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Hey I just wanted to let you know that your videos were incredibly helpful during my college application process, and I just got accepted into Stanford's Class of 2022! Your advice gave me the confidence to be myself in my application, and it really helped. Thanks so much for sharing your experience :)

Has 500 community service hours, many leadership roles, great test scores: "yeah I think I'm pretty average" that's so much stuff!! Makes me feel kind of hopeless lol

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That last one especially was incredible. You're a great writer. I'm glad you got into such great schools

Such a perfect timing as I'm currently writing my college essays! Thank you for this!

Omg that was amazing! The way you wrote it made me feel like I was in that situation, it was very compelling. Great job, well deserved

Woah there... those are a lot of activities

"...so, practically nothing extraordinary about me" ...This shows how much down to earth you are! Beautifully invigorating!💓

Essay starts at 4:35

Finally, I have been waiting for this video since you started your channel!

Literally gave you a standing ovation after hearing the 3rd one

You have a beautiful style of writing. Thank you for sharing!

I can't even remember what I did yesterday let alone an experience from when I was 3 lol damn I'm impressed lol

Dankie vir jou storie. ❤️ I’m also from South Africa and it’s so inspiring to listen to you and what you’ve done

Thanks for your sharing! Don't know if many shared the same feeling, I am surprised to see that with different experiences, we can hold some kind of the same ideas. It really helped.

OMG i LOVE YOUR ESSAYS!!!

Your first essay was my favorite! It was so good I was shook!

The short answers were so amazing.

Excellent!! You are a phenomenal writer. I really enjoyed and appreciated your video.

Hiii I hope you see this! I found you through the 500+ essay videos because I was asked to help a family friend's senior with their college application essay. I'm 3 years out of highschool, applied only to community college and have been inconsistent due to family concerns... and a lack of confidence. I almost didn't take the essay job, but it's boosted me up and I'm starting to seriously consider transferring. I've watched a few of your videos since for my own development and, during your readings in this video, the golden ticket idea came to me and I started trembling in disbelief!! Now I'm thinking, "wait a minute. I could really get in to the school of my dreams. Why didn't I ever try?!" I couldn't thank you enough!!

goes to hosa nationals like 8 times, "yeah like,, average,,activities"

Beautifully written!

thank you so much for posting this! i'm currently 13 and have done a duke TIP summer program, and after completing that, duke's always been my dream school. again, thanks for sharing and good luck (even though you probably don't need it, since you're so smart haha)

iam not native ,i needed that so much thank you soo much ,you really helped me doing this and your words that were just perfect influenced me to write my essay

Kudos I was crying with you reading

wauuuu!!!! i was just waiting for such good thing .Thank you

Bruhhh I read your essay online somewhere :0 I remember because i was incredibly impressed by it.

Beautifully done.

This was amazing. Congratulations!!

Really appreciate you for sharing! Helps me a lot

hey queen! loved your video, im applying to Stanford and also from South Africa so thats coooool hope I follow in ur footsteps :')

Hey, just wanted you to know how greatfull I am for this video. You are a true inspiration ❤

My GPA is 1.9, but I can eat a burger quickly...How do I turn that into a Pulitzer winning personal essay?

You are an amazing writer!

I really needed this, thank you:)

I feel like i partied so much in high school, her resume is great 😌😢😢

WOW. How wonderful. Thank you.

Danielle! We need an update video! 🙏😃

CONGRATS!!!

Thank you for sharing!

Woah!! I’m HOSA President too, it’s so cool to actually see someone else with the club because it’s certainly not as big as key club or interact which are in almost every high school. This gives me some hope!! I’m not sure if your active on KZfaq as this is the only video I’ve watched of yours so far, but if you are I’d love to hear some of the things that your HOSA chapter did! p.s. your essays sound amazing!!

Great supplement!

That's a great help! Thank u❤️

Starts at 4:35

I was wondering if you checked transfer essays. It’s essentially the same, but focused on why you want to transfer and your recent college experiences.

You write extremely well.

wonderful! thank u!

South African here! I want to apply to Dartmouth College (early decision) in November 2019... Great essay!!

Jesus! Can we switch academic records?

Why’s everyone being so mean in the comments? she clearly did well and essays are (mostly) subjective anyways. I find your juice box analogy charming. It shows the perspective of personal goals and individuality

Wow that was great !!!

Woah I like to consider myself a top-notch writer but wow you're awesome

Wow that's really funny I'm an EMT too and I found this and I was like omg!

Mathematics: you go girl.

Is it allowed to use the same essay on multiple applications for scholarships or colleges? I was told by many teachers that there is such a thing as plagiarizing oneself.

The last essay for diversity was so so so great!!!

The star student 🙂

thank you

Thank you

woooow you have a great writing style

Hi, can you give feedback for Grad School essay or suggest anyone else can do this?

What colleges did you apply to AP Queen?

This was so helpful. I am currently living in SA and applying for USA colleges. Have you been back since moving to the US?

Genuinely curious if you made up that first portion about juice box thing or if you actually remember being a 3 yr old with that much clarity and detail.

Thank you for this! You’re amazing!! New subscriber (:

I hope I get into the colleges I want to.

hey great essays. i was trying to access your editing services but the website is private. How can i reach. i need ur help

did you apply to any Ivy League college? how many colleges did you apply to?

Hey i am tenth grade student i need advice for joining ivy school

4:33 reading starts here

Hey she is from South Africa, Hello from SA :)

Wow, this was a pretty good video! Just one thing: If possible, could you please upload like a pdf of your essays?

Lol I will come back to this video in 2021

if there are different realities, there are different truths.

ayyy hosaaa i'm sad bc i'm my club's historian and i did forensic medicine for 3 years (able to go to nationals but couldn't) and this year i cant even go to state because of a band thing...darn

Do mind whether the university asked you what their expectations and your? both seemed to have differences? Stanford expects non traditional Latinized vs Duke is bureaucratic Roman secularism? Both choices are suck, imo, will leads to failures if you need supports and this is only what you have in life: your alma mater?

"yeah I so i did 1000 hrs of community service, got amazing test scores, had leadership roles, teehee you know, the average," Me who did nothing but attend school: 😐

I'm not too familiar with this channel. Does anyone know her SAT & ACT scores?

❤️❤️

That's an essay?

"metaphorical juice boxes"

Authentic masterpiece!

Lovely glasses!!🤓

Hey! Whats your GPA?

homegirl really made an essay about juicy juice and dipped

can i send you my essay. I have been out of the school for 30 years and going to attend a fscj need help!!

You're essay is funny lol

Wow! I really need this. Thank you. Btw, you're pretty.

Yey!!

Hi, I am a 10th grade student from Poland. Our high school starts at 10th grade and is very challenging. This year I have 16 subjects to pass. We have grades from 1 to 6 and 6 is the best. Most of the time you have to win a competition to get 6. Last year I had the best GPA in my school: 5.67. This semester my GPA will be much lower propably like 4,4- 4,6, maybe even worse because I missed a month of school. I was playing in film ( I played in many films in my life and I want to continue It) and I had some problems at school. Now I have a problem only with advanced math ( this is the only one advanced subject I have this year, It's normal in Poland and almost everybody in school has a problem with math. My school is one of the best schools in city) and maybe one other subject. Propably I will have 2... My teacher told me that I shouldn't worry so much because I will be better next semester/year and It's normal on my situation, but I am afraid that It destroyes my chances for getting into Harvard or any Ivy.Next month I will find some extra activities, now I volunteer only. I want to study science, especially biology and It's one of my passions. I think I have a chance to write SAT well If I improve my English. I want to take many activities and I can tell a lot about working on a film set and my passions, but I'm afraid that my grades won't be so good. Do I still have a chance for getting into Harvard ( or maybe some other Ivy)?

does college essay have to be about something important and dramatic :( i really want to write about myself but i have no traumatizing event in my life and i have no ambition either because i want experience more before realizing my true passion :( can i just write about myself instead :(

Could u send to me too plsssssssss... I’ve been outta school for about 10 yrs now and I’m working on a personal statement atm. 🙏🙏🙏

Wow you're so beautiful and you write beautifully as well! I'm currently a junior in high school and I'm planning to apply to Stanford :) Your video was super helpful!

Roommate essay?

I came for essay, but got my new crush.

great essay! I've recently finished my own college essay, would you mind reading it? i feel like it's crap compared to yours but hey it's worth a shot haha

How many words was your essay and what other language do you speak?

Hi, This is Pratik from India,,,,,,, your video is really playing a very important role in my application filling process.. well thanks for that,, (Actually I wanted to write about my girlfriend she is belonging from a Muslim community ... that is why my parents have never accepted her .... but at the end when they really find something extraordinary about this girl they now don't have any issue now ) well that's a interesting topic ........ but do u think if I pen on this topic Admission authority is going to take interest in it...

Damn thats. a nice essay