I was lulled to sleep by the hum of the night breeze, the quiet whir of the fridge downstairs, and the soothing sound of footsteps. Bare skin, slapping against concrete outside. *wait-*

This was like a feelspasta, man.

Its kind of funny that the religious man in this story is named heathen.

The way her clothes were found and folded, considering the detail of the man being naked, feels like it was significant. Like, he didn't just take her, he made her like him. It's a very haunting setup…Well wrought, author and Creeps alike!

"I need to get home RIGHT NOW!!!" "Okay.... Wait let me stop in this empty field and stare at the dark for 10 minutes first"

Who win? A beautiful talented and naturally athletic female? Or one pasty boi

Another nearly hour-long creepypasta? Have you been reading my Christmas list?

This is an amazing creepypasta. It was very emotional and I felt care/sympathy for the characters within the story, and the way you told the story made this even better. I partially wish for a sequel, but maybe some things are best left alone, such as this beautiful story; it had a great amount of realism but a mixture of fiction that made the story easy to understand and grow fond of. Phenomenal job as usual, CreepsMcPasta and also a job well done to the author of this amazing story. Well done. 👍

I didn’t even realize how long this was, that sincerely creeped the shit out of me when the man popped up in the tree line, that kinda shit scares me. Great creepypasta

If I ever go missing, I want my picture on a beer bottle, instead of a milk carton so only *fun* people find me!

And we still haven't filed a missing persons report

His voice matches with the whole story and it scares me even though I'm with someone next to me😱😱😱👻👻👻👻👻

I'm at 15 mins and I'm guessing that when she heard him running she was scared because someone was stalking her which explains the moving a lot... but it's a creepy pasta so ya know unpredictable.

Yeah! 50 minutes with Creeps McPasta, he made my day.

A well-written pasta that makes the reader (or listener, as it were) want more. That being said, there were a few things about this story that didn't make much sense: 1) No one has a three-year class reunion. Most schools start them after the first ten years. Unless it was something put together independently by a group of students, but why would they feel this necessary? 2) Daniel mentions that his second conversation with Maisie happened on the last day of the term, in summer. He actually says that school got out a day early. Then, after the night in Daniel's bedroom, they spend several MORE weeks in school before the summer holidays begin. He actually says: "We finished school without ever speaking again. On the last day, I slipped my number into her locker, in case she ever wanted to get in touch." What kind of school lets out twice for summer holidays within a single year and holds three-year class reunions? 3) When Maisie and David leave the movies, their behavior is erratic. She begs David to take her home "Now, please" after he describes the naked man in the trees. This urgency to return home is forgotten when David randomly stops the car for some fresh air. He suggests that she join him and-- inexplicably-- she does! Why would you just randomly stop for a bit of air when someone clearly has expressed an urgent need to get home? And if you want so badly to get home, why would you not insist upon it? Make it clear that climbing out of the car in the middle of nowhere isn't what you asked him to do. The author explains away this behavior by stating: "Perhaps it was the pleasant view before us, or the fresh air, or perhaps it was the excitement of being out at night - whatever it was, something made her forget whatever had frightened her." I'm sorry, but if I was being stalked by an incubus (most likely what it was) that first attached itself to me after I went playing in the woods, I don't think being on a dark country road bordered on one side by "thick woods" would put me at ease. Not at all. Especially considering Daniel had described seeing it nearby only minutes before.

> school reunion > 3 years Lol wut

So does anybody have a theory about who took the picture of Maisie and why? I'm really said there is no part 2 because I really wanna know what happened to her, why her clothes were inside that house and who took the picture

I love the way he says Maisie, I don't know why but it sounds so beautiful when he says it.

ironic how her last name is "heathen"

Love the long ones like this!

If you think about it, since she was very distant from everyone including her father... her father explained that he acted like a gentleman. He was a gentleman at 3 different places... the cinema, the place overlooking the field, and at his house where he let her sleep in his bed... the “demon” was in 3 different places. It would make sense that maisie was scared of something that followed her everywhere because maybe that something was her father who as the narrator explained looked very skinny, the demon was also lean as if he hadnt eaten... just food for thought

Time for that creepy goodness people *Grabs popcorn*

When you describes the half naked man with muscular shoulders and a supernatural vibe i couldn't help but to think of Ben Swollo

well , this is gonna become a nightmare for me now which might haunt me for a week

"Maisie is missing ..." Sudden mass exodus from the party XD

I listened to this when it was first uploaded. Found it haunting sad and another weird feeling I can’t explain. Here I am three years later and still haven’t been able to get it out my head

* sees my name in the title * *MMM YES TIME TO WATCH* -MYSELF-

Lmao you went really Aussie the first time you said Maisie around the 2 minute mark

Part 2 please!!!! That one was a pretty good story, I would love to hear part 2!!!! Like this comment so he can see it. Part 2 please brah!!!!

This was one of the best stories I've heard. I personally really enjoyed it so much I listened to it three times. I really did like it. It was told extremely well. Thank you so much for your time and effort in the selection and narrative of these stories. This one in particular. I would like a Maisie part ll. I usually don't like sequels. 👍

Nah, Maisie is just in the washroom, putting on her makeup.

I just want to have a moment of appreciation for the background music, for a while it was playing "Lilium" its a beautiful song and always makes me emotional because of Elfen Lied 🙂💕

i always fall asleep during these long ones, and it takes like 3 days of picking up where i left off to finish the story, it's so good

How to be an idiot: watch a marathon of these in the dark.

Time and time again, you don't fail to please, thank you for all the hard work brother.

Would love a follow up to this one where he follows her footsteps to the cottage in Scotland

I wish it told me what happened ....it was kinda a cliff hanger

There should be some kind of "clown" repellent/antidote like there is for werewolves & vampires with a cross & silver bullet. 😂👌😂👍😂 This was a great story.

This really reminds me of "It Follows" without all the sex

I have so many questions about that ending. 🤔🤔🤔

Apparently I have gone missing haha always funny to see things with my name on it, doesn't happen much. Can't wait to listen when it comes around on my work playlist.

This story still makes me cry at the end....he loved her and he never knew it

WHAT A LONG VIDEO :D more pls You're amazing Creeps

We need a part 2 😭

*Sees guy in the woods that's freaky.* Decides to stop and take a breath in the middle of no where *LOGIC* 😂😂

This was such a magnificent and intensifingly slow burn. The writing, the narration, and the music were all perfect. The subtle suspense was gripping the whole time I listened. I felt what these characters felt. I can honestly say that this is my favorite creepypasta, I don't usually ever listen to a creepypasta more than once and I have listened to this one more times than I can count. It leaves me with a sense of melancholic wonder and a rolling sense of sadness for the characters. Such a great story. It is perfect the way it is.

Wow. This has to be the you’re best creepypasta yet

Thanks for taking the time to make these long pastas for us to enjoy. Greetings from germany.

This is what I call quality pasta, awesome narration of an awesome story!!!

I hear lilium in the background. Amazing

Have'nt had time to listen to these stories for a long while and i just now can feel how much i've actually missed them

Excellent as usual CreepsMcPasta, keep up the great work. Keep your awesome videos coming!!!!

A sad and beautiful story. Great narration

why such a sad creepypasta?

its been over a year since i watched elfen lied and when you put that elfen lied music on all the feels came back, feelsbadman

Pretty scary... But I'm going through a phase... I'm currently unphased. Fear is no longer a concern.

Definitely a creepy story...one that I wish had a Part 2! Thanks for the wonderful narration! 😊✌👍

I really love your videos, hearing your voice really helps calm my anxiety.

Really awesome! I wish you uploaded longer stories like this!!! 👌 do more!!!

Amazing story., a perfect blend of scary and sad. Full credit to Spuk for his imagination and Creepy for the stirring and elegant narration as usual. The background music was a great touch as well.

*grabs popcorn* Let do this! Edit: I want a part 2!!

I fall asleep to a lot of creepypastas but something about this one gave me a nightmare for the first time in awhile so good job

Is it weird that I kinda have a crush on Maisie?

Why did Amazing Story, I really like it a lot. Your narration was excellent. Thank you very much.

Well this is another well narrated story by you. I really enjoy them very much. Your voice and accent are so easy to listen to. Keep up the good work!! 😁😁😁😁😁

kinda sad and right in the feels as I felt very antisocial and ''somewhere else'' in my highschool years, often told by people too, once a guy in our track team told me, I felt like you weren't even there sometimes and forgot you were even in the team. Im not even sure how anyone manages to be as shy as I was.

Love these long stories, keep them up!!

Great story, and a great narration. I really enjoyed it

This CreepyPasta is surely one of the best. I love stories with elements of mystery and tragedy. We didn't find out what happened to poor Maisie but then again, maybe that's for the best. It could be supernatural or not, either way, it's something that'll keep me up at night.

i listened to lavendertowne read this :3

Good thing it’s a long video I need this

Ahhh the long ones are the best ones ... coupled with the most soothing and talented voice on KZfaq - heaven for my ears

wow she smiles so quietly "she smiled quietly to herself"

Bravo man I’d love to hear more stories like this

This is one of the best pastas I’ve heard in a while

this is one of the best ones ive heard in a long time.

Thank you Creeps, mysterious and melancholy.

I love the long hecking stories keep it up:)

I want to know what happened to her 😪😦😐🤔

Woah! Fantastic read of a fantastic story, I don't really know what it was about this story but it really cut right through me, goosebumps the entire story! I think the only other stories that have got me like that were radio Phil and Penpal. I think I found a new favorite!

This was 10/10, beautiful pasta.

Rarely is there such thing as an hour long CreppsMcPasta happen,but when it does I go to a secluded place,and simply enjoy

This is one of the best creepypastas i've ever heard!

Thank you for helping me sleep almost every night.

I was very happy with this one , great story -(characters , plot , turnout , narration all of the above) . ☺️

I'm legit not joking when I say I listen to this about 40 times it's still scares the crap out of me and last night I had a dream about that thing in the story and I woke up with shivers all over This one still delivers and I think there's something scary about not knowing what happened to her that makes it better

I hardly love creepy pastas anymore but this... this was interesting and obscure enough for me to listen to the end. I love mysteries. They're the scariest

I love those long CreepyPastas

The first creepypasta to ever make me cry

Literally my favorite creepypasta

Dood that was a crazy story I've been listening to you for a while and I think it's the best you have done In a while good that was great thank you mort your the best on here thanks again NEW YORK

This is my comfort creepypasta..........I watch this when I'm sad

Love the long stories thanks a lot creeps

Man I would love a second part to this, maybe him trying to find her and he ends up dealing with the demon to. That would be awesome

creeps do more long stories like this, I listen to them at work. It helps pass the time lol

This was such a good story I wish there was a part two

this is a really good one !!!

Awesome. I really enjoyed the fact that they were legitimate friends or at least that if there was a crush from the protagonist towards Maisie it remained unspoke. I like to think that it was here that took her photo from him in the end, and she's still alive and did so in order to fully vanish, not to involve her demon with the main character any further.

Wow, I gotta say, this one was really, really good!

Amazing story and even 5 years later, one of the only stories I’ve seen told by a secondary character