Ahmm help? I don't know how to end this now...😶🤣🤣 Anyways... 💜💜LOVE LOTSS!!💜💜

Awww so cute , they so lucky to have each other.... Jennie be like : >///

I love this story! It's so adorable and I'm so happy that Jennie finally showed her face to Lisa. I'm so glad that they are finally together.

Yay....Something to watch at quarantine ✌︎😉

Yayyyy new story.. Love you author!!! ❤❤❤

BEST STORY AUTHOR💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

The story makes me smile and also the author🥺❣️

If you don't know what will end the oneshot JUST DON'T END IT HAHAHAHHAHA

I love it plus this is longer then the original 😂

Author your story is so nice👏 please 🙏 next episode author 😘😘

it's literally 4am and i don't wanna sleep so thanks for the update i'm so bored pff hahaha 😅🤣 (btw it's me again)

I’m so glad this isn’t the end :•>

Aww cute story i love it alot

I'm impressed since it simply showed love is indeed patient in knowing the worth of the person they're in love with; being truthful to their words once they say and mean it and being honest about what they really feel for the person they love. They communicate well. Pure love. And if you still want to continue their story you have to remove "one-shot" from your title and go on with your story flow. If you decided to finish it and don't have any idea, I'll give you some ideas which some my cliche or maybe not since it will depend on how you will execute it ^^. Anyway, for the idea of the ending: 1. you can make the ending in their wedding or honeymoon or getting a child problem? 2. or maybe suddenly adopting a kid/s after years of being together before the wedding bells 3. or maybe you can make them successful in life but don't end up being together yet feelings were still burning between them. (this could be used on continuing the story or a cliffhanger) 4. or you can just end it here since they were already together and the rest is history ^^ It depends if you like a sad or a happy ending, or a cliffhanger ending (no continuation at all -just leave the readers to think of it how it ends hahaha). Overall, I love the flow of your story ^^

Hi author, really love this story. Could you please comeback and continue with this story. Thanks author. Ur supportive fan. 😊😊😊❤❤❤❤

12:14 paluha na sana ako tapos biglang nagpalit yung bgm😭 HAHSHAHAHSAHAHAHAUAHAU

Yey first again author plsss next again huhu cant wait na keep safe saranghae

AH! i fall in my bed when i saw this in my notification!

Wow so fantastic , release next pls 👍👍👍👍

Awit kilig si selp😂💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

The end 21++ please 😆😆 neexxxt 😘❤

Bonus part plsss having their family author!!! 50 minutes beke nemen hahaha thanks author

I like this ending it's beautiful XD

Hi author, OMG, this is such a sweet love story. Can you please 🙏🏽 continue this story. Since you started their ĺove story in school, then you should start the next chapter of them being young adults beginning to work and make new friends along the way. I am patiently awaiting your reply. Thanks, author. Ur supportive fan always ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Can not wait❤

Eyy i love itttttt next episode please huhuhu

Love this story. I wish you would made a bonus part of this story.

MORE! I LIKE IT! HAHAHA.

It was very impressived ff

Bonus part author hahaha please Thankyou 😍

Ohh....my heart. I love this story.......next please asap.

Kala ko ba one shot hahahhaa gusto ko nang kiligin author naman HAHAHHAA

Make 21+😂and lisa gp pleasee😂🙃

U r good writer that's why u can't end it cuz a lot of ideas hanging out in ur mind keeping it up!!😍😍💙💙

Wow ur so talented 😍👏

Awwww so cute! thank you author for this story!💗

yey finally!❤️

This captured me ❤️❤️❤️❤️

. next please😍😍

Next please.. 🥰🥰🥰

They got merried hehe..and have a happy family 😍😍 thank you for the beautiful story author..

This is the best jenlisa story so far ♡♡♡😁

Waiting for next episode

Wow just wow nice author!😊

Next ep pls!!! ❤️❤️❤️

thanks for the update unnie lisa is so luckyyy...i excited for the next episode

Just made jenlisa happy and from that day.. Jennie didn't wear mask anymore but lisa still care her like always...let lisa introduce jennie to her parent tho so jennie will know how rich lisa was...

Yeyyyy next please

Such a cute ff😍😍😍💗💗💗

Bonus pls pls pls💖💖💖

Hi author thank you so much😊

yaahhh!~~ where's the bonus parttt??? *Pout*

Deserves a bunos part maybe😊😊😊😊

love it 😍

Nice one author!

7 month ago. Please next episode upload . I can't wait. Please author beautiful story . I love it . Next please .❤️❤️❤️

It's so cool! Can't want for the next one!!

I want more please😅😢

LowKey JenLisa waiting for the last part😁 the story was cute😊 and i love it 😍😘 the songs🎵🎶 was good to my ears also while reading the story🤗haeng-un-eul bibnida

Omyyy i love the Story So muchh Thaaaankyouu Author!😍❤I can not wait for Next ep make it long This Story Author plsss Its Unique Story Promiseee!😍❤❤

Cute

that shook me when jennie spooked😂

your story is so sweet author ... :)

Oiiii author naman ehhhh, Make it a whole story nalang(ff) Sge na author.... Bat kasiii ang kyuttt nang storyyyyyyyy, Yan tuloyyyyyyy nag cre-crave kami sa mga episodes mooooo

Omg I'm crying..😭 this is so sweet😭😭😭 damn❤

Jennie is so funny because all the deserts they order all hahaha .....and lisa and jennie make my heart gay and keep making this video I love it so much more than my selft

yass! author you are fast😉

True love ahhh im crying now😂😭😭💖💖💖

Yeah ❤️❤️❤️

plss continue

Next author

Yeyeyeee

Good

Yeyy

thanks author for the upload gid bless 😇😊✌

Next author hmmm

First?

Ang sweet kaiingit naman thanks author 😂

First

firsttt

I'll be damn if I have a GF like Jennie or Lisa. 😁😁 (heart beat fast) both of them are hot and gorgeous 😍😍. Like Lisa said she strikes a lottery winning 1st prize. Love this episode 💕 Thanks author for sharing 👍🏻 JenLisa Forever ❤️ ❤️

Honestly at 4:37 all I could think of was.... "You are stunning queeenn", *snap fingers*... Idkytho

Next part please!🙈❤️

Next please keep going😍😍😘

please continue the story

Yeyyyy finally jennie take off the mask😆

Plss don't make anyone bother just make them happy

Wow..is that the ending author??i want more tell 5 chapter if you dont mind..☺☺..by the way ilove your story author..

Next please

Bonus chapter author 😭😭😭

Bunosssss plsssssss🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 2020 here😄😄😄

Upload plssss the nxt episode..

Ayieieieieiei sana oil😂 sana all may jowa shout out please😊

this is funny...how did jennie eat street doods with her,mask on....and lisa dis not even see hee face even once?

1st😁😁

Hi. I'm not sure if you can appreciate what I will suggest as I mentoring some of the few auhthors newbie and old and successful now with their stories. But let me tell you this, first when you create a one shot story you have to maintain and finish it according to what you already shown it until chapter4. Second, try to read the lost heart, my bully player, my childhood enemy ( my childhood enemy and bully player is same author), pervert photographer to get some ideas how you will end this with a good combination of bullying of those stupid characters you made from your first episode, and comedy romance. Then if your viewers wanted this to have a continuation then make a short story about this and all you have to do only is to remake the title and make a little changes of some topics or lines but the most important things is your have your unique style and originality. The reason why I recommend you to check and read those stories it's because for you to have an ideas and see it with your own eyes and observation how unique their stories is why these people from being a newbie now some of the authors I give advices are old here and some are new but now was loved by many viewers. It's not actually my first time here in your channel eversince you started here all your stories written I read it all already and I see it how good you are by creating stories though some of them are not totally original you maybe remake some from the original one but it's quite good. I'm not surprised anymore that now you have lots of subscribers. I'm rarely giving advices and comments but those auhthors who known me are the same like you who is also good. Keep it up and I hope my advice will benefits you in the end. Good luck!👌😉

Don't end this author please 🥺🥺🥺

so sweet!!!

First???

Authoooor!nextt update pleaseeeeee pleaseee pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee 사랑해❤