❄️ Welcome to the comments section ❄️ ☁️Timestamps☁️ 0:00 Intro 0:43 Programs 1:06 Set A and B 2:00 Locations 2:33 Dialogue 2:48 Watch me write 5:44 Style 6:17 Writing is Art 6:36 Outro And oof, can we please just ignore how long I was talking about punctuation?? I know you all don't care about it at all, I'm just a HUGE grammar nerd - especially in English since learning a second language requires a lot of grammar studying. And yes, I will not shut up about it and I will never forget to mention it! English is my second language. Nobody cares, I know! Haha, I enjoyed writing that way too much. Who knew commenting on your own videos was so relaxing?✨

*_Wow, I’m featured an a famous Gacha Tuber’s tutorial!_*

Everyone: following the tutorial Me: jamming in the background music

*i, an intellectual, uses Microsoft word*

Although I’m in the middle of writing my script, I’ll still watch the video and use these tips 😏

I’m about a week late but I have a tip- When a character moves/does a specific action you should write the movement in _italics_ or *bold* (I use italics) Example: Person A: You’re so needy and pathetic. I’m way better than you. Person B: And what do you have that I don’t? Person A: Looks, Popularity, Parents who aren’t dead. _Person B slaps Person A_ Person B: Don’t you DARE talk about my parents like that ever again. (Sorry if it’s bad, it’s all I could think of -w-)

This is how l write a "script":Have a day dream about an original ldea and then go to gacha life and say... Wait a sec what was it about again. But thank you for the tips....to be honest l didn't know you had to write it first bc lm still a beginner 💞😅😑

I write the scripts in my head- (that's why my stories sucks-)

this was so relaxing to watch and i don’t know why

Just saying, you should’ve said don’t write at night. Personally, whenever I write a script at 3AM it turns out cringey and with bad grammar. If I wrote it at 3PM it would make sense and have good grammar. Then again, I commented this at 3AM.

Hamilton has done this to me. Whenever I hear the name Eliza, my brain just starts singing: I know my sister like I know my own mind You will never find anyone as trusting or as kind And a million years ago she said to me 'this one's mine' So I stood by Do you know why? I love my sister more than anything in this life I will choose her happiness over mine every time *ELIZAAAAA*

wait like i actually needed this

Friend: Do you know ElizaLotion Me: *Is she selling lotion products.*

Me after just watching Hamilton and looking at the script she made in the desc: WhY dO yoU tyPe LiKe yoUr rUnnIng oUttA tIme?!?

Best Lotion brands ever.

I've deleted atleast 5 whole GLMM's & still can't think of one. So I'm glad I found this 😌👑

This is so helpful! You’re great at explaining, and this helped me with some ideas for my own mini movie! Thank you for all the tips, Eliza! Have a lovely day/night, and see you on the next post! 🌸🐝✨

Me, trying to sleep at three am: *gets a good idea* _grabs phone to write idea_ *writes* Me: right it looks good, perfect grammar! Me at 10am the next day: huh? Tf did I write?

"Try to avoid info dumps." Me : *nervously sweating*

"Try to avoid infodumping" Logan and Remus: *unfuse in background * Awww, dangit.

Eliza: where does one write docs? Me: oh- I just write them as I go...... is that not allowed.....?

I love how your character’s facial expressions aren’t extra, you have great tips (these also apply to acting too, when making a script! I guess I know this because I’m a theatre kid.) I love your character design, you have great grammar, no bright colors, and overall, you’re a great Gachatuber. It’s very nice to see the community become way more mature! I might come back to the community. c:

I have been looking for a video like this for months!! It was super helpful and exactly what I was looking for! :D

Thank you for this video! I already know how to write scripts, but this is helpful since I get to learn even more things about writing scripts and to improve them!

This was so helpful, as I’m about to start a new GLS

when i first saw the title I was like: ''gASp'' I nEEd tHiS'' Because I'm working on a GLMM r and I don't have any more ideas or what my oc has to say next oop- btw, Thank you so much!

Thank you so much for the tips!

Wow I didnt know you had yo put this much detail into the scripts, I have just been thinking of scripts then using them! Thanks for the tips!!

I’m on my phone- I don’t have a computer to use for google docs (other than my school one) so I use the notes app qwq

Thanks for helping me with dis ;)

I decided to write down all the tips in this video (took a while) and now i am going to use them when ever I will make a GLMM or a GLS. So, thank you so much these will help me so much!

I remember a few months ago when I read the script in the desc, and it's always been on docs for me cuz I just never delete it! Watching this like 4 months later I think realizing I finally found the creator!

I have a really original glmm idea ;w; im working on it rn and i hope it will go viral

I just thought of a coffee shop story but its in the middle of the night.

Found your channel yesterday night and watched "My Own Story" and loved it! I really hope you gain more subs!

Thank you for this. These kind if original tutorials are very rare to find

*when you’re that one person that doesn’t write a script and just make your video as you go and you end up watching this* ;-;

ElizaLotion: And It's good for phone users if you don't have a PC Me: *you know that it's CANCER when you write a script on your phone*

Wow! Thank you, I’ve been looking for a video on tips for writing a script, for a while now. This really helps!

This is in my tutorial playlist now. Its amazing, like I love literature too, and I completely understand how you simply can't stop the grammar lecture; even I, while writing stories, write a bit too much and not- needed content. So congratulations, my Arts teacher, you get a sub.

Other gacha tubers: *Having scripts* Me: NaW nO sCrIpT sAlLy I jUsT gO oFf a wIm aNd cHoOsE wHaT tHeY gOnNa sAy aS tHe sCeNe iS hApPeNiNg

**sending this to my friend writing a script for me on repeat**

im watching every how to write a good script so i can get better at them 🤩 plus sometimes my school just gives me homework to write a script or a story and i always need help with those

omagad u teach me more about scripts than the school/teachers does :O u actually desserve way more likes!

I, the biggest noob, use notes. ah yes, n o t e s.

you probably won’t see this, but how many words is a script of yours for an over 20 minute glmm/gcmm?

So glad this popped up in my recomended :D its really helpful since im planning to make a mini movie when summer break starts!

Though I have a school computer and I'm subbed there, I still watch this video MILLIONS of times to get my movies right. I had to cancel one because of how KineMaster was lagging and deleting my screenshots on my video project. And I finally gave up and started working on more videos, BUT I am still working on the script! Thanks for making this clear with examples.

Is this a good story?: Mean Hybrid Aliens Nerdy Babysitter DINO SARA TENKO is arguing with Weird Life Guard HOTTY JASON DANTé. SARA tries to hug JASON but he shakes her off. SARA Please Jason, don't leave me. JASON I'm sorry Sara, but I'm looking for somebody a bit more brave. Somebody who faces her fears head on, instead of running away. SARA I am such a person! JASON frowns. JASON I'm sorry, Sara. I just don't feel excited by this relationship anymore. JASON leaves. SARA sits down, looking defeated. Moments later, Cute Librarian CAT SKYE PANERA barges in looking flustered. SARA Goodness, Skye! Is everything okay? SKYE I'm afraid not. SARA What is it? Don't keep me in suspense... SKYE It's ... a Hybrid Alien ... I saw an evil Hybrid Alien Hypnotize a bunch of Nurses! SARA Defenseless Nurses? SKYE Yes, defenseless Nurses! SARA Bloomin' heck, Skye! We've got to do something. SKYE I agree, but I wouldn't know where to start. SARA You can start by telling me where this happened. SKYE I was... SKYE fans herself and begins to wheeze. SARA Focus Skye, focus! Where did it happen? SKYE LA! That's right - LA! SARA springs up and begins to run. SARA rushes along the street, followed by SKYE. They take a short cut through some back gardens, jumping fences along the way. SARA, closely followed by SKYE, rushes towards PETER, but suddenly stops in her tracks. SKYE What is it? What's the matter? SARA That's not just any old Hybrid Alien, that's Peter Stevenson! SKYE Who's Peter Stevenson? SARA Who's Peter Stevenson? Who's Peter Stevenson? Only the most Mean Hybrid Aliens in the universe! SKYE Blinkin' knickers, Sara! We're going to need some help if we're going to stop the most Mean Hybrid Aliens in the universe! SARA I'm going to need a Gun, lots of Guns. Peter turns and sees Sara and Skye. He grins an evil grin. PETER Sara Tenko, we meet again. SKYE You've met? SARA Yes. It was a long, long time ago... BACK IN TIME A young SARA is sitting in a park listening to some Pop music, when suddenly a dark shadow casts over her. She looks up and sees PETER. She takes off her headphones. PETER Would you like some Fruit Roll Ups? SARA I don't know, you look kind of Mean. PETER Me? No. I'm not Mean. I'm the least Mean Hybrid Alien in the world! SARA Wait, you're a Hybrid Alien? SARA runs away, screaming. PRESENT DAY PETER You were a coward then, and you are a coward now. SKYE (To SARA) You ran away? SARA (To SKYE) I was a young child. What was I supposed to do? SARA turns to PETER. SARA I may have run away from you then, but I won't run away this time! SARA runs away. She turns back and shouts. SARA I mean, I am running away, but I'll be back - with a Gun. PETER I'm not scared of you. SARA You should be. LATER THAT DAY SARA I feel sure I left my Gun somewhere around here. SKYE Are you sure? It does seem like an odd place to keep deadly Guns.. SARA You know nothing Skye Panera. SKYE We've been searching for ages. I really don't think they're here. Suddenly, PETER appears, holding a pair of Guns. PETER Looking for something? SKYE Crikey, Sara, he's got your Guns! SARA Tell me something I don't already know! SKYE The earth's circumference at the equator is about 40,075 km. SARA I know that already! SKYE You’re afraid of your powers. PETER (appalled) Dude! While PETER is looking at SKYE with disgust, SARA lunges forward and grabs her deadly Gun. She wields them, triumphantly. SARA Prepare to die, you Mean Celery! PETER No please! All I did was Hypnotize a bunch of Nurses! JASON enters, unseen by any of the others. SARA I cannot tolerate that kind of behaviour! Those Nurses were defenceless! Well now they have a defender - and that's me! Sara Tenko defender of innocent Nurses. PETER Don't hurt me! Please! SARA Give me one good reason why I shouldn't use these Gun on you right away! PETER Because Sara, I am your father. SARA looks stunned for a few moments, but then collects herself. SARA No you're not! PETER Ah well, it had to be worth a try. PETER tries to grab the Gun but SARA dodges out of the way. SARA Who's the daddy now? Huh? Huh? SKYE Did he just faint? SARA I think so. Well that's disappointing. I was rather hoping for a more dramatic conclusion, involving my deadly Gun. SARA crouches over PETER's body. SKYE Be careful, Sara. It could be a trick. SARA No, it's not a trick. It appears that... It would seem... Peter Stevenson is dead! SARA What? SARA Yes, it appears that I scared him to death. SKYE claps her hands. SKYE So your Gun did save the day, after all. JASON Is it true? Did you kill the Hybrid Alien? SARA Jason how long have you been here...? JASON Long enough. SARA Then you saw it for yourself. I killed Peter Stevenson. JASON Then the Nurses are safe? SARA It does seem that way! A crowd of vulnerable Nurses enter, looking relived. JASON You are their hero. The Nurses bow to SARA. SARA There is no need to bow to me. I seek no worship. The knowledge that Peter Stevenson will never Hypnotize Nurses ever again, is enough for me. JASON You are humble as well as brave! One of the Nurses passes SARA a Possessed Jewel JASON I think they want you to have it, as a symbol of their gratitude. SARA I couldn't possibly.. well, if you insist..! SARA takes the Jewel. SARA Thank you. The Nurses bow their heads once more, and leave. SARA Does this mean you want me back? JASON Oh, Sara, of course I want you back! SARA Well you can't have me. JASON WHAT? SARA You had no faith in me. You had to see my scare a Hybrid Aliens to death before you would believe in me. I don't want a boyfriend like that. JASON But... SARA Please leave. I want to spend time with the one person who stayed with me through thick and thin - my best friend, Skye. JASON But... SKYE You heard the lady. Now be off with you. Skidaddle! Shoo! JASON Sara? SARA I'm sorry Jason, but I think you should skidaddle. SKYE Did you mean that? You know ... that I'm your best friend? SARA Of course you are! SKYE By the way, When I said You’re afraid of your powers, you know I was just trying to distract the Hybrid Alien don't you? THE END

is notes on your phone good for this?

Same! I couldn't find any videos explaining this topic I really needed it thank you :)

Thank you for making this! I always struggle with writing scripts and this really helps! :>

Is it just me or I’m to lazy to write the script? Eeee ;-;

OMG thank ALOT Btw im just a beginner in gacha

Finally a gacha tuber who writes scripts most gacha tubers just think of a story and the start taking screenshots right away this is excatly why you make the best stories! :)

As a writer, I often turn my short stories into extended mini movies. It helps me finish my story, and also gives me a glmm idea! :D

I loved your GLMM “Another Me” and I’m here seeing what amazing content you have! Definitely underrated! 1+ subbie to you qwq

Tysm for making this video! :D I'm thinking of making a series and I need as many tips as I can get because I need to write a really good script 😂💕👏🏻

Thanks! I am working on different parts of a story, it has to do with horror, and ofc horror has a problem and solution! :D

I love how you described the situation on how to do this and how to do that it was flawless 😌😌😌❤️

Thanks for this video!I was searching videos like this last week but gave cuz I couldn't find one... I'm glad to see this pop up in my recommendations 😊

Omg, this was so helpful! Me as a writer will find this tutorial really helpful. Thank you SO MUCH! Love you!

Omg TYSM this is going to help so much I’m trying to make a series right now and I need to write a script and I didn’t know where to start until now thank you again 💖✨💫 your a life saver 😊💖✨💫

Yay! I’ve been waiting for this!

I read the script for "My Own Story" and it was really amazing! The story is great and you can see all the thought and effort that was put into it. :)

I didn’t know someone so famous would take the time to be helpful thank you! 💖💖💖💖💖💖

i was going to give up on the story i was writing but this gave me more motivation thank you so much^^

This was the most helpful video on tips and scripts yet!

oh gosh... THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm making a voice acted series and this helped so much! I've improved writing my script and it looked and sounded better than before♡

Congrats on your channel I hope you get even bigger and I would like and comment more but I've been so busy so good luck!❤️

Im making a series, and this really help me. Its easy to understand than any other tutorial and thank you so much for making these!😊

This is a real great tutorial on how to start your own story.I've been having troubling writing a story but after watching your video,I kind about some inspiration.Thank you✨♥️

I am very inspired by your wonderful tips, and I feel like writing a script out right now! 😊

Wow!! This was amazing! It helped so much so tysm! Your so underrated l!! ✨❤️

U just earned a sub- ur so underrated! Thanks you for the helpful tips!!

This really helps me a lot. I was planning to do a glmm and i somehow saw this. So i watch it it really helps me a lot ! Its so helpful for gachatuber's like me. Im so thankful you made a tutorial about it. I really appreciate it!

This is perfect for the series that I am redoing for my channel. Thanks for the advice!!

thank you for setting an example for some things because I'm not really good at remembering things with texts so it was useful that you showed it to us :) keep it up I love your videos :)

This is so useful for what I want to work on which is a funny series like thing that I'm voice acting all by myself! I have so many ideas in mind and hopefully I can stick to about 2 key ideas for the first episode but I know that it will turn out amazing ^^

Wow that was really helpful! Thanks a bunch. This whole time I've been thinking of stories but I don't even know how to script them. Now I can finally get serious into my story and script it! Once again, thank you. ^w^

I'm really glad someone made on of these

The amount of detail you put into it made it easier for me to understand! Thank you!;)

Finally, someone made a tutorial! Thank you so much. I struggle with making a series and I can't write great scripts because I've never done much. Let's hope my series and GLMM's look better now! 😊😄💫✨

Than for making this I’ve been looking for won like this for hours ^^

Thank you!! Even while watching this i had a bunch of ideas for plot, and i was struggling with that! :)

This was extremely helpful and I think you should make a part two with a few more tips! Thank you for the help and info.

This helped me so much, I am currently making a gcmm and I was just confused on what to do, thank you so much for this video!!

Thank you so much!! I've always had trouble with this and always have tried to find a tutorial for it! Finally someone who's made one ^-^

Thank you, your videos help me a lot! I wanna try making a GLMM or series, and your videos are the ones that helped me the most with getting ideas!

Aaaaaa I remember watching this a few months back, from where I was starting my first GCMM and I must say, I’m not sure if it could’ve been any better without watching this video. SCRIPTS ARE VERY IMPORTANT

This helped me SO MUCH! Thanks for helping us!

Thanks for the tips! I may use them for my voice acting scripts I'm making

These rips are amazing literly I'm bored at midnight on my phone sees this magical tip I'm doing scripts now!! 💕💕 This is a great tutorial!

thank you so much for this! i was planning on making a mini movie but I have never made one before. So I searched up 'hiw to create scripts for gacha' and I found this. Nothing coukd help more then this!

you're super good at writing!

Was this a script :P! Thank you I was needing this.

I was gonna make a video like this but you definitely did it better than i ever would haha. I love writing. Ive wrote atleast 100 stories but never published any bc i was young. This was a great video keep up the good work!! 💕💕💕💕

Thank you, I looked at the script hopefully now I can come up with my own style

it is a really good tutorial but for my glmm and gls i just go with what comes to mind that is how i get most of my inspiration, and for voice acted things scripts do have a different format, but you did give me a great idea to do a voice acting script tutorial!!! it is similar but does have a different format!

Dude this is so helpful I didn’t use it for a glmm or Gcmm I used it for my comic this is so helpful outside of the Gacha community