How to write a KILLER personal statement!!

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Jesus College Oxford

Jesus College Oxford

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#Oxford #University academic explains how to write a KILLER personal statement when applying for unis!

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@shadanmariam
@shadanmariam 3 жыл бұрын
Got my acceptance letter today. Thanks Dr. Matt
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Fantastic! Congratulations!
@benedictcucumberbitch9352
@benedictcucumberbitch9352 2 жыл бұрын
J C you will!
@oliviamanoucorvinus3236
@oliviamanoucorvinus3236 2 жыл бұрын
THAT IS AMAZING!!! CONGRATULATIONS!
@benextinction__144
@benextinction__144 2 жыл бұрын
Great job!
@miaffosvoice1625
@miaffosvoice1625 Жыл бұрын
Congratulations. Is it to Oxford?
@benwarren8724
@benwarren8724 2 жыл бұрын
You've summarised what multiple seminars, presentations and entire courses have failed to do with hours of time. And more impressively, you did it in a mere 40 minutes. Thank you.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you Ben, that's very kind!
@emilycarter8922
@emilycarter8922 2 жыл бұрын
You might want to check this out kzfaq.info/get/bejne/a8CFmrdmyM24l2Q.html
@MattT002
@MattT002 3 жыл бұрын
I’ve watched several of your videos now and I honestly have to say that you’ve been extraordinarily helpful with regards to personal statements, and generally how to think like an academic. Thank you.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Well, that's very kind of you! Thank you! Best wishes MW
@justinfung4351
@justinfung4351 Жыл бұрын
Seeing faculty from Oxbridge speak about the importance of demonstrating genuine evaluation and critical thinking, almost dismissing extracurriculars entirely, has just turned my world upside down. I've been surrounded by a lot of people with little to no actual academic passion, pursuing supercurriculars just to say they have, dogmatically making a beeline for Oxbridge, driven merely by ego and pressure. It's really encouraging to see that that's not what Oxbridge is all about. I might consider actually trying for Oxbridge if I choose to pursue a postgraduate education. Thank you.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@youngg5099
@youngg5099 Жыл бұрын
literally just saved me with the difference between program and programme
@ramneekgill5580
@ramneekgill5580 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your insights 🙏. I hope I can act upon them, but definitely a resource I will share in the future
@ioanaturcan356
@ioanaturcan356 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for being so helpful! All of your videos have helped me a lot!
@jonasfied01
@jonasfied01 2 жыл бұрын
This is helping me massively as I look to write a my PS for a Mst, this September.
@debbiebells8561
@debbiebells8561 3 жыл бұрын
This was super useful! I watched it the whole way through. Thank you!!!
@o.knight-catalinete6934
@o.knight-catalinete6934 3 жыл бұрын
Brilliant video! Just in my time of need! Thank you Dr Williams!!!🤩
@anthonyf3960
@anthonyf3960 3 жыл бұрын
Very helpful video. Concise, well presented, relevant and to the point, this video is great!
@jaytam2009
@jaytam2009 3 жыл бұрын
This is very useful indeed. Thank you very much.
@maulanarzf2391
@maulanarzf2391 3 жыл бұрын
Wow, I've watched the video until it's donee....so helpful. Thank you so much sir
@JeyRoamingSeoul
@JeyRoamingSeoul 2 жыл бұрын
OMG! Thank you very much for this video! It was an absolute KILLER! I am currently trying to write a personal statement for the GKS-G scholarship in South Korea and I have literally spent hours on this video, pausing, again and again, reflecting on what I learned from the video, brainstorming ideas for my own personal statement, taking notes, writing down new ideas all the time! These 2 hours were like the most productive hours ever for me
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Fantastic -- thank you Jeyran! Best of luck in your applications.
@JeyRoamingSeoul
@JeyRoamingSeoul 2 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Thank you very much!
@MOGE_
@MOGE_ 9 ай бұрын
Hi, how did it go for you? i am thinking of applying this year.
@Iugeer
@Iugeer Ай бұрын
Yes how did it go?
@saracucaro
@saracucaro 3 жыл бұрын
The most useful video on personal statements I've watched so far!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you!
@celine1877
@celine1877 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you, I can finally start writing with an idea on my mind.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Wonderful!
@mypetct
@mypetct 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Bless you for the very detailed suggestion,✊🙏 It would certainly make feel less stressed as I prepare to apply
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
You are so welcome!
@rsetvibes3800
@rsetvibes3800 3 жыл бұрын
Your video was so much helpful !
@AT-gs4cv
@AT-gs4cv 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the guidance, Dr Williams. As a mature student applying for postgraduate study, further to watching this session it was apparent that I had approached my draft PS from the wrong perspective and had failed to answer the three questions you outlined. I had adopted a similar format to that of a CV covering my 25 years' career experience, and had failed to add sufficient reflection on acquired learning and vocational development over that time. I should have watched this first! I now feel confident in my application, albeit not to a Russell Group university.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
We wish you the very best Allie!
@AbuOsama23
@AbuOsama23 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you, it’s clear, helpful and supportive, great video!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Great! Thank you
@EnglishDonutSchool
@EnglishDonutSchool 2 жыл бұрын
This is by far the best video I've seen on this topic. Informative and well detailed. Thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
That's really kind, thank you!
@teddybeast4992
@teddybeast4992 2 жыл бұрын
THIS PRESENTATION WAS BEAUTIFUL.. the first personal statement advise video i watched through till the end! The animations were great and the advice was very so much needed. Thank you so much for this video and the link to the slides.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you! That's very kind!
@nicolemusic2242
@nicolemusic2242 Жыл бұрын
I would just like to say that I have found all your videos, especially the videos on how to write a personal statement and the examples of what to do/not to do, have all been so helpful. At first my personal statement was quite impersonal, but following your advice it is much more personal!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Excellent! Best of luck to you!
@ruhiamber219
@ruhiamber219 2 жыл бұрын
It was a much detailed and on point video I have came across on such a critical thing.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thank you!
@Moustachexx3
@Moustachexx3 2 жыл бұрын
Absolutely loved this! So helpful.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Great to know, thank you!
@hadijaffri9856
@hadijaffri9856 2 жыл бұрын
Probably the best video ive watched on preparing a personal statement Thanks a bunch
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Wow, thanks!
@voltaireisamadlad7007
@voltaireisamadlad7007 2 жыл бұрын
Awesome video. I'm writing my personal statement right now, and this video is so handy!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful! Best of luck with it
@tomnickson6952
@tomnickson6952 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! It was the information which I was really looking for! super-puper useful!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Great to hear! Thank you
@aurvnxia3644
@aurvnxia3644 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much for this video! I plan on applying for multiple summer internships, one of them being in Cambridge, and this was very helpful. As a bachelor student who doesn't have any academic mentors, this was a great opportunity to get a better understanding of what exactly people, who read personal statements, want to see. Hope to write a good one, thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Best of luck!
@ritad.5553
@ritad.5553 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! This is really helpful 👍 Amazing 😊😊☺️
@tahir26
@tahir26 3 жыл бұрын
This was really helpful. Thanks a lot
@Legendaryfizz
@Legendaryfizz 2 жыл бұрын
Incredible video! My first degree is from the US and my personal statement was quite different- it was more vocational and focused on creative writing. I am going to apply for the DPhil in Social Data Science at the University of Oxford and this video really helps streamline my thoughts! Thank you so much :)
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Fantastic! Thanks for your comment!
@firemanrobert7531
@firemanrobert7531 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much! I'm applying to both US and UK universities, and have no idea how to write essays for UK universities after brainstorming for US universities for so long. Your video is very helpful!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Great to hear! Thank you! Best of luck
@trainingmycook
@trainingmycook 11 ай бұрын
Thanks for this video Dr Williams ! Your videos are very very helpful
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 11 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@shashiperera5059
@shashiperera5059 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this amazing guidance.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
It's a pleasure! Thank you!
@deepaadvani1499
@deepaadvani1499 3 жыл бұрын
Extremely helpful presentation. Very reassuring too. Thank you very much.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Good to know. Thank you!
@jas_313
@jas_313 3 жыл бұрын
This has been incredibly helpful, thank you :) I’m on my 9th draft and I’m losing hope aha, especially as my college haven’t been too helpful😅
@anisharaturi4101
@anisharaturi4101 Жыл бұрын
Hello Dr. Williams! thank you so much for all the resources you provide. I plan to apply for the law course this coming admissions cycle and if i get in ( fingers crossed) it will be greatly due to your guidance and in-depth discussions. Hopefully i’ll get to thank you in person next year! cheers, Anisha
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Thanks Anisha! Best of luck to you
@agatheloublie4895
@agatheloublie4895 3 жыл бұрын
thanks a lot for all your explanations, very useful.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
You are welcome! Thank you
@nicolabevan8125
@nicolabevan8125 3 жыл бұрын
I found this fascinating,, As I am taking an access course in social science and humanity.. to go onto philosophy then to take the pg cert in chaplaincy..
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Best wishes to you
@juureimberg
@juureimberg 2 жыл бұрын
Hi! I've watched your videos to prepare my personal statement and yesterday I've received an offer to pursue a MPhil at Oxford! Your tips were very helpful!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Excellent news! Congratulations!
@vic.hydeenvironmental5890
@vic.hydeenvironmental5890 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for posting this video, it has been really helpful :)
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
You’re very welcome!
@andrehuaca5495
@andrehuaca5495 3 жыл бұрын
LOVETHIS!
@magtazeum4071
@magtazeum4071 3 жыл бұрын
Aww..This is so helpful..Thank you Mathews
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! Thanks for your kind comment!
@Melissamahlalove
@Melissamahlalove 3 жыл бұрын
wow this is the most practical and helpful video ever.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks very much!
@keshavkasat9465
@keshavkasat9465 3 жыл бұрын
I am aiming for a very different degree, which is professionally steered, so there are a few things that I should do differently than what is suggested. But even that has been made very clear in the video and that's why I think everyone, irrespective of the degree that they are applying to can get very helpful advice here.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
That's kind of you to say! Thank you. Best of luck in your applications.
@brandon5058
@brandon5058 3 жыл бұрын
*Before the video* I am short on air, as you have taken my breath away with this helpful video. *After the video* I am short on air, as you have taken my breath away with this helpful video. After reading Vee’s personal statement, I have noticed how Vee told about different historic happenings and used them to show and not just tell. Thanks for these tips! Show and don’t tell is literally the best tip to use for everything, not only a personal statement.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
That's very kind of you! Best of luck!
@lyndouun
@lyndouun 3 жыл бұрын
I almost spit out my drink as I read the don’t thing in the standing out section 😭😭 however your way of explaining things made it clearer for me on how to write this PS so thank you sm !!
@ishish8816
@ishish8816 2 жыл бұрын
33:02 to relive the moment
@yormanzamoralozano6839
@yormanzamoralozano6839 3 жыл бұрын
Incredible, God bless you.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! You too!
@daphne5720
@daphne5720 3 жыл бұрын
36:33 As a French applicant, this part was very useful to clarify haha, thank you !
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@maxwellturner8793
@maxwellturner8793 3 жыл бұрын
On the Bristol slide, the sentence about the adjective 'vulnerable' in legislation. I just wanted to say that I used this paper to talk about the DID model in my personal statement. So thank you Dr. Williams for that one. Hopefully it is both personal and evidence of my interest. Although I seemed to struggle to talk about what I've read without being descriptive.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
I'm really glad to hear the DID model was interesting and helpful! All best wishes to you
@RajveerSingh-gf5rd
@RajveerSingh-gf5rd 3 жыл бұрын
I am the 500th like for this video :)
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Let's get 500 likes for your comment!
@ramneekgill5580
@ramneekgill5580 3 жыл бұрын
I'm the first dislike for this comment 😂
@elalaelasariuinjakarta7548
@elalaelasariuinjakarta7548 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much. This is a good video for my students in Indonesia
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Excellent! Best wishes to you and your students
@jask9779
@jask9779 3 жыл бұрын
Thank u!!! This was so helpful !!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
No problem! Thanks for watching. Please share and subscribe!
@karenlei1301
@karenlei1301 3 жыл бұрын
This is really useful, thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@Adi0_
@Adi0_ 3 жыл бұрын
You don’t understand how many of these videos I’ve been watching. I’m in Year 11 and looking to do Law at Oxford so I’m working my butt off already
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Good to know! Just be sure not to burn yourself out. Make sure you find ways of enjoying the process -- because then you'll sustain your motivation and go further. John Stuart Mill was in such a hurry to become the best philosopher in the world that he had a nervous breakdown! In the end, he achieved more by relaxing a bit than by constantly working.
@sophiaengel4114
@sophiaengel4114 3 жыл бұрын
same !!
@ThatWeirdGuyFromWork
@ThatWeirdGuyFromWork 3 жыл бұрын
Man I REALLY hope I get admitted so I can shake your hand one day and just at very least thank you for all the help you've offered through this content on KZfaq.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks! It would be a pleasure meeting you.
@ThatWeirdGuyFromWork
@ThatWeirdGuyFromWork 3 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 I look forward to it! I'm working on my second draft of my personal statement now (shaving it down now because I misread the character/page limits). I'm applying for law school but I'm a political science and history enthusiast as well.
@CEvandigitalmedia
@CEvandigitalmedia 2 жыл бұрын
This will help me construct my Personal Statement.Thanks
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Good to know! Best of luck to you
@sivabalankaniapan6275
@sivabalankaniapan6275 3 жыл бұрын
Brilliant, thank you sir.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!
@samanthach
@samanthach 3 жыл бұрын
this was such a good video thank you so much!!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Glad you liked it!!
@nishitraj7982
@nishitraj7982 3 жыл бұрын
I love this proffesor.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@ceilingfloor6797
@ceilingfloor6797 11 ай бұрын
Thank you so much ! Today was my first brainstorming session
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 11 ай бұрын
Thanks for your comment! Good luck with it
@michelameloni4533
@michelameloni4533 2 жыл бұрын
super helpful!!
@tanmeiting7694
@tanmeiting7694 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Sir!Just want to tell you that although 9 out of 10 of my teachers strongly suggested me to change my ps to a less emotional, and more “normal” ps, not quoting quotes from a marmite type celebrity, I decided to stick with your advices and wrote my own PERSONAL statement, which I found satisfying! I’m applying to Cambridge for Mathematics, sorry not Oxford 😅 but please wish me luck 😬😬😬
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@dhimassurya6571
@dhimassurya6571 3 жыл бұрын
this is so helpful, thanks!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@taehyunglvr8708
@taehyunglvr8708 2 жыл бұрын
I am in year 11 right now hoping to gain some knowledge on how to be a better future candidate to universities such as oxford, thank you so much for this lecture which gives so much insight on how to write a strong PS!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Best of luck!
@Taya-wr1ib
@Taya-wr1ib 2 ай бұрын
i know this is a long time past when you posted this but I’m in year 11 doing the same, did you end up getting in?
@sachina5563
@sachina5563 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Very helpful
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@mrmvpvip
@mrmvpvip 3 жыл бұрын
I don't really have many achievements to write about because I'm studying at a night school. I do read a lot of research articles in my own time. Hopefully that can make up for my lack of in-class activities!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Yes, that's the sort of detail we want. We know that "achievements" are relative to what is possible. Some people have loads of opportunities to achieve, and others have to struggle more. Reading articles in your own time whilst attending night school is very impressive and not to be dismissed lightly.
@Tony-pf8fi
@Tony-pf8fi 3 жыл бұрын
Wow, this is immensely resourceful! Do you think highlighting significant work experience would be advantageous especially for an applicant in a Masters in Business Administration programme?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Many thanks Tony! I think work experiences can be very impactful for MBA applications. When applying to academic institutions, however, be sure to draw the connections between any practical experience and a wider academic debate. For example, if you've had some work experiences with a business, what did it tell you about a topic of academic interest, such as management structuring, behavioural economics... you name it?
@tashtancykenyaanyango1917
@tashtancykenyaanyango1917 2 жыл бұрын
😂Ok I died on emotional blackmail. Brilliant Insights there! Hope to get ideas on PSs concerning internships I.e into world class organisations or competitive multinational companies.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your comment! When applying to companies, they similarly want evidence of activity over platitudes such as "I am highly motivated". So if you can give evidence of what you have done that proves you are highly motivated, that is ideal. Show, don't just tell!
@tashtancykenyaanyango1917
@tashtancykenyaanyango1917 2 жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Thank you!
@chewieqtpie
@chewieqtpie 3 жыл бұрын
I applied to St Johns but the videos from this channel are still really helpful :3
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
That's great to know! We're all on the same team (St John's, Jesus etc). Just glad we can help.
@simontanios429
@simontanios429 3 жыл бұрын
thanks.
@nicolemusic2242
@nicolemusic2242 Жыл бұрын
Notes to self: 18:28 is a very helpful section. Come back to this as I keep redrafting. Another way to critically analyse is to identify the parallels and similarities etc
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Best of luck with it!
@nicolemusic2242
@nicolemusic2242 Жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! 🙂
@wgchnews23
@wgchnews23 2 жыл бұрын
This may be a silly question, but if referencing certain texts in a personal statement, should I include a works cited list? The more I research my program of interest at Oxford, the more I'm getting my heart set on attending. I really want to nail this personal statement! Thank you so much for the information in this video -- it is incredibly helpful!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
No, that’s not necessary and you probably won’t have space for it. Best of luck!
@Nic01a
@Nic01a 2 жыл бұрын
I'm so thankful for this material being published online.
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Excellent. Thank you for your kind remark!
@alananaughton9122
@alananaughton9122 3 жыл бұрын
Very very helpful
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Glad to hear that!
@JurineszShadrach
@JurineszShadrach 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this guide. Just wondering when applying for a Masters, do you have to also mention the area that you are going to research and if so, could we change it some time in the future?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
It's worth describing your research interests, yes. But you don't need to have a fully formed research design, and you're not forced to follow through on the proposal if your research plans change. This would only really apply to a research masters, rather than a taught masters.
@amandine8954
@amandine8954 2 жыл бұрын
being french when you want to study in the UK becomes hard when you have to write your personal statement. No one is able to help me so I thank you!!! My PS is way better now
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Great! Thank you for your comment. Best of luck to you
@coreyjohn2806
@coreyjohn2806 2 жыл бұрын
This has been incredibly helpful, thank you! I'm very close to submitting my personal statement and this has given me some great insight on what to add next. I'm applying for Politics and would love some feedback from a professional in the field, is there any chance I could email you a few questions? I understand how busy you must be but any input would be very appreciated! thanks :)
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
I can't right now, I'm afraid. But, if you follow the advice in the video you wouldn't need me to review your statement anyway. Best of luck to you!
@jesuslovesyou1
@jesuslovesyou1 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much :)
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@shreyagupta4493
@shreyagupta4493 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this video! It really was helpful. I had a question , i am applying for masters in healthcare management and finding it difficult to begin my personal statement , any tips on how to begin and what points to include in the first paragraph?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
I would usually open a personal statement at the beginning of your story. When did you realise that you wanted to pursue this Masters? Why did you realise that you wanted to pursue this Masters? You can use this as a way in to discussing your specific academic interests and your potential to be an outstanding student on the programme.
@faradaycool4058
@faradaycool4058 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for being so constructive despite being from the greatest Oxford Uni college
@ritiksinha5651
@ritiksinha5651 3 жыл бұрын
43 minutes well spent. Thanks
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
You're very kind! Good luck!
@sirisaksirisak6981
@sirisaksirisak6981 3 жыл бұрын
Essay rewrite easy, do the right thing, not like thing and do the thing right, not thing like.Do the good half of him, the rest do the best of your sure you pass, if not do next.Tips seeing is believing, touching is awaring.Good luck.
@jemimasani5766
@jemimasani5766 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this very informative piece. It was absolutely helpful. Please is there a way I can get my personal statement through to you to review. It'll be greatly appreciated
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Yes, that can work well. Just be sure to explain your academic interests in the topic and some relevant academic literature you have read to further your interest.
@iashsch_
@iashsch_ 3 жыл бұрын
Super useful🙌👍
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@maxwellsequation4887
@maxwellsequation4887 Жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot! I wrote my personal statement starting my fascination and curiosity about light and electromagnetism, went on to tell that my interest in EM motivated me to attend a bsc level online course hosted by iitk, and then what books I've read (on vector calculus for electromagnetism, and one on multivariable calculus). Then talking about what I'm looking forward to in university and my aspirations. Does that work?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Sounds good! Given these are your interests, that's ideal.
@miautznala
@miautznala 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! This has helped me to try to figure out a structure. Would you recommend your presentation also for post-grad admission?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Yes, for the most part. You just need to ensure a grad application places greater emphasis on specific research questions you wish to pursue (assuming you're applying for a research degree) with some discussion of the academic literature you may wish to contribute to. Thank you for your comment!
@miautznala
@miautznala 3 жыл бұрын
To be frank, I am applying for taught degrees because I do not know if I will be doing a PhD afterwards. I imagine connecting my personal research interest with the in the programme offered modules would not be wrong, too.
@GeeseAreJustBastardizedSwans
@GeeseAreJustBastardizedSwans 3 жыл бұрын
I have so many little interests that I move on from quickly I wouldnt know what to say about myself. I dont have any permanent hobbies other than volunteering and my work, I feel that sounds too try hard to put in a personal statement. I feel like I should just create a new hobby around my wanted degree. I feel the best thing to do is create a hobby around creating a portfolio of work in the area I want to apply to or something related to it. For interactive media ---> animation/art as well as video games?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
There's no harm in having lots of interests. It would be more of a problem to have so few interests that you don't know what to write about. You can create a hobby, or you could isolate which of your hobbies best confirms your hypotheses that a) you want to study your chosen degree, and b) you will perform exceptionally well on course. Best of luck.
@derrickreuben5681
@derrickreuben5681 3 жыл бұрын
Kicking an introduction with numerical data/statistics , is that a nice way to start your intro?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Can be. Depends on the stats and how you use them. Typically statistics are speaking to a population trend, whereas your personal statement is n=1 (i.e. just you!). So just take care that you clearly situate yourself in the personal statement, even if you use stats.
@xaviertoapanta9869
@xaviertoapanta9869 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you, so much! However, I was wondering what special advice could you give for writing postgraduate personal statements?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Not sure if you've seen this video, but it may help: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/q52qhK-WmKion2Q.html
@gia5824
@gia5824 3 жыл бұрын
I wish I came across this video before I submitted my personal statement 😔
@hamza-chaudhry
@hamza-chaudhry Жыл бұрын
9:10 But B also explicitly says "I am fascinated". 29:34 But that extra information won't tell you that their GP-shadowing placement was cancelled.
@hamza-chaudhry
@hamza-chaudhry Жыл бұрын
16:38 18:28 24:20 30:38 35:37 36:47 37:14 38:05 39:20 41:02
@emmajane6446
@emmajane6446 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this. I have watched plenty of your videos and feel slightly more confident in my personal statement! I would love to email you to ask you more about applying to Oxford for Law. Would this be okay? :)
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 2 жыл бұрын
Thanks for your message! I’m not the best person to ask about Law at Oxford to be honest. I think you’re best off contacting the law faculty. I wouldn’t want to give you bad advice!
@iwansherlock989
@iwansherlock989 3 жыл бұрын
Amazing video! Very helpful - now I finally know how to write a personal statement to a fine degree. Thanks1!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
Excellent! Thank you
@emmaayla5889
@emmaayla5889 3 жыл бұрын
Hello thank you for such an informative and helpful video! I was curious to know if Oxford looks for students that have substantial volunteer work, research experience, or extracurricular activites? Do students who have these activities on their resume have a better chance of getting accepted? Thank you!
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
No, you do not need to have work experience or substantial extracurricular experiences. We are quite narrowly focused on academic matters, so we value super curricular exploration of the subjects you're planning to study, but are less concerned by extracurricular activities he do without any academic motivation. The only moderate exception to this is with regards to medicine, where work experience relevant to the field is considered helpful, but again is not required. Of course, at the moment, few experiences in person are possible, but there are some online experiences you can pursue that may be of interest and use.
@avadevlin9316
@avadevlin9316 Жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for this video, it is amazing and so helpful! I'm an American student currently in the process of writing my statement, and I was wondering if you have any special advice for international students? Would it be helpful at all to mention why I'm interested in studying abroad?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for your comment. It's not really necessary to mention in a personal statement that you're interested in studying abroad. That will be clear from the fact that you're applying to study in the UK. You also do not need to explain or justify your reasons for wanting to study in the UK. We welcome international applications at universities like Oxford.
@avadevlin9316
@avadevlin9316 Жыл бұрын
@@JesusCollegeOxford1571 thank you so much, you and your content have been so helpful and encouraging!
@saharshjindal6448
@saharshjindal6448 2 жыл бұрын
Does this advice work for Postgraduate Study? Specifically, does it apply for MPhil courses at Oxford?
@LukasJSvedberg
@LukasJSvedberg 9 ай бұрын
Absolutely phenominal video. BTW I am just wondering if you are looking to study a maths related degree, should your structure change at all?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 9 ай бұрын
Thanks! It's helpful for any personal statement to have some structure - in the sense of linking the various paragraphs together so that there is a beginning, middle and end to what you're saying. There's no particular reason why a maths personal statement would need to be different to any other subjects from that perspective.
@saihanmarshall5287
@saihanmarshall5287 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for this! What do you mean by Substance and Methods? They seem to entail the studying that you’ll do at university, but surely you can’t write about that seeing as you’re meant to be writing about yourself?
@JesusCollegeOxford1571
@JesusCollegeOxford1571 3 жыл бұрын
This is just an idea as to what you can discuss about your interests. Most people focus on substantive matters, i.e. academic questions and answers (e.g. Why is Gold yellow?) But, you can also consider methodological matters, in other words how you go about asking questions and providing answers (e.g. what methods could we use to work out the reason for gold being yellow?)
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