Which parts are the ones that sound off beat? During the second part of the song i used the vocals of the original version so maybe those sound too different from the rest. İ also used to extra pitched synth during the second verse to make it sound more different. This was one of my first remixes si i may have made a mistake... Where does it sound wrong to you? This was a mashup between the original and final version of the song and some extra synth parts and honestly i enjoy quite a bit for what it is. xD

The first verse after the armstrong dialogue right at the beginning, the actual lyrics come a beat after the instrumentals and it to me it just sounds a little weird. That might just be my opinion though given how many times I’ve listened to the original song

@@begoneheathen2726 Yeah i listen to the original song a lot as well. İt's one of the most underrated songs of the game in my opinion. İ did change it by removing the instrumental intro but that is because i thought it would make for a more powerfull intro if i used only the synth parts. This is also why i cut and shortened a part between let your country control your mind and let your control your soul at 0:52, you can notice it. İ checked the original again and to me it seems that both verses start at the 26th second so i don't think the verse is off beat it just comes off as different because how it starts. İ guess i "might" have to change it when i release the full album even though i think it makes this remix a little more unique than the others. This was my first remix and i was experimenting a lot when i was making it. İ still hope you enjoyed it for what it is.

Hey man i hope you are doing well. I got to say i am sorry i disappointed you with this remix. I wanted to let you know that i have made a new version of Collective Consciousness and i would appreciate it if you could give me another chance and let me know what you think of it. You were right to say that this version was underwhelming. Cheers!

@@smokingmirror8482 Oh wow, sweet! Lemme check it out rq, I’ll leave you a comment