@DylanLaine 4 жыл бұрын
Download the Song Sheet here! www.patreon.com/dylanlaine
@chloethomson2050 4 жыл бұрын
About true love then the nex one boyfriend and girlfriend one please thanks
@somethingelse4898 4 жыл бұрын
@@chloethomson2050 She's not gonna write your songs for you,do it yourself
@avery3766 5 жыл бұрын
Do you ever just like randomly wanna write a song at like 3am knowing you can’t to save your life
@jjgurl1088 4 жыл бұрын
Doing it rn lmfao 😂
@eliastta437 4 жыл бұрын
Its 3:46 AM and yes.
@anime_l0ver819 4 жыл бұрын
I’m writing a song about coronavirus but the background music is gonna be the songsweet Carolina
@milanl9314 4 жыл бұрын
Thicc lazar lemme know when ur done 😳
@chxrri6830 4 жыл бұрын
Avery lol I’m trying to write a song and it’s 2:45 am oop-
@almaha7244 6 жыл бұрын
If this gets 20 likes I'm gonna make and post an original song;))
@brianandrew7265 5 жыл бұрын
This is glorious, I been tryin to find out about "writing my own song" for a while now, and I think this has helped. Ever heard of - Honora Xenndrew Magic - (search on google ) ? Ive heard some interesting things about it and my m8 got amazing success with it.
@pineapple038 6 жыл бұрын
Song title: joy As I see the pillow that says joy in the background
@miloxzxz 4 жыл бұрын
I noticed that and came down to see if anyone else had seen it 😂
@slurpyrukay2842 4 жыл бұрын
Same here
@theaterkid7313 4 жыл бұрын
@@miloxzxz LOL, so did I
@elliegu274 3 жыл бұрын
Same
@backspotqueen7404 3 жыл бұрын
same i was about to say that then i seen this lol
@ceillasayed7710 4 жыл бұрын
What my song is about 100% depression 100%sad 100%drama 1000000000 %has a dying horse voice
@pragyasingh8628 4 жыл бұрын
And quarantine has me thinking I'll be able to be a song writer.
@JR-fm8tx 3 жыл бұрын
Then did u write any song?
@starlasymphony276 5 жыл бұрын
I'll write about how life is hard the ups and downs,how life has hapiness,sadness,and more. I got this idea beacuse how im fithing my cancer how there ups and downs......ill call it Ribons in life. THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS VID
@CristinaNicole121 4 жыл бұрын
Thats like the best tittle ive heard
@CristinaNicole121 4 жыл бұрын
Hope you feel beeter
@aleena158 4 жыл бұрын
If u r done with the song, could u share it on ur channel? I'd love to hear it
@akiratortilla1588 4 жыл бұрын
Wow I’d love to hear that song
@samarlawati9910 4 жыл бұрын
Amazing song title🥺 I hope you feel better💞
@chelseabrown1044 5 жыл бұрын
you’re such a wholesome person omg😤❤️ this was really helpful
@DylanLaine 5 жыл бұрын
Aw thanks, Chelsea! :-D
@altheaschannel6193 4 жыл бұрын
Its so hardddddd to makeeee grrrrr....😤
@myself7086 4 жыл бұрын
i’m growing so fast and i always thought you’d be there but you left so quickly left my heart in despair my tears keep falling like the rain from the clouds and i just need you around you were the only thing that was keeping me together you were my other half my missing piece this is a unfinished song that i just started writing and idk if its good or not if you have feedback please reply to this comment with it!! 💗
@itzelmontiel6736 4 жыл бұрын
ITS SO GOOD!!!!
@yara4220 4 жыл бұрын
It’s awesome! You got this! Keep going!
@pueofranz5225 4 жыл бұрын
awsome
@thegamers4875 3 жыл бұрын
It's good really
@teaganrosemusic2392 3 жыл бұрын
This is really good so far!!!!!!! Have you finished it yet???
@sugarfreeskull3008 6 жыл бұрын
The pillow says “joy” like your song!
@shilpichristierabha7642 6 жыл бұрын
the lyrics is the main problem for me. your guidance is really helping me alot.. thanks Dylan ^^
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Hi Christie! I am so glad to hear that my guidance is helping you out with lyrics! They can definitely be tough to write, but there will ALWAYS be a breakthrough as long as you keep pushing yourself. Keep up the awesome work! :)
@alishajhurry1022 5 жыл бұрын
You literally saved my life! I have to submit a song tomorrow for an audition in my country, and without your precious help, I wouldn't have completed this song on time! I want to become a successful singer and you just flicked me to 'motivated' mode xD I love your videos so much and you deserve so much more! Once again, thanks!
@lilahgene6008 6 жыл бұрын
I needed this so bad you are a life saver, Dylan!!! I’m thinking of writing a little musical because I love writing and singing. I play piano fluently so your videos really help with piano. And I think I will get into playing guitar so your videos will come in handy😁😁 thank you so much for making amazing videos for all of us!!❤️❤️
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Aww you are so welcome!! And that would be awesome if you wrote a little musical - it seems like a perfect way to combine many skills! ❤️
@taetae2028 5 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Hi friends! Here are some other helpful videos you might like to watch after this one: ✨My Lyric Writing Process: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/oeBkdKqp27bGcqc.html ✨25 Song Lyrics Writing Ideas: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/l6ynnZiT3LeoqWQ.html ✨What’s A Melody, Lyrics, & Rhythm?: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/ptyipbSCsMfVY5c.html ✨What Is A Song Form: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/pbt6iK2m0LaZgWg.html ✨What Is A Rhyme Scheme?: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/qduIetWrvamyqok.html ✨How To Find Rhymes: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/mqmWhragnb2Ud2g.html Happy songwriting! :) :) :)
@delirisambas1701 6 жыл бұрын
Love u
@kennethmerrill895 6 жыл бұрын
Thank you for a lovely and very helpful lesson. Just a note on you example song. I found the first half most poignant and beautiful, the more soulful and slightly melancholy verses. Then you went into a musical happy face, and it through me out of the bitter sweet emotions the first part elicited into a slightly too sugary state that felt too incongruence. I totally get what you were after; I'm just saying that -- for me, and just for what it's worth-- the early part was tapping into something exquisite and true and beautifully bittersweet, far more than the later leap into Disney style joy. Sometimes we need more time with our bittersweet feelings before we are told "now snap out of that; time to be very happy!" It's healing to sometimes BE in bittersweet mode. I've taken this time--and risked the normal resentment my comment might elicit--because your song--the early verses-- stunned me with its sad beauty. You were really on to something. Do you like Aimee Mann's songs? Ken
@user-gq4nz1ce7h 5 жыл бұрын
@@delirisambas1701 awesome teaching appreciate you baby😘
@prudencerichards3491 4 жыл бұрын
Can u help me write a song
@prudencerichards3491 4 жыл бұрын
Can u help me write a song
@jimmbear3998 26 күн бұрын
I find the best song lyrics come organically for me without overthinking.
@nandinikumar5185 3 жыл бұрын
Well I wrote a song about heartbreaks even though I've never been in a relationship 😅 The song's name is "tears that fell" 1st verse: When I go outside it reminds me of our moments Under that tree we used to be All those flowers you used to buy for me 2nd verse: When I look at the moon it reminds me how you said that you would be my sun You promised me how we would have our own family But you broke our promises sayin that they are meant to be broken Chorus: But did you even think about me once Why can't you just listen to your heart Now you call me a crybaby but weren't you the reason of my tears that fell This is incomplete right now I would be very grateful if anyone can give me feedbacks then I would continue with making the whole song. Well I'm just making a song as a hobby otherwise I wanna be a doctor😅
@beauxhodges 2 жыл бұрын
awesome!
@sabahfathima9259 2 жыл бұрын
Same here I wanna become a doctor but BTS has inspired me so i thought of writing a song...
@ahtishammehmood5238 2 жыл бұрын
@@sabahfathima9259 same here 😁😍😍
@jenniferzabala264 4 жыл бұрын
My dream is to become a famous singer when I'm older. But...I didn't wanna wait anymore, so I decided to start with writing a song then play it on my channel. (Mai Sal Tik) And I came across this video. Love it!💓😍
@DylanLaine 4 жыл бұрын
Awesome! Have fun!
@dahamlijanmapathra7808 4 жыл бұрын
Same
@dahamlijanmapathra7808 4 жыл бұрын
But it's not easy.we can try our best.....
@niecyfairbanks5163 4 жыл бұрын
Can you help me with a song
@655bebeusgdbeueb4jdu 3 жыл бұрын
Same
@Thejoyfulbunch 3 жыл бұрын
I’m writing songs for a musical project The musical is based off animaniacs, and I really needed these lyric tips
@taliosmusic8646 6 жыл бұрын
Yay! I'm going to write lyrics right now. \\m//
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Yay!! That's awesome!! Let me know how it goes :-)
@JTKing7174 3 жыл бұрын
Lemme guess, your a singer now?
@ELIZA-rj3ki 3 жыл бұрын
@@JTKing7174 r u hating?
@JTKing7174 3 жыл бұрын
@@ELIZA-rj3ki no lol, poor choice of words
@655bebeusgdbeueb4jdu 3 жыл бұрын
My biggest problem : I love songs and stories.....I am a author and a songwriter. Managing time is the harderst thing as I am in school.
@655bebeusgdbeueb4jdu 3 жыл бұрын
@Angelica Valentin wow
@655bebeusgdbeueb4jdu 3 жыл бұрын
@Angelica Valentin when I say this to people, they r usually like "it's not that hard" or something like that which gets on my nerves
@redacted8913 3 жыл бұрын
The chorus of my song “You There Buddyboy?” about me and my best friend: Hey man I just wanna talk. Can’t you please pick up the phone? I wanna talk to you about everything that’s happened so far. Are you there buddyboy? C’mon please can’t you respond? Are you even there anymore? Have you left this mortal realm? Or are you just eating dinner? Are you there buddyboy?
@xoxoluvchipchipcheerio7390 3 жыл бұрын
oooo I love it😻😻
@GriffyWhiffy 3 жыл бұрын
Do you have a melody for this or can I put music and a melody to it?
@redacted8913 3 жыл бұрын
@@GriffyWhiffy Yes, I have a melody. However, the melody isn’t the greatest, so feel free to do that! If you want to make it into a full song, I’ll tell you the story behind it.
@tinkubaruah8356 3 жыл бұрын
You want to be like bts and blackpink plz tell me
@kimyuna3166 3 жыл бұрын
I just write my own rap I also don't know how I did this it's good and now I want to write my own song this video help a lot.. Thank you so much sis 😊😊
@Chee.Y4ng 4 жыл бұрын
Honestly I just write down whatever comes in mind. But my lyrics rhymes. But my lyrics are always talking about different things. Thank god I watched this video
@pammcreynolds 6 жыл бұрын
Love your teaching of How To Write Lyrics For A Song! I'm thrilled to have found your KZfaq Channel!!!
@signetulupan 3 жыл бұрын
I watched your video years ago, writing a song in one hour...wrote some songs...choruses and verses....they only had two verses....this exemplifies! Thank u, so much, dear....been looking for this! Very hard to find! You are a gem 💎, a treasure....OH!? A song!
@pueofranz5225 4 жыл бұрын
that was the best song writing advice i have ever heard!
@arabellapie3957 4 жыл бұрын
This video was really helpful. I had to write a song for school and you just BLEW MY MIND!!! This is absolutely fantastic!!
@shirinmore1084 4 жыл бұрын
wow Dylan Laine you really know how to write songs!!!
@RuskiRomeo 6 жыл бұрын
I have NO idea for lyrics and title
@emmalynn9013 6 жыл бұрын
Sniper_Taco mood bro mood
@hunimuniful 6 жыл бұрын
you can use some word generators, it can be useful
@LukePiala 6 жыл бұрын
You can write a song called : Empty or No ideas on the topic that you dont have any ideas. Does it help? :)
@niqalina 4 жыл бұрын
SAME
@annareid9687 3 жыл бұрын
me too
@gtuu987 4 жыл бұрын
I already love this video and it's only been 17 seconds
@annareid9687 3 жыл бұрын
same she has a pretty voice! and I believe people can write a song!!!!!!!!!!!
@faeraindrops 5 жыл бұрын
this helped me quite a bit. i found some beats that i’ve been trying to figure out what to write over and this helped so much
@awesomeunicorn1838 5 жыл бұрын
Dude this helped so much with my song writing. I'm writing my first song now and it's called "Silence before I go". Thank you soooooo much!
@danielwatts845 3 жыл бұрын
Thank You So Much!!! I am a student at the University of Utah and I am majoring in music composition. I have been writing instrumental songs since high school but I have never been able to write lyrics I try to write them and they just come out bad or just really cheesy. But this video of yours is the kick I needed to understand how to write lyrics. So again Thank you. 😁
@umarustrings 6 жыл бұрын
Yesssss! I’m a music first person so the lyrics are the hardest thing for me to write. Thank you.
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
I know it can be so tough to write lyrics sometimes whenever the music comes first! I've definitely had plenty of moments like that as well. There's no right or wrong, it's just that different things work better for different people, you know? Hey, at least you're coming up with music ideas that you enjoy! I hope this video helps out with the lyrics writing aspect :-)
@themoonwalker8800 6 жыл бұрын
If I want to right a song I only need the melody And hee hee hoo hoo Aaow Shuckatucka! *JK*
@yuzzi9190 4 жыл бұрын
hee hee
@bruusjjauauqjqiaiajw 3 жыл бұрын
Tysm ur a life saver. I worte 14 songs and im thinking of relasing an "album" called storyline :)
@maleeshanuwanthika9708 3 жыл бұрын
Im 10 I finally got to write and sing a song and this really helped
@saffp8685 3 жыл бұрын
I’m writing a song called What she did it’s about a toxic ex, I’ll edit this and update you guys :) Edit: it didn’t go to plan, I’m going to try writing about something else
@adamfazbear1597 6 жыл бұрын
I am trying to write a love song for my Ex-girlfriend and. I know I am 13 and too young but I want information from you cause your the best person that teaches people about music and singing
@we_are_nevertheless7305 6 жыл бұрын
Adam Fazbear well what kind of music you listen to? And do you play an instrument? Also don’t let someone tell you your “too young” to understand concepts like that in life. You may not fully understand because experience but hey no one should look at a number to tell you your intellect and feeling. But I’d recommend picking your feeling whether it be anger or sadness or a mixture or whatever the case may be and try to title it. And then begin writing. Songwriting is something that gets better over time bough
@adamfazbear1597 6 жыл бұрын
TheConTraDemOn thanks and no I used to but I don't play an instrument because there were instruments I don't want to play except the guitar and I am a talented singer wanting to become a famous singer and a good singer you can check my channel to know and I can sub to you back.
@michaelbrawlsstars1211 4 жыл бұрын
Well I'm 11 and have 2 exes...
@gregdaweg 4 жыл бұрын
@@michaelbrawlsstars1211what the heck
@taraxsw 4 жыл бұрын
Michael Brawls Stars uh. Aha. Ahaha....ahahaha.....👀
@mojisolafadeyi1771 3 жыл бұрын
You are a great teacher. I have been battling on writing a lyric and today just listening to you, you made it easy. Thank you.
@heyitspaige7345 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you Dylan this helped so much I kept pausing the video and making a song while doing it and I’m actually digging it thank you for the Inspiration.❣️
@DylanLaine 5 жыл бұрын
Hi Paige! I'm so happy that you found this video helpful and inspirational! Keep up the awesome work :)
@mathgineous8919 6 жыл бұрын
omg thanks so much. couldnt find anything else. im so thankful because i want to be an artist. if it ever happens will totally mention you. ☺
@morecowbellee 6 жыл бұрын
This is sooo awesome!!!
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!!! 💕😊
@morecowbellee 6 жыл бұрын
Dylan Laine I can’t wait to start writing a praise song!! I was thinking about how Jesus’ love just captivates us and fills our hearts 💕
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Yes it does! You should definitely use that beautiful truth as inspiration for a praise song! ❤️
@brendandsouza5331 4 жыл бұрын
@@morecowbellee same
@o._guppy 3 жыл бұрын
You've really helped me and my group! Thank you!💜 We decided to write about time, because of the situation that's going on in the world, like how we miss the past and how thing will be in the future, and how were coping now! Again Thank you so much!
@po_215 6 жыл бұрын
that one dislike is a meanie😒
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Aww.. thanks for the support, Reese!
@po_215 6 жыл бұрын
Dylan Laine you're welcome and God bless u😊💕
@yabellysmellyoof8777 4 жыл бұрын
Traashhhhhh
@GlassicGamer 6 жыл бұрын
Great video Dylan! I think people's like button must be broken though, there are 44 views and only 14 likes 😀
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :)
@lalia7677 3 жыл бұрын
THANK U ❤️ MISS,🎉 LOVE FROM INDIA ❤️😊🇮🇳 Thanks A Lot 😁 Iam Understanding So well 💟
@joshi-shivangi000 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for uploading these kind of videos!! Now, I can try writing my own songs. Your song is pretty good. Thanks again!
@akoSneykays 6 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I love, love LOVE writing songs!
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! Have fun!
@eiredarney9887 4 жыл бұрын
OMG THIS VIDEO WAS SO HELPFUL THANK YOU SO MUCH I HOPE YOU SEE THIS COMMENT
@ranelmarinduque794 5 жыл бұрын
You just earned a new subscriber! Thank you for the very helpful ideas. :)
@MariaMendoza-qq3pd 3 жыл бұрын
I wasn’t interested on writing songs, but after few of your videos I already started. Great advise easy, simple, smart!👌
@bellabarronnn 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you i am now making songs
@OBVIOUSBUTERA Жыл бұрын
omg i literally love you, you helped me when i was stuck😭
@itssarah4488 4 жыл бұрын
This was more helpful than you think! When you broke down each part, it helped me to focus on the main topic of the song so thank you so much❤️ Can I show you my song lyrics?💕🦋
@hollowanimations4709 2 жыл бұрын
Came for the lesson, became a fan of your music 👌🏼
@etherealintoxicatedcanary9296 5 жыл бұрын
You're so sweet and wholesome. :) Wish you nothing but happiness Dylan. One area I have problems with is writing a melody.
@waeball5808 6 жыл бұрын
This is so helpful! Thank you! You are now my favorite youtuber!
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Aww that's so sweet of you to say! I'm really happy that this helped! 😊
@letizva 6 жыл бұрын
I loved this! Thank you! :)
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 😊
@hbtao355 4 жыл бұрын
Great video really helpful.
@redsonya1084 6 жыл бұрын
I really enjoy listening to you. Thank u for all that u do You’re an amazing talent
@fluffythefluffybunny1628 3 жыл бұрын
I never knew all these things before you helped and I watched your vid ... thx so much!!!👍🎶
@camiloafanador5090 4 жыл бұрын
I love your videos! you deliver such a clear message in a very well structured manner, also, of course, you are also very talented and passionate!
@DylanLaine 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@evergreentunes8587 6 жыл бұрын
Valuable for new song writers. Thanks a lot
@sassybutcool2187 5 жыл бұрын
Your tips helped me write a beautiful.
@yungjaytrigga 4 жыл бұрын
Ur every videos useful fr us tanq sooo much luv from india🇮🇳
@jaspermartinez2712 6 жыл бұрын
this is so helpful!! it also inspired me to (try to) write a song! thanks for the awesome video
@DylanLaine 6 жыл бұрын
Hi Amelia! I love hearing that this inspired you - thanks for letting me know! Keep up the awesome work as you continue writing, practicing, and growing as a songwriter! :)
@relytheone853 4 жыл бұрын
Before saying joy, I'd let the violins sound. When the violins start to sound. Then, when the violins end, I star to sing again.
@dennisnewby1641 4 ай бұрын
Thank you for your teaching it is very good I have learned a lot from you❤u keep up the good work and God Bless
@em3rgo 3 жыл бұрын
This feels like ELA class when we were learning how to answer questions and unravel poems.
@juliegutierrez4865 6 жыл бұрын
hey Dylan Thanks for this Tutorial i will make a Love Song or Heartbreaking Song
@GetSongsDone 3 жыл бұрын
"More bills to pay..." 😂 Great examples of writing lyrics. Thank you for explaining it with an actual song. Love the vibes!
@BENIcool 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much💓💓💓
@heidiandbaby 5 жыл бұрын
Great tips Dylan, thank you! :)
@tarikutheprince Жыл бұрын
Invaluable piece of lesson!
@Ani2023nipot 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@eileenflores4405 3 жыл бұрын
Im trying to watch videos on where to write song lyrics, this is the best channel I have seen, and she’s Christian!!! I’m starting to sing and play 🎹 and even write my own songs!!
@maki8060 4 жыл бұрын
Anyone wanna make songs together? It’s just I am scared so I wanna do a song with..more people you know.
@urmom-fw1yy 4 жыл бұрын
Bro same
@jadalba9760 3 жыл бұрын
Welp me same thing
@ayseipektasdemir7991 3 жыл бұрын
Same but my voice is bad
@theaterkid7313 3 жыл бұрын
I love writing music, and would love to write a song with more people. I've got some good songs.
@joselyn5422 3 жыл бұрын
I’ll help you
@john-joethacker5665 2 жыл бұрын
Thank-you Dylan. So easy to listen to. Again Thank-you .
@takami_0710 3 жыл бұрын
This is more about what lyrics are and where to put them than finding how to write lyrics
@anethscb8505 2 жыл бұрын
This helped me a lot. Thanks for sharing
@thisisbemabu 4 жыл бұрын
Glad i stumbled on this. Love from Nigeria
@mariamh591 3 жыл бұрын
Am the only who randomly thinks "I wanna write a song"? I can not sing and I sound like a dying horse but I still randomly want to *LMAO*
@Morgan-gm7js 5 жыл бұрын
You are amazing!🌸🌸
@DylanLaine 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@HH-eu6jz 2 жыл бұрын
Love writing ✍️
@noodledoodle_6911 2 жыл бұрын
Does anyone else think of song names before lyrics? idk why but the name just. pops into my head. before i write the song.
@sauravprakash7542 5 жыл бұрын
thank you so much for your help .you inspired me and gave me many knoledge and wisdom
@DylanLaine 5 жыл бұрын
So glad this video could help!
@jenniekiki5583 5 жыл бұрын
thanks so much
@Music-if3xg 3 жыл бұрын
I loved it,,, I loved writing songs it make me feel good about my self
@willowb9705 3 жыл бұрын
you really help me I was really struggling on how to write my own song
@gantanaresh4179 4 жыл бұрын
Mam, nice video for begginers.. I hope you will post more like these
@maheshraika2763 3 жыл бұрын
Your voice is so sweet
@pemalhawang8271 3 жыл бұрын
I like your title joy ,it's just on ur Pillow
@mindymilitano6117 3 жыл бұрын
You remind me of Britney Snow! She’s a very talented singer and actress on Pitch Perfect. You sound and look like her!! 🤍
@aurora.a6645 4 жыл бұрын
Brava, bella e simpatica Dylan!!!!!!!!!
@parthaviraul898 3 жыл бұрын
Wow! Your voice is amazing 😍😍
@minecraftaddict5625 6 жыл бұрын
there's a pillow called joy aha
@themiraculousunicorn946 3 жыл бұрын
i love singing and now i can write my own lyrics bec of u thanks very much :)
@tangytomato4961 6 жыл бұрын
this was so helpful ... thank you ... and u’re a pretty gal ..
@aestheticssxx3553 6 жыл бұрын
Laine I like your songs that you write
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