"There was Someone Standing in my Yard Last Night" [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime
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@shroomyk 5 жыл бұрын
Who the heck microwaves a frozen pizza? That's what ovens are for, you madman.
@rosesluckrideart 5 жыл бұрын
What an absolute mad lad
@greywalker505 5 жыл бұрын
What a *deviant!*
@justintimely6921 5 жыл бұрын
I do
@cadenceclark3026 5 жыл бұрын
Yeah, that’s the focal point of this story. Sure 😂
@decaf4450 5 жыл бұрын
accidentally microwaving a pizza will burn it to a crisp, sadly I've experienced this more than once
@pixelized_cloudz7802 3 жыл бұрын
When he screamed “HE JUST SPRANG TOWARDS THE HOUSE! HE’S BANDING ON THE DOOR!”, I jumped and I absolutely loved how it set the scene and he put so much emotion into it.
@scorchia932 2 жыл бұрын
I was half asleep at that point, let's just say I soon woke up 😂😂
@SubcribeMinecraftNOW 2 жыл бұрын
That was enough to trigger anyone's fight or flight reaction
@crispgeneral3462 Жыл бұрын
So true I got severe goosebumps
@Annihilation_Studios 5 ай бұрын
@FrancisE.Dec.Esquire Mr creepypasta is not gas station jack. They're just good friends that work on the gas station series together
@michaelstrickland6964 3 ай бұрын
I love that these are posts being written and the “author” wrote it out
@alecs5394 5 жыл бұрын
oh those sneaky little Jehovah's Witnesses
@moviegirlaka 5 жыл бұрын
🤣
@ToyBonnieRabbit1987 5 жыл бұрын
Lmao
@adamethridge7824 5 жыл бұрын
Alexei Jp nah general Mattis!
@alecs5394 5 жыл бұрын
"What keeps you awake at night? Nothing. I keep others awake at night" - General "Mad dog" Mattis
@shibby7667 5 жыл бұрын
Yo foreal why u have to make fun of them
@colemarie9262 5 жыл бұрын
FYI for anyone watching- you don’t need any evidence to report an incident to the police, or to file a report really. And it’s a stupid idea not to in a situation like this- if the person was to break in at a later date there is a record of you reporting them, and that helps. If they break into a neighborhood home and hurt someone, you’re a witness, and that report proves that you saw the person when you say you did prior to knowing there was a crime, making you more legitimate as a witness. In any case, in real life, you can easily report this kind of stuff. (Side note- It’s not the same thing as snitching on kids smoking pot in the park, your home safety is a whole different ballgame.)
@grubbybum3614 4 жыл бұрын
But I really wanna snitch on those kids doing the mariwana.
@swaglevi4315 4 жыл бұрын
@@grubbybum3614 No bad
@TheGoatkage 4 жыл бұрын
I agree you don’t need evidence to file a report but if you got evidence, that makes it likely for the police to show up quicker and more cautious/concerned about your situation.
@Bleep831 4 жыл бұрын
Those meddling kids who keep taking weed in the park.
@HugoGojibiter 4 жыл бұрын
In fairness, the dude in the story wasn’t being hesitant because he didn’t think he could report it without evidence, he just figured they wouldn’t take it seriously. And I imagine that would be the case a lot of the time
@WetCanoot 5 жыл бұрын
Fun fact! That green photo of the hunched over guy is actually a hilarious photo of a drunk guy that shit his pants :D
@sethmillan8627 5 жыл бұрын
Ethan Smith I can never take this image seriously now. Thank you for the chuckles.
@FIRSTNAMELASTNAME-zt4kf 5 жыл бұрын
Great youve ruined this story for me 😂
@dahut95 5 жыл бұрын
@@sethmillan8627 what it 72
@savy8295 5 жыл бұрын
That's maker it less scary
@sethmillan8627 5 жыл бұрын
Jaime Bond what?
@leaflikesfrogs1624 5 жыл бұрын
“When I heard the first bangs on the front door-“*upbeat ad starts playing*
@Knitmur 5 жыл бұрын
I noticed that too xD
@marmalademagnus4174 4 жыл бұрын
them damn salesmen 🙄
@SabbyNeko 4 жыл бұрын
RAID: SHADOW LEGENDS
@omnicrunch 4 жыл бұрын
the Raid: Shadow Legends ads now brought to your home, personally, mosly between 1 AM - 5 AM, in your house, I mean basement...
@kryoruleroftheninthcircleo4151 3 жыл бұрын
They’re selling death. It’s free! Only costs you your life!
@Hi-uv7nn 5 жыл бұрын
“And I opened the door” he’s very smart
@sadisticgirl_ 4 жыл бұрын
Surprisingly that technique worked better than closing it lol
@ldzbeats5128 4 жыл бұрын
What an intellectual 😂
@JudithLight84 5 жыл бұрын
"The damned step creaked louder than a step ever has in the history of stairs!" I don't know why but this made me laugh
@blackoceancreativeuniverse 4 жыл бұрын
please check out "an Illustrated History of Stairs" in the "things you need knees for" section of you local ibrary!
@Mgrom-r7c 2 жыл бұрын
This reminds me of, “the strawiest straw man ever made of straw”
@LR-yc9gm 4 жыл бұрын
“When i heard the knock on the door, i could tell that ... Door Dash has the restaurants you crave at your fingertips” was a well-placed ad.
@RedOnly 2 жыл бұрын
A year later........ A total wine and more jingle 🤣🤣
@SimplySimulated 6 күн бұрын
Now it's a political ad for the lady vice-president.
@micheleberg4922 5 жыл бұрын
45:58 it mouthed “my house now boy”
@adamethridge7824 5 жыл бұрын
Jorden Berg maybe but these ppl need to teach him the mean of sacrifice couple of claymores would fix this problem right up we got a Kong in the wire
@SenkaBandit 5 жыл бұрын
Adam Ethridge don’t forget to add some kapkan traps and frost traps
@jeanniebosch3628 5 жыл бұрын
It really said...FINDERS KEEPERS!!!
@grace-4072 4 жыл бұрын
i accidentally pressed the timestamp and now i gotta find where i was 😂
@ChapoChaos 3 жыл бұрын
I’m imagining Arthur Morgan saying that
@cactusskin 5 жыл бұрын
when you try to ignore the mormans knocking at your door
@dkro9634 5 жыл бұрын
Stephen Fierro Jehovahs witnesses?
@Sienisota 4 жыл бұрын
No Mormons on my area, but oh, when the Jehovah's Witnesses come knocking... I suppose the difference is similar to Skinwalkers, Rakes and Wendigos... non-existent...
@jackheissler3121 4 жыл бұрын
They summon a demon
@kiralonely1307 3 жыл бұрын
@@Sienisota At best, very minimal. Technicalities moreso than any real differences. Most people will take them to be synonymous somewhat lol ^^;; analogy is very accurate tho lol
@spicybiscuit5530 5 жыл бұрын
45:58 "It's free real estate"
@TheInstinctWithinV2 5 жыл бұрын
Omg yes! 😆
@9bang88 5 жыл бұрын
Spicy Biscuit the wink wonk he does only makes it better
@abbinormal407 5 жыл бұрын
...take your thumbs-up and go.
@IsaiahMemes 5 жыл бұрын
It's LeBron james he just wants to give you a Sprite cranberry
@mrroy678 4 жыл бұрын
Ima let him I now gimmie that sprite cranberry
@arkhane2495 4 жыл бұрын
I'm thinking of that creepy sprite cranberry game
@joshuayoung6683 4 жыл бұрын
@@mrroy678 0
@DragonSlayer-cp4qz 3 жыл бұрын
No no no no no NO NO NO NO NO NOOOOO AHHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOO
@Goober_gobbler 3 жыл бұрын
The fact there is a comment on this from 2 weeks ago.
@AshWont 5 жыл бұрын
It's just nosferatu chill lol all he wants to do is Flicker your lights
@The_Wallflower 4 жыл бұрын
Nosfuratoooooooo
@ragmenel 4 жыл бұрын
I love this community
@llogiesagh_1023 4 жыл бұрын
What is a nosferatu
@BunPlus11 4 жыл бұрын
@@llogiesagh_1023 he's from a old scary movie (I think) and they had a spongebob episode where he appeared flickering the lights
@BunPlus11 4 жыл бұрын
@@ragmenel me to
@lsbullen8444 5 жыл бұрын
I don’t know how people can be disappointed in that ending. It leaves room for you to interpret it how you like. For me he is obviously trapped in the basement in his dreams, he still lives a life away from the house, but all his dreams are in that basement, with others that have found themselves in the same situation. As for the creature, perhaps it was trying to help him all along. It knows about the things in the basement so it try’s to scare people away before it’s too late. It was injured by something to be bleeding, it is the only thing keeping whatever is causing the horror in the basement, in the basement.
@ChihuahuainaTrenchcoat 5 жыл бұрын
Interesting take
@j-dawg4774 2 жыл бұрын
That actually makes sense and honestly makes me feel better, I was like "The dude made the smartest decision I've ever heard in any creepypasta: He got the heck out of there despite not knowing what was going on, he wanted to live out his years with his wife instead of being a victem to whatever horrors were in the basement"
@NailHeavenAshford 2 жыл бұрын
It’s probably bleeding because it smashed a door in with its bare hands.
@twilightsparkle75 Жыл бұрын
@@NailHeavenAshford nah it doesnt say bloody scratches along the door. i figured it started to bleed when the screech happened
@twilightsparkle75 Жыл бұрын
what confused me about the end was he said "i wake up in the basement"
@ridanaushad3376 4 жыл бұрын
Everyone's Gangsta until he puts frozen pizza in *the microwave*
@spottiestbeef7791 3 жыл бұрын
I do it
@sugarrush9875 3 жыл бұрын
Depends on what kinda frozen pizza If its microwaveable, eh If it isnt, excuse me what the f u c k
@justaduck3615 3 жыл бұрын
@@sugarrush9875 The real question is how he managed to fit a whole ass pizza in his microwave.
@sugarrush9875 3 жыл бұрын
@@justaduck3615 When I say microwavable i mean the small pizzas meant for microwaves:>
@nonamenotrace4333 3 жыл бұрын
Microwave oven maybe?
@centaurus5597 5 жыл бұрын
Everybody gangsta until the £¥€¶∆ start walkin'.
@snekysnek3976 4 жыл бұрын
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
@kathk7439 4 жыл бұрын
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
@connor_bell 4 жыл бұрын
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
@yheti3584 4 жыл бұрын
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
@banfive1682 4 жыл бұрын
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
@pabloborroto4692 5 жыл бұрын
Finally a story in which the police arent completely incompetent Like really even in some of the good ones the police dosent help mostly because people seem to not realize that some investigations can go on for decades without any real or mayor progress, it can be frustrating sometimes but at least here the police ACTUALLY does the best they can, its made better since the writer dosent imply that it all they did
@arksurvivor7372 5 жыл бұрын
I agree I love it when a Police team actually tries stuff and it fails over there being no police involvement (Unless it's something like the story is from the view of a child and they didn't call the police)
@gman3664 5 жыл бұрын
More of a stereotype than incompetence
@MajinMist603 5 жыл бұрын
At this point were I see that it is at my door step trying to get in is the time to move a few states away maybe country's
@greywalker505 5 жыл бұрын
And it ups the tension when the police is actually competent and does everything they’re supposed to, but the case still stumps them.
@johnblake5688 5 жыл бұрын
yeah, this story's pretty unrealistic in that regard
@ShootingStarNeo 5 жыл бұрын
"Oh yes I'm sure this will be a lovely little bedtime story to see me off to sleep," I said, for some reason, probably exhaustion. I'm a fool. I am Boo Boo, the Fool, it is me.
@booboobeebee6423 4 жыл бұрын
No I'm booboo the fool. Same story
@bog_witch.official5151 3 жыл бұрын
Yeah I did it too. It's now four am and I'm regretting my choices.
@Ashekier 3 жыл бұрын
We are all foolish enough to listen to this at the darkest hours of the night. But I am the only one who lies in the comfort and protection of a blanket fort
@bog_witch.official5151 3 жыл бұрын
@@Ashekier wow subtle flex
@Idolstarcynder 3 жыл бұрын
Iggy, is that you?
@bralynnethomas9170 5 жыл бұрын
Every time I listen to these stories I feel like someone is behind me
@GhostRider747 5 жыл бұрын
Bralynne Thomas same
@C-13770 5 жыл бұрын
I am
@autumnc3531 5 жыл бұрын
Soon as I read this comment I had to look over my shoulder.
@C-13770 5 жыл бұрын
@@bralynnethomas9170 who was that to?
@bralynnethomas9170 5 жыл бұрын
U
@runningwolfpup1293 5 жыл бұрын
This is like the fourth time I've listened to this, and because of the way that you narrate it, it never gets old. This is probably one of my favorites of your stories.
@Saiyan_Goku 4 жыл бұрын
Hollyleaf killer of blonde edgelord yo can you explain the ending to me?
@humanbean6672 4 жыл бұрын
yes!! this and tales from the gas station are my favourites
@youtubeconnollyfamily 3 жыл бұрын
My favorite is my friend visited a alternate reality. But this one is definitely in my top five
@zeshanmushtaq5520 3 жыл бұрын
Hey, man I love this story, do you know any similar to this in nature / storytelling
@MySomberNights 3 жыл бұрын
The wendigo/skin walker stories are always a treat.
@xpikapeltx22 5 жыл бұрын
The voice acting was spot on. Appreciate the audible horror.
@pasteldreams5413 4 жыл бұрын
MrCreepyPasta is the king of voice acting >:)
@xavierhernandez-dones4497 3 жыл бұрын
@@pasteldreams5413 so is it like a team who does the voice acting or only him? If only him, the voice acting is incredible for a single person
@brotherhoodofsteelsoldier1356 3 жыл бұрын
@@xavierhernandez-dones4497 it’s only him
@NotA3xCombo 5 жыл бұрын
It all started with the Pizza.
@truefroggod5954 3 жыл бұрын
True
@kiralonely1307 3 жыл бұрын
This is all his punishment for microwaving a damn pizza.
@Annihilation_Studios 5 ай бұрын
@@kiralonely1307 mini pizza 🤤
@pippo17173 5 жыл бұрын
Ugh is my daughter making milk shakes again? Goddamn boys.
@greywalker505 5 жыл бұрын
Normally I would facepalm and cringe, but that’s actually pretty funny.
@cameronangel1013 4 жыл бұрын
Knew something brought him to the damn yard
@Chronicler9 3 жыл бұрын
i LOVE that this comment exists and that I saw it (and that there's a whole generation that won't even know what the heck it means). Thank you, kind @AnimeWolfgamer
@christopherhancock1723 5 жыл бұрын
This channel is so much fun to listen to, the stories on here feel so much more creepy and scary than the predictable stuff Hollywood produces these days.
@Kezz00 5 жыл бұрын
Well then, watch Mr.nightmare, Creepsmcpasta, Unit #522, and Lets read. at least my favorites haha you've probably heard of them though.
@d0p3l 5 жыл бұрын
ofc this guy is a gentile
@youtubeconnollyfamily 3 жыл бұрын
Kelv mr creeps is better.. but hey that’s just my opinion
@youtubeconnollyfamily 3 жыл бұрын
I listen to this channel and Mr. creeps. They are both the best...creeps loads videos every single day
@youtubeconnollyfamily 3 жыл бұрын
If you have not listen to “my friend has visited a alternate reality“ from this person make sure you do. To me it’s the best pasta story of all time
@realdaggerman105 4 жыл бұрын
‘I don’t know what to do anymore’ *ominous nothingness noise* Ad: EaRs FeElInG bLoCkEd?
@omega_acxd 5 жыл бұрын
"I SMELL PENNIES"
@quake1650 5 жыл бұрын
"SCP-096 HAS BEEN SUCCESSFULLY CONTAINED"
@-Samus-Aran- 4 жыл бұрын
What story is this a reference to? I'm interested in hearing it if it's related to this one
@TheManBehindTheSlaughter6669 4 жыл бұрын
@@-Samus-Aran- you don't know about SCP-096 aka shyguy?
@dathmach8745 3 жыл бұрын
@@-Samus-Aran- The SCP foundation is a whole other thing
@nicholasmorgan7609 5 жыл бұрын
The ending felt rushed, like he didn't know how to end it. Bad enough when that happens with regular creepypasta but a MAJOR disappointment on a series. Also, what happened to their son?
@JRMAV1 5 жыл бұрын
Nicholas Morgan Don’t remember them having a son? Where time wise is he?
@nicholasmorgan7609 5 жыл бұрын
@@JRMAV1 It's in part one, when the narrator mentions he gets home long after his wife and the son, but it might have been "the Sun" and I misunderstood
@Coffeebean1985 5 жыл бұрын
He did great, do a better version of it and show him how it is done if it bothers you so much.
@lukesanroman3494 5 жыл бұрын
Nicholas Morgan It was "Sun" I think
@copper589 5 жыл бұрын
You're not the only one, I was wondering where their child was this whole story till this comment
@dorklardent. 4 жыл бұрын
I love how he mentions only once that he has a son and this thing never puts him in any danger
@damkylan3 4 жыл бұрын
Sun, not son.
@ssnakebbite. 4 жыл бұрын
this one genuinely creeped me out!! and after nearly 6 or 7 years of listening to creepypastas, it gets gradually harder and harder to get scared. this narration, story and background music really is a work of art. thank you :)
@matchboxcharm9290 5 жыл бұрын
This is the best reading I’ve ever heard in my life the panic in his voice before when the guy comes in the house
@ltu_domo3860 5 жыл бұрын
help there is a tall shaved man in my yard please help!!!!!!!
@midnightgaming4100 4 жыл бұрын
Frank Wilcox yo chill it’s just Johnny sins here to lay the pipe
@kryoruleroftheninthcircleo4151 3 жыл бұрын
Is he wearing a suit?
@kiralonely1307 3 жыл бұрын
at least he shaved before showing up maybe that's just what bigfoot looks like when he shaves and gets all dressed up to impress.
@gevontoledo9188 5 жыл бұрын
It’s October, time for his channel to blow up
@siedzepodkocem624 3 жыл бұрын
Doot
@shoelaces9857 5 жыл бұрын
I love how much emotion you put in these, I can feel the fear, sadness, and awful sounds throughout it. Man, your so talented! Gives me chills
@amandahuddleston7070 5 жыл бұрын
This is one of the ones that terrify me.
@victoriadalsoren4255 5 жыл бұрын
Scariest part of this is microwaving a frozen pizza. 🤢
@dylanking9646 3 жыл бұрын
how he even fit a whole pizza in the microwave bruv
@bamb1etta_basterb1ne 3 жыл бұрын
@@dylanking9646 slice of pizza
@Annihilation_Studios 11 ай бұрын
It was a mini pizza
@rangelancer3776 5 жыл бұрын
Chin chin has returned.
@bunnybaby975 5 жыл бұрын
RANGELANCER 😂😂😂😂
@cosmictrashbin89 5 жыл бұрын
T H E C H R O M O S O M E S
@justagamer6188 5 жыл бұрын
Hey b0ss
@Saiyan_Goku 4 жыл бұрын
RANGELANCER wut
@lordlammi1562 4 жыл бұрын
Chin Chin demands a sacrifice!
@LibraGamesUnlimited 5 жыл бұрын
I actually thought that maybe the 'creature' was a guy with his vocal cords cut trying to warn the couple about bad people in the basement, maybe looking for something hidden in there they were trying to steal or something. Boy was I wrong. :)
@skyenellums308 5 жыл бұрын
Can we get both this story and “my friend has been living in an alternate reality” on the podcast as well? I don’t have the means to listen to these stories on KZfaq while at work and that’s basically where I live lol
@dantecaputo2629 4 жыл бұрын
The twist is it’s just a really dedicated Amazon delivery man with really bad social anxiety.
@casualnobody8557 5 жыл бұрын
Okay, uh, the bit where he ran at the door? That actually got me. >_
@_baki-hanma_ 4 жыл бұрын
Same
@iamzesty 5 жыл бұрын
The dude in the backyard description sounds like The Rake.
@AsherIsLame 5 жыл бұрын
I looked back at my phone to the second picture and looked away immediately then looked back picked up my phone and said "THANKS FOR THE FECKIN NIGHTMARES" then I typed this comment
@llogiesagh_1023 4 жыл бұрын
Yep agree
@PortgasDAce-us3dg 5 жыл бұрын
45:55 he mouthed "it's all oger now"
@pabloborroto4692 5 жыл бұрын
its is
@gothboi4ever 5 жыл бұрын
“Mah swamp!”
@benmccarthy3177 5 жыл бұрын
It's never oger
@omegamysterio3701 3 жыл бұрын
Shrek is love... Shrek is life.
@jjrobotnik 3 жыл бұрын
The creater just comes out and says that the monsters name was shrek
@Mrfritz590 5 жыл бұрын
Deliberately bad story summation: the world's weirdest home security system.
@pleasedepositfivecoins7858 5 жыл бұрын
roses are red, violets are blue, spoopy season is coming soon, this channel is gonna get hella views
@mmmm69420 5 жыл бұрын
"Spoopy season" ahahaha
@sethmillan8627 5 жыл бұрын
RexyArts That didn’t rhyme, but it was still funny.
@snekysnek3976 4 жыл бұрын
IS SPOOKY SEASON BOIS!!!!!!!!!!
@starlightassassin5592 4 жыл бұрын
That was one great of a ryme! If only had the time to make my own, that would be neat for me.
@matthewtynan6562 5 жыл бұрын
Wow just wow, you sir have a very great talent for story telling. Multiple times in this story I felt dread come over me and was actually unsettled. Well done sir well done indeed
@nataliecameron 4 жыл бұрын
This had the same spooky vibes as "I'm a 911 operator, and I just had the most terrifying call"
@megamovieman101 4 жыл бұрын
I really liked the story until the weird ending. I was all for this couple having a happy ending and escaping, but there's too much that just isn't addressed. The police covering everything up, the tall man, the voices in the basement (I assume they're the voices of people who lived in the house before but who knows?), and the game cameras. But it did a very good job of building tension throughout, and I really bought into the relationship between the couple.
@michaelh9649 2 жыл бұрын
Was looking for this exact comment. You’re spot on. Waaay too much was left unresolved.
@brennanclegg315 2 жыл бұрын
Part of it being unresolved showed the true fear going on
@brennanclegg315 2 жыл бұрын
It’s kind of like the movie the thing, the less you know about the monster, the more terrifying it is
@bigbrohybrid Жыл бұрын
I personally think that a shadow of everyone who lived in that house gets created each time the homeowner and family moves out. That OP and his wife actually did leave and move on to build a new life together but their fear and trauma manifested selves were not so lucky. The second OP said “Last night I woke up in the basement-“ him and his wife had completely expelled their trauma 100% and had moved on 400+ miles away, but the leftovers had nowhere else to be other than the place where they were first made….. In that creepy house they were made to fear. It’s just my interpretation. A type of spirit in middle-eastern folklore I’ve heard about are Daevas and this story reminds me of those.
@omallie360 4 жыл бұрын
I gotta to say ... I just LOVVVVVEEEE the way you read. The others seem to use some online reader or smthg cuz their sentences always sound continual, the emotions don't match the stories, it's refreshing get hear that some ppl do still talk with punctuation and all that, lol.
@norrix5122 5 жыл бұрын
This is by far my favorite channel for creepypasta. 10/10 have already told all of my friends
@Snoozing.inky69 4 жыл бұрын
I've listened to so many creepypastas I've become almost numb to the "scary" parts of the stories. THIS ONE HOWEVER!!! IT WILL ALWAYS GET ME! PART 2'S ENDING!!!! I love it so much
@Safactamas 5 жыл бұрын
Wasn't a fan of the ending but great horror story tho do more like this please
@kaiwyatt8465 4 жыл бұрын
No matter how many times i listen to this story, I still get chills. MrCreepyPasta is the greatest story teller ever.
@weaponisedfarts1382 5 жыл бұрын
I feel that this story was ended too quickly. There's still a lot to explore, the basement, the creature itself, and what was on the game cameras.
@oren1305 10 ай бұрын
Super late, but sometimes leaving some things up to the readers imagination is better than overexplaining everything.
@weaponisedfarts1382 10 ай бұрын
@@oren1305 True.
@lezloart4597 5 жыл бұрын
I just wanna say your voice is amazing 🖤
@infestedribcage 4 жыл бұрын
i’m lucky i have insomnia and don’t have to fall asleep to my imagination after listening to this... maybe having my eyes open would be scarier but, i don’t know, sleeping to the thought of someone lurking around my home does not sit well in the pit of my stomach
@MrsGerardWayForever 5 жыл бұрын
This is what idubbbz must feel like tracking all those squirrels
@dario.162 5 жыл бұрын
Don’t do it im a virgin
@cadenceclark3026 5 жыл бұрын
. Fat mood
@JaseyStudios 5 жыл бұрын
69.. nice
@lampmb1580 4 жыл бұрын
Your pic is too good for this post
@swordscar6278 4 жыл бұрын
not after he is done with you
@nelliesilvers1210 4 жыл бұрын
That'll be the worse thing to say..make them want it more. 'No Entry' signs are enticing and inviting to some😈
@rebeccaspookyduran7864 5 жыл бұрын
25:29 OH GOD DONT LET THE RAKE IN! you startled me with that sudden outburst! 😅
@cloroxisrelevant3614 5 жыл бұрын
i sleep to these. i lovegetting lost in a story anf letting it slowly seep inyo my dreams.
@bianca4210 5 жыл бұрын
Clorox Is Relevant Finally someone understands
@tonycalzone3517 5 жыл бұрын
Bro same
@just_going_mads 5 жыл бұрын
You can fall asleep while listening to these, but commenting whilst asleep is pretty ill advised. But you do you.
@darkoFNFN 4 жыл бұрын
I usually like scary stories but this scared the shit out of me!
@darkoFNFN 4 жыл бұрын
Lesi PlaysHacks Yoo sup dude
@crumbledcookie27 3 жыл бұрын
25:21 my heart jumped into my goddamn throat, you caught me off guard good sir also can i just say i love how you put actual emotion into your voice, its like im hearing the person who went through the experience tell the story to me themselves. i love how you narrate, it pulls me into the story so much better than the other narrators who sound like they just got back from their weekly insomniacs meeting, keep it up!
@goetiancalamity1158 5 жыл бұрын
I thought the opening was Havana XD
@SuppaDuppayee 5 жыл бұрын
Wait.... I thought this man was a normal thing to see?...
@gma_x4lucky91 4 жыл бұрын
I truly love the way you read/ present each story. You are my favorite one to listen to on Creepy pasta.
@Gagirl-82 2 жыл бұрын
Wow. I’ve had this in my playlist for a while and finally listened to it. I absolutely loved it. It was so creepy and suspenseful. Thanks MCP for the great narration and thanks to the author ✍️
@etcetera1995 5 жыл бұрын
Oof, it's been a long time since I was actually shaken by something in a story, but the sudden shouting about the banging on the door? *Ooh.*
@JasonDevil06 4 жыл бұрын
Bald, tall, skinny, strong enough to break down a door and made some kind of chant with a broken voice and shrieks It definitely sounded like a Wendigo
@zodiacthriller6094 2 жыл бұрын
Sounds like me when I have a bad trip
@C0mb4t-45x Жыл бұрын
learn scp 096 right now.
@wolfe-6786 5 жыл бұрын
I could only think of one thing this whole time. JUST MOVE OUT??
@MisterAcker 5 жыл бұрын
We never leave
@AshleyAshleyAshley395 5 жыл бұрын
I’ve been thinking the same thing for the last 26 minutes and 24 seconds. Why are you still there. Fuck the cameras and police. JUST MOVE !!!
@Hi-uv7nn 5 жыл бұрын
missashleyowens ikr it’s not like you have any friends in that area anyway
@lKlynI 4 жыл бұрын
Well think realistically. It’s not so easy to just up and leave.
@sadisticgirl_ 4 жыл бұрын
@@lKlynI it's also not easy to get murdered by a creature
@Tarzan861 3 жыл бұрын
I love the emotion you put in the story when reading much better then other scary story channels
@colbanjohnson5086 4 жыл бұрын
When he panicked saying it was running at the door followed by the banging, despite knowing something like that would happen I still got goosebumps
@luisroman9294 5 жыл бұрын
Love your narrations MCP, cant wait for more Tales from The Gas Station! Definitely wasn't expecting it to sprang towards the house that actually had me shaking!
@Elite04232 4 жыл бұрын
I swear to god every single time a ad breaks into the video, it completely wakes me up and it runs the mood.
@alexhearn8083 4 жыл бұрын
This by far is one of the scariest stories by your channel the music alone gave me goosebumps well done.
@tarawilliams1858 4 жыл бұрын
So as I turn into my own driveway we get to the "we will never leave leaveleave neverleave..." officially creepedthefck out. I listen to an obscene amount of Creepypasta and this one line has got to be the freakiest line I've heard yet. (Also, the loudest stair in the history of stairs one of the funniest. It's all about balance.😉)
@jackdecheck7660 5 жыл бұрын
Dude I was listening at update 3 with the picture of the rake and right when the detective says he didn’t leave I saw the rakes behind the rake and SCARED THE SHIT OUT OF ME
@CC-vz5cv 5 жыл бұрын
Lol
@EmmyUnderWater 5 жыл бұрын
This is probably my favourite story that you’ve read. You did a great job! Hecka spoopy 👍🏻 ❤️
@nebular97 14 күн бұрын
5 years later and this is still one of my favorite stories, I would absolutely love to hear a version of this from the police's perspective
@miseryworld_8677 5 жыл бұрын
The entire beginning is my life.
@duffinthemuffin5792 4 жыл бұрын
This creepypasta I could never really forget for some reason
@Terf1988 4 жыл бұрын
This and SearchAndRescue's works were great
@aldeenztheman 4 жыл бұрын
This has to be my favorite mrcreepypasta video ever.
@ghettobitch1348 5 жыл бұрын
i fucking love how you really get into the characters of the stories.
@minecraft-hz6bo 5 жыл бұрын
thank you mrcreepypasta, very cool!
@fearadin 5 жыл бұрын
Loved this series Mr.Creepypasta!!
@mispriss13 3 жыл бұрын
I just recently got into listening to these stories and this was the best one I've heard so far. I like the way u narrated the story, u made it alot more intense. 🙂
@joejones8454 4 жыл бұрын
Chills man just chills one of the best ones you have done💯
@isaacalsop4209 5 жыл бұрын
Damn thirty seconds in and you've made me hungry.
@moviegirlaka 5 жыл бұрын
Did he just repeated a line twice? And when is he going to do more cooking with MCP?
@J2982able 5 жыл бұрын
He does these recordings in one continuous take, without edits. If he doesn't feel a specific line's delivery, he re-does it. You're not crazy.
@C-13770 5 жыл бұрын
He did it twice.
@Miss_Eldritch 5 жыл бұрын
@@J2982able that isn't true, you can notice when he breathes it cuts sometimes
@deutsch-amerikanisch8281 5 жыл бұрын
@@Miss_Eldritch What he meant to say is MCP records without stoping, and then comes in after and removes the parts he doesn't like. During this recording he repated a line he didn't like and forgot to cut it out of the final product.
@sasorispupet 4 жыл бұрын
If this is a new rake story, i'm loving it.
@kaitlin5193 4 жыл бұрын
Oh you're good Creepypasta! So good! Love the reading!
@valentine_val5945 4 жыл бұрын
Sir, you got a rake. No doubt about it
@ep3389 3 жыл бұрын
It's fake, if this was real he would have all the vids on here
@valentine_val5945 3 жыл бұрын
@@ep3389 you dont think i know that? Of course its fake.
@ep3389 3 жыл бұрын
@@valentine_val5945 no doubt about it
@decagonibuswastaken7503 5 жыл бұрын
I was watching this at 3 in the morning, very spoopy. Then ads hit and Phil Swift shows me flex tape. 10/10 would flex tape again
@kieransmith9616 2 жыл бұрын
it's kinda neat that there's some outtakes not edited out, like I can hear him finding different ways to read the lines
@michelelyons9410 5 жыл бұрын
excellent scary story, well plotted and very well told! What was different and a very good part of the story, is that the police could see some of the manifestation. The video clearly showed the intruder, the claw marks, blood, etc. Usually in haunting stories, the poor protagonist shows the police a video, only to discover that the video is either blank or there is nothing to see. And the same with the physical evidence. Which, of course, serves to isolate the victim even more. But I really like that the police did see these things, and are presented with what is obviously something that cannot be explained with conventional means. You have got to wonder what that police department will be doing with their knowledge of the house. You can bet it will not be forgotten. As for the couple, they lost their home and jobs, but still got off lucky. It is a temptation to try selling the house----it is possible that the new owner would not have any trouble. But what if he did? My conscience would bother me forever if I handed this nightmare over to someone else, having escaped it myself. Maybe it would be better to turn the house over to the city, as abandoned. Let them demolish it. At any rate, I bet the police always show up fast at that address, and have a lot of spooky stories to tell the rookies!
@matchboxcharm9290 5 жыл бұрын
You are the best at this I love you man
@mustardman6104 4 жыл бұрын
“We’re selling the house” -good ending
@micheleberg4922 5 жыл бұрын
Love this story so far!
@rebeccaspookyduran7864 5 жыл бұрын
I love rake stories. They gotta be some of my favorites. They are probably the few that really freak me out. Those and David Paulides Missing 411.
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