#Oxford #University academic explains how to write a KILLER personal statement when applying for unis!
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@shadanmariam3 жыл бұрын
Got my acceptance letter today. Thanks Dr. Matt
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Fantastic! Congratulations!
@benedictcucumberbitch93522 жыл бұрын
J C you will!
@oliviamanoucorvinus32362 жыл бұрын
THAT IS AMAZING!!! CONGRATULATIONS!
@benextinction__1442 жыл бұрын
Great job!
@miaffosvoice1625 Жыл бұрын
Congratulations. Is it to Oxford?
@benwarren87242 жыл бұрын
You've summarised what multiple seminars, presentations and entire courses have failed to do with hours of time. And more impressively, you did it in a mere 40 minutes. Thank you.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Thank you Ben, that's very kind!
@emilycarter89222 жыл бұрын
You might want to check this out kzfaq.info/get/bejne/a8CFmrdmyM24l2Q.html
@MattT0023 жыл бұрын
I’ve watched several of your videos now and I honestly have to say that you’ve been extraordinarily helpful with regards to personal statements, and generally how to think like an academic. Thank you.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Well, that's very kind of you! Thank you! Best wishes MW
@justinfung4351 Жыл бұрын
Seeing faculty from Oxbridge speak about the importance of demonstrating genuine evaluation and critical thinking, almost dismissing extracurriculars entirely, has just turned my world upside down. I've been surrounded by a lot of people with little to no actual academic passion, pursuing supercurriculars just to say they have, dogmatically making a beeline for Oxbridge, driven merely by ego and pressure. It's really encouraging to see that that's not what Oxbridge is all about. I might consider actually trying for Oxbridge if I choose to pursue a postgraduate education. Thank you.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@youngg5099 Жыл бұрын
literally just saved me with the difference between program and programme
@ramneekgill55803 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your insights 🙏. I hope I can act upon them, but definitely a resource I will share in the future
@ioanaturcan3563 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for being so helpful! All of your videos have helped me a lot!
@jonasfied012 жыл бұрын
This is helping me massively as I look to write a my PS for a Mst, this September.
@debbiebells85613 жыл бұрын
This was super useful! I watched it the whole way through. Thank you!!!
@o.knight-catalinete69343 жыл бұрын
Brilliant video! Just in my time of need! Thank you Dr Williams!!!🤩
@anthonyf39603 жыл бұрын
Very helpful video. Concise, well presented, relevant and to the point, this video is great!
@jaytam20093 жыл бұрын
This is very useful indeed. Thank you very much.
@maulanarzf23913 жыл бұрын
Wow, I've watched the video until it's donee....so helpful. Thank you so much sir
@JeyRoamingSeoul2 жыл бұрын
OMG! Thank you very much for this video! It was an absolute KILLER! I am currently trying to write a personal statement for the GKS-G scholarship in South Korea and I have literally spent hours on this video, pausing, again and again, reflecting on what I learned from the video, brainstorming ideas for my own personal statement, taking notes, writing down new ideas all the time! These 2 hours were like the most productive hours ever for me
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Fantastic -- thank you Jeyran! Best of luck in your applications.
@JeyRoamingSeoul2 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Thank you very much!
@MOGE_9 ай бұрын
Hi, how did it go for you? i am thinking of applying this year.
@IugeerАй бұрын
Yes how did it go?
@saracucaro3 жыл бұрын
The most useful video on personal statements I've watched so far!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you!
@celine18773 жыл бұрын
Thank you, I can finally start writing with an idea on my mind.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Wonderful!
@mypetct3 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Bless you for the very detailed suggestion,✊🙏 It would certainly make feel less stressed as I prepare to apply
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
You are so welcome!
@rsetvibes38003 жыл бұрын
Your video was so much helpful !
@AT-gs4cv3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the guidance, Dr Williams. As a mature student applying for postgraduate study, further to watching this session it was apparent that I had approached my draft PS from the wrong perspective and had failed to answer the three questions you outlined. I had adopted a similar format to that of a CV covering my 25 years' career experience, and had failed to add sufficient reflection on acquired learning and vocational development over that time. I should have watched this first! I now feel confident in my application, albeit not to a Russell Group university.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
We wish you the very best Allie!
@AbuOsama233 жыл бұрын
Thank you, it’s clear, helpful and supportive, great video!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Great! Thank you
@EnglishDonutSchool2 жыл бұрын
This is by far the best video I've seen on this topic. Informative and well detailed. Thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
That's really kind, thank you!
@teddybeast49922 жыл бұрын
THIS PRESENTATION WAS BEAUTIFUL.. the first personal statement advise video i watched through till the end! The animations were great and the advice was very so much needed. Thank you so much for this video and the link to the slides.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you! That's very kind!
@nicolemusic2242 Жыл бұрын
I would just like to say that I have found all your videos, especially the videos on how to write a personal statement and the examples of what to do/not to do, have all been so helpful. At first my personal statement was quite impersonal, but following your advice it is much more personal!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Excellent! Best of luck to you!
@ruhiamber2192 жыл бұрын
It was a much detailed and on point video I have came across on such a critical thing.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Great! Thank you!
@Moustachexx32 жыл бұрын
Absolutely loved this! So helpful.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Great to know, thank you!
@hadijaffri98562 жыл бұрын
Probably the best video ive watched on preparing a personal statement Thanks a bunch
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Wow, thanks!
@voltaireisamadlad70072 жыл бұрын
Awesome video. I'm writing my personal statement right now, and this video is so handy!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful! Best of luck with it
@tomnickson69523 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! It was the information which I was really looking for! super-puper useful!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Great to hear! Thank you
@aurvnxia36442 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much for this video! I plan on applying for multiple summer internships, one of them being in Cambridge, and this was very helpful. As a bachelor student who doesn't have any academic mentors, this was a great opportunity to get a better understanding of what exactly people, who read personal statements, want to see. Hope to write a good one, thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Best of luck!
@ritad.55533 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! This is really helpful 👍 Amazing 😊😊☺️
@tahir263 жыл бұрын
This was really helpful. Thanks a lot
@Legendaryfizz2 жыл бұрын
Incredible video! My first degree is from the US and my personal statement was quite different- it was more vocational and focused on creative writing. I am going to apply for the DPhil in Social Data Science at the University of Oxford and this video really helps streamline my thoughts! Thank you so much :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Fantastic! Thanks for your comment!
@firemanrobert75313 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm applying to both US and UK universities, and have no idea how to write essays for UK universities after brainstorming for US universities for so long. Your video is very helpful!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Great to hear! Thank you! Best of luck
@trainingmycook11 ай бұрын
Thanks for this video Dr Williams ! Your videos are very very helpful
@JesusCollegeOxford157111 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@shashiperera50592 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this amazing guidance.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
It's a pleasure! Thank you!
@deepaadvani14993 жыл бұрын
Extremely helpful presentation. Very reassuring too. Thank you very much.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Good to know. Thank you!
@jas_3133 жыл бұрын
This has been incredibly helpful, thank you :) I’m on my 9th draft and I’m losing hope aha, especially as my college haven’t been too helpful😅
@anisharaturi4101 Жыл бұрын
Hello Dr. Williams! thank you so much for all the resources you provide. I plan to apply for the law course this coming admissions cycle and if i get in ( fingers crossed) it will be greatly due to your guidance and in-depth discussions. Hopefully i’ll get to thank you in person next year! cheers, Anisha
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Thanks Anisha! Best of luck to you
@agatheloublie48953 жыл бұрын
thanks a lot for all your explanations, very useful.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
You are welcome! Thank you
@nicolabevan81253 жыл бұрын
I found this fascinating,, As I am taking an access course in social science and humanity.. to go onto philosophy then to take the pg cert in chaplaincy..
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Best wishes to you
@juureimberg2 жыл бұрын
Hi! I've watched your videos to prepare my personal statement and yesterday I've received an offer to pursue a MPhil at Oxford! Your tips were very helpful!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Excellent news! Congratulations!
@vic.hydeenvironmental58902 жыл бұрын
Thank you for posting this video, it has been really helpful :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
You’re very welcome!
@andrehuaca54953 жыл бұрын
LOVETHIS!
@magtazeum40713 жыл бұрын
Aww..This is so helpful..Thank you Mathews
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! Thanks for your kind comment!
@Melissamahlalove3 жыл бұрын
wow this is the most practical and helpful video ever.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Thanks very much!
@keshavkasat94653 жыл бұрын
I am aiming for a very different degree, which is professionally steered, so there are a few things that I should do differently than what is suggested. But even that has been made very clear in the video and that's why I think everyone, irrespective of the degree that they are applying to can get very helpful advice here.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
That's kind of you to say! Thank you. Best of luck in your applications.
@brandon50583 жыл бұрын
*Before the video* I am short on air, as you have taken my breath away with this helpful video. *After the video* I am short on air, as you have taken my breath away with this helpful video. After reading Vee’s personal statement, I have noticed how Vee told about different historic happenings and used them to show and not just tell. Thanks for these tips! Show and don’t tell is literally the best tip to use for everything, not only a personal statement.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
That's very kind of you! Best of luck!
@lyndouun3 жыл бұрын
I almost spit out my drink as I read the don’t thing in the standing out section 😭😭 however your way of explaining things made it clearer for me on how to write this PS so thank you sm !!
@ishish88162 жыл бұрын
33:02 to relive the moment
@yormanzamoralozano68393 жыл бұрын
Incredible, God bless you.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Thank you! You too!
@daphne57203 жыл бұрын
36:33 As a French applicant, this part was very useful to clarify haha, thank you !
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@maxwellturner87933 жыл бұрын
On the Bristol slide, the sentence about the adjective 'vulnerable' in legislation. I just wanted to say that I used this paper to talk about the DID model in my personal statement. So thank you Dr. Williams for that one. Hopefully it is both personal and evidence of my interest. Although I seemed to struggle to talk about what I've read without being descriptive.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
I'm really glad to hear the DID model was interesting and helpful! All best wishes to you
@RajveerSingh-gf5rd3 жыл бұрын
I am the 500th like for this video :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Let's get 500 likes for your comment!
@ramneekgill55803 жыл бұрын
I'm the first dislike for this comment 😂
@elalaelasariuinjakarta75483 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. This is a good video for my students in Indonesia
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Excellent! Best wishes to you and your students
@jask97793 жыл бұрын
Thank u!!! This was so helpful !!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
No problem! Thanks for watching. Please share and subscribe!
@karenlei13013 жыл бұрын
This is really useful, thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@Adi0_3 жыл бұрын
You don’t understand how many of these videos I’ve been watching. I’m in Year 11 and looking to do Law at Oxford so I’m working my butt off already
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Good to know! Just be sure not to burn yourself out. Make sure you find ways of enjoying the process -- because then you'll sustain your motivation and go further. John Stuart Mill was in such a hurry to become the best philosopher in the world that he had a nervous breakdown! In the end, he achieved more by relaxing a bit than by constantly working.
@sophiaengel41143 жыл бұрын
same !!
@ThatWeirdGuyFromWork3 жыл бұрын
Man I REALLY hope I get admitted so I can shake your hand one day and just at very least thank you for all the help you've offered through this content on KZfaq.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Thanks! It would be a pleasure meeting you.
@ThatWeirdGuyFromWork3 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 I look forward to it! I'm working on my second draft of my personal statement now (shaving it down now because I misread the character/page limits). I'm applying for law school but I'm a political science and history enthusiast as well.
@CEvandigitalmedia2 жыл бұрын
This will help me construct my Personal Statement.Thanks
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Good to know! Best of luck to you
@sivabalankaniapan62753 жыл бұрын
Brilliant, thank you sir.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!
@samanthach3 жыл бұрын
this was such a good video thank you so much!!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it!!
@nishitraj79823 жыл бұрын
I love this proffesor.
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@ceilingfloor679711 ай бұрын
Thank you so much ! Today was my first brainstorming session
@JesusCollegeOxford157111 ай бұрын
Thanks for your comment! Good luck with it
@michelameloni45332 жыл бұрын
super helpful!!
@tanmeiting76943 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Sir!Just want to tell you that although 9 out of 10 of my teachers strongly suggested me to change my ps to a less emotional, and more “normal” ps, not quoting quotes from a marmite type celebrity, I decided to stick with your advices and wrote my own PERSONAL statement, which I found satisfying! I’m applying to Cambridge for Mathematics, sorry not Oxford 😅 but please wish me luck 😬😬😬
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@dhimassurya65713 жыл бұрын
this is so helpful, thanks!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@taehyunglvr87082 жыл бұрын
I am in year 11 right now hoping to gain some knowledge on how to be a better future candidate to universities such as oxford, thank you so much for this lecture which gives so much insight on how to write a strong PS!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Best of luck!
@Taya-wr1ib2 ай бұрын
i know this is a long time past when you posted this but I’m in year 11 doing the same, did you end up getting in?
@sachina55632 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Very helpful
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@mrmvpvip3 жыл бұрын
I don't really have many achievements to write about because I'm studying at a night school. I do read a lot of research articles in my own time. Hopefully that can make up for my lack of in-class activities!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Yes, that's the sort of detail we want. We know that "achievements" are relative to what is possible. Some people have loads of opportunities to achieve, and others have to struggle more. Reading articles in your own time whilst attending night school is very impressive and not to be dismissed lightly.
@Tony-pf8fi3 жыл бұрын
Wow, this is immensely resourceful! Do you think highlighting significant work experience would be advantageous especially for an applicant in a Masters in Business Administration programme?
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Many thanks Tony! I think work experiences can be very impactful for MBA applications. When applying to academic institutions, however, be sure to draw the connections between any practical experience and a wider academic debate. For example, if you've had some work experiences with a business, what did it tell you about a topic of academic interest, such as management structuring, behavioural economics... you name it?
@tashtancykenyaanyango19172 жыл бұрын
😂Ok I died on emotional blackmail. Brilliant Insights there! Hope to get ideas on PSs concerning internships I.e into world class organisations or competitive multinational companies.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your comment! When applying to companies, they similarly want evidence of activity over platitudes such as "I am highly motivated". So if you can give evidence of what you have done that proves you are highly motivated, that is ideal. Show, don't just tell!
@tashtancykenyaanyango19172 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Thank you!
@chewieqtpie3 жыл бұрын
I applied to St Johns but the videos from this channel are still really helpful :3
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
That's great to know! We're all on the same team (St John's, Jesus etc). Just glad we can help.
@simontanios4293 жыл бұрын
thanks.
@nicolemusic2242 Жыл бұрын
Notes to self: 18:28 is a very helpful section. Come back to this as I keep redrafting. Another way to critically analyse is to identify the parallels and similarities etc
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Best of luck with it!
@nicolemusic2242 Жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! 🙂
@wgchnews232 жыл бұрын
This may be a silly question, but if referencing certain texts in a personal statement, should I include a works cited list? The more I research my program of interest at Oxford, the more I'm getting my heart set on attending. I really want to nail this personal statement! Thank you so much for the information in this video -- it is incredibly helpful!
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
No, that’s not necessary and you probably won’t have space for it. Best of luck!
@Nic01a2 жыл бұрын
I'm so thankful for this material being published online.
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Excellent. Thank you for your kind remark!
@alananaughton91223 жыл бұрын
Very very helpful
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that!
@JurineszShadrach2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this guide. Just wondering when applying for a Masters, do you have to also mention the area that you are going to research and if so, could we change it some time in the future?
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
It's worth describing your research interests, yes. But you don't need to have a fully formed research design, and you're not forced to follow through on the proposal if your research plans change. This would only really apply to a research masters, rather than a taught masters.
@amandine89542 жыл бұрын
being french when you want to study in the UK becomes hard when you have to write your personal statement. No one is able to help me so I thank you!!! My PS is way better now
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Great! Thank you for your comment. Best of luck to you
@coreyjohn28062 жыл бұрын
This has been incredibly helpful, thank you! I'm very close to submitting my personal statement and this has given me some great insight on what to add next. I'm applying for Politics and would love some feedback from a professional in the field, is there any chance I could email you a few questions? I understand how busy you must be but any input would be very appreciated! thanks :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
I can't right now, I'm afraid. But, if you follow the advice in the video you wouldn't need me to review your statement anyway. Best of luck to you!
@jesuslovesyou12 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@shreyagupta44932 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this video! It really was helpful. I had a question , i am applying for masters in healthcare management and finding it difficult to begin my personal statement , any tips on how to begin and what points to include in the first paragraph?
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
I would usually open a personal statement at the beginning of your story. When did you realise that you wanted to pursue this Masters? Why did you realise that you wanted to pursue this Masters? You can use this as a way in to discussing your specific academic interests and your potential to be an outstanding student on the programme.
@faradaycool4058 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for being so constructive despite being from the greatest Oxford Uni college
@ritiksinha56513 жыл бұрын
43 minutes well spent. Thanks
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
You're very kind! Good luck!
@sirisaksirisak69813 жыл бұрын
Essay rewrite easy, do the right thing, not like thing and do the thing right, not thing like.Do the good half of him, the rest do the best of your sure you pass, if not do next.Tips seeing is believing, touching is awaring.Good luck.
@jemimasani57662 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this very informative piece. It was absolutely helpful. Please is there a way I can get my personal statement through to you to review. It'll be greatly appreciated
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Yes, that can work well. Just be sure to explain your academic interests in the topic and some relevant academic literature you have read to further your interest.
@iashsch_3 жыл бұрын
Super useful🙌👍
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@maxwellsequation4887 Жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot! I wrote my personal statement starting my fascination and curiosity about light and electromagnetism, went on to tell that my interest in EM motivated me to attend a bsc level online course hosted by iitk, and then what books I've read (on vector calculus for electromagnetism, and one on multivariable calculus). Then talking about what I'm looking forward to in university and my aspirations. Does that work?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Sounds good! Given these are your interests, that's ideal.
@miautznala3 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! This has helped me to try to figure out a structure. Would you recommend your presentation also for post-grad admission?
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Yes, for the most part. You just need to ensure a grad application places greater emphasis on specific research questions you wish to pursue (assuming you're applying for a research degree) with some discussion of the academic literature you may wish to contribute to. Thank you for your comment!
@miautznala3 жыл бұрын
To be frank, I am applying for taught degrees because I do not know if I will be doing a PhD afterwards. I imagine connecting my personal research interest with the in the programme offered modules would not be wrong, too.
@GeeseAreJustBastardizedSwans3 жыл бұрын
I have so many little interests that I move on from quickly I wouldnt know what to say about myself. I dont have any permanent hobbies other than volunteering and my work, I feel that sounds too try hard to put in a personal statement. I feel like I should just create a new hobby around my wanted degree. I feel the best thing to do is create a hobby around creating a portfolio of work in the area I want to apply to or something related to it. For interactive media ---> animation/art as well as video games?
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
There's no harm in having lots of interests. It would be more of a problem to have so few interests that you don't know what to write about. You can create a hobby, or you could isolate which of your hobbies best confirms your hypotheses that a) you want to study your chosen degree, and b) you will perform exceptionally well on course. Best of luck.
@derrickreuben56813 жыл бұрын
Kicking an introduction with numerical data/statistics , is that a nice way to start your intro?
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Can be. Depends on the stats and how you use them. Typically statistics are speaking to a population trend, whereas your personal statement is n=1 (i.e. just you!). So just take care that you clearly situate yourself in the personal statement, even if you use stats.
@xaviertoapanta98693 жыл бұрын
Thank you, so much! However, I was wondering what special advice could you give for writing postgraduate personal statements?
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Not sure if you've seen this video, but it may help: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/q52qhK-WmKion2Q.html
@gia58243 жыл бұрын
I wish I came across this video before I submitted my personal statement 😔
@hamza-chaudhry Жыл бұрын
9:10 But B also explicitly says "I am fascinated". 29:34 But that extra information won't tell you that their GP-shadowing placement was cancelled.
Thank you so much for this. I have watched plenty of your videos and feel slightly more confident in my personal statement! I would love to email you to ask you more about applying to Oxford for Law. Would this be okay? :)
@JesusCollegeOxford15712 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your message! I’m not the best person to ask about Law at Oxford to be honest. I think you’re best off contacting the law faculty. I wouldn’t want to give you bad advice!
@iwansherlock9893 жыл бұрын
Amazing video! Very helpful - now I finally know how to write a personal statement to a fine degree. Thanks1!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
Excellent! Thank you
@emmaayla58893 жыл бұрын
Hello thank you for such an informative and helpful video! I was curious to know if Oxford looks for students that have substantial volunteer work, research experience, or extracurricular activites? Do students who have these activities on their resume have a better chance of getting accepted? Thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
No, you do not need to have work experience or substantial extracurricular experiences. We are quite narrowly focused on academic matters, so we value super curricular exploration of the subjects you're planning to study, but are less concerned by extracurricular activities he do without any academic motivation. The only moderate exception to this is with regards to medicine, where work experience relevant to the field is considered helpful, but again is not required. Of course, at the moment, few experiences in person are possible, but there are some online experiences you can pursue that may be of interest and use.
@avadevlin9316 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this video, it is amazing and so helpful! I'm an American student currently in the process of writing my statement, and I was wondering if you have any special advice for international students? Would it be helpful at all to mention why I'm interested in studying abroad?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your comment. It's not really necessary to mention in a personal statement that you're interested in studying abroad. That will be clear from the fact that you're applying to study in the UK. You also do not need to explain or justify your reasons for wanting to study in the UK. We welcome international applications at universities like Oxford.
@avadevlin9316 Жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 thank you so much, you and your content have been so helpful and encouraging!
@saharshjindal64482 жыл бұрын
Does this advice work for Postgraduate Study? Specifically, does it apply for MPhil courses at Oxford?
@LukasJSvedberg9 ай бұрын
Absolutely phenominal video. BTW I am just wondering if you are looking to study a maths related degree, should your structure change at all?
@JesusCollegeOxford15719 ай бұрын
Thanks! It's helpful for any personal statement to have some structure - in the sense of linking the various paragraphs together so that there is a beginning, middle and end to what you're saying. There's no particular reason why a maths personal statement would need to be different to any other subjects from that perspective.
@saihanmarshall52873 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this! What do you mean by Substance and Methods? They seem to entail the studying that you’ll do at university, but surely you can’t write about that seeing as you’re meant to be writing about yourself?
@JesusCollegeOxford15713 жыл бұрын
This is just an idea as to what you can discuss about your interests. Most people focus on substantive matters, i.e. academic questions and answers (e.g. Why is Gold yellow?) But, you can also consider methodological matters, in other words how you go about asking questions and providing answers (e.g. what methods could we use to work out the reason for gold being yellow?)