LEAVE UR LYRIC RECOMMENDATIONS IN THE COMMENTS 🙏🙏

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•.aV3r3.•

8 ай бұрын

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@RedTurnsFire 8 ай бұрын

I got a idea for one: Two of a kind, a coward and a brave one, trying to get the contracts and just to be already done

@Sweet_Glass 8 ай бұрын

I'M SORRY. IDK HOW TO DO THE LYRICS YET AND EVEN IF I DID SAY MY LYRICS RN I DON'T THINK IT'S GOOD😭✋ (But I hope you can finish it tho, it sounds good!)

@TheFirstManEdits 8 ай бұрын

For the lyrics before the end:The big man with the horns tricked the sinners into deals of riches and fame! Just to get em do his dirty work. (I can't rhyme😅)

@_itskira_9241 8 ай бұрын

UHHHH….i have none im so sorry 😭-

@l_1ttlel_3m0n 8 ай бұрын

Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh-

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

Lyrics right now; Verse 1: Twø little cups stumble upon a grand casino. They were gambling, but little did they know.. that their fun little games would soon come to an end. Cuz Satan interfered. While other gamblers cheered, the cups bet their souls away. And as they plead and plead, all because of their greed, they’re gonna have to pay! Pre chorus: They made a deal with the devil to go on a dangerous quest. If they fail, well, of to a castle where the Devil’s gonna take their heads… Chorus: The Cups are on the run! With their guns, a new battle has just begun! (Working on the rest) they’ll fight these debtors till they’ve won! Verse 2: (NONE) Pre chorus 2: (NONE) Chorus: (NONE) Last verse: The little cups are sober from all of their gambling (TO BE CONTINUED)

@spanishorvanishh 8 ай бұрын

lyric for to be continued: the devil finds out they were fighting and scrambling

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

Okay, so the way I want that last verse to go is like.. celebration, defeating the devil yk? Since it’s the end of the song it’s the end of their journey

@yeouchyie 8 ай бұрын

hey - are you singing by urself? i’ll love it!

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

Yeah i amm

@sunsolar9980 7 ай бұрын

@@aV3r3 Is this good for your example or no ? 🤔 Hope you like it 😅 "at the end of the day , once they overcome their devilish deal , defeating the Devil and his right hand man , there souls will be in safety and their grand sacrifice will be celebrated, and praised "

@Wolfcat2266 8 ай бұрын

idk 😭

@YummersVidGames 8 ай бұрын

I know I'm like 10 days late (IK I'm sry) but here's one I've had in my head for a while, IDK if it's good or not so...here it is (Verse 2 maybe???) We go now a few days later, The Devil's still a hater. The cups souls are still in vain... They're tracking all them debtors down, Doing some run-and-guns then and now. Soon they shall save the day.

@WhosJMC8 8 ай бұрын

Idea How about you do like an old timey introduction with the transatlantic accent and stuff and then it'll transition to a jazzy tune of your song Or any tune that your song is in i dunno.

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

OOOOO

@careyamos485 8 ай бұрын

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

Hi’

@kordacpz 8 ай бұрын

you should add a calix animi reference [ i explode ]

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

Ooooo like what? Any suggestions?

@kordacpz 8 ай бұрын

@@aV3r3 i am not good at lyric writing im gonna be honest lol . something mentioning war / ancient soldiers / fallen angels Maybe ??

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

Ooooo!! :DD

@flyLikeAPhoenixx 8 ай бұрын

Okkk I’ll try to help u out, so first of all WHATS the melody of your song? How loud and fast is it? And also pls say the lyrics u already have. (Sry if it sounds like I’m interviewing u or smth I just wanna help lol)

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

Melody was posted a while back! It’s fast paced

@flyLikeAPhoenixx 8 ай бұрын

@@aV3r3 okkk tysmm I’ll tell u if I have any ideas!!

@aV3r3 8 ай бұрын

Okkkk thank you!!!

@whatthericklon 8 ай бұрын

ill link a random song i like a vibe of- maybe do a introduction song like- from the 30s or 20s since thats what their based on heres the song btw- kzfaq.info/get/bejne/d7SCg9CFv7jVm5s.html