you have to pay attention which foot is next. you kinda stumble through the choreo. your dancing would look much better if you paid attention to body tension, clean movements, dosage of power and lines. it's all kinda floppy and wobbly. somtimes you need to do movements fast and with power, other times they have to be light or flowy. dance with intention and listen to the music! i think you could be a great dancer, just work on those things!