Hi! Teachers at OOE. It's great to see your videos everytime on different topics and discuss the nuance of the topic and how it can be interpreted at an individual level.I'd say it's extra-ordinary.That's because,it takes the examinees to the level that is easy to understand what is the effective method to score 7 and more than that Thanks & regards......

Stumbled upon this video 2 days before my exam and all the while being taught by the review center I go to, to paraphrase. I had to make last minute changes to the way I write. Effective paraphrasing is the best tip here and an answer should start from the 1st sentence. I got an 8 in my writing. Thanks, guys.

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Finally a video that actually clarifies the mystery of paraphrase.

You are just outstanding! You have explained all what exactly we need to write an introduction. Thanks a lot.

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Great work . Thanks alot actually paraphrazing is so difficult but you do good explanation and the rest of the work up to ourself .👍👍

Until I watch this video , I was under the belief that we need to repeat the question in diffrent ways to convince the examiner .

Thanks a lot for your video as it will definitely help to grab high score. I feel it seems very challenging while watching these videos but with practice it comes out automatically.

thanks alot, paraphrasing has always been my major challenge

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Traffic jams in urban areas lead to severe health issues such as lung cancer, asthma, and other respiratory diseases. In general, this affects people’s quality of life, including dissatisfaction of people regarding living their life in order. The solution to these problems is fast and comfortable public transportation. To begin with, traffic congestion contributes significantly to adverse health issues. The major cause of traffic congestion is the enormous counting of the moving vehicles on the roads so that people have to wait more hours during rush hours. As a result, vehicles emit a large number of chemical gases such as carbon dioxide and monoxide, which are the main cause of air pollution and degrade air quality. Therefore, asthma is not an uncommon disease among people. For instance, my cousin's brother has to go to Delhi for his further studies, although he did not have any health problems in his village before going to Delhi, now he is facing respiratory issues for 2 years. Therefore, he said to his parents,” he will come back as soon as possible. Similarly, traffic jams affect people’s quality of life. The quality of life is the perceived satisfaction of people regarding living their life in order so that increasing dissatisfaction among people is caused by traffic congestion. To exemplify, people get more frustrated and annoyed, whenever they are stuck in traffic jams during the day. Thus, it not only disrupts the people’s daily routines but also their lifestyles. Consequently, people face problems like wastage of time, when they spent more hours on the roads and they have to delay to reach their destinations such as workplace, meeting,s, and activities. For example, I recently missed my government exam because of a traffic jam, which I had to face in Ludhiana city where my exam venue was, the exam was conducted by government officials. Furthermore, to eradicate this problem government should take a concrete step. This step can be for the condition of public transportation as public transportation is time-consuming and uncomfortable. People have to travel by their vehicle when the public transportation does not match their expectations. Government should promote public transportation by making it fast and comfortable. For example, in Delhi, the traffic congestion has improved after launching the metro. Everybody prefers to go by this now because it is not only providing fast and comfortable services but also giving air conditioning service. In conclusion, traffic congestion in towns not only increases acute health issues, and lung cancer but also influences people’s quality of life. I explain in the above paragraphs that I certainly agree with this notion. The solution to this issue can be removed by promoting public transportation

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thank you for properly explaining about paraphrasing

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…therefore,“ begin with the end in mind, and essay has to be an integrated whole”.

is it important to use connectors in the starting of all sentences ? and is it important to write at least 2 reasons in every body paragraph or explaining one reason clearly ?

What about the structure of an IELTS introduction?? Hook Body Thesis

it's informative for me thanks

Hello guys, First of all I would like to express my sincere gratitude for making this useful video. You have just shown only the paraphrasing part but the ways to solve the problems was not covered. Outline and thesis are missing in your video. Please do add outline and thesis sentences as well so that the video will be completely useful. Regards, Mohamed

please provide the complete essay with the body paragraphs and a conclusion so that i get an idea of a standard essay to score more than 7 band

12.00 - 12.36 I find this very helpful. Thank you very much.

Something I am not getting from your vedio is 1 you started by saying there is no need to paraphrase but you ended up describing paraphrasing instead of helping on how to answer the IELTS question

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Awesome explanation

It was very useful...Please upload how to conclude the paragraph...

Daniel , i like your style... thanks

Sir I am indian. I watch your video daily it,s help to improve speaking English

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Hi , can I get more examples for introduction as well conclusion?

Paraphrase is best trick to show that we got the topic correctly.. If we start without paraphrase it feels like we are starting from the middle so does the examiner.. Paraphrase is not there in the criteria but better strategy to begin an essay.

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I grasped all that you explained. I learned the methods of writing good essay but the problem is I dont have any idea to every question lol. So how to give good and effective answer to a hard question. Its taking you to study around whats happening, whats going on, and ideas needs to be supported with facts. That sample question already gave me a hard time to think for an answer 😂😂😂

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Sounds a bit risky. Anyone tried this way in exam and let me know how the result was?

Thanks you every one and it's really helpful to us

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What about the solutions part ? shouldn't it be mentioned too along with the problems in the introduction ?

But the introduction doesnt include second part of the task, which is how to solve the problem.

It's easy to write an introduction of Problem/solution essay. Can you Please make a video or guide us how to write the introduction of other types of essays. For instance, Discussion essays, Opinion essays particularly the essay which doesn't require your opinion. Thanks

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What about the ' how can you solve it' part in the introduction

bad parahase huh!! good one thankx for the viedo....i got clear!!

Thank u sir and ma’m

Introduction has given a clear picture of automation being a soaring concern to mankind; however, in conclusion can someone differ to the idea and support the fact that there is no other solution but accepting the prolification of technology?

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Your words at 6:51 minutes of video, "No paraphrase is better than bad paraphrase" or is it " No paraphrase is worst than bad paraphrase". Was that a mistake? I got confused..please clarify.

What about the part that mention 'how can this problem be solved'. I believe it should be part of your thesis statement.

tell me from where I can learn true synonyms of words?

Hii sir please give me some tips to improve IELTS reading module?

Hi first of all thank u for your helpful videos Then i have questions can i paraphrase in this way : She accused me of breaking her glass Changes to : She made an accusation of breaking her glass against me or she made an accusation that I broke her glass

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Actually I'm a doing an a essay right now omg it's the destiny lol

Is the example you showed for a band 7 and above complete? I mean, what about the solutions? Please be more clear ..,.

It is due technological development , instead of man every work is done by machines such as robots, and computers. In this context, the important causes and appropriate solutions are examined here. Can I write this way?

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maan, is that you who voiced the listening recordings?

again i'm confused, my teacher says it's better to paraphrase the topic and here says dont. when I compare, I prefer to follow your path

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What about more than 7 I'm intending to get 7.5 band

Watch this video at 1.25 speed for more focus...!✌️

It would be better if you come up with writing an easy step by step, how to develop each sentence. How do you stop a body paragraph? How to connect the last sentence of the body paragraph to the first sentence of the second body paragraph. How to write a conclusion. If you really want to help the viewers, you have to think about it.

What is the meaning of register here.you said register and collocation are equally important.plz reply

But all the "IELTS" publications by Cambridge University indicates the paraphrasing is a good way to start the writing. Why is that?

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Please, I am aiming for a band 9 in ielts. Could you please help me prepare?

Vedio starts:7:15

why this paraphrasing doesn't contain anything regarding solution to the problems, Question clearly asked how it could be solved?

wao it's an amazing idea..actually I was demotivated due to 5 band in writing but I got 6.5 in reading 7 in listening and 6 in speaking but I can't understand how I get 6.5 in writing 😔😔i hope this idea will helpful for me

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I am a beginner and want to improve speaking and understanding what the other say, so I'd like to find a native speaker to help me .

So how to write introduction without using paraphrasing?

Robots and computers can now perform any task a humans does. They are capable enough to be replaced with them in our jobs. This kind of technology improvement can bring many serious issues. In the below essay, we are going to see the potential problems and how to avoid them.

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