The animation is incredible, but the next time you can open the wings of the x-wings

FINALLY CAPITAL SHIP COMBAT! Thank you so much for this, its really awesome

Hope these notes don't come across as too critical, but a few things that stuck out for me: 1) Positioning; we should see how the Quasar (Phoenix Next, I presume) manuevered from behind the ISD to in front of it- including how/why the ISD's main cannons didn't shred the ship. (Likewise, WHY did it move to the front when it was in a safe position at the rear?) Further, the ISD should be trying to bring itself into a position to properly engaged the largest enemy ship with its main guns. 2) TIE Fighters- were their safeties on? Cuz I didn't see them firing a shot 3) When the Y-Wing's popped the main ISD emplacements, there should be damaged cannons in the wake, not a suddenly cleanly empty space. 4) Did the Ghost do anything except show up? 5) As others have mentioned, the S-Foils on the X-Wings not opening seemed off. 6) Why/how did the ISD go from falling "front" first to essentially landing on its belly...?

Very picturesque; especially that prolonged explosion scene at the end.

Hey, great work! I really loved the attention you payed to the lighting. The Y-wings coming up out of the dark over the ISD engines was particularly good. Keep up the good work learning, practicing, and having fun. You got real promise!

The ironic thing is that Imperial-Class ISD’s were purpose built for this kind of fight. Yet they were constantly losing to their rebel counterparts after Endor.

Nice video, but The x-Wing and Y-Wing both have hyperdrives, they wouldnt need the carrier to deploy, they could have just jumped into the fight own their own.

I like the use of subsystem targeting beyond just the shield bulbs. It adds some intentionality to the Rebels tactics.

Nice movie…. But I can‘t see any shoot from the Tie‘s?!? Also wouldn‘t an ISD Commander fight the X and Y-wings with the turbolaser….. this would be more realistic in my opinion…..😉👍 Greez from the 501st GG ✌️

Great film. Very well done!. A few issues though. X-Wings attack with the S-foils open. They will fly TO the enemy with the foils closed for greater speed, but they will fire with the fails open. Y-Wings are not very agile! Let the ISD re-orientate to bring its guns to bear. This would make it more realistic. It would also allow the TIE's to launch while protected by the superstructure. The ISD would have opened up all its guns when anything would have been in range. The ISD would not have nose-dived into the planet... It would have slowly lost height as gravity grabs hold of it. Even then it would likely have either tumbled or just dropped like a brick. The guns would not have had such a big explosion. There are other nit-picks... But there you go! But this was a GREAT piece of work. You should be REALLY proud of it! This was WAY better than anything I could do.

Fantastic mate! Keep them coming. I especially like what you did with the ISD crashing planetside.

Other than the X-Wing problem I've seen mentioned, the only complaint I have here is that the laser bolts were traveling weirdly slowly. Nice work, good video!

Nice team effort to bring down one of the Empire's heavy hitters!

I simply love any video showing action with star wars "Rebels" series in mind. Love seeing the "phantom" in action. Thank you, i really enjoyed your video.

Great animation, sure there are some issues like other comments pointed out but I am sure as you animate more those problems will be a thing of the past. Would love to see you improve over time. keep it up! (I know no constuctive criticism here, but there is enough of that in the comments already)

The X wings haven't got there wings open when attacking the ties

Great stuff! Pulls you in and finishes with a brilliant bang!

Wow...🎉

Nice work congrats !

Nice but you forgot to have the X-Wings set up their wings for attack formation

This is very nice! The story and concept are good, and this animation is well put together, although might I recommend you diversify your shot type, this is regardless an awesome fan film! Good work.

Nice!

I like it, but those S-foils on the X-wings need to open up

very nicely done, can i ask at 1:40 to 3:08 i've heard that music before, what's it called its driving me nuts trying to remember it

Why would a Star Destroyer fall to the planets surface that quickly, it would stay in orbit and not just start falling. It would take longer for gravity to take hold and pull it down.

Thank you

Excellent! Usually fan films will show the Imperial forces cutting through the Rebels easily, but I think they were considerably tougher and harder to engage on the Empire's terms. The skirmishes would go down much more like what you illustrate here. With the Rebels massively outnumbered, I can only imagine strikes like this had to be common in order for them to be considered a threat.

Cool!!!

This is some Disney-level work. The Rebellion clearly relies entirely on the Empire's crews being utterly incapable of working their ships, resulting in battles where the winner is whoever messes up least. Right from the moment that Quasar Fire launched its fighters, I was waiting for the ISDs helmsman to shove the throttles forward and incinerate the lot of them. Didn't happen, of course. Nor were the gunners willing to shoot back until they'd taken damage, the ISD proved literally incapable of maneuvering, and absolutely no one on the Imperial side could shoot straight. I can only assume that the ISD had someone from the ISB onboard who was unwilling to expend Imperial energy!

Great job! My only real nitpick is the X-Wings attacking the TIE Fighters without their S-foils in attack position

all the ships have their own hyper drives so that carrier is very pointless and the X wing open the wings to fight ... over all i liked it

Okay great video but I have some gripes. 1) The X-Wing S-Foils need to open when they’re attacking. 2) both the X-Wings and Y-Wings have hyperdrives so they don’t need a carrier.

nice film

i wish star wars rebellion battle mode could have graphics like this. That game was so much fun. The 3d engine appears to be so limited though.

Why are the x wing in combat position?

You forgot to put the S-Foils in attack position

Nice .

Better than Disney

top revenge;

Lock x-foils in attack position otherwise it’s just a glorified z95 headhunter really good c.g.i

why don't they deploy their wings ?

"Star Wars: Rebels". New season:

enemy fleet shows in rear and imperial destroyers doesnt launch its reaction ties or turn hard left or right for full usage of its weapons. nevermind there gunners were asleep

yup agreed! Great job next time lock the x foils in attack position

Lock S-foils in attack position...or not, I guess.

I don't know where you've gotten the assets, but as I watched this this reminded me a lot of the late 1990's early 2000's video games. Not bad quality, just, not up to today's near realism. *Shrugs* I don't see how a small number of people with limited free time can rival purely animated CGI movies/games which took years to make. The benefit is the design gives the video some neat character. Sound design, did you take it from the internet and attempt to edit it into the video yourselves? When I was watching @2:18 mark, the Y-Wings uncloak and commence their attack run. Why weren't they cloaked as they flew "up" the back of the Star Destroyer? (I didn't notice any occlusion of the stars until the camera zooms in on them as they appear). Why were they dropping bombs? That's _suicide._ They should be using proton torpedoes to take out the turrets. Bombs are good against surface targets being targeted outside of effective range... but carpet bombing just isn't done any more due to weapons getting to be extremely accurate first with laser guided munitions, and then later on radar tracking, and so on. At least have them stand off firing torpedoes at their targets. Speaking of their targets, the Star Destroyer does have dozens of weapons, they should be shooting at the fighters, and then at the rebel ships, once they can line up shots on them. The two capital ships should have been shooting at each other as they closed, not just when they get beside each other. They have forward facing weapons for that reason... I know it's not possible to animate dozens of weapons, dozens of fighters at the same time -- Further, it would fill the screen full of blasters shots and would, honestly, look bad. Or unappealing by the audience -- I'm just asking for more. The Imperial-II Star Destroyers have over 100 weapons, and the Mon Cal Cruiser you're using has just under 70 weapons. Weapons as defined as laser and/or Ion turrets of all types. @4:17 How did the Mon Cal Cruiser's weapons hit the barely exposed engine from that angle? It shouldn't have hit it as the blast is heading "forward" away from the ship, especially since that blast originated near the wing of the MC80, which is about half-way down its length. When we get the next shot, the two ships are not positioned correctly for that shot to have happened. The Star Destroyer isn't immobilized with a single engine hit. Gravity would pull it towards the planet center mass, except, for that to happen, the Star Destroy's forward momentum needs to be overcome first. Space isn't water in which things with no engines just "sink" to the bottom of a gravity well... they still move. And if it does "fall", it will fall in the shortest path available, until friction of the air causes it to move... as the air heats up and starts stripping the exterior.. melting everything on its surface. Which means there should be a ton of escape pods on transports/shuttles evacuating from the doomed ship. Of course, the MC80's have tractor beams so it's possible they could tow the Star Destroyer way from the planet (or put it in an orbit in which it can't fall to the surface of the planet), so that they can capture it for future use I know that scene was based on the one in Return of the Jedi... but the scene in RotJ, had an A-Wing take out the bridge, and the primary helm controls... causing the crew to lose control of the ship until it was too late to avoid the Death Star. *Shrugs* Anyways, I look forward to what you have planned for the next Star Wars video. :)

Nice video, but why aren't the X-wings opening their strike foils.

U made the startdestroyer wayyy to weak, but nice movie

Xwings can't use their laser without the wings closed, research!

This film is really nice, but why didn't they lock s-foils in attack position？I was very concerned about that.

Nice but wouldn't te star destroyer have at least partially burned up going through the atmosphere?

I know it isn't real or.anything, but can X-Wings fire without their s-foils opened?

Not bad

Do you need a composer for do the soundtrack? I compose music in star wars style.

Legal

Didn’t that transport ship get blown up in Star Wars rebels?

Is this a rough draft?

It wouldn't be that easy

Стыдно за Империю. Раз за разом опускают какие-то бандиты недоучки.

It's a very nice try, but it has it's problems. People already pointed them out. For me it drags a lot and you over emphasize. Can't quite explain it. 😅 Again a very nice try though!

The carrier is an imperial one and not used by rebels or resistance...

1..xwings s foils need to be open to fire...2 the capitol ship battle, the ywings destroyed main guns,, how did the star destroyer use them...bad bad...need to pay more attention to what your doing..

You've got a decent base and the animations look great, but your story needs some work. The Star Destroyer seemed downright pathetic. There are over a hundred other guns on a Star Destroyer besides the main batteries. There's a reason they're supposed to be scary and workhorses of the Empire. Between their own firepower and the ability to carry up to an entire wing (72) of TIEs it's a daunting task to assault a Star Destroyer, especially with less than a full squadron of starfighters. Speaking of which, why even bother with the Quasar to carry so few fighters? Quasars could carry up to 4 full squadrons, a half squadron on a strike mission would probably have just hyperjumped in on their own. Nail down the details and the story around it and you could have a great cinematic.

За графику респект,за сюжет 0 из 10,просто потому что весь бой имперцы афк стояли,пока их просто так обстреливали

Animation is ok, but the plot is weak. Imperial are just sitting there waiting each time to be attacked then doing very little to go on the attack themselves.

Хрень. И с точки зрения здравого смысла(пусть мы рассматриваем вымышленную вселенную) и графически.

Kinda mid. You suffer from a severe lack of how starfighter battles work according to the actual lore. This just looks like you're mimicking the quick nonsense pumped out.

The ISD is under attack, launch ALL 3 TIE fighters. And , Rebels is stupid child Disney Princess crap.

This is painful to watch. Its as if some one was told second hand about Star Wars. Never seen a movie, read a book, played a video game. Then they decided to make this clunky nightmare. Just awful.

Kinda bland tbh.

Garbage

Not bad, but X-Wings can not fire their canons in cruise mode