Invisible Preview 2 [Showcase] (Entry for NCS Contest)

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Crystie

Crystie

24 күн бұрын

Showcased by FakeRodri! (Again)
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2nd Preview of my entry for NCS Gauntlet Contest, almost every part is subject to changes so if you want to suggest me something it would be appreciated! It might look unpolished, last 2 parts aren't finished at all as it's a preview. ;)
#gd #geometrydash #geometrydashshowcase #modern #art #wip #demon #ncs #preview

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@Crystie06
@Crystie06 22 күн бұрын
Hey! Almost every part is kinda subject to changes and it might look unpolished, i'm still trying to base what i'm doing on suggestions so any opinion would be appreciated! ;)
@lucas66
@lucas66 21 күн бұрын
0:51 could use some highlights in the blocks and maybe some different textures other wise the level looks great
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 21 күн бұрын
​@@lucas66 you mean in the borders right? Also i wanted to animate them xD
@D4rkOG
@D4rkOG 21 күн бұрын
1:26 maybe add some more details, it looks a little empty but amazing work👍
@D4rkOG
@D4rkOG 21 күн бұрын
actually nvm, 1:26 just needs more effects. It doesn't look as active and fast pace as the song seems to be.
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 21 күн бұрын
​@@D4rkOG rn it has more live, i even reduced the brightness and been working on some animations, i still need to animate structures tho
@Rifct
@Rifct 21 күн бұрын
cat jumpscare (this is sick)
@czodi
@czodi 21 күн бұрын
That transition at the end is INCREDIBLE🔥🔥
@dreamsofzotz
@dreamsofzotz 21 күн бұрын
Jajajaja el gato
@Detherrr-rt1gn
@Detherrr-rt1gn 21 күн бұрын
Bro this is discouraging, the song really resonated with me, it’s so soulful and fantastic, one of the best and saddest songs I’ve ever heard and you perfectly conveyed its atmosphere, very cool. I have a suggestion to add fog. I can't wait to play it😮
@Cupswouse
@Cupswouse 21 күн бұрын
Discouraging?
@xxblogde2xx
@xxblogde2xx 19 күн бұрын
Está chulísimo, has mejorado un montón
@Dreambreakers
@Dreambreakers 16 күн бұрын
this level is beautiful. Hope you win!
@8402nave
@8402nave 21 күн бұрын
hi guys welcome to my tutorial
@Axtram
@Axtram 21 күн бұрын
1:01 transición good 👌
@sonicwaveinfinitymiddwelle8555
@sonicwaveinfinitymiddwelle8555 15 күн бұрын
1:36
@Darwisy_08
@Darwisy_08 21 күн бұрын
This one *might be my favorite upcoming level 😊 love it so much I wish you goodluck
@joshert400
@joshert400 21 күн бұрын
O wow is incredible, my vote
@nyauwuoniichan
@nyauwuoniichan 22 күн бұрын
1:25 la parte es demasiado clara para la parte de la canción y la ambientación que diste anteriormente. tal vez algo más oscuro que haga parecer que es una noche quedaría mejor, aunque no podría estar completamente seguro (⁠ ⁠≧⁠Д⁠≦⁠) pd: gatoo 😸
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 22 күн бұрын
Entonce le baho el vrillo?? OWoo
@nyauwuoniichan
@nyauwuoniichan 22 күн бұрын
@@Crystie06 siiiiiiiiiiiiiiii (⁠;⁠ŏ⁠﹏⁠ŏ⁠)
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 22 күн бұрын
@@nyauwuoniichan okei y le pongo estreyitas ziii
@nyauwuoniichan
@nyauwuoniichan 22 күн бұрын
​@@Crystie06chiiiii y tal vez reflejos que estén por encima del jugador para dar mas ambiente (⁠/⁠^⁠-⁠^)⁠/
@j0lx128
@j0lx128 21 күн бұрын
This is AMAZING!, the level improved a lot on it's quality from the 1st preview to now. Keep it up :)
@16lord
@16lord 21 күн бұрын
0:51 en esta parte yo haria un cartel custom en lugar de usar ese de madera. El resto está muy bien
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 21 күн бұрын
Ba, veo como hago uwu
@Th3marcoB
@Th3marcoB 3 күн бұрын
16Lord :0
@GD_Player65
@GD_Player65 20 күн бұрын
THIS SHOULD GET LEGENDARY LIKE BRO THE TRANSITION 🔥🔥🔥 (the swirl)
@moomooCookie.
@moomooCookie. 21 күн бұрын
This looks incredible! Watch the difficulty in some parts, it does look a bit unbalanced, especially the spammy sections compared to most other parts. However, this is from a showcase viewer pov and not a playtester pov, so take this comment with a grain of salt. Keep up the good work!
@WolfyTail_
@WolfyTail_ 3 күн бұрын
THIS IS AMAZING! Good luck for the contest ^^
@cironix
@cironix 5 күн бұрын
This looks insane so far! 🔥🔥🔥
@itsHyperAI
@itsHyperAI 16 күн бұрын
Very Clean and Nice to me! I hope you win. Goodluck
@루카스타일
@루카스타일 21 күн бұрын
I'm really looking forward to this level. It is so crazy 😮
@blud_lus86853
@blud_lus86853 9 күн бұрын
this looks soo good! I really hope you can be a winner. beautiful level and amazing gameplay. you have alot of potential as a creator :) i say this with full support of your level :)
@chickenmissbunny
@chickenmissbunny 21 күн бұрын
This should definitely win, good luck!
@Szyly
@Szyly 18 күн бұрын
This is so cool!! :D
@furinaqx
@furinaqx 10 күн бұрын
Absolutely amazing!
@enzogameplays2508
@enzogameplays2508 16 күн бұрын
Bro, definitivamente creo que este nivel estará en el Gauntlet, tiene muchos detalles que ya no se por donde empezar, y yo creo que pega muy bien con esa song, Buena Suerte decorando el nivel bro, suerte cuando hagan las elecciones de los niveles también, buena suerte con el nivel 😃☝️
@Z3R3P
@Z3R3P 17 күн бұрын
Definitely your best, I love it
@darkhistoriess
@darkhistoriess 21 күн бұрын
This is amazing, even though it isn't even done 🔥🔥
@GDNeo4CHL
@GDNeo4CHL 19 күн бұрын
Me sorprende lo mucho que mejoraste con los años, se ve genial. Espero verlo pronto en los gauntlets
@Blugitrash
@Blugitrash 20 күн бұрын
Everything in this level is so cool!
@Fortayy
@Fortayy 21 күн бұрын
THAT WAVE PART IS SO AMAZING OMG. STRAIGHT OUT OF WHITE SPACE🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
@Fortayy
@Fortayy 21 күн бұрын
(at one minute)
@trinhdung2008
@trinhdung2008 21 күн бұрын
Such a crazy level! +1 sub❤
@elianaaa2005
@elianaaa2005 22 күн бұрын
SO PRETTY :0
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 22 күн бұрын
Not as much as u!!!!!@!@!@!!
@gdfviii6638
@gdfviii6638 21 күн бұрын
this is so incredibly cool
@Ne_Kocmi4
@Ne_Kocmi4 21 күн бұрын
nostalgia for 2016 ...
@j.c.2.3gdffmi38
@j.c.2.3gdffmi38 21 күн бұрын
Looking cool 👀👀
@GDGhosty
@GDGhosty 21 күн бұрын
I thought it was a Minecraft song for a minute there 😂
@DellDex
@DellDex 21 күн бұрын
Looks incredible
@croumblagouche6706
@croumblagouche6706 20 күн бұрын
Really want to see this in the gauntlet👍
@KoltrexGD
@KoltrexGD 21 күн бұрын
Si o si ya ganaste un premio amigo, esta increíble el nivel ❤❤❤
@ivklam
@ivklam 21 күн бұрын
Banger ❤🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
@NIXCOOL123
@NIXCOOL123 21 күн бұрын
Se ve increíble ♥️
@ThisIsRidho7235
@ThisIsRidho7235 22 күн бұрын
This Is So Cool I Love It❤
@Superduperboy29
@Superduperboy29 21 күн бұрын
really good entry! if it doesn't make it into the gauntlet, it'll at least get rated. Edit: I just saw my notifications go from 0 to 2 instantly xd
@Darkglitchs
@Darkglitchs 21 күн бұрын
Nivel de fuego 🔥
@caiobrplays
@caiobrplays 21 күн бұрын
You cooked. My only concerns are: In the beginning cube the background feels a bit empty, the black cloud looking objects could stand out more. I found the swing part a bit empty ngl, its not bad but there could be more things to fill up the empty space. 0:50, 1:04 and 1:24 feel kinda unclimactic. The song is at its peak moments, and the level is kinda just there. It feels static compared to how intense the song gets. Take ELEVATOR by YPofficial and more (you should check that out). The pulses and effects fit exactly with the intensity of the song (even though it is a bit much tbh). Those were my opinions. Regardless though, its an amazing level and I would genuinly love seeing this in the NCS Gauntlet. Good stuff! God loves you
@caiobrplays
@caiobrplays 21 күн бұрын
Also dont take my opinion as a true fact, because when it comes to deco im kind a bit of a perfectionist tbh But still, hope I helped! GL with this banger level! And, as always, God loves you
@6rsk1
@6rsk1 18 күн бұрын
@@caiobrplays nah it is too static at the 2nd drop u're right
@PurXion_777
@PurXion_777 20 күн бұрын
This is hella good wtf.
@_DarkIce
@_DarkIce 22 күн бұрын
ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT
@D4rkOG
@D4rkOG 21 күн бұрын
This is def getting in the gauntlet
@killerdash2142
@killerdash2142 21 күн бұрын
NOW THIS IS FUKCING EPIC
@Ematiburon48gd
@Ematiburon48gd 21 күн бұрын
O_O DIOS MIO ESTA EPICO ✨
@chagd2590
@chagd2590 20 күн бұрын
Looks really good so far! The sync at 0:36 is kinda weird tho
@234hmc
@234hmc 20 күн бұрын
cat jumpscare = quality level, subbed.
@iUserMO
@iUserMO 20 күн бұрын
cada vez está más goddd, siga asi mana!!
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
Soy fan user
@iamsushi1056
@iamsushi1056 21 күн бұрын
the wave part in the drop around 1:32 might have slightly better sync with a double/triple/spam click on the high note due to the way the kick drum cuts it almost into two notes. It would match the glitch on the same musical part in the next segment (the last cube)
@GG-er9uv
@GG-er9uv 21 күн бұрын
1:37 that's look either like a sign of wealth and luck, or a swastika
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 21 күн бұрын
It's a damn spiral!!!
@GG-er9uv
@GG-er9uv 21 күн бұрын
@@Crystie06 oh..
@julio_gamer_1313
@julio_gamer_1313 21 күн бұрын
Increíble, sumamente increible...
@RanggaXD
@RanggaXD 21 күн бұрын
Visivle on 1:06 could be better like use custom font or the placement or the color? Idk, just let yourself cooking xd. This is actually really good i will wait you to complete this level!!
@COCOHERMOSOGD
@COCOHERMOSOGD 21 күн бұрын
GATO FELI
@ExvinityGD_YT_
@ExvinityGD_YT_ 17 күн бұрын
I really like this level. It has a lot of interesting parts. The part at 0:51 is especially good. My only upgrade is that the walls don't are a bit static . If they had more detail and moved up and down, the level would be even better.
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 17 күн бұрын
Btw removed them, i might not use things like that cuz these look weird, i kept the sign tho
@3ddie392
@3ddie392 20 күн бұрын
Bonito mana!
@RozzWasHere
@RozzWasHere 21 күн бұрын
For the visible words, make them have a "degeneration" effect where they crumble
@DeCubeyGD
@DeCubeyGD 21 күн бұрын
banger!!!!!
@GussErm
@GussErm 11 күн бұрын
joder esto esta realmente epico
@necked647
@necked647 9 күн бұрын
I really love the sync in this lvl. The transitions are also gas. Demon rating maybe?
@UntalSofthesky
@UntalSofthesky 21 күн бұрын
Ta godd 🦆🤙
@MarlinTheDoggy-ez8nq
@MarlinTheDoggy-ez8nq 21 күн бұрын
What if every1 votes for 1 person 😂
@Bic_gd
@Bic_gd 21 күн бұрын
Damn that’s my new fav level but it’s not uploaded and not full… BUT STILL IT GOES DAMN HARD A I LOVE IT
@Elapre
@Elapre 21 күн бұрын
Ta weño 🐓👏
@foxyflo_0of
@foxyflo_0of 20 күн бұрын
🔥
@GF_wrrt
@GF_wrrt 21 күн бұрын
Naguara que transición la del final xdd
@UncannyStudiosOfficial
@UncannyStudiosOfficial 15 күн бұрын
maybe instead of the ncs thing in the bg it could be a moon, and the ncs thing that says INVISIBLE in the part after, that could be a sun, just a suggestion, idk
@MatheusKrolov
@MatheusKrolov 21 күн бұрын
There are a lot of indicators, that lowers the quality of the level sometimes. The gameplay feels a little bit unbalanced, like 3 stars in a part and suddenly 9 stars to easy demon. Although, the design, decoration and transitions specially, are all sick. Good luck dude
@Detherrr-rt1gn
@Detherrr-rt1gn 21 күн бұрын
When i saw this i get subscribed to you
@BroccoliDoctor
@BroccoliDoctor 20 күн бұрын
Underrated
@alitigergd9394
@alitigergd9394 21 күн бұрын
The second part looks more clean! Great work crystie. As of for the last cube part, I think the gp needs a bit more play testing, but I already know you've just made the part so no complains at all😅 But bro, why didn't you add anything to the beginning? It still looks emptier than the rest of the level. Again, please don't take my word on anything here I literally can't build a layout properly
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
I'll add some animations later, i honestly think beggining is ok as it is, it just needs more live
@alitigergd9394
@alitigergd9394 20 күн бұрын
@@Crystie06 ok sounds nice
@estalciang
@estalciang 21 күн бұрын
Maybe for first half the game block design should need some work,as it’s quite plain. Other than that, you are going to win if not top 5 :D
@LottleGD
@LottleGD 22 күн бұрын
THIS IS AMAZING❤❤❤
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 22 күн бұрын
Lmao video spawned with your comment were waiting this smh? 😭
@LottleGD
@LottleGD 15 күн бұрын
by the the way that spiral transition is the most satisfying thing i have ever seen in gd
@gdcuaer4076
@gdcuaer4076 7 күн бұрын
Thats gooood, but pls delete those boarders from the first ship of the drop
@aardvarkwith5As
@aardvarkwith5As 20 күн бұрын
I think you could maybe make the first few parts a bit more readable, apart from that, I think this is going great!
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
Readable in which way, i don't get it pwp
@aardvarkwith5As
@aardvarkwith5As 20 күн бұрын
@@Crystie06 as in gameplay wise, everything was a bit dark so it was hard to see what had a hitbox and what didn't
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
@@aardvarkwith5As nah trust me, it's extremely easy when you play the level, tho i need to buff this as i want it to be an easy demon, i don't think u even need practice to beat this xD
@aardvarkwith5As
@aardvarkwith5As 20 күн бұрын
@@Crystie06 Ok, just wanted to make sure this is the best it can be. I really like how it's turning out!
@Epic-shorts
@Epic-shorts 7 күн бұрын
cool
@nellyleon6599
@nellyleon6599 21 күн бұрын
todo esta increible, lo unico que podria decir es que si le pudieras agregar un ldm por que honestamente los efectos de shaders de la camara me van re trabados a mi xD. solo una recomendacion de ahi en fuera esta 10/10
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 21 күн бұрын
El ldm ya existe y quita muchísimos objetos, como 3D innecesario y los mismos shaders. ;D
@-Logan_Word-7437
@-Logan_Word-7437 21 күн бұрын
Looks pretty visible to me
@Darlin400
@Darlin400 21 күн бұрын
Que god alv usando mis iconos xd
@josedaniel3285
@josedaniel3285 Күн бұрын
very good level🤑🤑
@Young5519
@Young5519 18 күн бұрын
The gameplay is great but the deco isn't enough to get an epic rate. The deco is great though! Nice work!
@SrJazze
@SrJazze 9 күн бұрын
cuando empezo la cancion pense que sonaria la de Duelo Maeatro XD
@thundergamergd
@thundergamergd 21 күн бұрын
Its pretty visible ngl
@duynamvu2010GD
@duynamvu2010GD 21 күн бұрын
it will be rated easy demon soon
@decract
@decract 21 күн бұрын
Reduce the epilepsy at the last part, i don't think people want that on a gauntlet. Or not, cause scarlet surge... its just a suggestion you're free to do it or not.
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
I mean ldm reduces a lot of flashes & shaders, enough for it
@spikeabug
@spikeabug 21 күн бұрын
Ok I feel like I should quit the game bc I've been trying to make something like this for a while and this is better than what I could do so... great level good job, I should just stop trying to create I guess :(
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 21 күн бұрын
Do not think like that, we all are trying our best! Trust me when i say, we are cooked, i'm completely cooked too, i'm still doing this kinda for fun and i hope it has a great result 😩
@Penumbrabycherryteam
@Penumbrabycherryteam Күн бұрын
1:05 woow
@YourNightUwU
@YourNightUwU 20 күн бұрын
Awesome level, but made your custom font :3
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
Nah i won't even try to make own fonts, these are really hard to optimize and it doesn't affects visually at all, and i won't ofc search for copyable custom fonts on gd as these are unoptimized asf xD but i still want to see what can i do with some texts like the "OHH" one in the predrop, it kinda looks weird.
@YourNightUwU
@YourNightUwU 20 күн бұрын
@@Crystie06 ok, that's true, I only wanted to help you. Your made awesome level :3
@MrKurzz
@MrKurzz 21 күн бұрын
This is far from good at least for this preview, really hope this deserves a place in this contest
@Nico-55
@Nico-55 21 күн бұрын
This is art (Cat Jumpscare)
@Invisible_Man00
@Invisible_Man00 21 күн бұрын
This is really impressive Might be a problem for low end devices though
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
Rn i'm not prioritizing optimization, i'll do that when i finish the level xD
@Invisible_Man00
@Invisible_Man00 20 күн бұрын
@@Crystie06 Im glad you'll optimize it,most of us mobile players get really excited to play a level just to get greeted woth a buttload of lag Im excited to get to play your level soon,hope it wins:)
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
@@Invisible_Man00 yeah don't worry i'll do my best in optimization, btw if you check the community tab on my channel, there's a thing about optimization and some extra info about the level if you want to check it!
@Koraal923
@Koraal923 20 күн бұрын
just add more details and you'l be good for the block design!
@EekusOldVideos
@EekusOldVideos 7 күн бұрын
yooo
@Ndi2713
@Ndi2713 20 күн бұрын
The "visible" Text in eye part is somewhat strange imo
@Crystie06
@Crystie06 20 күн бұрын
Ngl i don't know what to do in that part, i might not change it as i have no ideas, i think it won't fit with any other font but i don't want to remove it, i want to keep lyrics in ;w;
@Nsquare_01
@Nsquare_01 21 күн бұрын
Maybe tone down the sharp flashes a bit?
@hajj0014
@hajj0014 21 күн бұрын
Some parts feel kind of "empty" and Not detailed enough and the lighting toward the end seems weird. But great level
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