For someone who claims to be an inexperienced writer, your rewrite was the most in-depth one I've seen outside my screenwriting classes. Excellent work.

Bro the fact that 1 person can write and make more logical sense script then A ENTIRE WRITING TEAM Is just sad.

If someone turned this rewrite into a comic or graphic novel I would read it/watch it forever. This rewrite is perfect.

I would love to see your re write of Pahkitew...Sammy and Amy should've been the focus in my opinion or had more screentime instead of 5 Episodes

Oh and another thing, it's weird how the show kind of forgets that Gwen and Heather at least tolerate each other by world tour. They also deal with a lot of the same issues come all stars (total dramax4 island confirms this) when Heather doesn't like being the mean one. They're both dealing with being labeled as just one thing, and they don't explore that. Missed opportunities woo

Great rewrite. In terms of Mike's DID, whilst I don't myself have it, a common complaint is that the cure-me-of-my-mental-disorder-button wasn't a great decision on their end. Learning to accept that you're sharing your body with your alters seems a more responsible approach to the matter, even if specifically relinquishing control of the body isn't entirely realistic either. Also, I feel with some adjustments to your rewrite Mal (maybe under another name than being called Malicious shortened) could be a sympathetic character, who wouldn't need a bribe to accept let Mike be the host, under the pretense that they would all still be viable alters afterwards, by having his main fear be being lost and lonely again.

Oh my gosh, as a total drama super fan I loved this rewrite! I really love how Gwen and Courtney’s friendship was handled and everyone got lots of development, the changes to the story of All Stars felt natural! Although Lindsay’s my favorite character I understand why she was eliminated first and all. Also this is off topic but does anyone else think Lindsay and Gwen shouldve had more screentime together? In the list of Lindsay interactions Gwen was the only person in the All Stars cast she had a friendship with (even if not really developed), their dynamics of being a cheerleader outgoing yet not very intelligent girl and the more intelligent loner goth girl character would’ve been cool to see! #gwendsayrights Anyways amazing video, worth every minute of watching :)

Just finished watching! I noticed DJ on your Venn Diagram and realized he would be great contestant to relate with RoTI cast members! Dawn: Both are very animal-centric and it would be cute for Dawn to help DJ get over his fears about his mother. Cameron: Both characters are sheltered and family orientated, but Cameron to a greater extreme. DJ would be a great motivator for Cameron to embrace nature. Mike/Mal: Mike is a very sweet guy who would open himself to the even sweeter DJ. I would also imagine DJ and Manatoba getting along due to their survival skills. Mal betraying DJ would be absolutely heartbreaking.

ive only watched the intro but i LOVE how youre handling mike's DID!! i have DID myself and i love mike as a character and mal had genuinely irked me (mostly with how over-the-top his villainy is, and how factitious he seemed), and the way you're empathetically handling his disorder makes me SO happy!! all stars completely threw off mike's DID (which wasn't that good of rep to begin with, but the writers only handled the disorder worse), and seeing someone caring so much about spreading more proper information and crafting the disorder to be more accurate and safe makes me want to cry (even if everything isn't 100% accurate, you've handled this SO MUCH BETTER!!).. us with DID have barely any proper representation, and while you claimed that you aren't an experienced writer, i can already tell you've crafted something wonderful and more accurate with mike's disorder. the reset button had always been such a big problem for me. as much as i joke with friends about how i want my alters gone (and the copious amount of times i prayed for them to disappear), i know my life would only spiral without them. that's something that i feel TDAS didn't really consider. there is a reason why mike has this disorder, and, in theory, that "reset button" uncovers that trauma that has been hidden from him. realistically, mike is probably unable to handle that trauma without intensive therapy, so that reset button has always pissed me off. (along with that, you can't just erase the disorder. he still has it no matter what, and following the reset button it's basically a matter of time before alters start splitting off again T_T) THANK YOU. thank you for your empathy and the thought you put into mike's disorder. giving mal a genuine fronting trigger (that also makes sense with the little past we know of mike!) and making his character not "evil" shows such attention and research that the writers lacked. you're a wonderful person. thank you for your tenderness :)

this was honestly a well explained and thought out “rewrite” of all stars and it makes me wish even more that the writers of the show put more thought and effort into this season as you did great video! :)

Oh my god the madman made camcody a good plot

Dude, you put so much effort into this video, I’m not sure how this has more views. You understand the issues with All Stars perfectly and do the characters some needed justice here!

Really wasn't on board when you said the finalists were still Mike and Zoe, but I'm glad I pressed on because you had me totally convinced by the end. Your change of Mal from overtop murderous villain to a more lowkey and believable villain is clutch. It really helped to change some of the biggest problems I had with the season.

the rewrite to where chris just lets all the spectators fight for the money again and run free like wild animals during the finale because of how disgusted he is by all the romance, is such a subtle addition in comparison to all the other changes you made but it's so on brand and perfect. that's when i knew you really understood your source material

The musical challenge you mentioned could be the perfect episode 3 challenge. Imagine them performing three acts per team in the same style as the talent show from season 1 with Chef being the main judge (This way you could reference three seasons in one single challenge). Since the Heroes have Courtney, who sings incredibly in both Action and World Tour, Sierra and Mike, they could easily win the challenge. The first act of the heroes would be a comedy act between Sierra and Cameron playing Cody, second act would be Courtney's princess song from Action but renewed, and Mike's final act would be the villain song you mentioned where all of his personalities would perfom. In the villains team, first act a duet between Alejandro and Heather, then Gwen and Duncan, and finally Lightning, who made a song about himself and lost the challenge

Having the cast be spectators for the final challenge is something that after hearing it actually makes its omission baffling. It also helps not make everyone assume the other contestants literally die

honestly, when you went over how the dynamics between characters would work, I knew that you put effort into this! the changes you made were really good, better written than the actual show which did seem to really just..teeter more on mike and zoey. the way you handled mal also worked so much better - you just did an amazing job! id love to see you tackle more tv show rewrites, even if they all take 7 months XD

This was such a great analysis. At so many moments did I go “oh my god, that would have been perfect!” You really hit the nail on the head dude. For so long I’ve believed that All Stars was beyond saving. Watching this video made me think for the first time in years, that, no, maybe it wasn’t. Can’t wait to see what you have planned for the future.

14:23 Honestly Sierra having huge, unstable, tentacular arms is very in-character for her

something I always wanted was for Chester to be a personality that had a lot of trivia knowledge, like the intelligent one. the others have some sort of ability, and Mike is a moral center, so I felt like Chester should've had something

This would make for a fantastic season! It fixes the derailments, fixes Mal, and the eliminations make much more sense, and make the season flow much more naturally for an All Stars season.

I just finished watching this and it was worth it! I love this video and it came out amazing and it deserves more views! I agree with many of your points and this seems not too much different but different enough to be a lot better. You also somehow made Mal so much better! I hope you make more videos soon!

great job on this video!! i love how you kept mike and zoey as the finalists- after tdas i just left thinking they were such bland winners and bland characters as a whole, but you really gave them and mal arcs deserving of a top 2! id love to see more of these sorts of analysis (ahem pahkitew) if you have more in store!! :D

I'm late to this video but as someone with DID, I LOVE THIS!!! You did such a good job making Mal into a proper villain without just being a horrible stereotype, and made the season overall way better!

Wow, this is amazing. I have too many things to comment on, so let me just say this is one of the only well made and intricately written all stars rewrites I’ve ever seen, and easily the best of them all. This is also one of the smartest put together TD videos I’ve seen in general, truly.

Got though watching it... placed it as background music while I worked on something. Love the treatment you gave Courtney even if in the end she didn't win.

This should have been the all stars season, I wouldn't change a single thing, I really liked how you took the original cast of total drama all stars without adding and removing contestants, it just feels more realistic; and you also gave a meaning to Sam, Sierra, Jo, Duncan and Cameron's presence in the show. The elimination order is perfect and also unpredictable at times. Amazing job!

My Rewrite: -All 14 original All-Stars cast members stay with 24 contestants from both Gens 1 and 2 Gen 1 are Courtney, Gwen, Duncan, Heather, Owen, Beth, Alejandro, Sierra, Lindsay, Leshawna, Cody, and Harold and Gen 2 are basically everyone minus Staci -Instead of Heroes vs Villans the team theme will be Gen 1 vs 2 -Mal is kept as the main antagonist but fleshed out more so hes more of a threat than og All-Stars made him -The episode count is back up to 26 like Island, Action, and World Tour - The characters are not derailed and are back to their normal selves -The challenges are actually references to the older seasons with the finale being all the previous finales together basically heres how itd work Part 1 is a throwback to Revenge of the Islands finale where you can use a trash pille to help you complete the challenge Part 2 is a reference to Islands finale where you must climb up a pole to receive a flag and climb a gorge with Shark Infested Waters below wearing Cow and Chicken Hats, Part 3 is a Triva Race a throwback to Actions finale, Part 4 is a throwback to World Tours finale where you need to create a replica of your opponent using the trash pille and throw it off the clift these parts can be done in any order the contestant wants and they can go back to the trash pille to get more materials if they run out, and Part 5 is that the 2 contestants must use the materials to create a floating vechicle and race against each other across Lake Wankawa with the first to reach the finsh line winning the Million Bucks

Have you seen the new poster for the new season? Also awesome rewrite! I really like what you did with Mal Courtney, and Gwen’s character here. If they wrote Mal and the ending like this, maybe this season wouldn’t have been so hated.

This is a really good rewrite! And I like the way you changed Mal so it would feel balanced since in the actual All Stars he appeared to be a little OP and other villians seemed dumbed down.

Imagine if someone animated the script

Why am I just finding this now? This was so good.

I’ve been working on a rewrite of Total Drama island if every team lost the challenges they won in the original season For example The bass lose and vote off ezekiel first after losing the hot tub challenge In this one the gophers would lose and it would keep being opposite until the merge

This rewrite is spectacular. I would have been so happy this being the real season. The most impressive part is how you kept it realistic with the small cast and episode count. I’d love to see you rewrite seasons like Revenge of the island and Action next! Again wonderful job!

this is the content i need on a friday night

I found this 10 months after it was posted and I feel deprived. Amazing video man, earned a new sub.

Waiting for the "rewriting Total Drama Pahkitew Island for 14 months" lol

I love Scott × Courtney, genuinely my 2nd favorite couple in TD media. No I will NOT elaborate

Awesome video man! I like this rewrite idea! it was fun to watch also, would you ever consider fixing Pakitiew as well, because personally I see more to salvage in that season, mainly since I think there are characters and plot ideas that could have been great.

This is quality! Very much enjoyed this

13:30 yassified Cameron

This was great fellow rewriter! I heavily enjoyed it and agreed on most of the points. Although I was kind of doing something while listening to this since it was sort of long so I probably missed some. I saw a comment relating to pahkitew before all stars and I think it would've been good if Pahkitew and Revenge did a crossover season to develop the characters more. And then they could do an all star season with having an all around developed cast. Anyway, I hope you have a nice day!

How do I like a video 10 times this is so good! Everything in this is perfect. I rlly like that musical challenge idea. I hope u do more of these, TDPI def needs a rewrite 😂

finding this after getting into a nostalgic kick for the original series is super nice to see. I'm glad you ket the winners because honestly it makes the most sense for the finale to be mike/zoey as revenge never really got the second season they deserved and very few people felt like viable winners in all stars aside from maybe Scott (Who carried all stars). mike and zoey had the most momentum going into all stars in terms of potential plus mike and Zoey really felt like the main characters in revenge until Mike's elimination at the hands of scott and focus shifted entirely towards Cameron. and I agree that Mal and the rest of all stars plot points aren't the worst conceptually it was just executed horribly and your ideas fix a lot of the issues with all stars as a season while keeping those initial plotpoints in tact which had so much potential. I do still think Brick was snubbed but if he was in the season i feel like you said it would have changed up the dynamics of the season a lot i hope he gets his time to shine though here's hoping the gen 2 cast gets more love in these new seasons

This was godly thank you

Obsessed with you doing this

Must have been such a long job, but you did great. I wish this is what we got.

This took forever to watch and it was worth every second

Why am I just finding this video?😭

would love to see this written like a fanfic

Cast: Generation 1- Alejandro Courtney Duncan Heather Gwen Lindsay and Sierra Generation 2- Brick Cameron Jo Lightning Mike Scott and Zoey Teams: Heroic Hamsters- Brick Courtney Cameron Mike Zoey Lindsay and Sierra Villainous Vultures- Alejandro Duncan Gwen Heather Jo Lightning and Scott TDAS elimination order version in my way is: 14th Sierra 13th Lindsay 12th Lightning _Courtney and Gwen switch teams_ 11th Brick (he replaces Sam) _Mal switches teams instead of Cameron_ 10th Jo 9th Cameron 8th Duncan _MERGE_ 7th Heather 6th Gwen 5th Alejandro 4th Mike/Mal/3rd Zoey (double elimination) The epic final two is Courtney winner Scott runner up

Thats actually really good, so I decided to do one myself: Cast: Courtney, Lindsay, Duncan, Gwen, Trent, Al, Heather, Scott, Jo, Lighting, Cameron, Zoey, Cody, Dawn, Leshawna, Owen, Beth, Izzy, Sierra, Mike, Harold and Brick. Teams: TEAM 1: Courtney, Lindsay, Duncan, Scott, Dawn, Leshawna, Zoey, Lightining, Beth, Mike and Brick. TEAM 2: Gwen, Trent, Heather, Jo, Al, Cameron, Cody, Owen, Izzy, Harold, and Sierra. ORDER OF ELIMINATION AND KEY INFO: 1. Cameron ( Gwen and Trent smile and make eye contact with each other, Jo and Heather fight on Team captain spot). 2. Beth (Heather and Al talk, and make an alliance, Duncan acciedently calls Courtney princess infront of Gwen). 3. Owen ( Gwen hears Trent make a song about her) 4. Sierra (Gwen breaks up with Duncan, because its obvi he stll has feelings for Courtney, and is jealous when scott flirts with her, she is also trying to mend her relationship with Courtney, and is guilty of her feelings about Trent). 5. Lightning & Mike(Lindsay and Courtney have an arguement) 6. Cody (Trent and Gwen talk, Scott realises his feelings for Courtney) No elimination (Courtney makes an alliance with Scott, Gwen and Trent have their first kiss) 7. Jo (Duncan flirts with Courtney more, Dawn sees Scott help an animal and warms up to him, Gwen and Trent are now offical) SHAKE UP TEAMS: they each have to find a badge and a certain logo is on the badge saying ur team TEAM 1: Courtney, Gwen, Heather, Trent, Scott, Brick (YES HEATHER, GWEN AND COURTNEY THE ICONIC TRIOO) TEAM 2: Al, Lindsay, Zoey, Duncan, Dawn, Leshawna, Izzy 8. Zoey (Courtney and Gwen talk, theys till have a problem with each other but not as big) 9. Lindsay ( Courtney and Duncan talk abt there relationship, and decide to keep it a secret) 10. Trent & Harold (Gwen and Courtney talk, and become friends, clearing up the air). No elimination (Reward trip for Team 1 to go shopping, Heather helps courtney buy leng dresses.) 11. Leshawna (Dawn realises she has feelings for Scott) MERGE COMEBACK: Lindsay - fans voted her. 12. Brick (Scott develops feelings for Dawn as they bond over animals, Gwen and Duncan talk, and make peace) 13. Izzy (Heather and Courtney talk about the boys) 14. Al (Gwen talks to Courtney about the boys, and how Scott & Duncan looks at her, Courtney tells her she has no feelings for either). 15. Gwen- challenge was last to do smth gets out (Scott overhears Courtney talk about telling Duncan and Scott who to vote and finds out she is in an alliance with Duncan, he gets consoled by Dawn). 16. Dawn- Courtney overheard her trying to console Scott and thinks she told him abt her plan (Scott and Dawn make their relationship offical and have their first kiss). 17. Scott (Scott confronts Courtney, Courtney be's fake nice to Lindsay). 18. Heather- it was the gwen gets voted out challenge in the actual al-stars but only 1 person goes now (Duncan and Courtney see its safe to make it offical and they do, Courtney is still fake nice to Lindsay). 19. Duncan-challenge was last to do smth gets out (Courtney and Duncan share their last kiss, and raid Chefs kitchen so they have a date of their own. Courtney brings a bit of food for Lindsay to try gt her on her side) FINALE! Team Courtney: Heather, Al, Zoey, and Duncan Team Lindsay: Beth, Izzy, Lightning, and Brick WINNER: COURTNEY! Alternate ending: Lindsay wins by luck

i like this rewrite idea. and to me it sounds alot better than the original season with plot threads from previous seasons being completed instead of forgotten about or ret-conned i like the depth you added to the Gwen and Courtney friendship that didn't make it super shallow. i'm curious how you would rewrite this season if you could add or replace contestants. in one of my versions of all stars i have gone with 20 contestants and 26 episodes. the other is a closer to the original one with 16 contestants and the same season length (the two extra characters are a self insert on the heroes team and feral Zeke on the villains team) (i managed to make the eliminations work with the 2 extra characters on the show by having moon madness eliminate a contestant rather than swap their teams and having a double elimination pre-merge involving the immunity idol and split votes. )

They worked on this for 7 months and they only has 101 likes?!

According to◊ Word of God, the original All-Stars line-up included Owen, Cody, and Brick, but later decisions had them replaced with Gwen and Sam, and the cast cut down to 14. However Owen still managed to get a cameo in the finale, while Cody was frequently mentioned by Sierra with his face appearing in her hallucinations. The same line-up also revealed plots that didn't make it into the season such as Courtney getting revenge on Heather, Duncan getting revenge on Courtney, the continuation of Zoey's commando persona, and Scott creating a new and improved strategy after analyzing past Total Drama episodes.

13:27 1:31:32 Cameron's head on Courtney's body should become a meme. It can be the "Pronto Man"(the Mega Man meme character) of Total Drama fanon.

The fact I liked Mal as chaotic though- but it’s a good video!

this is amazing

Hey! Just saw this in my recommendations. I hope you make more and if you don't I hope you're doing well :) This was extremely well written and I'm super surprised by your claim of lack of experience.

I wouldve change the entire cast. I switched pakitew and allstars in timeline, now the reason for pakitew is that wanakwa is still radiated. And its gonna be a old school big cast presenting the top 4/5 of each season. Cast will be (these are NOT the teams): Island: Leshawna, Duncan, Gwen and Owen. Action: Lindsay, Harold, Courtney and Beth. WT: Sierra, Cody, Heather and Alejandro ROTI: scott, zoey, Cameron and lightning (no mike, shocking i know) PI: Jasmine, sugar(the perfect first to for this season), sky and Shawn Adding the PI cast in it makes it for more unique interactions, old villains can manipulate new an viceversa. And challenges based on former contenders like a Geoff surfing challenge or a Ella musical challenge In short want to make an allstars feel like an allstars

You deserve so much more subscribers this is amazing! If you were to rewrite world tour what do you think are the biggest issues in it?

I skipped most of the intro for time so I don't know if you already set this up as a rule, but what I appreciate about this rewrite is that you took the effort to not completely overhaul anything. I don't think it's necessarily worse or better off that way, but that approach is a lot more challenging than otherwise since you didn't just add or remove anybody from the cast, and you worked out plotlines like Mal's arc and Sierra's "cam-ody" hallucinations instead of taking the easy route by omitting them entirely. It just goes to show really well that the official All-Stars _could_ have been good, even if it had the same general plotlines, but failed from execution.

A thought just occurred to me: how would Sierra react to All-Stars in-universe were she not competing.

All stars Finale should of been Courtney vs Zoey, 1. Girl vs Girl like how in revenge it was boy vs boy, 2. courtney deserved to be in the finale her message since episode 1 season 1 hinted she should of won a season at some point, 3. It would of made since for all stars finale to be one person from the older season(1-3) vs someone from the newer season(season 4)

Honestly the best comparison to the real Mal is Mephiles the Dark from Sonic 06.

Not all heroes wear capes...

My main problem with All Stars is putting all of the antagonists on one team and the protagonists on the other. The whole point of Total Drama to work as a reality show, in my opinion, is to have them on the same team to entertain the audience. That and not bringing back characters such as Leshawna, Brick, Noah, etc.

I'd watch that version!

This. This is the new cannon for All Stars in my head. I am so relieved that you rewrote Mike’s DID to be at least somewhat accurate. While I don’t suffer from it myself, two close friends of mine do, and I’ve gotten to know several alters of both their systems. I also like how you have Mal not quite have a redemption, but how he actually clearly cares about Zoey. It’s honestly strangely sweet for somebody considered to be evil. Note: I’m commenting before finishing the video. Any misconceptions of mine is because of that.

It’s an interesting parallel with Survivor: Heroes vs Villains because the villains dominated in that season early on while the heroes sucked

Good job Man!

bless you for dealing with Mal like ya did! I always hate ooh did bad wawawawawa shit. have the sub.

I really liked this rewrite but I wish you would’ve had like the tier list thing, this would make it more clear of who is left in the game

This was an awesome video, and it was cool that you tried your hardest to stick to the constraints of the original allstars! I actually made an allstars rewrite back in July/August of 2021, but since I didn't watch AS, I essentially rewrote the concept from the ground up! (I'm planning on turning this rewrite into a video) I kind of find it interesting how this is the polar opposite! I think you did the best with what AS had to offer Though I do wanna say, and this is the tiniest nitpick, but isn't Svtlana's trigger being threatened, meaning Mal's trigger is redundant? That's a really dumb nitpick though lol XD

Love you Neodica

I love this video pls do one for phathiew island and mention Sammy small crush on topher LMAOO I LOVE THIS VIDEO

You did well with the existing cannon/ Total Drama All Stars well done.

I prefer this was better than the actual season, thanks for this quality content :)

This is amazing I hope you go far

This vid is super underated

I’m about to watch this .. if I see a continuation of Gwuncan or neglect of Duncney I’m going to cry because I am extreme,y fragile and am not afraid to admit it

2:55 Lindsay and Courtney had a rivalry in action and Courtney and Scott had a romance in this one

Sometimes I like to do stuff like this even if it’s just from the merge and it’s in less details because I’m not that good. Anyway my rewrite for all stars sees Mal and Alejandro start working together before Alejandro finds the footage, so then he tries an undercover mission to overthrow him. He ends up working with Zoey, that when she knows this she puts the pieces together and, even if a bit demoralised of having to work against her boyfriend, she still works with Alejandro cause she wants to save Mike. In the end Mal is eliminated in 3rd and the unlikely Al and Zoey friendship is the final 2. Mal is Alejandro’s second ally so they can still save Mike and have an happy ending. Mal also is the one to create Courtney’s infamous sheet knowing that’s something she would definitely do then framing her with it so that instead of Courtney’s elimination just being dumb it’s used to set up Mal as a strategic threat and not just physical. Also amazing work! This was so fun to watch it’s good to see an all stars that makes sense

Heather and leshawana have an rivalry would be angry at alehandro for being manipulative

My All Stars: Cast: Leshawna, Owen, Lindsay, Brick, Anne Maria, Izzy, Courtney, Mike, Zoey, Scott, Sierra, Cameron, Lightning, Jo, Duncan, Heather, Cody, Alejandro, Dawn, Shawn, Dakota, Bridgette Jasmine, Sky, Dave, Beth, Scarlett, Max, Sugar, DJ and Gwen, (with Mal and Commando Zoey) Teams: Heroes: Owen, Leshawna, Courtney, Mike, Zoey, Sierra, Brick, Cody, Cameron, Dawn, DJ, Jasmine, Sky, Shawn Villains: Anne Maria, Heather, Gwen, Duncan, Scott, Lightning, Jo, Izzy, Alejandro, Max, Scarlett, Sugar, Dave 30th: Beth 29th: Jo Mal and Commando Zoey appear 28th: Dakota 27th: Cody 26th: Sugar Gwen and Zoey swap teams 25th: Cameron 24th: Sierra 23rd: Dave Heather and Mike swap teams 22nd: Scott 21st: Gwen 20th: Max Duncan and Courtney swap teams 19th: Owen 18th: Lightning 17th: Jasmine 16th: Anne Maria Merge 15th: Sky 14th: Leshawna 13th: Dawn 12th: DJ 11th: Scarlett 10th: Izzy 9th: Lindsay 8th: Brick 7th: Shawn 6th: Alejandro 5th: Duncan 4th/3rd: Commando Zoey/Zoey/Heather 2nd: Courtney 1st: Mike/Mal

Bro made one god tier vid and dipped

this was posted on my birthday, no wonder its so good

I feel like Cameron didn’t really get much time in the spot light in all stars- which is weird since he was the last seasons winner so clearly he should have a bigger role. Making him more of a team leader makes a lot more sense.

This was actually hella interesting

making a time machine to get hired by total drama producers to hire you to write all stars HONESTLY JUST THE WHOLE OF TOTAL DRAMA

I'll just pretend this is all cannon 🙂

Hopefully you do more of these in the future! I'd be interested to know about how you'd go about your own season of returning contestants, for example.

Scarlett was kinda murderous

If they made a larger cat they could've made a aftermath with Sierra & a ROTI character that didn't make it to the cast.

I imagine Gwen saw herself in reruns of World Tour in-universe and realized what she did was totally lame. .... hmm. I believe that alters are there as a defense mechanism and are essentially there to protect the main personality so them sacrificing themselves is very on point and also a bit anime, reminds me of old animes that are mostly episodic and light but then everyone but the main character dies at the end.

I think that the other thing that should be change is chris craziness. Because is all-stars and brings backs old contestants, I think they should've brought back Chris sanity. It would've been such and enjoyable season like that.

Other than a few Audio issues this episode was really good!

I don't hate All Stars to the extent that a lot of people do but it's definitely very disappointing and underwhelming for an all stars season. Just the fact that it's 13 episodes instead of 26 like the first three seasons killed a lot of the potential that it had. These were some good changes though! Especially in regards to Mal. I always liked Mike & Zoey despite how contentious they were within the fanbase but there's no denying that Mal is possibly the single most mishandled character/concept in the whole series. Your version was much better and I really wish we got something like that instead of an over-the-top villain with no rhyme or reason to what he does.

Rewriting an already written story takes a lot of time, just look at: "Total Drama Underdogs", where they gave the best treatment to many campers who didn't make it far. Thanks for the store.

You are the greatest of all time (goat)