Paper Trail - Chapter 1 (Undertale Deltarune Comic Dub)
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5 жыл бұрынOur first major foray into Deltarune! We're new to voicing these characters so we'd love some feedback!
This comic was drawn by the illustrious Lynxgriffin - / lynxgriffin and you can read the original as it comes out here - lynxgriffin.tumblr.com/post/18...
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Carolyn Smith
Nathaniel Stone
Frida Magus
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Felisha Snyder
Stephanie Lopez
Abbie Ghent
Katie Cooper
Harry McGregor
Andria Bruce
Desiree Steinmetz
Amanda Greengrass
Beth Crow
Jonathan Blaylock
Clara De Rambures
EYN
Agnieszka Zurawicz
Shelby Espino
Megan Henry
Nikki Birdsall
Caitlyn Grudle
Cheryl Butler
Sarah Sears
Sophia Catalano
Illusive
Jennifer Lazo
Jenny Duncan
Kaleigh-Ann Busch
Laura V
Regan Tardif
Danna
Brianna von Collenberg
Cicimidnight
Kazz
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@llrban7642 5 жыл бұрын
A phenomenal performance for all the actors who portrayed the characters in this comic dub. I really felt like it was a living comic due to its emotions that gives out of fear, anger, disappointment, pleasure and joy. The sound editing was amazing as it felt like the background fitted perfectly with the environment. I cant find another way to say this but this was the best comic dub you have done so far. I hope to see chapter 2 soon ^.^
@miriamzrm2299 5 жыл бұрын
Holy shit this was a full on review-
@ihaveaname699 5 жыл бұрын
@@miriamzrm2299 indeed
@miriamzrm2299 5 жыл бұрын
@@ihaveaname699 xd
@delimeat299 5 жыл бұрын
I RECOGNIZE THAT MUSIC 😀😀😀 DETROIT BECONE HUMAN!!!😀😀😀😀😀 Its Kara's theme song if I'm not mistaken
@antihackerbg 5 жыл бұрын
And also "THE DESERT OF JACK SHIT"
@theidknetworkowo4721 5 жыл бұрын
Kris: ... Susie: what did ralsie turn into? *suspense rise* Kris: junior jumble.
@jothejoker6771 5 жыл бұрын
THAT ONE GOT ME SO GOOD!!! XD
@voro8561 5 жыл бұрын
the IDK network -_- HI LOL There was a surprise-rise because the back of it was the not Asriel wrote when he was going to collage. I hope you get it, I needed to get that off my chest XD
@razor2571 5 жыл бұрын
With Kris speaking so calmly after the suspense build up had me laughing for about three minutes lol
@brownhound05 5 жыл бұрын
Turns into an actual goat
@Void_Echoes 5 жыл бұрын
Megathot lol yeah
@richmondpeg 5 жыл бұрын
Moral of the story: Don't clean your room because, you might destroy an entire world.
@gamerdomain6618 5 жыл бұрын
Well, you might destroy an alternate world where inanimate objects turn into animate entities.
@Kapnohuxi_folium 5 жыл бұрын
So basically inanimate objects
@Chichimi2605 5 жыл бұрын
Good reason to tell XD
@zapcraftihoof8318 5 жыл бұрын
Now that makes me wonder what would happen if I put 1 of my toys in the Dark World
@Soggymentos 5 жыл бұрын
Maybe I secretly knew there was an alternate universe in my room and that's why I don't like cleaning.
@cr3ati0n_101 5 жыл бұрын
Lancer is like "Shut the hell up I found something"
@fluffyeevee383 5 жыл бұрын
The voice for kris is absolutely amazing
@ChimeraLotietheBunny 5 жыл бұрын
CalveeThe Eevee i can do that too
@kiwiboy2328 5 жыл бұрын
That's vade lmao
@bananafruitloops 4 жыл бұрын
Thogh there is an issue,Kris is genderfluid yet sounds so,masculine.
@fluffyeevee383 4 жыл бұрын
@@bananafruitloops I always personally saw Kris as a male, so I dont really see a problem with it, but I can see where the problem could come from
@bananafruitloops 4 жыл бұрын
@@fluffyeevee383 I understand and agree with your opinion,though,Kris is reffered to as they/them in this comic,thus I believe they should have a genderfluid voice.
@therandomvic4550 5 жыл бұрын
5:17 *creepy suspenseful music* *music stops* "junior jumble." XD
@NullCantHandleFreddie 5 жыл бұрын
Yay
@lil_bluespace3497 5 жыл бұрын
Lol XD
@s4n_jay82 5 жыл бұрын
Lol
@pickles4613 5 жыл бұрын
Undertale reference, I see?
@Preston354 5 жыл бұрын
LMAO
@_hetomie_6415 5 жыл бұрын
7:40 “my only friend” Kris: ouch, Susie
@gamerdomain6618 5 жыл бұрын
C o r r e c t.
@mr.raphael1507 5 жыл бұрын
THAT A LOTTA DAMAGE
@susie-deltarune5262 5 жыл бұрын
Yes....... *screeching*
@greenbae667 5 жыл бұрын
@LogicMuch 2.0 Oh I know wat U mean there buddy :)
@DeltaBlazin 5 жыл бұрын
Kris: **Susie I thought what we had was special.*
@ccs8847 5 жыл бұрын
im honestly suprised there arent as many "au's" for delta rune, like...that's kind of what 90% of the under tale fan-base was based off of.
@jothejoker6771 5 жыл бұрын
In a way, Deltarune is an Undertale au.
@pom1489 5 жыл бұрын
It can’t happen because in a really weird way deltarune is a alternative universe of undertake and an alternate universe can’t have an alternate universe.....or can it?
@louise4152 5 жыл бұрын
@@pom1489 I mean, there's stuff like swapfell
@Dummy129 4 жыл бұрын
I think Deltarune should have many AUs because you can just take almost all fan-made Undertale AUs, make it fit with Deltarune, then change the name. Ex: Deltafell, Horrorune, Birdrune, ect. Unless that's technecaly copyright.
@wobbmin3705 4 жыл бұрын
I think the thing is, with Undertale, Swap and Fell had become pre-established things since, at one point, they were both created by one person each before the community adopted and adapted them. Things like Swap, Fell, Shift, Horror, Outer, etc, are easy to mix, match, and modify. For Deltarune, there's nothing that's universally accepted. There are TONS of interpretations of DeltaSwap and who gets swapped with who and even whether Ralsei swaps with Lancer or just becomes a Monster Kid Ralsei (which I personally prefer). There's no universally accepted Fell designs for any of the Deltarune characters. I've seen both Edgy Fell Jevils and Friendly Fell Jevils. Hell, I'm working on writing a Felltarune AU where Kris has Flowey as an imaginary friend and Ralsei is a flower with boots who's more like an older brother than a younger brother like classic Ralsei is (I'm SUPER proud of it, by the way). And by that logic, my interpretation of FellSwap Ralsei would be a goddamn Temmie. There are so many different interpretations of Deltarune AUs that none actually stand out above the rest. There are a few exceptions, like Horrorrune and Deltatale, but other than that, not much. On the plus side, that gives much more room for creative freedom since you don't feel obligated to stick to just a combination of different pre-made templates.
@octotune4044 5 жыл бұрын
AND I WANNA USE *LIGHT* DOLLARS TO BUY *LIGHT* MP3S
@kiwiboy2328 5 жыл бұрын
**PIRACY**
@ddlcweeb8233 5 жыл бұрын
Lancer said that as soon as i sae this
@evilgayrobot 5 жыл бұрын
I love how the thumbnail is everybody screaming
@Godzillafan2001 5 жыл бұрын
Lol
@leahcrabbe65 5 жыл бұрын
Kris: *AAAAAAAAAA* Susie: *AAAAAAAAAA* Ralsei: *AAAAAAAAAA* Lancer: *AAAAAAAAAA*
@patchwork2239 5 жыл бұрын
why else did you think made me click it? lmao
@coreyyamaguchi8787 5 жыл бұрын
Or yawning
@mjlespy8304 5 жыл бұрын
**Inhales** *_AAAAAAAAAAAA-_*
@berkayyazici9458 5 жыл бұрын
The Moment you realize they cant return to the Real World, because there is no fountain... Toriel is gonna be putting up missing posters, damn XD
@Ksanthecat 5 жыл бұрын
I didn't think about it! 😫
@ace3430 5 жыл бұрын
Oh.. No....
@joeylely8585 5 жыл бұрын
Actually, at the top of the New Castle, there's a Fountain.
@berkayyazici9458 5 жыл бұрын
@@joeylely8585 Huh, didnt see that... Well, lets hope youre wrong and Toriel sticks missing posters everywhere and cries Loving it XD
@bluebelleix8479 5 жыл бұрын
Damn you so woke bruh
@homieles 5 жыл бұрын
4:15 It says "your beautiful creation" and also in 4:35 "No one can choose who they are in this world". I think it's the person who we've just created in chapter one.
@PuppyLove2468 5 жыл бұрын
That explains why Kris is freaking out so much, they are somehow connected
@joeylely8585 5 жыл бұрын
or, maybe it's Gaster, as the voice in the start was (most likely) him...
@Void_Echoes 5 жыл бұрын
Or the person talking to you during that segment, presumably gaster
@moonlightnymph7975 5 жыл бұрын
*W O A H*
@pixwool 5 жыл бұрын
Very possible. I mean, why else would you make a character if they weren’t gonna be in there somewhere
@RetroBeetle 5 жыл бұрын
* THE HAND OF THE KNIGHT IS DRIFTING FORWARD... * SOON, THE "QUEEN" RETURNS, AND HELL'S ROAR BUBBLES FROM THE DEPTHS... * LIGHTNERS, CAN YOU STOP IT? -Jevil, Deltarune 2018
@The-Red-Fox-Tail 5 жыл бұрын
*DEAR GOD....*
@Calysto 5 жыл бұрын
Hey all- if anyone has criticism for the voices here I'd love to hear it! I took a big risk making Kris sound so mature but personally, after a lot of experimentation it really started growing on me. What do you guys think? If you wanna get mean or be honest, I really wanna hear your thoughts. Thank you!
@hkayakh 5 жыл бұрын
Well since frisk doesn’t speak and kris looks like frisk mabye kris can have the mute voice like frisk
@Bob-hv8mi 5 жыл бұрын
Kris sounds good to me. Lancer..Im not sure if it's too goofy or not goofy. Barney sounds good ralsei sounds like alphys but then again they are both shy. I think you should change or edit Ralseis voice and Lancers.
@hazelfur6871 5 жыл бұрын
Susie and Raslie sound the same, to me. Maybe you could make Raslie sound a bit more... Different or some sort. You don't have to.
@b.m.3944 5 жыл бұрын
I think the voices were perfect even though lancer was diffrent from what I imagined
@chicofnaf7114 5 жыл бұрын
I think Ralsei should sound more...male
@toastntea6646 5 жыл бұрын
Yay! New series to watch!... But that also means more waiting for episodes to come out... ...yay...
@arianac.6671 5 жыл бұрын
YAY
@0GlassOfAcid0 5 жыл бұрын
Waiting for a epsiode is one of best feelings in the world. Like binging and watching something is nice, but waiting for a new epsiode for something to come on is one of the best feelings.
@deepseaAtrocity 5 жыл бұрын
Like Glitchtale.....Yay....But Faster
@gamerdomain6618 5 жыл бұрын
Actually, following more shows would be less waiting since you would have more episode to kill time... *right????*
@LongAgoDino 5 жыл бұрын
Is no one seeing NOELLES FACE WHEN BERDLY SAIDS: With what, making out in the closet, HER FACE KILLED ME!
@inkorporeal204 4 жыл бұрын
;-; I know
@hopelesssoul3607 4 жыл бұрын
She’s gay for Susie (but so am I so..)
@niydfass1060 3 жыл бұрын
(somewhat of a spoiler) later in the story its revealed Noelle has feeling for Susie (and vice versa) so the reaction is appropiate
@AJLord 5 жыл бұрын
5:19 Makes perfect sense. Ralsei Arlsei Arslei Asrlei Asreli Asreil Asriel
@dynami3783 5 жыл бұрын
Everyone said the acting was on point, but another thing that was on point is his music taste. GOD DAMN THOSE DESTINY 2 BGMS FIT SO WELL.
@leotortelini9211 5 жыл бұрын
They truly did fit
@wind-upshroom9857 5 жыл бұрын
*New title:* "DELTARUNE CHAPTER 2 *_CONFIRMED????_* (CONSPIRACY THEORY)"
@EIGHT_LOST_TAPES 5 жыл бұрын
*DELTARUNE IN DESPACITO 2 CONFIRMED*
@memori168 5 жыл бұрын
*heard the soundtrack of Kara from Detroit become human* _ _ *start panicking and almost cry while Kris and Susie were just walking on the street*
@Goldieheart1976 3 жыл бұрын
me too tho-
@yoonmeehong6069 2 жыл бұрын
This kinda predicts how Deltarune chapter 2 would go......
@holyfeline715 2 жыл бұрын
i was thinking that
@write-minded3921 5 жыл бұрын
I was hooked almost immediately. I wasn’t expecting this to be so captivating. Kris’ voice does sound lower than I would think, but as someone said, it grew on me and seemed to fit the more he spoke. Lancer’s voice seems like it should be a little more squeaky, for lack of a better word. Ralsei’s sounds pretty good; I feel like his voice (like Kris) is open to a lot of interpretation. Susie’s voice was good, but I felt needed to be a lower pitch with a raspy edge. I can’t believe how incredibly well done this was, well I can, knowing who’s behind it, but seriously, this was intense and made me feel like I was watching an actual movie.
@gigithehedgehog8469 5 жыл бұрын
You actually summed up my thoughts just about perfectly.
@gamerdomain6618 5 жыл бұрын
@@gigithehedgehog8469 Same. Even how the voices should sound, in fact. Though Kris' voice didn't grow on me whatsoever.
@dr.shakib9961 5 жыл бұрын
Lancer's voice was my favorite, Kris grew on me very quickly and love Susie's and Ralsei's too. Tories and Alphys were quite good as well but Alphys sounds like a goat, which I'm sure she ain't.
@dragonboy320 5 жыл бұрын
The only thing that bothered me was the Destiny 2 music.
@write-minded3921 5 жыл бұрын
Dr. Saib 999 Agreed, Alphys’ voice was a little distracting for me.
@Bor-uf5lb 5 жыл бұрын
10:15 Well... here we go again (Insert doctor who intro sequence)
@gamerdomain6618 5 жыл бұрын
ermahgerd! dercter hue!
@bleh553 5 жыл бұрын
I just now realized that Kris rhymes with Frisk... Dude also right when he said run an ad came on about Us and red said "Run"
@ApokR 4 жыл бұрын
cool
@PhoenixFlame321 2 жыл бұрын
10:35 Suzie: "GOD FRICKING DAMNIT KRIS, WHERE THE HECK ARE WE?!"
@KingDeadNA 5 жыл бұрын
i love it as for voices just make lancer sound more goofy and childish
@BanoonRagoon 5 жыл бұрын
Deadcrayz I thought he sounded a bit to mature.
@rawrfunkle9863 5 жыл бұрын
I like his voice, it's cute and cool
@mr.drearygiraffe6005 5 жыл бұрын
Yeah, isn't he like 8 Edit: Although, I would like to add that they did a good job on adding his lisp. That's something I noticed a lot of voice actors for him miss, so, gotta give credit where it's due.
@huricane887 5 жыл бұрын
@@BanoonRagoon alot of "kids" in anime sound like 30 something year olds too. Kinda tough for adults to make believable sounding kid voices. Also,if we're being literal here, Lancer wouldn't be able to speak or live since he's a skelebro. So's Mr. Befriends your mom Sans. 0o0
@realperson9951 5 жыл бұрын
10:12 mom, there's a monster under my bed
@PuppyLove2468 5 жыл бұрын
XD
@JackofArts 5 жыл бұрын
This comic is actually really suspenseful and I love it. The threat of the whole Dark World being erased just by clearing out all the things that make it up is in is such an interesting idea.
@tap5263 2 жыл бұрын
Seeing this for the first time after chapter 2 is hilarious.
@spireofconvergence 5 жыл бұрын
5:10 kris went sicko mode for a second
@doyouthinkiwasjoking9910 5 жыл бұрын
You still in the moovh for the memes?
@s4n_jay82 5 жыл бұрын
Right
@MahouShoujo39 5 жыл бұрын
No its chara mode
@doyouthinkiwasjoking9910 5 жыл бұрын
Ikurr
@soulspuncaramel9869 5 жыл бұрын
XD hehehe! X3 That's funny
@maxusthebeast 5 жыл бұрын
4:12 *GENERAL KENOBI* sorry not sorry In all seriousness, this was amazing! Good job!
@Calysto 5 жыл бұрын
YOU ARE A BOLD ONE
@Maxxatron 5 жыл бұрын
This comment should not have made me laugh as much as it did. Thanks tho.
@libertyprime2958 5 жыл бұрын
Outstanding move!
@lurkingPabs 5 жыл бұрын
*GENERAL GREVIOUS*
@gamerdomain6618 5 жыл бұрын
Oh, god. Oh, *god.* I cannot unsee that. Thanks, dammit, and XD all at once. Thexdit...?????
@frostfang7906 5 жыл бұрын
Y'know, for as much shit as I saw destiny get, everyone for some reason loves putting the music into comic dubs...I approve
@Tulark_Killian 3 жыл бұрын
When it's in the actual game it's meh but when it's in this just fit so well honestly I re-watched this because it's so good
@trigger7ff6 5 жыл бұрын
detROIT BECOME HUMAN MUSIC IN A DELTARUNE VIDEO? maDMEN!
@naomificagna 5 жыл бұрын
since you guys recognised the songs, can you tell me which is the title of the one at 1:28?
@tacitos0898 5 жыл бұрын
You noticed that too?
@TheLymphNodeLimo 4 жыл бұрын
IKR, KARA IS THE BEST!
@unknown__5129 5 жыл бұрын
Honestly, I had 0 problems with the voices! They were amazing and fit the characters great (in my opinion)! Btw, love your work! Your comic dubs are the best out of all the of the creators I've seen making these comic dubs! Also, can't wait for the next chapter of "Sooner or Later You'll be Mine"! -Love, one of your many fans.
@scarlett-moriko1543 5 жыл бұрын
My thoughts exactly!
@mrstein4170 2 жыл бұрын
The voice actor for Kris is just perfect. And also Susie’s VA too. The voice acting matches how I would actually depict their voices in the game. Props to both of you! :)
@astrophysicsperson528 5 жыл бұрын
So the 11th part of this comic came out, and it way it ended felt like the end of a chapter. This video goes up to part 6. That means that either chapter 2 is coming very soon, or is coming after part 12 comes out. I can't wait! Actually I can wait. I have to because I don't have a time machine.
@onesaltyhuman 5 жыл бұрын
WHY AM I SO HYPED FOR THE NEXT ONE? I have so many theoriessssssss
@1907sue 5 жыл бұрын
Finally, a freaking AU comic dub which I can finally watch.
@ZonalMist 2 жыл бұрын
I've always loved how Kris was voiced by you! It really fits their sort of shy, keep-to-themselves personality.
@mossbird8816 5 жыл бұрын
I love the Destiny 2 soundtracks you chose, they fit so well!
@cakenbakewithjon 5 жыл бұрын
I will never look at a jack of Spades the same again Me: ". . . . . Lancer?" Friend:"wot" Edit: happy now?
@smitzs513 5 жыл бұрын
Lol me to
@hellointernet4467 5 жыл бұрын
*Jack
@flatearther5712 5 жыл бұрын
Melina Izzyawesome I LEGIT DID THIS THE OTHER DAY AND MY FRIEND LOST HIS SHIT LMAOOO
@zapcraftihoof8318 5 жыл бұрын
@@flatearther5712 it must've been even funnier if he knew about Deltarune
@zapcraftihoof8318 5 жыл бұрын
@@hellointernet4467 wait, Lancers card had a J symbol on the back, but his card was an Ace....did Jevil sneak a peak into our world?
@TrousleInk 5 жыл бұрын
Well knock my socks off and toast my buns this is great. I'm gonna like this series. I think ur guy's main series should be this and handplates. Keep up the gud work!!!
@TrousleInk 5 жыл бұрын
Omg a heart from vade!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. tnx 4 noticing me xp
@Calysto 5 жыл бұрын
@@TrousleInk owo no problem
@IanAnimatesBagels 2 жыл бұрын
in T-4 hours we will find out how close to the mark they were... And even if they're miles off, they still created an amazing take on the story to watch unfold.
@axelperez2917 2 жыл бұрын
Fun fact
@axelperez2917 2 жыл бұрын
It was actually accurate
@IanAnimatesBagels 2 жыл бұрын
@@axelperez2917 yup. with just a bit less ralsei and a bit more (rips out soul) AAAAAAAGGHHHHH!
@DirkWind 5 жыл бұрын
I never thought that Destiny 2's soundtrack would sound so good in a comic dub
@IAmBottle. 5 жыл бұрын
Ralsei: a whole world of light- Kris: *BLASTING LIFELIGHT FROM SMASH ULTIMATE*
@alivelake69 5 жыл бұрын
*DO MORE* (Not rushing you but please keep this series alive...)
@cyanide_crow7970 5 жыл бұрын
7:26 Me: Oh shit finally I have a good reason to do genocide run of Undertale
@31ll087 2 жыл бұрын
Chapter 2 spoilers It's amazing how much this comic got right.
@MetalToast27 5 жыл бұрын
I heard Detroit Become Human music in the backrounds of some parts! (Boy is that game good)
@tordthelord3840 5 жыл бұрын
First i heard Destiny and litherely jumped, and then i heard Detroit... Oh, you don’t wanna know what happened...
@memeboy8207 5 жыл бұрын
no detroit become chungus
@kead_davidson 5 жыл бұрын
7:58 I heard this and knew things were about to get tougher.
@MetalToast27 5 жыл бұрын
@alex the BLUE fox it was Kara
@AbstraktVisaj 5 жыл бұрын
Also I approve your music choice in the end. Audiomachine is an amazing epic orchestra group!
@Siplin 5 жыл бұрын
The music is Detroit Become Human I believe
@jello4112 5 жыл бұрын
Sipping Tea yeah it is
@Siplin 5 жыл бұрын
@@jello4112 ok
@moooink1259 5 жыл бұрын
Kara theme
@gemndiamonds6425 5 жыл бұрын
4:15 Top middle panel is a bit of the "Your answers... Your beautiful creation..." dialogue *Is that shadow person the original creation?*
@itisitheboop9109 5 жыл бұрын
Maybe, but I feel like it might be Gaster?
@ir0nicd34th6 5 жыл бұрын
Yeah but think about this. "It's A Beautiful day outside"
@douchevick309 4 жыл бұрын
It would be pretty neat if the OC turned out to be the knight, like who has heard of the character creator being for the antagonist character rather than the player character?
@BrenGamerYT 5 жыл бұрын
This is probably the best comic dub I've seen on the web. Fantastic performance from all the actors, and visual presentation is incredible. I hope to see more!
@noreencadavedo2742 5 жыл бұрын
Omg i loved it i loved it so much, the transitions were so smooth, the voice acting sounded so professional, and the music and sound effects were so on point! And of course, holy moly the story blew me the hell away lol, i just loved how it makes so many theories on what happens after chapter 1/the demo of deltarune, and on what if they actually came back *^* omg i cannot wait for the next episode 😍😀 *vibrates intensely*
@okamigt1054 5 жыл бұрын
This is why I subscribed to this channel because COMICS and THEY’RE AMAZING WORK THAT THEY DID
@fal8799 5 жыл бұрын
Lynxgriffin did an outstanding job with the plot of this story. The voice acting and background music was phenomenal. Please update part 2 whenever possible!
@jaxonherondale9755 5 жыл бұрын
I just realized that for the music, they used the tower background from Destiny. I LOVE IT!!! MY FAVORITE GAME IS NOW INCLUDED IN A COMIC DUB! YES!!@
@markohsatine1906 5 жыл бұрын
That was... Super good. Even with the segments of a familiar game OST in there, which were strikingly well-matched to the content (heheh, light and dark...), that was super fresh... I really need to play the game. lol I dig the voices a lot. I'm familiar with some of the voices as well, but I almost feel like we could have had an older Toriel. She seems less Goatmom and more Goatauntie. lol As far as the more mature-sounding Kris... I had a friend back when we were fifteen and he had a voice deeper than that, strikingly with the same body type, so it's not so strange to me. I've seen it with real people, so it seems totally normal to me, and I like it. Reflects his calm personality, which is something my old friend had as well. :]
@kosog6584 5 жыл бұрын
Detroit:Become has such an underrated soundtrack
@stephanielopez1745 5 жыл бұрын
OMY GOD THAT WAS WICKED AF PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SERIES AHHHH YOURE BOTH SO TALENTED
@arianakoh7036 5 жыл бұрын
IT FEELS LIKE A MOVIE!?!
@LokiThePug 5 жыл бұрын
I love the way you put it, so simplistic yet so well made, it almost feels like it was legit
@funnylaughed7423 5 жыл бұрын
Plot twist: this comic was made by Toby fox and this is chapter 2
@hellointernet4467 5 жыл бұрын
Real Plot Twist: You're REALLY Stupid!
@quabblestone 5 жыл бұрын
I would actually kinda lOVE THAT-
@jevilthedeviljester747 5 жыл бұрын
@@hellointernet4467 r/wooooooooosh
@blu3561 5 жыл бұрын
@@hellointernet4467 r/Whoooooooosh
@funnylaughed7423 5 жыл бұрын
Hello Internet Plot twist: This was a joke!
@lilzurako5798 5 жыл бұрын
Hmm...the music from Detroit become human actually fits this very well
@tomtheravenclaw8661 5 жыл бұрын
This is really good! The voice acting and animation are both top notch! Can’t wait for part 2!
@azraelius_sky 5 жыл бұрын
Out of all the Comic Dubs I've seen you and Celio work on, I think this is honestly the best one. Great voice acting, love the panel transitions and love the music (Someone LOVES Destiny 2 cause I recognize that soundtrack anywhere). You two gave these characters serious life and it's making me fall in love with them more along with the game. I desperately want to see you dub this more of this series.
@skylasandoodles 5 жыл бұрын
Oh my gosh I love this! Not only the art and storyline but your voices just made everything come to life! Good job at it and I can't wait for the next part!! :) P.S. You earned a new watcher ;3
@ms.spacedust5532 5 жыл бұрын
Congrats on the 100K !!!
@WebkinzLiker264 5 жыл бұрын
oh my gosh that was so cool!! This was the first Deltarune comic dub I've watched but still, it was great! The voice acting was very good. Susie had a great sense of fear and anger at just the right times, and while Kris did speak, they still kept their mysterious character. Awesome work!
@justjoking5252 5 жыл бұрын
There's just something about deltarune that feels more... _suitable_ for these kind of things. Don't get me wrong, undertale ones are good too, but it's just that I find a lot more of them that make me go... *_eh..._*
@ItsTea610 5 жыл бұрын
Oh Cool New Series!.... DAMMIT THE EPISODES OVER!
@enderskore8056 5 жыл бұрын
*10:59* Where all missing socks go
@Ksanthecat 5 жыл бұрын
Yeah! XD
@gamerdomain6618 5 жыл бұрын
'Laughs hysterically' My god. I *never* give more than one like to the comments section! this is amazing!
@navitalksalot4642 5 жыл бұрын
I think I love this. The voice acting is so good, and the concept is so interesting, please continue making these!
@sans-od8gh 5 жыл бұрын
Who paused the video to read the diary
@burntwater630 5 жыл бұрын
Love this! New series! Same excitement! Keep up the amazing work!!
@nativebear2467 5 жыл бұрын
Yay new series that means... More waiting... Yay.... AHHHHHHH
@clockwisewonky1736 5 жыл бұрын
Ok this is absolutely amazing! The music is so cool and so well chosen, and the voice actors and editing is so good!
@burntbeanies7886 5 жыл бұрын
This was really, REALLY fucking well done. The voice acting, the transition between comic sections, hell the music choice was PERFECT. Jesus christ I can't believe how much I ADORED this! I cannot wait for more, I am frickin HYPED man!
@thepacifistassassin 5 жыл бұрын
Kris’s voice is so awesome. It’s exactly what I thought it would be in my imagination.
@TheLightSaga 5 жыл бұрын
THIS IS THE GREATEST SERIES IVE EVER SEEN!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!
@gabbymeinen4891 5 жыл бұрын
OH MY GOSH this was amazing!! The voices were a bit different than what I expected, but that just made me love them even more!
@Nyinxie 5 жыл бұрын
That was the best comic + vocal Roleplay I've seen to date on Deltarune. Good on ya, keep it up, can't wait for more.
@daydreamcelestiasdaughter3564 5 жыл бұрын
MAKE A NUMBER 2 STAT! I CANT GO ON LIKE THIS
@b.w.7708 5 жыл бұрын
This is so good and it looks amazing you brought all the characters to life so well and I’m so exsited to see part 2! :)
@zilaalapsablue7228 4 жыл бұрын
Theses voices fit well! Wonderful job in bringing in life to the comic!
@uniteto0o0o 5 жыл бұрын
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!! THIS IS MY MOST FAVORITE COMIC SERIES
@patrickplevak126 5 жыл бұрын
WE WANT PART 2! All of us!
@Andicus 5 жыл бұрын
Oh my god wait... is Kris' voice actor is so familiar.... is it Gaster from handplates? I cant remember...! Its so familiar I know I heard it from another comic.... I love the voice though. Pretty good
@forestreflection2066 5 жыл бұрын
He plays gaster and sans in handplates. I think he does grown up papyrus as well
@giorgos7066 4 жыл бұрын
It's vade himself
@anonymousartist8016 3 жыл бұрын
It’s the voices (people to are questioning error and ink) from ask glitch and squid
@rjwildenhaus1560 2 жыл бұрын
I wish Calysto/these voice actors finished this dub. The comic is so good. Sans did a fine job with their dub, but this version is next level.
@Jessica_Schweser 11 ай бұрын
Yeah me too
@MotorcycleCheetah 2 жыл бұрын
Okay, 10:13, that is the best combination of music plus the fall sequence I have ever seen. That is chilling.
@poyo1415 5 жыл бұрын
*Great comic dub! I'm excited for the next part!*
@The-Red-Fox-Tail 5 жыл бұрын
*BEST COMIC EVER* is it me or dose ralsei sound like a girl? Edit: I have no problem with the voice :)
@LostyGaming178 5 жыл бұрын
Yep
@12KTOYOTA 5 жыл бұрын
Ooh, Nice grammar you got there, can i have it
@The-Red-Fox-Tail 5 жыл бұрын
@@12KTOYOTA *nope...*
@bluescissors2074 5 жыл бұрын
For some reason I want to say something
@Viva-qd2bo 5 жыл бұрын
That's because the actor for him is female.
@CalamitasCalliope 5 жыл бұрын
Yesterday I think enough has been released for a part two, and I am so excited for whenever that is finished!
@jbmarkowicz4272 5 жыл бұрын
This is freakin' amazing! You guys did a great job and now got me waiting for some more of this. I hope u guys stay doing this kind of stuff because was really awesome.
@anonymouslyobserving4496 5 жыл бұрын
This makes me so happy, oh my gosh-
@ihaveaname699 5 жыл бұрын
Lancer sounds like Mickey Mouse
@miriamzrm2299 5 жыл бұрын
He totally fuckin odes oh my god
@ihaveaname699 5 жыл бұрын
@@miriamzrm2299 lmao ikr
@miriamzrm2299 5 жыл бұрын
@@ihaveaname699 pbfft- Now we just need someone to sound like Minnie Mouse
@Calysto 5 жыл бұрын
@Pixies World life comes at you fast
@doppleganger9602 5 жыл бұрын
I was thinking Meowth
@snowysnowwish 4 жыл бұрын
i adore paper trail , and this was incredible. absolutely love this take on it!
@makiroll9376 5 жыл бұрын
I love this artist so much. Their work is incredible.
@otumei 5 жыл бұрын
I didn't think I would enjoy this beyond my opinion of not liking youtube comics... but I really enjoyed this! I wasn't expecting to want Chapter 2... heh..
@openup.5975 5 жыл бұрын
Pls don't tell me Paper Trail chapter 2 is going to be released in the same time deltarune chapter 2 is released itself. (Get it.. .?)
@Fallen_Angel9078 5 жыл бұрын
You can find the rest on the tumblr page they linked in the description, from what I read there the creator of the comic is making other comics right now too though.
@openup.5975 5 жыл бұрын
@@Fallen_Angel9078 pun intended sorry 😅
@Fallen_Angel9078 5 жыл бұрын
Ngela Pena I wasn’t sure if you were making a joke or not lol, so I thought I’d let you know in case.
@openup.5975 5 жыл бұрын
@@Fallen_Angel9078 shush its not your fault 😅 ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗ ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
@Fallen_Angel9078 5 жыл бұрын
Ngela Pena A’ight Lol.
@Rugnarstengo 5 жыл бұрын
Outstanding work! You really are an inspiration when it comes to audio and video editing!
@marvelousmadmen832 5 жыл бұрын
This was an AWESOME fan sequel to deltarune, and I can’t wait for the second part! Also, who else other than me believes that the caped man chasing after our heroes is W.D Gaster?
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