"uhh...umm..groove?" lmao

"You toyin wit it like a happy meal"

I needed this, I came up with a shameful bar in the shower earlier: "Call yourself a fire detector, cos you cant handle my smoke" 😂😂

I run with felons that spend more time in the pen than ink, Chino XL

"She gotta degree at giving brain, call that a mastermind" 😂

The set ups are basic but it's good because you wouldn't believe how simple things go over people heads and before the complexity you must have a basic form. I enjoyed this!

1:00 Drew: "it"s pretty interesting." He sounded like my grade teacher. Sorry Drew. LMAO

I'm grooving like a chess move, I set clues, and let loose, When I step through, my rep grew, and I will proove, That I make moves, and paint truth, in a rhyme, And ill break you, with the same tools, that take minds.

He taught me how to rap or atleast start 6 years ago now I can right a songs worth of bars in 5 min it also made me fail most of my highschool career bEwArE

Shit is golden, we’re out here using this without even knowing. You summed it up perfectly for those who want it enough to look it up. Good shit out here bro.

Homie this is battle rap Ill uppercutt you so high catch bobby shmurda hat

What drew should have said “You know my niggas Making chess moves If you looking for a king You better Go and get Drew My whole team fly You know Like jet blue Team full of green Despite all the classes We slept through. I’m ready to dance with the devil If you down, Then let’s groove Dissect these niggas Leave em holy Like a scientist experiment Have their blood In a test tube I got bullets in my chamber Know you I’m bout to let loose And keep your head On my wall As a prize Like a dead moose.”

I feel it's good to find good videos like this about how to come up with great rap punchlines, because I want to make sure I'm getting great punchlines in my rap songs I write.

Word up Drew what you do is crazy. It takes mental skill to be able to brake bars down & teach them like this, truly beast level. Salute & respect.

Thank you sir. Much appreciated! Following you all the way from Papua New Guinea, Melanesia, Oceania I'm following you for 3 years I felt like a pro rapper

Your videos are honestly helping me so much, much love G thank you!

If my school is planning to start a rap class,,,I would like to ask the principal to hire you

I do multi syllable naturally but I do struggle with punchlines. Thanks for the info

idk i just do music. its natural. till this day i dont know how to read music notes. i just do what i think is right. that part of being og sun

Wow!!! This is my first video from this channel and I learnt a lot about rhymes in less than 9 mins. Totally worth it. Thanks Big Homie ✊🏾

Like a blade without the grip I'm hard to handle I'll light you up like a fuckin candle Watch the wax drip Pass me a drink to sip Cause my throats burns from the fire that I spit

I Phil in banks I want the house upon the Hilary, fresh prince you could say that there's will in me, don't even know what I metaphor (met her for) that's a similie

great video drew, i like the whiteboard! also, ive been rapping for a year and a half and i did teach myself this, but i didn't fully understand it so you really brought it to life. thanks!

love your bids bro I'm an upcoming rapper and I usually watch your videos to help me keep going👏😎🙌

Finally someone who makes this clear because so many people commit to the first word they come up with that rhymes and it's like they don't even care about their craft, at least that is what it sounds like. You can definitely tell when someone does that.

i move pawns around you squares like a chess move, ill make your chest groove when i let loose, with hardcore metaphors that rock you and leave ya on the ground like a dead mousse, you wanna hang with my style? ill bring a neck noose, and lift you up out your dress shoes, and let you know like big daddy kane that im not to be stepped too.

The way he said "so they're already fucked!" Got me dead😂😂

So thats why i feel better with my bars with multi syllable rhymes.

I pulled up to show you what we can do, me and you, just isn't just like that beetle juice, peekaboo leaving you scared like I'm meaning too, we been through, I'm ballin leaving you shocked just like pikachu

Here 2020 really helped u described me with what not to do

"If we ever cross paths forensics'll know how to sketch you"

I always have room to improve. Once i think I've just limited myself and stopping my growth. I really enjoy this!

GREAT VIDEO!!! Major 🔑 for success here!! Keep doing videos like this Drew ! Very helpful! Keep hustlin..✊🏾

I am gonna blow when i make my best groove Its just like the English opening chess move (English opening is the pawn to C4 opening move and C4 is an explosive hence I am gonna 'blow')

4:41 “Like a dead noose i’ma let loose” fml 😂😂😂 idk why i even try

great video, gotta work on my stretched rhymes more

Nice Video NEVER STOP YOURE THE BEST

1shot, 2 down, make a fork, two birds one stone, Fame equals fortune, but know that kings stress too, we all part of a game where we gotta move smart like a chess move (Fork is a chess refference)

So depending on the word(s) in use, the use of off rhyme technique is essential.

Ty for being strait forward.

Wow thanks 👍🏾 Man ♂️ This helps a lot This is gonna help me for sure thanks again 👍🏾

I thought that dead moose rhyme scheme was dope lmao

You have to expect the honesty, standing in front of the realist ( realist)

This is an old video but I'mma comment anyway So I'm really bad with tutorials and videos like this for things like singing or any other thing because it easily feels like I'm being talked down to, however, your channel makes me feel really comfortable in learning so thank you for being a good teacher lol

this is really gonna help thank you i subscribed

"The truth is the best muse, duck when I let loose Have ya head mounted up on the wall like a dead moose I move like a Vet move, in the jungle I'm lurk'n The heater pop his ass drop to the floor like he twerkin"

When we met I said I was a spiritual man If I can heal your pain I'd be a miracle man To ease your soul I'll touch you with them miracle hands Can't wait to get to heaven, touch the grass of miracle land Give me a stage and a mic, I'm your lyrical man I'll have you stepping to a rhythm, miracle band

This was actually really help cup thank you

Hey Drew, (No im not hear to summarize this video into a sentence again), but after a bit of practice ive come up with this. Could you tell me if this is good? My minds wrapped with rhymes tight as Hoisted ankle braces/ Tangled chains with phrases like annoying cable placements/

i’m watching this four years later. i have been trying to rap in the shower and stuff so this really helps

“I’m gonna get out of my stale mate like a chess move, cause she got a stank like a dead moose”

yes drew mad video appreciate it bro

That was very helpful for me thanks for this video drew

I feel the vibe of the video but I personally feel you could've went a bit more into detail about whag the punch line how to work it or how to choose what you should be using as the punchline. I'm honestly just a worker that sometimes wants to learn this stuff. And I day sometimes because I'm so busy I can't really sit fown and practice but as I work through out my day I kinda think of things or put things together. Really in all reality I'm looking to keep the flow going. While keeping the same topic. (I am diagnosed with ADHD)

awsum... been waiting for a video like this...

My colden flow throws you through loops To tounge tie you frozen goons Cant let yo ur soul flow if your heart had open wounds

Man you really stepped up the video production lol...in your newer vids

if anyone is looking for dope rapper to get learn from as far as complex rhyme schemes and wordplay is concerned then I suggest you guys look up Birdman he said... "money on the counter money on the celling million dollar money.... money everywhere" this comment has been brought to you by, Sarcasm.

I had *actively* *practiced rap* *every aspect* To *eject plenty venom* *within* *seconds* So when I *bitten* your style I *left it dead * Without a *chance* to *resurrect* it so you *can't* make *an* *attempt*

In the beginning of the video chess move, stepped to, test you, this is how Eminem raps by changing the way he says words. This is because of the vowels in the word each words main vowel is o, just wanted to point that out.

"coming up with a motherfuckin chess move, I was with yo momma she was an S Grove"

Gravity Rabbit he - Eminem

i have learnt a lot from you😍

Thanks for the video, you are goated

Good stuff here bro. This video made me hit the sub button.

You can shoot me; I’ll let you shoot; I’ll just come back like I’m dead pool (first punchline written lol)

Fuck this helped me a lot man.. thanks a lot for this!

yup this is crazy and random but I'm not new so Drew i salute you! thank you for sharing your knowledge. with the who's who of the rap game if it wasn't for you most would come unglued and get stuck like Big League Chew on the bottom of a shoe. btw that's just a little word play:) hope you like and thanks very much for sharing your wisdom and knowledge.

bless for the fundamentals.

I think outlining your white board with a layer of colored type would help.

The technical term for most stretch rhymes is assonance

thanks bro it really help me.

This video made me want to make "chess move" and "dead moose" work as a two-bar punchline. I'm not gonna' make it, but it made me want to.

Chess and Stepped are slant rhymes, right? Btw thanks for this. Ur right i do some of this without even realizing it, but its nice to learn how to consciously improve my punchlines :)

''yo this is your final chess move i dont need to start a mess to prove a point, you already got the red one on your head'' (what im trying to say is that they can only move the king and wether they move him or not theyll still gonna get it, becausse i have all the soldiers at the spot where i want them to be 1 move and theyre dead like you know when a proffessional sniper aims at your head? yeah.. no going back..) Did i do it right?

They out here scheming out here thinking of my next move, I see them breathing how they chest move, Because my words will leave ‘em speechless out here thinking like a chess move.

wow why didnt i see this shit before my first rap vid LOL damn this makes it more fun to practice and own a beat

This helped a lotttt!

Guaranteed the pump will make ur chest move /if u get stepped to/ then ur dead too/ the 223 lets loose/ and puts ur head on the wall like a dead moose.

lol the one person who disliked is just trash at life

"People of society with rather sit back and complain, and disregard the fact that we all feel the pain; The pressure from this world I can't withstand(withstained), so I said f**k it and broke its back on my leg like I'm Bane"

Lmao throw some comedy in this bih, good video drew

GREAT VALUE JOE BUDDEN

Great dude

I literally thought of this all by myself in the sense of a hamburger years ago; you got your topic, (bread) you expand on it (meat) n then link it back to the start! (bread)

Can I get some feedback for these bars I used in a diss? "When you see me coming sound the alarm/ I'm knocking niggaz off the board like they're motherfucking pawns/"

the letter S lol funny how he said that

I like a multi syllable rhythm

super dope tutorial

Great Video

I'm so cold, I make the Human torch freeze. Or I'm the hottest out, I make the sun start sweatin'

Drew i need tips on how to make my original flow.

Tryin to avoid things that cause me pain but life with out you just isnt the same prayin every night to the lord for direction questioning if i was the one who needed correction thought spinning in my head like a carrousel will my past actions drag me into hell? im asking for forgiveness baby please i miss everything about you girl, even yo sneeze.

Somewhere there are Canadian rappers waiting to pick up this dead moose gauntlet that was thrown down. Regionally, I'm sure there are parts of Canada where guns kill more moose than people, and where you are more likely to get hit by a moose than a bullet. If so, that makes moose raps sound pretty hardcore.

They heartbeat race once I'm in their face. Because I make the beat build like Lil wayne

"i be seeing black and white like chess moves, if we ain't share da vision you'll get you're rep ruined"

Thinking about the dead moose line, it would be good as a punchline, maybe something like “Look at this big boy, what’s he gonna do? Shut up before I knock your fat @ss out like a dead moose” Idk it’s pretty bad but I thought of it as you were talking about Rhyme choice

choppa make em sing high notes like he writing onna ceiling 🤧

you got checkmate, yeah that's a chess move my worst tunes are your best tunes they want more me and less you my rhymes are infectious so they like bless you leave you going nuts like almonds an' a cash-ew when i send for you, i render you useless that's what i tend to do.

When rhyming multis, you've got to watch the syllable count, fot example if you rhyme 3 syllables you got to rhyme it with another 3 ... am i right?