10 likes and I’ll rewrite the whole script to make it make more sense N = narrator k = Katsuki D = Deku Ib = Izuku’s brother op = other person m = mind or in mind A = Aizawa 1.A=someone in class 1A N:Hello this is Izuku from immortal au.And I wanted to explain my story to you guys I hope you like it I guess N: I also forgot here will be Mita too she will be one of my friends when i’m a Child in my school and in Ua. okay. Okay. Let’s start now. D:ugh wheres Kacchan he said he will be here to play with me ... ugh why did I talk to him first D: there you are D:Kacchan what happened why are you crying? K:I- I asked my mum if she will let me go to hospital with you but she said no because she wanted me to help her clean my stupid room. so that means I can’t see what quirk you get D:(wow I didn’t know that Kacchan cares for me) It’s okay Kacchan I will show you my quirk instead Op:Izu help your brother wants to kill me!! D: what happened now Mita-chan Op:uhhhh I- I kinda broke your brothers hero figure D: you what!!!!!!!! Op: i’m sorry I didn’t know that it was his figure Idk Who thought this:(guess we’re dead now) Ib:oh Mita~ All:(oh sh!t) Ib: anyways me and Izuku need to go home D: why are you so early I wanted to play Ib: you forgot that you have to go to the doctor to find out your quirk. Didn’t you? D: oh yeah! I already forgot that. I told Kacchan that not even two minutes ago Ib: anyways let’s go or will be late for the appointment Izuku’s brother and him Let me go it hurts I don’t care let’s go Well.I can tell dad about it Oh really? And what is he going to do? Kill me? Very funny Yo what kind of brother are you? A better one than you that’s for sure Hey that hurts you know Do I look like I care You little Do me a favour-shut up No you shut up Hey I am the older brother you need to respect me you little sh!t Oh. Then what about you What about me? I just f*ck it up Wow so you finally admit it?Huh? If you want me to type more 15 likes Izuku andhis brother fighting still: Wow so you finally found out huh Find out what? That you’re the idiot Get back here! I’m going to kill you! (I will write some more later. I have school) K:so Do Any of you understand what just happened or is it just me? Op: nope I did not understand a thing * honestly I have no idea what the creator meant* K: good so it’s not just me who saw all of that Op: your Mrs Midoriya right? Inko: yeah that’s me! Op:well then Your son does have a quirk but it will turn up a little late so you don’t have to worry about him being quirkless Inko: thank you sir Op: no problem miss (I’m going to stop writing for a day or two because I am going through a move so I would like to focus on that if it’s not a problem)(i’m going to focus on it anyway) (Ok I’m back 👍) D:(happy noises/sounds) D n (Deku being a narrator/filling you in) Dn: from that day me, Kacchan and Mita-chan tried to get my quirk to show up. But it never did. A year goes by and we are in middle school. I get bullied because people don’t think I have a quick and that I am lying that I do have one.But don’t worry Kacchan and Mita-san always protect and help me. But one day, Something happened… K: is there something wrong? D’s pov:(why do I think someone is watching us?) D: what? How?? Kacchan, I’m still alive! K: how ….? How is that possible? D:I- I don’t know K: that doesn’t matter.At least you’re still alive (or) i’m just happy you’re still alive * I couldn’t decide which so I let you 😊* D:kacchan, can you please stop looking at my face? K: but your face (or) hair looks weird right now, it’s funny D: stop thinking about kissing me! We are only 15!! Op: now, Izuku Midoriya, Right? D: yes, that’s me Doctor. How am I not dead? Did I get a hit with a quirk? Because this has never happened before (My little sis made me fix something I’ll brb) (I’m back 😀) Op: oh, don’t worry, you are still alive because of your quirk. And the use of your quirk is for you to be immortal, so when you got a shot your quirk was the thing that saved you D: My quirk? Op: yes, your quirk D: but, What is my quirk called? Op:hmm, Let’s see. Your quirk is called immortality/immortal K: immortality/immortal? Op:mhm K: finally! Those bastards won’t bully you anymore! D:Kacchan wth Anyways, thanks for your help Doctor kacchan, why would you do that/why did you do that? K:bc- Op: where the hell were you gays?*the word gay is that because it’s true* K: get up so he can explain Op: oh right, sorry Sooo. what happened? K: why the hell do you want to know? Op: I think you were the one that told me to get up so that Izuku could explain? K:Oh yh(or)oh right Op:duh(or)obvi K:you litt- D: okay, stop trying to fight you two What? Can you let me explain now? * i’m so sorry I forgot about it for like a week or two lol* Op:•Waits for response• N: •after explaining• Op:• death stare• someone shot you…? I. Will. Kill. That. F*cking…b!tch! • mood swing• uhh umm you guys alright? * they abandon her* Op: come on guys! I’m not THAT scary! Am I? N: A few months after that day, before the (I have no idea) D: mum! I’m going to go out with my friends, okay? Inko: okay Izuku! take care! • walks out house to his destination• D M:(gosh- where are they?!) K:• sneaks up on Deku• D:Kacc- K:• kisses Deku•• stops kissing him• D: •flustered• K: still the same, huh deku? D• angry• Yo- Op: are you guys done yet? because at this rate I think I am gonna get ice cream by myself D & K: wait for us! We are coming too! D N: from that day forward me, Kacchan and Mita had so much fun together!we tell each other everything.!All of us got into UA!And to make matters better, we all got into the same class! okay! Now we should get to the story… A:get your a$$es in here! stop standing there like you’re some sort of models and get into class. Now! D:coming sensei! A: okay class. We have three new students- 1.A: are they nic-? A: let me finished! And how am I supposed to know whether they are nice or not!? Okay you 3. You can come in now D: come in you two A: introduce yourself and then go take a seat D: hello everyone! I am Izuku Midoriya! I am 16 years old! K: i’m Katsuki Bakugo I’m 16 years old Op: anyways! Hi! you can call me Mita, I am 16 years old K: let go of my hair loser! A: okay class . Get the hell out of my classroom 1.A: you’re the new student, right? I’m Kirishima, your classmate * his name is now ‘Kiri’* D: hi nice to meet you too • alarm• D: what is this? Kiri: villains are attacking! •D fights shiggy• Shiggy: you do you know that I’m not here alone, right? D: what do you mean? •D gets stabbed• •D takes out knife• Shiggy/ib: I am so sorry little bro! Please forgive me! D:f*ck off before I change my mind Shiggy/ib: okay. Thanks little bro! •shiggy/ib somehow disappears• K: this is why I love you. D: and this is how it’s done. Thanks for watching! Please subscribe for more! I hope you enjoyed the video! Editors note ✍🏼: not saying you have to like but this took me forever to finish 😅 lol 😅😅 Also just saying this is a great channel. it is great quality.(I watch their videos and I do understand the spelling mistakes occur because I am terrible at spellings. I have AutoCorrect)

Aizawa at the end though🤣🤣🤣 He be like: ugh teenagers🙄🙄 great vid though

Trying to read this killed my last brain cell💀

The children really has GREAT grammar 😂

Is no one going to care that Aizawa said okay you CANT come in 😂😂😂

I understand every word and didn't realize that the words were messed up 😢

Qurk okay……WHAT THE FUK-anyway great video 👍

im sorry why are their heads so big XD

If your invincible I don't think you feel anything immortal tho you still feel it Edit: stop making fun of her spelling mistakes

Great vid, but I didn’t really understand it because of the spelling errors…

I give this video a 10/10

Aizawa: Ok 3 you *can't* come in Them coming in anyway

Everyone is getting immortality and invincibility mixed up… the deku in this episode is invincible not immortality-

Good video, but lots of spelling mistakes, and btw not hating, but the krishima doesn't look like krishima 😅 13:28

"A" What a name❤ Pin me I'm 2nd

2:10 is that Touya before he became Charcoal 😂

Bro I only have 2 percent left 😅

10:40

Am just putting this out their Grammer is important so is spelling if you aint sure how something is spelt then look up meaning from either Google or a book with words and meanings and asked around or onced u learn the correct spelling take 2 sheets of notebook paper and pencil write out the words 100x until u remember

*ok... Get out of my classroom* me:HAGAHAHATSDGGDGDGDGDGFGDYDYCHFGHDDJD

LMFAO

The fact I had to fix the bad grammar

really good but just couldnt read it all cuz of the spelling mistakes but well done

Don’t tell me bakugo doesn’t look like the Gacha Adrian’s

some of the words are spelled wrong

TO MANY MISSPELLED WORDS I CAN'T READ IT

I don't get it there are many spelling mistakes

Part 2?

Why does Aizawa look like William afton

Warning! Many many many many MANY mistakes 😊🎉 Your welcome

Pt 2??

All most all of the words were spelled wrong 😂😂

video good la but spelling not should work on it

Dude its like a 2 year old wrote this😅

Why do izuku, Katsuki and Aizawa look like Terrence Afton, Samuel Emily and Vincent/Shota Afton

Please tell me you arent english please 😭

Umm why are so many eazy words miss spelled

So many spelling mistakes Its making me mad

Wrong spelling!😡😡

guys to gays hahahahaha

I couldn’t finish the video because of all the terrible spelling mistakes.. it hurts to watch. 😔 No hate!