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@@Srahas but only in Africa

Underated comment 😭😂

Thx!

I came straight to the comments to find this.

Noice. I was on the 2nd minute

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Heys guys im new to making short stories and I was wondering if anyone can view mine and just any comment, advice, question etc... Please and Thank you... As i died in full red there was black everything i see, It's was never ending like a galaxy but I could'nt talk nor think I'm just there. It felt like weeks in this darkness floating in motion there i was not knowing Death was like this and then for a split second like a intense flash i saw me. I was a baby in my moms, her joyful face and when i was done seeing that memory there was another one i was in, but there was no flash but it was me and my brother playing with our toys. And another with my parents fixing the scratch on my arm. Every moment i pass my conscious was growing, my moments with Papa to singing with my mom, to hugging my sister, to eating with my dad. And to the note that was in my room that i never seen before its from mom she left it for me. It was showed to me in my hands, it-it said... My shiny little moon You may not see who you truly are When your not even a far You choose to be like everyone else And you spit on being yourself I understand your problems You don't know how to solve them and you decide to give up when you didn't even try I have a secret to tell you your brightest one of all You may fall and stubble out of place but you'll always get up and charge From the moment i saw you i felt embrace in your soul With the smile you put up To the words you always told I love you my sunshine I love you to little moon Your the best of us my baby boy i see bright things for you for when i later pass remember Keeping going foward, your journey is not over Stand out from everyone else because i'll Always be by your shoulder Share your joy your so expressful my precious little boy With our last moments reaching near always dance through your tears And when your life is meant for two share your found fruit From every moment we went through i always enjoyed you From here on to the afterlife I'll always love you my shiny little moon Tear felt emotions ran through my face as i saw my mother in front of me with all mother's embrace. And now i wake up in a hospital room, i could see my siblings and my dad but i didn't know where my mom was. It felt cold and my head is throbbing so badly like i was in a...... car accident...

Omw sameee

jimochi. Same

OMGGG!!! yesss!!SAMEE

same thats why im here today i had 2 strange dreams where i wanted to know more lol.

Same, I feel like dreams make really interesting stories

Nah, We have a school project

im here for both those things

@@Cecilia-ni3fv ikr😭

no bro

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*Grabs beer only to immediately slam it down on the bar table* "I'll take that challenge!"

@@ZA-eq2rh *oblivion battle music starts to play* i'll make captain for this

Sooooo, did you hate them all?

You expect me to hold a beer for 30 days

.....

*sadly finger guns* 👉😥👉

Right

its not like that everytime @Nancy P

No, it isn't.

OMG you can read my mind

No-

Imagine getting it in your recommendations

lol

Bruh how you now

Gl

I didn’t win. :(

But my friend Jackson did!

@@melissacreel8102 awe Cg to ur friend!

I’ll tell him you said that!

omg yes this happens to me!

It happens to me all the time

Me too! It's interesting how the stories usually have an ending by the time I wake up and are rarely left hanging

So you have lucid dreams sometimes? Because lucid dreams can somewhat help you with creativity.

Yes happens to me too.

Write on your character " Yin" .

If you want a good plotting structure I’m a fan of Harlan’s story circle. It’s a pretty good template to get you started.

it's Michael from Vsauce right

I would read about that

Sounds like "Spree" with Joe Keery in it

This is one of the things i would read that out of curiosity and be sad when it ends lol.

I love psychological horror stories

I want to write a short story about SOCIAL DISTANCING due to coronavirus.

It's good

Hi can you send this often

Please tell me a short story topic my favorite room I need it today thanks

@Hot_cocoXyt me ti

Lifesaver

good luck

same but 40 mins with the title not given

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​@@asmiaryal3942you are a teenager?

it's easy. Like lying to the police. You're making up a story so you don't go to jail.

@@theultimatevillain8666 you are my hero

So glad that we can provide you with content to help you!

Yes, when I write a Nobel it takes days and I want to work on other things too so short ones are perfect.

Great to hear!!

What is the name of the book?

Heys guys im new to making short stories and I was wondering if anyone can view mine and just any comment, advice, question etc... Please and Thank you... As i died in full red there was black everything i see, It's was never ending like a galaxy but I could'nt talk nor think I'm just there. It felt like weeks in this darkness floating in motion there i was not knowing Death was like this and then for a split second like a intense flash i saw me. I was a baby in my moms, her joyful face and when i was done seeing that memory there was another one i was in, but there was no flash but it was me and my brother playing with our toys. And another with my parents fixing the scratch on my arm. Every moment i pass my conscious was growing, my moments with Papa to singing with my mom, to hugging my sister, to eating with my dad. And to the note that was in my room that i never seen before its from mom she left it for me. It was showed to me in my hands, it-it said... My shiny little moon You may not see who you truly are When your not even a far You choose to be like everyone else And you spit on being yourself I understand your problems You don't know how to solve them and you decide to give up when you didn't even try I have a secret to tell you your brightest one of all You may fall and stubble out of place but you'll always get up and charge From the moment i saw you i felt embrace in your soul With the smile you put up To the words you always told I love you my sunshine I love you to little moon Your the best of us my baby boy i see bright things for you for when i later pass remember Keeping going foward, your journey is not over Stand out from everyone else because i'll Always be by your shoulder Share your joy your so expressful my precious little boy With our last moments reaching near always dance through your tears And when your life is meant for two share your found fruit From every moment we went through i always enjoyed you From here on to the afterlife I'll always love you my shiny little moon Tear felt emotions ran through my face as i saw my mother in front of me with all mother's embrace. And now i wake up in a hospital room, i could see my siblings and my dad but i didn't know where my mom was. It felt cold and my head is throbbing so badly like i was in a...... car accident...

Heck yea! Fellow anime hooman ^^

Hello fellow weebs

@@dog3011 henlo ^^

lol didn't expect some weebs here also *weeb gang*

@@goemonishikawaxiii aye weeb gangs assemble

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That is so great! I am glad you found this helpful.

Exactly! There are so many examples of powerful, life-long lessons within short stories.

@@selfpublishingcom writing good story is best and we have to write with good handwriting is also important is am right

On yah

Hello,have you published any of your short stories?I would definitely love to read them.

Kindly change your username I love Kobe Bryant too much

Kaushal Negi 90 days thank’s to KZfaq:(

@@KaushalNegi3226 What is wrong with her username? 😗

@@RotiSkine She changed it

@@KaushalNegi3226 Is it ok for me to ask what it was before? If not, I respect that

Me too suddenly feeling passionate about writing . Btw where are you from and what apps you are writing in ?

@@tasfiyasharif1399 I use Ms word who doesn't plz tell me app of there is a better one

Would you mind sending me some of your stories to read and for inspiration:)

Same😅

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WHY ARE YOU SCREAMING AT ME CHILL OUT

Cuz that's always my reaction, like: WHAT!? Just from the beginning or the summary: That's also why I have the urge to read every angst oneshots or fanfics, even if the endings are angst as well because I always WANT to know yet what happens and if it can make me cry or if WHY it's an angst ending. And the beginning makes me cry already, because knowing that I'm gonna cry makes me cry, because of the reason, and illtthink fo a thousand possibilities and that makes me even sadder.

Glad it’s helpful :)

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The philosopher Thank you!

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We've got over 300 for you here: self-publishingschool.com/story-ideas/ :)

Thanks Michael! When are you writing one? ;)

Heys guys im new to making short stories and I was wondering if anyone can view mine and just any comment, advice, question etc... Please and Thank you... As i died in full red there was black everything i see, It's was never ending like a galaxy but I could'nt talk nor think I'm just there. It felt like weeks in this darkness floating in motion there i was not knowing Death was like this and then for a split second like a intense flash i saw me. I was a baby in my moms, her joyful face and when i was done seeing that memory there was another one i was in, but there was no flash but it was me and my brother playing with our toys. And another with my parents fixing the scratch on my arm. Every moment i pass my conscious was growing, my moments with Papa to singing with my mom, to hugging my sister, to eating with my dad. And to the note that was in my room that i never seen before its from mom she left it for me. It was showed to me in my hands, it-it said... My shiny little moon You may not see who you truly are When your not even a far You choose to be like everyone else And you spit on being yourself I understand your problems You don't know how to solve them and you decide to give up when you didn't even try I have a secret to tell you your brightest one of all You may fall and stubble out of place but you'll always get up and charge From the moment i saw you i felt embrace in your soul With the smile you put up To the words you always told I love you my sunshine I love you to little moon Your the best of us my baby boy i see bright things for you for when i later pass remember Keeping going foward, your journey is not over Stand out from everyone else because i'll Always be by your shoulder Share your joy your so expressful my precious little boy With our last moments reaching near always dance through your tears And when your life is meant for two share your found fruit From every moment we went through i always enjoyed you From here on to the afterlife I'll always love you my shiny little moon Tear felt emotions ran through my face as i saw my mother in front of me with all mother's embrace. And now i wake up in a hospital room, i could see my siblings and my dad but i didn't know where my mom was. It felt cold and my head is throbbing so badly like i was in a...... car accident...

@Dhanush Sridhar It went okay, thank you for asking.

Then you are following the right channel, lots of great content here!

I feel you

Good luck! Let us know how it goes :)

Meeeee

But I am still having a hard time :(

Meee

@@ambersage3205 me too! : (

goodluck❤

Noice. What title?

Are you finished with it?

So you're going to write one a day? ;)

write.