subscribe for more pieces. or dont, i dont really care
@TheSymphonium-CTYTАй бұрын
This used to be my discord pfp about a month ago and I also compose music
@maxxie3613Ай бұрын
Trying my hardest not to fall asleep to this its so dreamlike
@donotapply6202Ай бұрын
0:21 ouch
@HaguynitzanАй бұрын
lol i think the dissonance makes it sound better tho
@donotapply6202Ай бұрын
@@Haguynitzan not really
@HaguynitzanАй бұрын
@@donotapply6202each person is entitled to their own opinion
@donotapply6202Ай бұрын
@@Haguynitzanyes but avoiding entirely random dissonances like minor 2nds suddenly coming out of nowhere, most people who listen are likely to wince, just take this criticism well and try not to make the same mistake again
@PedrolitoMusicАй бұрын
@@HaguynitzanI think the dissonance makes it sound better
@person7587Ай бұрын
This kinda sounds like an arrangement of smth, sounds familiar. Would be cool as a 3 movement concerto.
@HaguynitzanАй бұрын
Maybe inspired a bit by the start of rach 2, but just as an influence. Anyways thanks for the suggestion(:
@person7587Ай бұрын
@@Haguynitzan Little bit more feedback if you would like, though I am no expert myself (Just listened to it to see what sounds weird). Harmony sounds a little weird bar 8 with the g natural. The musical idea at bar 15 is nice, though I think it would be interesting if the E moved down along with the top.
@HaguynitzanАй бұрын
Second idea is good, but I think the g natural actually works well
@tavitenorclefАй бұрын
@@Haguynitzan No it does not. 8 bars before there's peaceful music, but then a random minor 2nd blasts at the same dynamic as the other notes. It does *not* work well.
@stickydrummer1.0Ай бұрын
It sounds great!!
@HaguynitzanАй бұрын
@@stickydrummer1.0 thanks(:
@jackhughesbooks16 күн бұрын
This is charming. Are the silent bars at the end a homage to John Cage's 4 minutes 33 seconds? In which case you have perfectly captured the style and mood!
@Haguynitzan16 күн бұрын
Thanks(: no lmao I just didn’t know how to delete them…
@jackhughesbooks16 күн бұрын
@@Haguynitzan LOL!!!!!
@tavitenorclefАй бұрын
Some pretty nice harmonies, and some pretty weird moments, but ok? In my opinion I think it should have more dynamics, everything is just mp and that is quite disturbing...
@HaguynitzanАй бұрын
Will add(:
@radio.ned1385Ай бұрын
Excellent stuff!
@HaguynitzanАй бұрын
Glad you liked it!
@howpunny3570Ай бұрын
have you heard of lore game on roblox? most of the songs in the game are like this one, a little uncanny- simple, but full . the tracks vary between moments, but this sounds like a much sweeter albeit nostalgic piece than the ones in the game. just thought i'd mention it, i like that games track- and i like this song :D, very nice to listen to, good job.