"I've known many powerful spellponies, and none of them, have ever broken Death's Veil. It's NOT POSSIBLE." "But were any of them the Element of Magic?" DEAR GOD THAT'S AN AWESOME EXCHANGE

Dear Princess Celestia, I don't feel bad for killing all my friends. I feel so powerful, and you, can't stop me. There is so much I can do, and so many ponies to take. No longer faithful, Twilight sparkle

Wow, that was really good. "Congratulations, Princess. You're first on the list!" I bet Celestia was like, "Well, shit." XD

And as Luna saw the life empty from her sister's eyes, she began to back away from the corpse, violently shaking her head as tears streamed down her face. Suddenly a letter poofed into the room and fell to the floor, unraveling itself with no sender or reciver written upon it, stating one simple sentence, "You will be joining her very soon." That was one of the last things the Moon princess witnessed before she saw two sickly purple maggot infested front hooves grab the sides of her head and she heard a quiet snap before slipping into darkness.

Twilight: "Come, Celestia. You'll LIKE being dead." Celestia: "That's what they told me about being alive!" #FuturamaReference

"I miss Spike most of all" Well you sure didn't bring him with you Twilight

EPILOG: Completely fan made by me, Shy Wolph Skye Celestia dropped the parchment. Terror scorched her heart. The white alicorn stumbled to her hooves, dashing madly to the door. "Hello, Princess!" Celestia turned stiffly. "Tw-Twilight?" A sickly purple unicorn stood behind Celestia, eyes black pits, and fire seemed to surround her hooves. Twilight smiled. The smile sent a chill down Celestia's spine. "Ready to go?" The unicorn asked. "N-no," Celestia stammered. "Please, Twilight, you don't have to do this!" Twilight cocked her head to one side. "I had hoped you would come willingly. But, I suppose I will have to bring you with me by force." The unicorn advanced on the Princess. "LUNA!" Celestia shrieked, slamming into the door in an attempt to escape, but to no avail. "Now, now, Princess," Twilight began, "Just calm down. I thought I was you prised pupil?" The unicorn's voice seemed to get lower and lower with every word, until it was a hellish rumble. "Tia? TIA!" Luna's voice rang out from the other side of the door. "Luna!" Celestia called, "Run! Run as fast as you can! Get out of here!" "No, sister! I won't leave y-" Luna's voice was cut off by a dark crunching sound, followed by the sound of liquid spraying everywhere. Slowly the door began to open. It creaked ajar to reveal a blood stained scene, featuring a sickly unicorn with eyes black as hell. "Why, hello, Luna! Are you ready to come with me too?" Princess Luna screamed.

When Luna said they were losing all the elements one by one, first thing I got was a shiver down my spine at the thought of what might happen after that. I mean, Luna said "but were any of them the element of magic?" right after Celestia says no one has ever broken through the veil. So, Twilight clearly had some power thanks to that, maybe connect to all magic, all things, and she was even talking like she had "no limits", as if dying had freed her or something. So, if she alone had that much power... what would happen if all elements, all of her friends were together, since they all embody magic? I know the ending made clear the whole plot wasn't going that way, but I thought it was a neat idea. Btw, that world... as much as Twilight is describing it in a cheerful way, is... definitely not that pretty. Imagine everything she described but extremely twisted. o.o

Wow, shinning armor and cadence didn't even show up to the funeral

Princess Cellestia's eyes widened. "No..." she said, fear clamping on her stomach. Suddenly, Cellestia felt a tight sharp pain around her chest. "Hello, Princess!" Then, she knew no more... ******* Luna screamed when she saw Tia's limp body on the floor of her bed chamber. Equestria was falling apart.

I'm watching this in invert colour and twilight looks perfectly fine XD

I remember my first reaction to this. The beginning: This is to sad to be dark! The end: .... well shiz

I was able to hold in my tears in until Pinkie Pie started crying But then my tears dried hearing all those haunting letters from Twilight. Replaced with sheer terror. 😰

I can imagine Twilight bringing Celestia down and Celestia going all, "I Am Highly Disappointed In You." But ya know. In a sad type scenario.

I will not cry, I will not cry, I'm crying, Still crying, Oh, I stopped.

She's nonchalantly writing to her princess on how she's dragging her subjects into death. That's far beyond the point of being remotely fine.

and its like at the end theres another letter: Dear Trollestia, LOL! YOURE A NERD! Trolollolololollololololollolololololololololollolo Yours Trollfully, Trollight Sparklol

Princess twilight princess of death and friendship.

NOOOO!!! WHY'D IT END THERE?!?!? I WANTED A THRILL SCENE! One where Celestia is running for her life through her castle and ponies are dying left and right, that'd be so cool!

I think Fluttershy and Applejack would be the most miserable without family and animals. And I think Rainbow's loyalty to her friends would make her the last pony to die cause she's loyal to 5 live ponies and her beloved Cloud's Dale. With Celestia gone, they'll have a sun in death at last. Then it's Luna's turn to bring the night to the lightened landscape and so on... Till Lyra comes in and brings humans or something XD

That was beautiful. Kinda want to know how Celestia deals with being "first on the list".

This has to be one of the darkest stories i have ever heard. it brings a very strong feeling of dread when i listen to it. most people believe that if we have a soul, it survives death when the body dies. What freaks me out about this story is it's like Twilight's body and soul died and what remains is a hollow dead soul hungering for life. that's what i think is canon to this story, a afterlife in which the soul exists with out life or substance. sorry guess i just had to comment on why this story hits me so deep. thanks for the reading, all your readings of course. hopefully one day the writer will write a second part. thanks for reading my lengthy comment. take care Scribbler

Ummm... Each time she said Your faithful student Twilight Sparkle It got scarier... Perfect!!!!! Poor Mane 5.

At first I was crying now I am not going to bed

Is it a poor reflection on me that this is the most I've cried at a funeral? Also, dear Princess Celestia. Today I learned you're never too old to hug the stuffing out of your teddy bear.

This is the best dark story I've ever heard in my life, I like your dark readings....and this one is really dark..& very missed up (thanks to the last line it was even scarier). I really like the idea of Twilight 'missing' her friends, she want them to join her to fill the void by *ahem* ..killing them... (Sure thing she was doing it for 'good'...right? RIGHT?? There is no need to call the FBI..[is won't work anyways] ). Each time she kills somepony, the void (death realm) get filled with more friends, eventually, new stuff appears in the void like the balloons with Pinkie. The really creepy thing in the story is that Twilight never get enough of more friends (and probably she won't), meaning she will kill more and more (if the death realm went from emptiness to some trees, clouds and some party stuff just by adding 5 ponies..... She would like some more ponies..ya known, adding some houses, shops and..Ohh don't forget about a nice bar, a club and maybe a five star hotel?) .....she will more ponies until...*ahem* ..THE END

This feels like she turned to a lich or a crasy reaper. I am scared.

twilight slowly drowning in her power as she collects the bearers in these creepily nonchalant letters is an awesome villain origin

I bet when Celestia read the letter about her being next she was like 'shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit' O_O

when it ended i wasn't looking at the screen and then i looked up and jumped at twilight's face. the hair on my neck stood on end.

The background music certainly creates a fitting tone for this story. I love it, it's fun listening to stories like this at night. Well, it is for me. Don't know about the rest of you... *grins*

there should be an alternative ending, where twilight tries bringing the ponies into the veil and fails, so she ends up killing 5 ponies for no reason

"I dont think, theres anything you can do to stop me" dear god

I like it when you put your computer in negative mode it looks normal.

(I feel like continuing the ending, this is fan made, by me) Princess celestia dropped the scroll, wide eyed, and stood up shakily Suddenly, a bubble of black smoke appeared in front of the door Then. A pale and sickly looking unicorn stepped out from the smoke, her eyes nothing but blackness “Hello Princess! Are you ready to join us? I’m amusing you got my letters?” There was a stiff silence “I..I..” “Don’t worry princess! Death isn’t scary, don’t be afraid.” “No!” Suddenly black smoke surrounded celestia “LUNA!” She screamed desperate to live “..TIA..?” Came a faint reply “LUNA!” She called out again, her breath catching in her throat “Celestia! I can’t have Luna ruining this one chance that you’re alone!” She said, sounding annoyed. Luna barged through the door. It was too late. Celestia had died. “Why hello Princess Luna! Are you ready to join us in death?” The pale sickly looking unicorn turned and asked her Silence rose around them, before Luna teleported herself out of sight. “Too bad, I need both princesses in death, so it can be just like life.” She disappeared. Soon every pony around Luna was dying. She was starting to go a little insane, she went from canterlot to ponyvile, but she found that everyone there was dead, besides a few, Only a few fillies were left, and Luna took them to canterlot, and stayed there with them Twilight didn’t come back until a few months later A bubble of black smoke appeared in the open doorway A pale sickly unicorn stepped out from the bubble “Hello princess Luna! Are you ready to join all of us now? I have every pony in all the nearby towns!” “Go away Twilight!” Shouted Applebloom Luna jumped up and opened her wings wide, protecting the fillies. “Oh Applebloom! Your family missies you!” “Go away!” “I guess you don’t want to join us yet.” A silence stirred. “I’ll come back soon.” She disappeared. Luna folded up her wings and laid back down with the fillies. “Luna..?” A voice that sounded like Fluttershy’s echoed Luna looked around, and when she looked at the doorway, she saw a limping Fluttershy, Rainbow dash, Pinkie pie, Rarity, and Applejack They escaped death? (I’m sorry I like happy endings xD, should I continue this with a replied comment?)

Twilight-"Congratulations Princess, you're the first on our list!" Celestia-**chuckles** *I'm in danger.*

When Twilight said told Princess Celestia that she was "first on the list" to join The Mane Six in death and after seeing that freaky pic of Twilight with that tolling bell in the background, all the hair on my skin stood up. I don't know if I'll be able to sleep tonight. :(

First Impression: Ohh, Twilight will be evil. Second Impression: What Twilight died!?!? Third Impression: How on earth is Twilight alive and is she alive in the grave!?!? Fourth Impression: Twilight your becoming insane!!! Why kill... murder your best friends and Celestia!?!?

Holy... horse apples..... this is freaky....

it continues the story! Celestia dropped the parchment!. Terror scorched her heart. The white alicorn stumbled to her hooves, dashing madly to the door. "Hello, Princess!" Celestia turned stiffly. "Tw-Twilight?" A sickly purple unicorn stood behind Celestia, eyes black pits, and fire seemed to surround her hooves. Twilight smiled. The smile sent a chill down Celestia's spine. "Ready to go?" The unicorn asked. "N-no," Celestia stammered. "Please, Twilight, you don't have to do this!" Twilight cocked her head to one side. "I had hoped you would come willingly. But, I suppose I will have to bring you with me by force."The unicorn advanced on the Princess. "LUNA!" Celestia shrieked, slamming into the door in an attempt to escape, but to no avail. "Now, now, Princess," Twilight began, "Just calm down. I thought I was you prised pupil?" The unicorn's voice seemed to get lower and lower with every word, until it was a hellish rumble. "Tia? TIA!" Luna's voice rang out from the other side of the door. "Luna!" Celestia called, "Run! Run as fast as you can! Get out of here!" "No, sister! I won't leave y-" Luna's voice was cut off by a dark crunching sound, followed by the sound of liquid spraying everywhere. Slowly the door began to open. It creaked ajar to reveal a blood stained scene, featuring a sickly unicorn with eyes black as hell. "Why, hello, Luna! Are you ready to come with me too?" Princess Luna screamed At Twilight Than screamed more when she saw Tia's limp body on the floor of her bed chamber. Luna know Equestria will fall fall apart do to Celestia death.Luna ran out the chamber knew she was next. Then Shining Armour. Princess Cadence. And soon... all of Equestria. Darkness would fall. Death would prevail. No one would survive.

Beginning: so depressing Middle: unnerving Ending: *hugs Twilight plush for dear life*

the picture shall forever haunt me

This story... Its sad.. Its Dark, Two things I hate.. But i want more? I'm being messed with...

Excellent fic, brilliant reading, starts off tragic and becomes terrifying very quickly, especially with the realization that not even the Princesses can stop Twilights deranged shade

Gosh that was scary. Had goosebumps all throughout the story, and none more than seeing Twilight's face at the end. I wonder what Celestia will do when she is brought over to death's side?

This is the first MLP fanfic I've actually cried while listening to. God it was so sad, dark, and beautifully creepy c:

I kept thinking, Twilight find the death note o.o

This is so Bloody GOOD. Cant flipping stand the sadness at the beginning D:

24:40 My face was WAY too close to the screen when that picture came up.

HOLY WHAT IN CELESTIA'S BEAUTIFUL MANE WAS THAT?!

They're really should be a prequel story where the main six see Twilight and then die. Edit:And also we should also probably learn if there's ever a prequel story on what happened at Cloudsdale that killed Twilight Sparkle. And I personally think that maybe Rainbow Dash might had something to do with it judging by the way that she's acting around Twilight maybe she's feeling guilty.

Nice reference to Lesson Zero. Also, magic of death, hm. And OMG, TWILIGHT HAS DRIVEN HER FRIENDS TO SUICIDE

pony darkfics are cool

damn that was freaky, loved it anyway, Twilight sounded pretty cheery for somepony that was dead

why aren't Twilight's parents at their daughter's funeral??

I can’t lie, this story did unsettle me slightly. Bearing in mind that I’ve read plenty of grimdarks such as cupcakes, rainbow factory, sweet apple massacre, lil Miss rarity and other creepy pastas on top of that. This by far has to be the most unsettling, psychological one. The way that twilight slowly loses herself and encourages her friends on long with her, hearing celestia break as she reads. In all the years I’ve been in the mlp and creepypasta fandoms, I am truly in awe here. Well done.

So she came back in her friends dreams and drove them to the point of suicide....

Oh... My... Goddesses.....

I remember being like, a week into the fandom fresh of gifs like university days and some other fics, then this rolls into my recommendations introducing me to one of my favorite narrators and my entrance into the wonders of the darker side of the fandom

The beginning made me cry

TWILIGHT IS SO FREAKIN' CRAZY!!!

The part when Celestia is grieving for twilight sparkle reminded me of the scene from Steven Universe where blue diamond is grieving over pink diamond

Think about it, she never once thought about Spike, the baby dragon, I think if this was continued that he would be one of the few to resist her and might even be her defeat, would be epic. Like this if you agree

...I hope I don't scare anyone by saying this...but I actually want to be in Twilight's position...

this has to be one best and creepiest fanfic's I've seen

'I miss Spike the most"she said,while bringing in death only her mare friends....

I knew who Twilight's sixth target was when she mentioned the lack of sun.

No no Twilight I started crying in 1st few minutes so is just to sad for me I can't help but cry

That was VERY FREAKIN CREEPY!!!!! That should be the title!!!!!

I loved how dark this was I really hope that auther dose a sequel for this and that you would read it. Keep up your awesome work it's really fun to listen to them.

OH MY GOD. THAT LAST PICTURE MADE MY SPIRIT SCREAM! EEK!

I've just listened to 3 of these in a row. Please keep your passion for doing this. There is something in the way you read these that almost magically resonates with the emotions the stories engender. I really hope you keep this up for a LONG time.

"Congratulations princess your next on the list!"the white alicorn dropped the letter in shocked and terrified,while the white alicorn was just sitting there trying to forget what the last letter said the alicorn heard a loud "poof!"in her room.when the white alicorn turned around,Twilight was right there behind her."T-Twilight?"the white alicorn whispered in shocked."of course princess celistia,I'm guessing you've been getting my letter's."the unicorn said."y-yes,b-but why...h-how!?"the alicorn asked."oh celistia,like I said in my letters,I don't want to be alone,and I need more."the purple universe corn said.Celistia started to stand up."so Twilight,before I go with you,do you want to look around my room or look out my window for a bit before you have to go with me?"the white alicorn asked."oh,well that's very kind of you princess,and of course I will look around."while the purple unicorn turned around and looked around a bit,the white alicorn took the chance to run out of her bedroom,but the door wouldn't open.the white alicorn tried as hard as she could but,the door wouldn't budge."Celistia,why are you trying to leave?I thought that you would actually be exited to come with me...*sigh*I guess I'll just have to make you come with me by force."Twilight said."P-please no!Twilight d-"The white alicorn stoped talking,but her mouth was studering.blood was going every where in the room,while the princess was on the floor,she was begging to not kill any pony else,but when Celistia finished begging Twilight to not kill any pony else,Luna came in."oh,hi princess Luna,do you want to come with us too?"Twilight asked.Luna was just standing in front of the doorway."h-how could have k-killed Tia!?"Luna asked while shocked and terrified."don't you worry Luna you'll be next to join us."Luna was scared so scared that sane ran to one of the guards and told them to protect herself."huh?I wonder why Luna did that.well,time to come with me Celistia."when Twilight said that,she stabbed Celistia right in her chest.when Celistia died,she actually like being dead with Twilight and her friends.Twilight letted Celistia send Luna a letter,so she did"dear Luna,I miss you so much,but we'll be back together soon,Twilight said that she'll be there soon,until then,see you soon my dear sister."Luna was terrified even more but when Luna dropped the letter her own sister sent, twilight was right behind Luna."hello Luna I see you gotted Celistia's letter,don't worry you'll be with her soon,now say goodbye to the mortal life,hehehehe"Twilight has gotted what she wanted,but what will her friends and the princesses and her self do next? THE END 😊

"Now, I dont give a damn about studying, I need more friends!" Never thought I'd hear twilight say that

at first the only thing i heard was the music i was like i know that theme.... what is it from.... thats a doctor who theme! i check description. huzzah

Gosh darn was that image at the end really necessary? That’s some true nightmare fuel.

Bro! Scratch that, I know it's from Doctor Who. This is from David Tennant's time as the doctor! I love your music choice for this

Good thing I have immunity cat on my side!

That part with pinkie almost brought me to tears. Something about her breaking down like that hit hard.

*Watches video* WHAT DOCTOR WHO SONG IN THE START? I WUV U!

“On a side note, I realised i murrrdered rainbow dash..... or a least a part of me realised it, wanna know something funny? I don’t care, I don’t care i took another pony’s life, in fact. It felt good, it felt like i was in Control of *both* worlds....... I don’t think...... There’s anything you can do...... to stop me, your *_OMNIPOTENT_* Student, Twilight Sparkle,” *shudders* welp, there goes my sleep, xD, and that face in the dark..... geez, FYI, omnipotent means all powerful and all knowing, like with for example Odin,

The moment she said, "but we don't have a sun here," I was like OH NOOO!!!

I rlly like this one. I stumbled across this a while ago and im so happy i found it again. It just has so much potential. Some may say I love it to *death*

Omg didn't expect her face in the end

This remains one of my favorite fics to listen to. I love it so much

this is the 4th or 5th time listening to your reading of this. its so good, and so well read by you that i just cant stop listening!!

This story scared so bad, I stayed up for an extra few hours just to make sure that I’m not being watched. Such good narration!

I've been looking for this story for SO LONG! I love it so much

Twilight!

That was one of the best stories I have ever heard!!! The effects made it even more vivid and awesome!!!

The begining of the song on I think.... the sencond letter? Yah, let's go with that, it reminded my of the music from Cry reads children's playground

5 minutes in and I'm crying so hard.

" I don't give a damn, about studying, I need more friends." XD lmao, same...

maybe its good that she's an alicorn now, now she can't die ;_;

Thank you scribbler this one was quite interesting and very entertainingit most definitely had an interesting and creepy twist to it. Appreciate your reads and keep up the great work

Amazing! Just read the story on fimfiction and it was already creepy. The way you read this just made it so much creepier and better. You just earned a sub. And I`ve read some of your stories on fimfiction. I really enjoyed them.

Oh man. That old intro… Nice job being able to go on for 7+ years

man I haven't listened to this in like, 3 years

This reads like discord really messing with celestias mind

You did a great job using River Song's theme for Twilight's funeral, I'm in tears now 😭