2 жыл бұрын

One of the best Hitting the ropes My god gives me strength When I need it the most Straight from Florida Spreading my message through the coast Haters going to boast The narrow road I chose Cutting heads off of snakes like G.I Joe

@jakob3709 2 жыл бұрын

Our brains ain’t the same man they say I’m a bastard Created by aliens designed to think faster I laugh at the fact that you actually doubt me Chilling while I kill it kinda feeling like Lebowski Feel the fractures in my mind as inspiration fills the cracks I’ve been carving out a path you’re just following the pack Thanks as always for the tips :)

@punchlinerwokle7850 2 жыл бұрын

That's fireeee

@hiphopraisedme949 2 жыл бұрын

I see you got bars. I got those hot beats on deck. Get your freestyle on.

@tspirit1231 2 жыл бұрын

Shit I make that shit sound hot.

@slimqini 2 жыл бұрын

"I’ve been carving out a path you’re just following the pack" Yerrrr!

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@blaccrose6332 2 жыл бұрын

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@05florida 2 жыл бұрын

Dope

@hiphopraisedme949 2 жыл бұрын

Blacc Rose, you got a future in the game. I got free beats on deck. Get your freestyle on.

@blaccrose6332 2 жыл бұрын

@@hiphopraisedme949 Thank you so much... Will check it out😭❤️

@blaccrose6332 2 жыл бұрын

@@05florida thanks ❤️🙏🏾

@tylortp 2 жыл бұрын

You understood the assignment g 🗣️

@ulas283 2 жыл бұрын

Out of all the videos you have that I have watched this one helped me the most.I guess my problem was finding the topics of the bars.Thanks for the help

@wrexalotskateboards310 2 жыл бұрын

Keep grinding boss! Doing good very helpful tips as always.

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

*_Will do, Wrexalot!_*

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@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

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@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

Cheers Casandra!

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@mdnightt 2 жыл бұрын

needed this

@tenzik5647 2 жыл бұрын

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@LONGLIVETHECHOWS Жыл бұрын

Tears bursts in the church on a Bible as I drift out of earth, Like I’m a wandering Saint, reciting a verse

@N91ural Жыл бұрын

Super dope exercise. Really appreciate your time. Been rapping since 2010 but not consistently. It's time to change that so I've been dropping a 16 every Friday trying to find my flow. This channel is really making me feel more confident that I do have what it takes.

@tarantino5515 Жыл бұрын

Drop a 16 every day if possible mate

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@yourfavoriterapper. 2 жыл бұрын

mix of everything I've been fertilizing business grind since you was learning how to ride a bike Now the money trees growing and I can buy ten times the bikes I had a sold out concert on mount kilimanjaro my fans will climb mountains for me that's the life motto

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@Sirmustardpack 2 жыл бұрын

I’m a nightmare out of the mind of Lovecraft My rhyme’s a bloodbath Similar to Khan’s wrath

@hiphopraisedme949 2 жыл бұрын

I see you workin on them bars. I got the free beats on deck. Get your freestyle on.

@keyonthomas2205 2 жыл бұрын

“Science fiction level description” this dude spittin bars in the video 2:53

@Ranma34 Жыл бұрын

nice one, thanks bro

@nikhilpranav6915 2 жыл бұрын

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@HowToRapOfficial Жыл бұрын

Thank you! Man Jr. Productions! 👊

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@KamoheloM___ 2 жыл бұрын

This was insanely helpful!!!

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

*_Glad to hear that, Thabile!_*

@akashlone3357 2 жыл бұрын

I'm the arrow that arjun (a great hindu warrior) never used , I feel like a black man, everytime he is abused, or I am like the kid that's been bullied and bruised, I ain't the typa story, when u hear u feel amused! plus I'm jus a beginner, thanks drew, ur videos are helping and I'mma watch em all to master this craft I'm on. thanks a ton! ❣️

@eemo2374 2 жыл бұрын

I walk in the dark might hear me spitting an acapella - might see me walk up and knock a fella for wearing the rockafella Inspired by goodfellas this is somthing I got to tell ya - leave ya soaked in sweat from head to toe like you lost your umbrella ella - $eeMo

@mrdmcarter 2 жыл бұрын

Really good exercises. Took me about 20 minutes. Love it!

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

Glad you like the format!

@mrdmcarter 2 жыл бұрын

@@HowToRapOfficial 🔥

@curbelopersonal Ай бұрын

Thank you brother because truly teach and inspire. Been following for a couple months now and I have improved a lot. At least in my way of thinking and approaching the process. However, there are some techniques in having trouble translating and implementing into Spanish rapping and writing. Do you know if there’s a difference or any Spanish speaking content or resource you’d recommend?

@BanditZDP 2 жыл бұрын

This was interesting video, salute

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

🙏🏽

@malarai9583 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you brother Watching from Nepal

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This video is very important!

@randojando4 2 жыл бұрын

I been working every day and night while y'all sleeping around Maybe it's time you walk with me than just lie on the ground Fight night, I knockout, never see round three Stinging bags and floating my fists and feet like Ali Wanna say thank you to you Drew and everyone behind the channel. Wouldn't be where I am now without you guys

@jordanbumgarner3763 7 ай бұрын

super helpful put the pend to the pad imma use what i wrote here in one of my beats

@dopekid798 Жыл бұрын

"Feel like I'm in a gym (Jim) the way i carry (Carrey) all these weights on my shoulders". Idk if that's a gud one but I've improved a lil bit atleast after watching Drew,thanks for the knowledge man🔥🔥🔥

@HowToRapOfficial Жыл бұрын

👊

@LieTown1996 2 жыл бұрын

Wanted to take a moment and say Thank You drew, I've been wanting to rap my whole life but never attempted until this March at 25 yrs. Old Ive made an insane amount of progress from applying all the lessons you've you taught in this channel along with all the wisdom from every artist/rapper/producer Anyone can be able to rap if they apply themselves and im glad i have found a passion to where I can comfortably write and make songs that are uniquely my own. I went from "man i cant rap" To "yo wanna hear my new song I wrote?" 😅 Getting the self love energy out the way To reach maturity but it feels great to love myself through my hard work

@nathanpardy8550 2 жыл бұрын

Do you publish any of it..?

@LieTown1996 2 жыл бұрын

@@nathanpardy8550 struggling to find someone to mix & master my stuff, but i have songs and beats fully written and licensed to go into a booth. Im not in a hurry tho since music is my passion, the more time passes the more songs i end up creating along the way. Something about publishing a unpolished song is something i wanna avoid as an artist. Ofcourse i record and mixed my own things but aint no way im putting that publically lol

@LieTown1996 2 жыл бұрын

@@Reece-2002 completely agree with you, already have multiple projects in the works with different directions and stories. Found myself just loving music as a whole, not trying to aim for a hit or cliche lyrics, been true to myself and even my most groovy songs have a very deep meaning underneath it all. It's about the 10th month mark since I started rapping and ive grown in so many ways and have made so many new connections and friendships. Rap has completely given my life new meaning. My work flow goes: write new song/perform/feedback then decide to either rewrite or record Once its mixed / feedback / then saved to my planned releases and then its onto to the next song that pops up or ones i go back to finish. Even the fear some have of running out of ideas doesn't phase me anymore. I write what I feel, writing is easy. The only thing that takes time is making sure the lyrics go as smooth as possible. Can't wait to release my stuff next year, with already 1 & half album ready to record my plans are big with creativity, already planned out a 3rd and 4th album with completely different sounds and hooks to go. If i had one thing to say to people who wanna rap, Just do it, and learn it all. Apply yourself fully and those rewards will come. Once again; Big thanks to Drew and his awesome organized advice!

@ticoamur1332 2 жыл бұрын

Merciiii💖

@TheVisioneye 2 жыл бұрын

Squares wanna play games, had to catch a case. Putting rounds in they systems, know the disc's, 2-4 spinning, the PS way. Sick of radio/ PS5 talk 'cause I don't play-stations. Out here getting paper, and students got blank pages.

@OhTheeAnarchy Жыл бұрын

Discipline and a vision was what I lacked. but now I found my focus and started to stack. But even with that head start .I’d bet I’d get ahead of most niggas. since you thought shit was sweet and I ain’t tough as most hitters. I’ll guide my people like Moses and keep the peace so I don’t have no quitters. But don’t ever disrespect cause I don’t got tolerance for no niggas.

@koryleonard8147 2 жыл бұрын

I never fail to keep my enemies in line I have my dreams already in line I'm willing to be on the frontline My lyrics will age like fine wine I was brought in this world to take what's mine With my talent and witts so nicely combined I subtract fake friends like a minus sign With my words there is no stop sign The hell with being confine I was brought in this world to define I was brought in this world to shine Cross my line and it's the finish line I was always a kid with an imaginative mind I was always a kid with a creative mind This will always lead to my hard grind Put lyrics together Like a mastermind I've been on the honor roll ever since I was nine Make haters eat the dust that I left behind I got two eyes and it's pointing to the sky and I am going to fly high in the sky Call that skyhigh

@OmMyGod888 Жыл бұрын

Wanna battle?

@koryleonard8147 Жыл бұрын

@@OmMyGod888 I'm not really that much of a battle rapper.

@JSA_G.O.A.T Жыл бұрын

I could battle

@JSA_G.O.A.T Жыл бұрын

My, lyrically speaking sounds, Always jumping up in the crowd, Y’all bitches wanna get loud, Till I start speaking, from my mouth, It might be calm now it’s just before the storm, Begging me to fall down, I’m more of a villain than most, I already spoke, got you sweating, Let it soak, ain’t flying but let me float, I’m not Aaliyah, but rocking the boat, One in a million, breath caught in your throat, I’m speaking billions, bill gates at the most, Like you talking rough, Just a diamond right in the rough, Your mouth is already full, your stuffed, Maybe your mic is off, you seem muffed - Freestyle

@ceatlas5267 9 ай бұрын

⁠⁠⁠⁠@@JSA_G.O.A.T bro said muffed? that shit isnt tuff. yeah just let me type and have you read this and indulge, u so full of it , u can’t admit the bars you fuckin stole i bet that you typed it out like “yeah man this is fuckin cold!”🤓 so where your ears go? mr lyrical? rappin like a weirdo, just to get yourself exposed, listen close, your next post, should bestow a better flow, or some jokes with some punchlines, cuz we all screamin NOOO!

@2ktai580 Жыл бұрын

I thought I wasn't the new born 2pac But am actually getting some so that I be the real me Shakur Thanks mn

@louiss1604 2 жыл бұрын

soon!ill be on top and ill be mentioning this dude and how he helped me❤️

@someoneontheinternet3090 Жыл бұрын

I did all three. I was down on my knees beggin' please don't hate me Thought that my value was determined by how you rate me. That that was the old me, let me introduce the new cut my legs off at the knee before I bend it to you I was born with confidence thinking I could be great But just like old king Charles did I had to wait Now I'm done with waiting it's time to get hype, kid I'll go from zero to hero faster than Jesus Christ did And this whole time you've been playing the game making progress, stacking bank while I was battling my brain It don't matter though cause now my tie has come I've here for my dinner and I'll be getting every crumb

@LVL_Up_Gaming 2 жыл бұрын

I'm lyrically known all over the globe Left everyone speechless from the start of the probe Got my status up, now working on the wardrobe I am like God himself on this music shit Red hot chili peppers so true to this Cuz like Nike I just do this shit I've been up on this rap game since the start While yall been in the clouds on your part Staying true to oneself homie, is never to hard

@mr.fanstastic9010 2 жыл бұрын

I'm pushing weights, exposing ma veins you playing call of duty, thats a childish game

@LVL_Up_Gaming 2 жыл бұрын

@Mr., Fanstastic talk all that shit on the internetyou want kid. In real life I'll end you. Ha

@LVL_Up_Gaming 2 жыл бұрын

@Mr., Fanstastic I got your games bitch.. let me see you anywhere near my territory

@lildrew3978 2 жыл бұрын

I'm 15 years old I'm trying get good with my rap music .

@vincionyou 2 жыл бұрын

Still can’t believe I’ve been watching you since 2015

@vicsdelugaphoenix 2 жыл бұрын

Thanks so much brother

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

*_Glad to help out, Vics!_*

@banzaigd 2 жыл бұрын

An antisocial Eminem-style verse: I forgot how to socialize during quarantine, I'm just another boring teen, Dropping bodies on the floor like a horror scene I'm writing and citing history like Warren Dean I got mental problems, take some Thorazine Know I'm killing and living, metaphorically Dishing out murder like eggs Florentine And when your organs are on the floor, it's more obscene

@aza848 2 жыл бұрын

WWWWW, try adding some rhymes in middle then it will be perfect af 🔥

@GDMartin 2 жыл бұрын

@@aza848 wrist adorned with a fleur Delis/ Written more horrifc exquisite torts in informal speech / than any bickering hispter scribbling boring & normal tweets/ assortments of wishes portioned & formed with ease/ tidbits or morsels? Intrinsic & inner Soulish Greed/ thinking of Horrid Schemes/ would exhibit This gift is Sorcery / ridden in it is Torment corpus Speech / but I subsist, replenishing tethered portions of the Former Me/ Such a reward for conformity../ Morbidly I’m Bored & Geeked off A 40 Z, Soda & Met-formin drink ,cheapest dude eating Cheeba chews in a litre brewed with some chlorox bleach,/ Of course I sing to the Lord as I feast on easter morning peeps/ anything a Deplorable Mortal hoards n keeps, / Spill the pour to tease, / Kitchen porcelain floor is clean/ whats more's we need/ a Swiffer Jet & A floral sheet, in an instant, bet to be Cordially winning less than the Score will read Sitting bored in the quarantine.....

@bensullivan7901 2 жыл бұрын

good shit dude

@navoneel Жыл бұрын

you probably heard about GNAT and just spazzed these shits lmao

@banzaigd Жыл бұрын

@@navoneel lol that’s exactly what I did. It was my favorite song at the time of writing this. Just accidentally came back to this.

@timmygone 2 жыл бұрын

I’m a demon that walks the streets screamin’ while my soul dreaming Even x ray vision can’t help see your envy of me gleamin’

@makhadom741 2 жыл бұрын

Thanks

@sandile217 2 жыл бұрын

"So many fans, I'm lost, and I'm not sure where to go Catch a glimpse, swarm me, they on me, like ants in a nat geo time lapse video" Thoughts?

@LumiereBeats 2 жыл бұрын

🔥🔥🔥

@darrelldowns1763 5 ай бұрын

I am the hero of every story i gotta take what's naturally mine and show it's true glory I'm faster then the speed of light I'm like flash nobody faster then me not even dash

@jjdownton7442 2 жыл бұрын

I'm the flash I'm too fast I'll leave you in the past this is going to be blast when there's panic I gotta go fast

@jjdownton7442 2 жыл бұрын

A blast

@n3rdslife1864 2 жыл бұрын

Im a confusing Confucius, creating blues in you dudes using delusion of grandeur since you were 2, grazing pastures. beat lyric gluing with plaster, masterful scripts passing pastors, sunning the lord when recording, force him to work sabbaths after. God Damn.

@modernmichelangelo 2 жыл бұрын

I gave it a try, let me know what you think! 1: Whenever I go out, they say I’m drop-dead gorgeous I guess they got a point, expectations enormous This track has only bars, no chorus I study all the legends that did this before us 2: I don’t got a rolex ‘cause I don’t got time for you Pipe down a little bit, all that hating is bad for you You just spend all day sniffing glue Saw your 50 failed attempts to throw dirt on my shoe

@Pastor_mack Жыл бұрын

Here’s some what I made, I have a character I write in story’s, so I made bars from his prospective “I’m walking around a park covered in blood, hot shells dropped out my pockets, and a AK strapped around my neck like it’s a lockets And the opps bark but I shoot a lot so I ain’t going to drop And he thinks he make bank cuz his Glock go pop pop popin’ But I pull up and he screamed stop stop stop it” I wanted his criminal background and insanity to heavily impact the lyrics, and any one can use them I have nothing planned with them

@Z__Dreamer 2 жыл бұрын

i been trouble since i stepped on tha court i might not built like lebron but i got a heart of a goat i been grinding like tha butcher u better be taking note working on my craft while u search for remote

@forexboy001 2 жыл бұрын

I wish 💯

@DroMizzles 2 жыл бұрын

Hear my beats and that shit burrow Ear worm buggin me make my brow furrow Enjoy my rhymes cuz they are rather thorough Because I’m in this shit like Henry David Thoreau

@BelforPino 2 жыл бұрын

just made a full song off this and it hit hard

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

*_Lit!_*

@DrTae233 2 жыл бұрын

Hi Drew can you do a video on well my problem right now I've been freestyling for months and switched back to writing but coz I had a problem while freestyling but I have another problem it's even if I'm reading lyrics I somehow get stuck

@jaydadarkskin3678 2 жыл бұрын

Subbed

@iTalkALotDontListen 2 жыл бұрын

Make a video of different levels of rapping from beginner to expert. So people can figure out how far they’ve come and far they have to go.

@GAMEHEADZ1k Жыл бұрын

If dis aint kobe bryant lost son

@liljuse5519 2 ай бұрын

This is Kole Bryant

@dreamsaresharedhere_ 2 жыл бұрын

I am the shadow over the sun Because of me the Beatles had sung about when it comes ;)

@thefreechains 2 жыл бұрын

Okay Here’s Lyrical Visual Em Version: I’m the hungriest rapper To ever touch a microphone Last meal I ate was Whatever beat was on Kendrick version: Can’t work without the paper Like a printer I’m Drake on my worst behavior Thank me later And Compare and Contrast: Starve for a shoutout? You can go and eat a d*** I’ve been building dreams Way before you saw a Lego Brick

@HowToRapOfficial 2 жыл бұрын

Nice job!

@rapartist9309 2 жыл бұрын

Nah ems more advance than that😭 the Kendrick part is more like eminem and he would do a little laugh right after saying thank me later

@prodpoofe 2 жыл бұрын

@@rapartist9309 you try and do better

@biggietothex 2 жыл бұрын

damn kobe

@HASEL.mp3 2 жыл бұрын

Im a literature and poetry student rap is just poetry but better every is based of its

@tapinwitjay6066 2 жыл бұрын

Gah Damn bro , can’t even lie I seen a vid of yours and this one just popped up and now I came to realization that you look a lil like Kobe | rip Kobe

@clintjohnson1045 Жыл бұрын

1. Across the waters with my rhymes, my concerts they never tip off, I don heard my name in 8 languages, this shit, it go far 2. I’m timeless like the thriller of a Jordan drop, forever wanted like the freedom of your voice box & always adapted like a story from a Greek god. 3. I been spinning words since I was holding them (blocks) While you was still crying for your moms (Tots)

@glick278 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you infinitely! HareKrishna.GodBless! ❤🙏😀

@Slim_Shott 2 жыл бұрын

I got `em walking on egg shell-bys, call me OBE. The bars will leave you haunted even when jokes on me

@lloydbradly307 2 жыл бұрын

I hope this is accurate, but here's my examples. From Kendricks ex.-With my shinning sword, call me Alexandra The Great. I hate to be late, give me time to innovate, not devastate.

@swagkhidglobal7809 2 жыл бұрын

My rap in ur team go hard like matic ne Ter Stergen

@baidyaroy1321 2 жыл бұрын

I love j cole 😁😁😁 he is best

@davidpedro4937 10 ай бұрын

1 - have been cycling the streets since 07 no one can press me 2- you were recessing in a lil school 3 - hoo hoo you can’t test or best me

@leenapaul2859 2 жыл бұрын

Make a video on how to freestyle rap like denzel curry or how to get a rap flow like Denzel curry

@blank_0523 2 жыл бұрын

I am a psycho, might as well call me Christian Bale I thrive in the dark like that knight and I ain’t telling no tale My flow cold like chi town in the middle of December Trail of dead bodies on the ground is all they remember Seriously let me know what y’all think.. this is my first time doing something like this

@ivainyamutsamba8540 Жыл бұрын

Grab a book-read, you'll get what you need to feed the people in need, get your word play from the sandpit, playing with these words that's my lunch at recess I leave you with excess energy to give them access, for the the truth they need, to survive the hunger... Rate my bars

@may_F_may 2 жыл бұрын

My phonebook jammed, that's the reality man, Am in your midnight dreams, like all them Major league teams, All in your nightmare grace, no wonder you avoid my face, we in the same race, but i'm a different race, the way i blow these benjis, my whips they come in cases, Am right at the top dat place, dat place dat you still chase

@carnagegamer5673 2 жыл бұрын

How to get beat for the rap

@yeserneirda3451 Жыл бұрын

I have a strong mind, everybody says they’re the same I was just caught, lifting a whole mountain with my brain 🧠

@user-gt4mt5lb2g 4 ай бұрын

I'm a ocean flowing abnormal to get rid of the trauma. Grandma got one lung yet she would smoke if we needed a dollar. Smoked weed and passed with high marks,instead of chilling at corners.

@Unclesonali 2 жыл бұрын

I'am Million man march I was on the greyhound looking back at the Saint louis arc And I can joan.....

@blackspooby24productions Жыл бұрын

Idk If this is good but 🤷🏾 here it goes. Standing in line sayin bye-bye You wondering why They know me world wide Yet you never say hi Now I'm saying bye-bye