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@chloethomson20504 жыл бұрын
About true love then the nex one boyfriend and girlfriend one please thanks
@somethingelse48984 жыл бұрын
@@chloethomson2050 She's not gonna write your songs for you,do it yourself
@avery37665 жыл бұрын
Do you ever just like randomly wanna write a song at like 3am knowing you can’t to save your life
@jjgurl10884 жыл бұрын
Doing it rn lmfao 😂
@eliastta4374 жыл бұрын
Its 3:46 AM and yes.
@anime_l0ver8194 жыл бұрын
I’m writing a song about coronavirus but the background music is gonna be the songsweet Carolina
@milanl93144 жыл бұрын
Thicc lazar lemme know when ur done 😳
@chxrri68304 жыл бұрын
Avery lol I’m trying to write a song and it’s 2:45 am oop-
@almaha72446 жыл бұрын
If this gets 20 likes I'm gonna make and post an original song;))
@brianandrew72655 жыл бұрын
This is glorious, I been tryin to find out about "writing my own song" for a while now, and I think this has helped. Ever heard of - Honora Xenndrew Magic - (search on google ) ? Ive heard some interesting things about it and my m8 got amazing success with it.
@pineapple0386 жыл бұрын
Song title: joy As I see the pillow that says joy in the background
@miloxzxz4 жыл бұрын
I noticed that and came down to see if anyone else had seen it 😂
@slurpyrukay28424 жыл бұрын
Same here
@theaterkid73134 жыл бұрын
@@miloxzxz LOL, so did I
@elliegu2743 жыл бұрын
Same
@backspotqueen74043 жыл бұрын
same i was about to say that then i seen this lol
@ceillasayed77104 жыл бұрын
What my song is about 100% depression 100%sad 100%drama 1000000000 %has a dying horse voice
@pragyasingh86284 жыл бұрын
And quarantine has me thinking I'll be able to be a song writer.
@JR-fm8tx3 жыл бұрын
Then did u write any song?
@starlasymphony2765 жыл бұрын
I'll write about how life is hard the ups and downs,how life has hapiness,sadness,and more. I got this idea beacuse how im fithing my cancer how there ups and downs......ill call it Ribons in life. THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS VID
@CristinaNicole1214 жыл бұрын
Thats like the best tittle ive heard
@CristinaNicole1214 жыл бұрын
Hope you feel beeter
@aleena1584 жыл бұрын
If u r done with the song, could u share it on ur channel? I'd love to hear it
@akiratortilla15884 жыл бұрын
Wow I’d love to hear that song
@samarlawati99104 жыл бұрын
Amazing song title🥺 I hope you feel better💞
@chelseabrown10445 жыл бұрын
you’re such a wholesome person omg😤❤️ this was really helpful
@DylanLaine5 жыл бұрын
Aw thanks, Chelsea! :-D
@altheaschannel61934 жыл бұрын
Its so hardddddd to makeeee grrrrr....😤
@myself70864 жыл бұрын
i’m growing so fast and i always thought you’d be there but you left so quickly left my heart in despair my tears keep falling like the rain from the clouds and i just need you around you were the only thing that was keeping me together you were my other half my missing piece this is a unfinished song that i just started writing and idk if its good or not if you have feedback please reply to this comment with it!! 💗
@itzelmontiel67364 жыл бұрын
ITS SO GOOD!!!!
@yara42204 жыл бұрын
It’s awesome! You got this! Keep going!
@pueofranz52254 жыл бұрын
awsome
@thegamers48753 жыл бұрын
It's good really
@teaganrosemusic23923 жыл бұрын
This is really good so far!!!!!!! Have you finished it yet???
@sugarfreeskull30086 жыл бұрын
The pillow says “joy” like your song!
@shilpichristierabha76426 жыл бұрын
the lyrics is the main problem for me. your guidance is really helping me alot.. thanks Dylan ^^
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Hi Christie! I am so glad to hear that my guidance is helping you out with lyrics! They can definitely be tough to write, but there will ALWAYS be a breakthrough as long as you keep pushing yourself. Keep up the awesome work! :)
@alishajhurry10225 жыл бұрын
You literally saved my life! I have to submit a song tomorrow for an audition in my country, and without your precious help, I wouldn't have completed this song on time! I want to become a successful singer and you just flicked me to 'motivated' mode xD I love your videos so much and you deserve so much more! Once again, thanks!
@lilahgene60086 жыл бұрын
I needed this so bad you are a life saver, Dylan!!! I’m thinking of writing a little musical because I love writing and singing. I play piano fluently so your videos really help with piano. And I think I will get into playing guitar so your videos will come in handy😁😁 thank you so much for making amazing videos for all of us!!❤️❤️
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Aww you are so welcome!! And that would be awesome if you wrote a little musical - it seems like a perfect way to combine many skills! ❤️
@taetae20285 жыл бұрын
Good luck!
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Hi friends! Here are some other helpful videos you might like to watch after this one: ✨My Lyric Writing Process: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/oeBkdKqp27bGcqc.html ✨25 Song Lyrics Writing Ideas: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/l6ynnZiT3LeoqWQ.html ✨What’s A Melody, Lyrics, & Rhythm?: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/ptyipbSCsMfVY5c.html ✨What Is A Song Form: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/pbt6iK2m0LaZgWg.html ✨What Is A Rhyme Scheme?: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/qduIetWrvamyqok.html ✨How To Find Rhymes: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/mqmWhragnb2Ud2g.html Happy songwriting! :) :) :)
@delirisambas17016 жыл бұрын
Love u
@kennethmerrill8956 жыл бұрын
Thank you for a lovely and very helpful lesson. Just a note on you example song. I found the first half most poignant and beautiful, the more soulful and slightly melancholy verses. Then you went into a musical happy face, and it through me out of the bitter sweet emotions the first part elicited into a slightly too sugary state that felt too incongruence. I totally get what you were after; I'm just saying that -- for me, and just for what it's worth-- the early part was tapping into something exquisite and true and beautifully bittersweet, far more than the later leap into Disney style joy. Sometimes we need more time with our bittersweet feelings before we are told "now snap out of that; time to be very happy!" It's healing to sometimes BE in bittersweet mode. I've taken this time--and risked the normal resentment my comment might elicit--because your song--the early verses-- stunned me with its sad beauty. You were really on to something. Do you like Aimee Mann's songs? Ken
@user-gq4nz1ce7h5 жыл бұрын
@@delirisambas1701 awesome teaching appreciate you baby😘
@prudencerichards34914 жыл бұрын
Can u help me write a song
@prudencerichards34914 жыл бұрын
Can u help me write a song
@jimmbear399826 күн бұрын
I find the best song lyrics come organically for me without overthinking.
@nandinikumar51853 жыл бұрын
Well I wrote a song about heartbreaks even though I've never been in a relationship 😅 The song's name is "tears that fell" 1st verse: When I go outside it reminds me of our moments Under that tree we used to be All those flowers you used to buy for me 2nd verse: When I look at the moon it reminds me how you said that you would be my sun You promised me how we would have our own family But you broke our promises sayin that they are meant to be broken Chorus: But did you even think about me once Why can't you just listen to your heart Now you call me a crybaby but weren't you the reason of my tears that fell This is incomplete right now I would be very grateful if anyone can give me feedbacks then I would continue with making the whole song. Well I'm just making a song as a hobby otherwise I wanna be a doctor😅
@beauxhodges2 жыл бұрын
awesome!
@sabahfathima92592 жыл бұрын
Same here I wanna become a doctor but BTS has inspired me so i thought of writing a song...
@ahtishammehmood52382 жыл бұрын
@@sabahfathima9259 same here 😁😍😍
@jenniferzabala2644 жыл бұрын
My dream is to become a famous singer when I'm older. But...I didn't wanna wait anymore, so I decided to start with writing a song then play it on my channel. (Mai Sal Tik) And I came across this video. Love it!💓😍
@DylanLaine4 жыл бұрын
Awesome! Have fun!
@dahamlijanmapathra78084 жыл бұрын
Same
@dahamlijanmapathra78084 жыл бұрын
But it's not easy.we can try our best.....
@niecyfairbanks51634 жыл бұрын
Can you help me with a song
@655bebeusgdbeueb4jdu3 жыл бұрын
Same
@Thejoyfulbunch3 жыл бұрын
I’m writing songs for a musical project The musical is based off animaniacs, and I really needed these lyric tips
@taliosmusic86466 жыл бұрын
Yay! I'm going to write lyrics right now. \\m//
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Yay!! That's awesome!! Let me know how it goes :-)
@JTKing71743 жыл бұрын
Lemme guess, your a singer now?
@ELIZA-rj3ki3 жыл бұрын
@@JTKing7174 r u hating?
@JTKing71743 жыл бұрын
@@ELIZA-rj3ki no lol, poor choice of words
@655bebeusgdbeueb4jdu3 жыл бұрын
My biggest problem : I love songs and stories.....I am a author and a songwriter. Managing time is the harderst thing as I am in school.
@655bebeusgdbeueb4jdu3 жыл бұрын
@Angelica Valentin wow
@655bebeusgdbeueb4jdu3 жыл бұрын
@Angelica Valentin when I say this to people, they r usually like "it's not that hard" or something like that which gets on my nerves
@redacted89133 жыл бұрын
The chorus of my song “You There Buddyboy?” about me and my best friend: Hey man I just wanna talk. Can’t you please pick up the phone? I wanna talk to you about everything that’s happened so far. Are you there buddyboy? C’mon please can’t you respond? Are you even there anymore? Have you left this mortal realm? Or are you just eating dinner? Are you there buddyboy?
@xoxoluvchipchipcheerio73903 жыл бұрын
oooo I love it😻😻
@GriffyWhiffy3 жыл бұрын
Do you have a melody for this or can I put music and a melody to it?
@redacted89133 жыл бұрын
@@GriffyWhiffy Yes, I have a melody. However, the melody isn’t the greatest, so feel free to do that! If you want to make it into a full song, I’ll tell you the story behind it.
@tinkubaruah83563 жыл бұрын
You want to be like bts and blackpink plz tell me
@kimyuna31663 жыл бұрын
I just write my own rap I also don't know how I did this it's good and now I want to write my own song this video help a lot.. Thank you so much sis 😊😊
@Chee.Y4ng4 жыл бұрын
Honestly I just write down whatever comes in mind. But my lyrics rhymes. But my lyrics are always talking about different things. Thank god I watched this video
@pammcreynolds6 жыл бұрын
Love your teaching of How To Write Lyrics For A Song! I'm thrilled to have found your KZfaq Channel!!!
@signetulupan3 жыл бұрын
I watched your video years ago, writing a song in one hour...wrote some songs...choruses and verses....they only had two verses....this exemplifies! Thank u, so much, dear....been looking for this! Very hard to find! You are a gem 💎, a treasure....OH!? A song!
@pueofranz52254 жыл бұрын
that was the best song writing advice i have ever heard!
@arabellapie39574 жыл бұрын
This video was really helpful. I had to write a song for school and you just BLEW MY MIND!!! This is absolutely fantastic!!
@shirinmore10844 жыл бұрын
wow Dylan Laine you really know how to write songs!!!
@RuskiRomeo6 жыл бұрын
I have NO idea for lyrics and title
@emmalynn90136 жыл бұрын
Sniper_Taco mood bro mood
@hunimuniful6 жыл бұрын
you can use some word generators, it can be useful
@LukePiala6 жыл бұрын
You can write a song called : Empty or No ideas on the topic that you dont have any ideas. Does it help? :)
@niqalina4 жыл бұрын
SAME
@annareid96873 жыл бұрын
me too
@gtuu9874 жыл бұрын
I already love this video and it's only been 17 seconds
@annareid96873 жыл бұрын
same she has a pretty voice! and I believe people can write a song!!!!!!!!!!!
@faeraindrops5 жыл бұрын
this helped me quite a bit. i found some beats that i’ve been trying to figure out what to write over and this helped so much
@awesomeunicorn18385 жыл бұрын
Dude this helped so much with my song writing. I'm writing my first song now and it's called "Silence before I go". Thank you soooooo much!
@danielwatts8453 жыл бұрын
Thank You So Much!!! I am a student at the University of Utah and I am majoring in music composition. I have been writing instrumental songs since high school but I have never been able to write lyrics I try to write them and they just come out bad or just really cheesy. But this video of yours is the kick I needed to understand how to write lyrics. So again Thank you. 😁
@umarustrings6 жыл бұрын
Yesssss! I’m a music first person so the lyrics are the hardest thing for me to write. Thank you.
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
I know it can be so tough to write lyrics sometimes whenever the music comes first! I've definitely had plenty of moments like that as well. There's no right or wrong, it's just that different things work better for different people, you know? Hey, at least you're coming up with music ideas that you enjoy! I hope this video helps out with the lyrics writing aspect :-)
@themoonwalker88006 жыл бұрын
If I want to right a song I only need the melody And hee hee hoo hoo Aaow Shuckatucka! *JK*
@yuzzi91904 жыл бұрын
hee hee
@bruusjjauauqjqiaiajw3 жыл бұрын
Tysm ur a life saver. I worte 14 songs and im thinking of relasing an "album" called storyline :)
@maleeshanuwanthika97083 жыл бұрын
Im 10 I finally got to write and sing a song and this really helped
@saffp86853 жыл бұрын
I’m writing a song called What she did it’s about a toxic ex, I’ll edit this and update you guys :) Edit: it didn’t go to plan, I’m going to try writing about something else
@adamfazbear15976 жыл бұрын
I am trying to write a love song for my Ex-girlfriend and. I know I am 13 and too young but I want information from you cause your the best person that teaches people about music and singing
@we_are_nevertheless73056 жыл бұрын
Adam Fazbear well what kind of music you listen to? And do you play an instrument? Also don’t let someone tell you your “too young” to understand concepts like that in life. You may not fully understand because experience but hey no one should look at a number to tell you your intellect and feeling. But I’d recommend picking your feeling whether it be anger or sadness or a mixture or whatever the case may be and try to title it. And then begin writing. Songwriting is something that gets better over time bough
@adamfazbear15976 жыл бұрын
TheConTraDemOn thanks and no I used to but I don't play an instrument because there were instruments I don't want to play except the guitar and I am a talented singer wanting to become a famous singer and a good singer you can check my channel to know and I can sub to you back.
@michaelbrawlsstars12114 жыл бұрын
Well I'm 11 and have 2 exes...
@gregdaweg4 жыл бұрын
@@michaelbrawlsstars1211what the heck
@taraxsw4 жыл бұрын
Michael Brawls Stars uh. Aha. Ahaha....ahahaha.....👀
@mojisolafadeyi17713 жыл бұрын
You are a great teacher. I have been battling on writing a lyric and today just listening to you, you made it easy. Thank you.
@heyitspaige73455 жыл бұрын
Thank you Dylan this helped so much I kept pausing the video and making a song while doing it and I’m actually digging it thank you for the Inspiration.❣️
@DylanLaine5 жыл бұрын
Hi Paige! I'm so happy that you found this video helpful and inspirational! Keep up the awesome work :)
@mathgineous89196 жыл бұрын
omg thanks so much. couldnt find anything else. im so thankful because i want to be an artist. if it ever happens will totally mention you. ☺
@morecowbellee6 жыл бұрын
This is sooo awesome!!!
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!!! 💕😊
@morecowbellee6 жыл бұрын
Dylan Laine I can’t wait to start writing a praise song!! I was thinking about how Jesus’ love just captivates us and fills our hearts 💕
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Yes it does! You should definitely use that beautiful truth as inspiration for a praise song! ❤️
@brendandsouza53314 жыл бұрын
@@morecowbellee same
@o._guppy3 жыл бұрын
You've really helped me and my group! Thank you!💜 We decided to write about time, because of the situation that's going on in the world, like how we miss the past and how thing will be in the future, and how were coping now! Again Thank you so much!
@po_2156 жыл бұрын
that one dislike is a meanie😒
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Aww.. thanks for the support, Reese!
@po_2156 жыл бұрын
Dylan Laine you're welcome and God bless u😊💕
@yabellysmellyoof87774 жыл бұрын
Traashhhhhh
@GlassicGamer6 жыл бұрын
Great video Dylan! I think people's like button must be broken though, there are 44 views and only 14 likes 😀
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it :)
@lalia76773 жыл бұрын
THANK U ❤️ MISS,🎉 LOVE FROM INDIA ❤️😊🇮🇳 Thanks A Lot 😁 Iam Understanding So well 💟
@joshi-shivangi0004 жыл бұрын
Thanks for uploading these kind of videos!! Now, I can try writing my own songs. Your song is pretty good. Thanks again!
@akoSneykays6 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I love, love LOVE writing songs!
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! Have fun!
@eiredarney98874 жыл бұрын
OMG THIS VIDEO WAS SO HELPFUL THANK YOU SO MUCH I HOPE YOU SEE THIS COMMENT
@ranelmarinduque7945 жыл бұрын
You just earned a new subscriber! Thank you for the very helpful ideas. :)
@MariaMendoza-qq3pd3 жыл бұрын
I wasn’t interested on writing songs, but after few of your videos I already started. Great advise easy, simple, smart!👌
@bellabarronnn4 жыл бұрын
Thank you i am now making songs
@OBVIOUSBUTERA Жыл бұрын
omg i literally love you, you helped me when i was stuck😭
@itssarah44884 жыл бұрын
This was more helpful than you think! When you broke down each part, it helped me to focus on the main topic of the song so thank you so much❤️ Can I show you my song lyrics?💕🦋
@hollowanimations47092 жыл бұрын
Came for the lesson, became a fan of your music 👌🏼
@etherealintoxicatedcanary92965 жыл бұрын
You're so sweet and wholesome. :) Wish you nothing but happiness Dylan. One area I have problems with is writing a melody.
@waeball58086 жыл бұрын
This is so helpful! Thank you! You are now my favorite youtuber!
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Aww that's so sweet of you to say! I'm really happy that this helped! 😊
@letizva6 жыл бұрын
I loved this! Thank you! :)
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 😊
@hbtao3554 жыл бұрын
Great video really helpful.
@redsonya10846 жыл бұрын
I really enjoy listening to you. Thank u for all that u do You’re an amazing talent
@fluffythefluffybunny16283 жыл бұрын
I never knew all these things before you helped and I watched your vid ... thx so much!!!👍🎶
@camiloafanador50904 жыл бұрын
I love your videos! you deliver such a clear message in a very well structured manner, also, of course, you are also very talented and passionate!
@DylanLaine4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@evergreentunes85876 жыл бұрын
Valuable for new song writers. Thanks a lot
@sassybutcool21875 жыл бұрын
Your tips helped me write a beautiful.
@yungjaytrigga4 жыл бұрын
Ur every videos useful fr us tanq sooo much luv from india🇮🇳
@jaspermartinez27126 жыл бұрын
this is so helpful!! it also inspired me to (try to) write a song! thanks for the awesome video
@DylanLaine6 жыл бұрын
Hi Amelia! I love hearing that this inspired you - thanks for letting me know! Keep up the awesome work as you continue writing, practicing, and growing as a songwriter! :)
@relytheone8534 жыл бұрын
Before saying joy, I'd let the violins sound. When the violins start to sound. Then, when the violins end, I star to sing again.
@dennisnewby16414 ай бұрын
Thank you for your teaching it is very good I have learned a lot from you❤u keep up the good work and God Bless
@em3rgo3 жыл бұрын
This feels like ELA class when we were learning how to answer questions and unravel poems.
@juliegutierrez48656 жыл бұрын
hey Dylan Thanks for this Tutorial i will make a Love Song or Heartbreaking Song
@GetSongsDone3 жыл бұрын
"More bills to pay..." 😂 Great examples of writing lyrics. Thank you for explaining it with an actual song. Love the vibes!
@BENIcool4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much💓💓💓
@heidiandbaby5 жыл бұрын
Great tips Dylan, thank you! :)
@tarikutheprince Жыл бұрын
Invaluable piece of lesson!
@Ani2023nipot4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@eileenflores44053 жыл бұрын
Im trying to watch videos on where to write song lyrics, this is the best channel I have seen, and she’s Christian!!! I’m starting to sing and play 🎹 and even write my own songs!!
@maki80604 жыл бұрын
Anyone wanna make songs together? It’s just I am scared so I wanna do a song with..more people you know.
@urmom-fw1yy4 жыл бұрын
Bro same
@jadalba97603 жыл бұрын
Welp me same thing
@ayseipektasdemir79913 жыл бұрын
Same but my voice is bad
@theaterkid73133 жыл бұрын
I love writing music, and would love to write a song with more people. I've got some good songs.
@joselyn54223 жыл бұрын
I’ll help you
@john-joethacker56652 жыл бұрын
Thank-you Dylan. So easy to listen to. Again Thank-you .
@takami_07103 жыл бұрын
This is more about what lyrics are and where to put them than finding how to write lyrics
@anethscb85052 жыл бұрын
This helped me a lot. Thanks for sharing
@thisisbemabu4 жыл бұрын
Glad i stumbled on this. Love from Nigeria
@mariamh5913 жыл бұрын
Am the only who randomly thinks "I wanna write a song"? I can not sing and I sound like a dying horse but I still randomly want to *LMAO*
@Morgan-gm7js5 жыл бұрын
You are amazing!🌸🌸
@DylanLaine5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much!
@HH-eu6jz2 жыл бұрын
Love writing ✍️
@noodledoodle_69112 жыл бұрын
Does anyone else think of song names before lyrics? idk why but the name just. pops into my head. before i write the song.
@sauravprakash75425 жыл бұрын
thank you so much for your help .you inspired me and gave me many knoledge and wisdom
@DylanLaine5 жыл бұрын
So glad this video could help!
@jenniekiki55835 жыл бұрын
thanks so much
@Music-if3xg3 жыл бұрын
I loved it,,, I loved writing songs it make me feel good about my self
@willowb97053 жыл бұрын
you really help me I was really struggling on how to write my own song
@gantanaresh41794 жыл бұрын
Mam, nice video for begginers.. I hope you will post more like these
@maheshraika27633 жыл бұрын
Your voice is so sweet
@pemalhawang82713 жыл бұрын
I like your title joy ,it's just on ur Pillow
@mindymilitano61173 жыл бұрын
You remind me of Britney Snow! She’s a very talented singer and actress on Pitch Perfect. You sound and look like her!! 🤍
@aurora.a66454 жыл бұрын
Brava, bella e simpatica Dylan!!!!!!!!!
@parthaviraul8983 жыл бұрын
Wow! Your voice is amazing 😍😍
@minecraftaddict56256 жыл бұрын
there's a pillow called joy aha
@themiraculousunicorn9463 жыл бұрын
i love singing and now i can write my own lyrics bec of u thanks very much :)
@tangytomato49616 жыл бұрын
this was so helpful ... thank you ... and u’re a pretty gal ..