Ok, I know I literally just made and posted this scene a few days ago, but after a while, I started to think on ways I could maybe improve on my last attempt.
There are still some things that could be better, but I already feel like this take is a definite improvement over the last! I included the beginning page of the scene, and changed around some pacing and sound effects.
All the voices are done by me.[For reference, something between Nickel and Krok is the closest to my normal speaking voice in this whole video, lol]
All the sound effects were collected from various Free Sound websites.
I also used some music from the anime Trigun and the game Melty Blood, Act Cadenza.