Holy shit, I love this au concept?? Especially with how well it meshes with your art style. This whole thing is brilliant.

I genuinely believe that if Swiftpaw survived then this would be the most likely path for him to go down

Nooo because I could genuinely see Swiftpaw getting so utterly frustrated by Bluestars negligence that he would genuinely just walk away and become evil. Love this AU and the art is so pretty!! 🥰

I also have a swiftpaw lives au and it’s so interesting to see the way yours goes! With mine, he ends up surviving the dog pack but is missing for months where the clan believes he is dead since he was took by twolegs. Smudge helps him return to Thunderclan and he ends up getting named Shatteredspine, because his spine had been pretty much shattered and he couldn’t walk, but with physical therapy with the twolegs he could get around better. He’s angry at Bluestar but instead of getting vengeance he focuses all of his anger into saving the clan, swiftly striking at a dog that was trying to get into camp with brightheart, the same dog that had personally mauled him. When Firestar steps up as leader, he’s named Swiftstrike and once again is able to join in the clan. Tldr swiftpaw is named shatteredspine in my au but later becomes swiftstrike and lives a happier life

THE FACT THAT LONGTAIL KILLED HIM MAKES ME CHILL-

0:25 ok but this is adorable

I LOVE THIS BUT..... I just can't see Swiftpaw ever wanting to hurt Brightheart;;;; I get the anger and resentment for his past building up so brutally over the years, but she was his partner in crime til the end.... I also wonder how he'd feel if he learned of Bloodclan's involvement with Tigerstar and the dogs :0 Very interesting concept, I'd love to see more of it!!! I really love the idea of Longtail being forced to kill his very first apprentice, it's so angsty!

Omg.... I'd love to see a map on this au. I love the concept and the twist, this is AMAZING!!! I love the colors and just everyting AAAAA

AU story made by me for swiftpaw's path: Swiftpaw couldn't bare waiting for his warrior name- Bluestar named him... Dog'Claw. This is for remembrance of him fighting the dog with his own claws. And Lostface for what aswell for loosing her face. Dog'claw hissed, bluestar shared no sympathy. Dog'claw didn't feel accepted. When firestar became leader, Firestar changed their names to SwiftHeart and BrightHeart, BrightHeart the next morning confesses her love for him, SwiftHeart loves BrightHeart aswell but rejects her as BrightHeart deserves better than him. In pain, SwiftHeart lowered his head and walked away. Each day when BrightHeart with Cloudtail happened, he grew more and more anxious because of how Cloudtail got his name first. SwiftHeart ran away and bumped into a shadowclan warrior, it was TigerStar, he hissed by rejecting TigerStar's offer. He found a loner that appeared to look like him, in terror he rambunctiously killed the loner in fear as if he looked in his own reflection, but he later was found _dead._ This leads to the clan driving mad. Yet SwiftHeart wasn;t dead. It was barley. The loner that looked like him only different by scars. The clan was so confused when SwiftHeart returned with a rabbit in his mouth, rejointing that it was a rouge that attacked him in lies. Firestar approached it, sniffing it. He gasped, "Thats Barley!" Firestar mewed, drooping his ears. Now ravenpaw was alone to fend for himself. SwiftHeart explained that he didn't kill it but was the cause of the death even though he did kill barley. He said "Barley missed when he lunged at me and fell into a ditch. I checked if he was alive, and he wasn't." Firestar dipped his head in belief. Later on when sorrelkit became Sorrelpaw, SwiftHeart mentored Sorrelpaw. Later on when SorrelPaw became SorrelTail, Graystripe goes missing. This replaces SwiftHeart as the deputy. Squirrelflight rejects to be with brambleclaw and Volepaw lives. Volepaw is also known as VoleClaw, VoleClaw and Squirrelflight are mates and they are happy with their kits. When graystripe returns, SwiftHeart is still considered deputy. Brambleclaw is later killed in a border battle by infected wounds, continuing with Thornclaw being bitten by a adder and not being able to be saved in time. Firestar dies in the great battle so SwiftHeart later on becomes leader of thunderclan as "SwiftStar" Getting his lives from: Firestar, Longtail, Bluestar, Lynxkit, PatchPelt, Goldenflower, Redtail, Brambleclaw, and Thornclaw. SwiftStar looses his first life from tawnypelt in a clan battle, His second from drowning, His third in a dog battle, his fourth by falling in a ditch, and then he got ran over by a monster so he did not get to live because starclan could not heal the wounds, so graystripe took his place to become graystar, SwiftStar gives Graystar his 9th life, while Graystar picks squirrelflight as deputy, SquirrelStar chooses IvyPool as deputy, IvyStar picks bristlefrost, Bristlestar picks whatever. Ashfur never starts the drama because Ashfur was not allowed in starclan, leafpool never gave birth to kits, Brambleclaw was killed, and so that means bristlestar can be mates with rootspring in thunderclan. This continues so-on.

I absolutely love this AU concept, super creative and super sad

This AU concept go crazy! The part where Longtail goes and ends him such irony such crazy such sad.

I really want to say Swiftpaw would never do this but honestly??? I 100% see it happening

are you depressed warrior cat? no problem!! join blood clan what isnt even real clan!! (+ for members we adding -50% for chips) shiftpaw says it was worth it

Every thing in this art style looks so clean and Perfected!

I really like this feel sad for swiftpaw tho :(

i kinda wish that this happened in the books- this is a great AU!!

This is such a genius AU concept! Wonderful execution

Damn!! This is probably one of my favourite swift paw AUs out there!

I love this AU so much-

I LOVE THIS AU

the characters are displayed perfectly, the story is so fluid, ARGH i love this sm

I love bloodclan Swiftpaw! he’s so bad-ass 😊 please have more of him in videos and he’s so cute at 0:25 omg

Saw this on the Wcue server, Great job!

I don't know what to say, it's perfect!!

SWIFTPAW !!!!!!! MY BOY!!! i love this au it’s so interesting :0 AND UR ART AA

this is such a good su concept omg I love it sm!! (I also love the loaf at 0:25 lol he looks so cute)

This is literally so good

I saw this on discord ! Is so awesome

Man I love this!!

I have an AU where Scourge becomes… less blood thirsty after adopting 4 orphan kits- they were orphaned because he killed their mother and he secretary raises them to be spies and assassins, but raising them changes him. Their names are Badger (massive black-and-white tom), Blake (big black she-cat), Stone (large, spotted gray tabby tom), and Fleet (slender tabby trans tom). Scourge is still hard on BloodClan, but that’s because he’s weeding out the cats who would most likely betray him from the cats who genuinely depend on him. When Tigerstar makes the off to give BloodClan part of the forest in exchange for help taking out the Clans, Scourge says he’ll “think about it.” He’s been informed of RiverClan and ShadowClan joining forces, so when he sends his adoptive kits to spy, he sends one to each Clan, Blake and Stone watching ShadowClan and RiverClan to figure out their plans and Badger and Fleet watching ThunderClan and WindClan to keep them safe. Blake in forms Scourge of the plan with the dogs, so Scourge, Bone, Brick, and the spies sneak into ThunderClan on the night that Swiftpaw and Brightpaw are attacked. They save the two of them, but Swiftpaw is badly hurt. BloodClan has their own version of a medicine cat (a cranky, old white she-cat named Snowball), so they carefully take Swiftpaw to her. She patches him up while Scourge goes to speak with Fireheart, finding him as they discover Brightpaw. Blake is left to guard Swiftpaw while her brothers are sent to watch ShadowClan, RiverClan, and WindClan. Scourge explains what’s happened to Fireheart and Bluestar, and even reminds Bluestar about how she had saved him from Tigerstar when he was a kit. He helps Fireheart plan the relay with the dogs, remarking how Fireheart looks a lot like his own father (that’s as much of an acknowledgment to them being half brothers that I give). He and Fireheart are ones to lead the dogs to the gorge before Bluestar comes in and saves Fireheart. Badger misses when ShadowClan is attacking WindClan, but Fleet saves Goosepaw and helps him run to ThunderClan, where they’re protected. Gorsepaw becomes super scared and basically follows Fleet around like a lost puppy. So, After Firestar tells Tallstar that Fleet is no harm to them, Tallstar makes him a temporary part of WindClan, which becomes permanent by the end. But because of how close Fleet had to get to Tigerstar when they fought, Tigerstar was able to smell the faint trace of BloodClan on him and realizes Scourge was helping Firestar. So he confronts him and the secret spy kits are revealed. The cats Scourge was worried would betray him do (about half of the Clan). Scourge takes his remaining Clanmates and sides with Firestar in the battle of TigerClan and LionClan. Scourge survives the fight, but his kits choose to join the Clans. After so many moons of watching the Clans and seeing how they work, they’ve fallen in love with the idea of Clan life. Blake and Swiftpaw have also become very close (and become mates once Swiftpaw is given his warrior name). Scourge lets them go, telling them how proud of them he is. Blake joins ThunderClan and is named Blackheart while Swiftpaw is given the name Swiftstrike, fleet joins WindClan and is named Fleetfoot. Gorsepaw finishes his training, is named Gorsefeather, and becomes Fleetfoot’s mate. Stone joins RiverClan, is named Stonetalon, and he and Dawnflower become mates, he is the father of Minnowtail, Pebblefoot, and Tumblekit. Badger joins ShadowClan where he’s named Badgerclaw. He becomes close to Littlecloud, but because Littlecloud is a medicine cat, the never label it as “mates.”

Whoaa i love this idea!

DUNUNAUNUNANA DUN DUN DUNNANANA

I love this Au very interesting.

love your style oml

This is really cool ima sub!😅

i think brightheart would have distracted him but its an au

WTF I LOVE IT

This is kewl

Banger au❤❤

Awesome ♥️

But why would he try to kill Brightheart 😭

Cool

Hello! Could I use that Swiftpaw design for a Map I’m making?

Did you hear wrong or did you compose it?

What's the story behind this?

I think it's fake because swiftpaw killed by the dogs