The grandmother though was a bitch who traumatised him if she was his first kill then that’s what put him down the road to murder and theft

I can't take credit for this one, it was written by u/DawnToo on Reddit but thanks!

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You are still a puh Psycho, ia I am certain that I also love 💘 you and whatever Wendy go cave u called from. You imagine the darkness at the end of civilization. Your voice is the only one capable of induction of Nasea. Like enough for me to pause... you beautiful psychopath. 🎉

Like a duck to water. If nothing else I bet he is a major smart a$$ in person lol

It's your vocals that brings it up to that point where amazing awesome perfection buddy but very good story tho​@@JordanGrupe

Yeahhh I thought he did a really good job too :-) great story by the way!

Thank you!

Now imagine it as high-pitched as possible.

Careful you might puss your pants.

Always!

I was born ready!!!🙃

Can't always expect to win a war with words.

Thank you! I'm new to horror writing; it's been a spooky journey!

I've noticed that as well. Jordan's fastly becoming one of my go-to narrators.

Nothing personal! 😅

I wrote this one. Jordan was kind enough to narrate it for me

I'm sew your mouth shut 😅

Spoilers I would normally agree, at least past the first two rooms. I believe the overall idea was for him to come to the conclusion that he needed to repent or be forgiven rather than others ask him about it or force it upon him. The ants couldn't do that, being mindlessly angry and afraid, and his grandmother likely wouldn't, given what we saw of her character and the way she was presented. The doctor's room was his real chance and he blew that with his remarks towards the doctor and his general attitude on the entire situation, starting from his death. I'd feel bad for him if he felt remorse or anything resembling empathy for the people past his grandmother(or other people in general) and the punishments continued. I don't think his answers or reactions would have changed, even if directly asked by the angel at the start while his mood was good, if sleazy as all can get(after all, regrets are for suckers by his words). Rather he realized why he was being punished and, rather than try to repent or muster an apology, he would just consider the punishments ironic and/or mouth off to those who were punishing him. Even after receiving his final punishment there was no sign of his thinking changing and because of that I don't believe he met the criteria for forgiveness and a lighter punishment, if one would be given upon repenting.