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gukkiebae

gukkiebae

2 жыл бұрын

🅷🅴🆈, 🅶🆄🆈🆂 🅸 🅺🅽🅾🆆 🅸'🅼 🅻🅰🆃🅴 🅰🅽🅳 🅸'🅼 🆂🅾🆁🆁🆈 🅱🆄🆃 🅷🅴🆁🅴 🅸🆂 🆃🅷🅴 🆅🅸🅳🅴🅾... 🅸 🅷🅾🅿🅴 🆈🅾🆄 🅴🅽🅹🅾🆈 🅸🆃
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𝒫𝓁𝑒𝒶𝓈𝑒 𝒹𝑜 𝒻𝑜𝓁𝓁𝑜𝓌 𝓂𝓎 𝐼𝓃𝓈𝓉𝒶𝑔𝓇𝒶𝓂 (𝒾 𝒽𝒶𝓋𝑒 𝓈𝑜 𝓂𝒶𝓃𝓎 𝒻𝑒𝓌𝑒𝓇 𝒻𝑜𝓁𝓁𝑜𝓌𝑒𝓇𝓈 ㄒ~ㄒ)
𝙸𝚗𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚐𝚛𝚊𝚖 𝙸𝙳: @𝚐𝚞𝚔𝚔𝚒𝟹𝚋𝚊𝚎
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𝚂𝚙𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚢'𝚜 𝙻𝚒𝚗𝚔: 𝚑𝚝𝚝𝚙𝚜://𝚘𝚙𝚎𝚗.𝚜𝚙𝚘𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚢.𝚌𝚘𝚖/𝚞𝚜𝚎𝚛/𝚍𝚞𝚊𝚌𝚢𝚛𝚒𝚒𝚟𝟼𝚘𝚣𝚐𝚍𝚕𝚙𝚡𝚔𝟽𝟷𝟹𝟺𝟼𝚡𝚑?𝚜𝚒=𝚊𝟺𝟿𝟺𝟶𝚌𝚍𝟹𝟿𝟶𝟿𝟶𝟺𝚍𝚎𝚏
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𝔼𝕩𝕔𝕖𝕡𝕥 𝕗𝕠𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪𝕝𝕚𝕟𝕖 𝕀 𝕕𝕠𝕟'𝕥 𝕠𝕨𝕟 𝕒𝕟𝕪𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕞𝕦𝕤𝕚𝕔 𝕠𝕣 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕡𝕚𝕔𝕥𝕦𝕣𝕖𝕤
𝔼𝕧𝕖𝕣𝕪𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕤 𝕓𝕒𝕤𝕖𝕕 𝕠𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕖 𝕒𝕦𝕥𝕙𝕠𝕣'𝕤 𝕚𝕞𝕒𝕘𝕚𝕟𝕒𝕥𝕚𝕠𝕟, 𝕟𝕠𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕚𝕟 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪 𝕚𝕤 𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕝 𝕤𝕠 𝕕𝕠𝕟'𝕥 𝕥𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟𝕪𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕟𝕘 𝕤𝕖𝕣𝕚𝕠𝕦𝕤𝕝𝕪.
ℍ𝕠𝕡𝕖 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕘𝕦𝕪𝕤 𝕝𝕚𝕜𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕚𝕤 𝕧𝕚𝕕𝕖𝕠 𝕠𝕣 𝕤𝕥𝕠𝕣𝕪 𝕠𝕣 𝕗𝕗 𝕚𝕟 𝕨𝕙𝕒𝕥𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕣 𝕝𝕒𝕟𝕘𝕦𝕒𝕘𝕖 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕔𝕒𝕝𝕝 𝕚𝕥
𝕤𝕖𝕖 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕚𝕟 𝕞𝕪 𝕟𝕖𝕩𝕥 𝕗𝕗
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#btsff #taehyung #taehyungff #kimtaehyung #kimtaetae #fanfiction #ff #bts #kimtaehyungff #oneshot #kthff #kthoneshot #btstaeff

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@farihamim9847
@farihamim9847 2 жыл бұрын
Trust me everytime jk said “my love” and 7:20 this time when it said that “ his love for her (y/n) was eternal” I laughed so hard but ironically..lol..if he would loved her that much how could he let her die for his ex even tho he thought she was pregnant that doesn’t mean y/n couldn’t be his first choice to be saved by him and she saved him when he was about to commit suicide and that’s how he repay back!!! And now the audacity he has to say he loved her☠️if love is like that then it’s good to be single
@Lea-lq8kt
@Lea-lq8kt 2 жыл бұрын
That makes so much sense btw💯
@IVspade
@IVspade 2 жыл бұрын
Exactly 😋
@Youarealoser97
@Youarealoser97 2 жыл бұрын
A well deserved ending. He is facing the consequences for choosing the wrong path. I’m just glad he isn’t fighting to get back y/n bc he knew he lost her forever and that she is happy with Yoongi. Yuna also changed for the better. I liked the character development. But there were some missing stuff like how she was saved and all but overall this was good
@aindrilamitra1167
@aindrilamitra1167 Жыл бұрын
For the first time I really loved the vamp's character development....loved it ❤️❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
@SaltySuga__
@SaltySuga__ 2 жыл бұрын
This is amazing 😭
@dola8680
@dola8680 2 жыл бұрын
This is a good ending but I'm still not satisfied. Jungkook went away just like that??? He didn’t regret enf like he deserved..... nothing just a bye and gone.... I wanted him see y/n in yoongi's arms...watching them living a happy life.....wanted to see him in more pain. But guess what it ended right away. Otherwise the ff is good
@reetarani7931
@reetarani7931 2 жыл бұрын
👍In the whole ff I was waiting for him regretting but it didn't come....he didn't even get shock when he saw y/n alive after so many yrs😐.
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
thank you for your honest opinion I'll try to get better at my writing skills and I hope I won't disappoint you in my next ff...
@aeiaemily3162
@aeiaemily3162 2 жыл бұрын
This was the bestest. Best ff I have ever seen . Im I'm lucky to see it . Great job author . Hope you flourish well ✨ 🙏 ☺ 😊
@zarahvanderlaan6584
@zarahvanderlaan6584 2 жыл бұрын
yesss loved it!! im glad yn didn't end up with jungkook
@sushmitasaha2948
@sushmitasaha2948 2 жыл бұрын
both yuna and junkook deserve this
@Edits4swifties
@Edits4swifties 2 жыл бұрын
i cried when she died yuna is a legend in this story yuna rests god forgives her and shes watching over us
@le-anne4309
@le-anne4309 Жыл бұрын
I am speecless ! A dark story , that's what this one is ! A well written but painful story
@rashithakurela4423
@rashithakurela4423 2 жыл бұрын
I really love the ending .....👀❤️
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
Which part of of the ending did you like... the jungkook leaving one or Yuna dying one?? Just curious 🤔
@rashithakurela4423
@rashithakurela4423 2 жыл бұрын
@@gukkiebae ofc not ........jungkook leaving ...i love this part.... without creating another mess...bcz somehow he himself know he is not worth of y/n's forgiveness..... Yahhhhh!!!!! Do u perhaps see me as a psycho 🥲
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
@@rashithakurela4423 lol no I don't see you as a psycho
@hweerakoon
@hweerakoon 2 жыл бұрын
Doctors can't do that in real life. As I know you can donate both the kidneys if only you're brain dead or your life can't be saved. And I truly choose death rather than accepting such a person's kidneys. If he truly loved you he wouldn't have left you, even for a pregnant ex and expect others to save you. Actually it's impossible. If I really was y/n, I'll definitely beg universe to take my life, from the moment he left me as if I was never a choice. Anyway I enjoyed this ff, and thanks for your hard work.
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
ik dear it's just i needed to add some mirchi-masala to the story so it'll be a little more intresting
@mayanoor6452
@mayanoor6452 2 жыл бұрын
Author can you please make one bonus part??
@kimjehak2
@kimjehak2 9 ай бұрын
All I know he didnt even love her Btw why jk belaiming only Yuna for me he's the only one at fault
@cloudy_tae3483
@cloudy_tae3483 Жыл бұрын
😢
@jeonsneha_
@jeonsneha_ 2 жыл бұрын
😌yoongi and yn
@music-dw5mb
@music-dw5mb 2 жыл бұрын
Sorry neither JK or Yuna deserved a second chance. He did not suffer enough and neither did she. Yes, she may have donated both of her kidneys, but so what? Whatever Yuna did in the end was by her own choosing as a way to right her wrongdoing, which made things seem somewhat anticlimactic. And of course, y/n has to be so forgiving in the end. Really y/n??? (His ex lied about her pregnancy, destroyed your marriage and tried to kill you.) But then again, if Jk was so willing to leave you in a burning car and dash off with his ex, then maybe Yuna did you a favor by showing you his true colors. Nevertheless, this was a good twoshot.
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
thank you for your honest opinion I will definitely try to improve my skills as I'm still a beginner...
@music-dw5mb
@music-dw5mb 2 жыл бұрын
@@gukkiebae no no no….. there is no need to improve your writing skills. There isn’t anything wrong with them. You provided a solid storyline that was very interesting and entertaining. ( Please understand that just because I or anyone else does not agree with your VISION for a fanfic, this is not a bad reflection of your writing skills.) KEEP WRITING author. 😀
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
@@music-dw5mb thank you dear but I thought that this wasn't one of my best works yet I wanted to rewrite it again but I was too pressured by my parents at that time so I couldn't focus on writing the ff properly... it's totally fine if you don't find my work good I would just ask you guys to advice me so that this beginner ff author can improve his/her skills
@dinadaniella9317
@dinadaniella9317 Жыл бұрын
Ululululu drama
@user-cq9ye7kz3o
@user-cq9ye7kz3o 2 жыл бұрын
no lmao trying to kill someone/actually killing somone is so dmn wrong saying 'they deserve a second chance' is like giving them another time/chance to kill you again I dont feel bad for Yuna she deserves it she literally almost killed someone.
@rhondapowers146
@rhondapowers146 2 жыл бұрын
Was part one deleted? Never got to see it.
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
no it is still there
@shamajodhawat6470
@shamajodhawat6470 Жыл бұрын
Is this the second part
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae Жыл бұрын
yes
@ree6042
@ree6042 2 жыл бұрын
was it love or just guilt? why he choose his ex again over the one he claimed he loves?
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
because at first he used yn to suppress his feeling for his but when she came back all those feelings came back
@nuraalikaj4400
@nuraalikaj4400 Жыл бұрын
Last song title please
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae Жыл бұрын
Falling by Trevor Daniel
@kookie7048
@kookie7048 2 жыл бұрын
Where's part 1?
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
kzfaq.info/get/bejne/a8mIlrB8rM7Jho0.html
@lachimolalalafanfics1862
@lachimolalalafanfics1862 2 жыл бұрын
Hello armies, can anyone tell me where's the first part of this video 🥺🥺
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
It's in the community posts dear
@lachimolalalafanfics1862
@lachimolalalafanfics1862 2 жыл бұрын
@@gukkiebae oki unnie 😁
@bts.euphoria
@bts.euphoria 2 жыл бұрын
You had good idea for story but you're way / style of writing is bad..everything is so rushed, without any order, you move from one event to another too fast without any background story and many times nothing is in harmony, and it doesn't make sense. Also some parts of the story don't fit with the events before that... for example: how Yoongi saved Y/n after he left Jungkook in the hospital if the car with Y/n exploded while Jungkook was still there and witnessed it? If she was alive, someone who was there would have already saved her there, and they wouldn't have waited for Yoongi to show up. Or in one moment you write that Jungkook's company went bankrupt and then you write that he is one of the top 10 best CEOs in Korea. There should be at least couple of sentences that explain how he went from bankruptcy to the position of being in the top 10. As for the part of story that Y/n is the best CEO, you just suddenly move on to that story without any introduction. The story is full of omissions and you still have a lot of work to do to improve and be good at writing. One more thing, characters in ff are also so confusing.. especially Jungkook's. He doesn't know what he wants or who he loves. Of course, I will support you because you have potential and I am telling you all this just so that you know where you are making mistakes so that you can correct them over time and be better. My goal is not to make you sad or make you stop writing. I hope you will understand that my comment is well-intentioned criticism and advice, not hate.
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, dear, I can already tell you are really experienced in writing, I'll take into account what you told me and improve my writing skills, thanks a lot dear for advising me and correcting me and also supporting me I hope I won't disappoint you in my next ff...
@nyes8079
@nyes8079 2 жыл бұрын
So what jk said while being drunk was true.. That he still had feelings for yuna? Did he love yn? I really wanna know..
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
Yes what he said was true
@nyes8079
@nyes8079 2 жыл бұрын
@@gukkiebae you didn't reply clearly... If he still had feelings for yuna then he was really talking to her late nights n msging n smiling..? Why would he call her MISS YUNA then at the office? N lastly did he love yn?
@gukkiebae
@gukkiebae 2 жыл бұрын
@@nyes8079 yes he did love yn but the reason why jungkook broke up with Yuna was because she cheated on him but the reason why he was smiling was he was talking about the baby with Yuna
@nyes8079
@nyes8079 2 жыл бұрын
@@gukkiebae oh ok thank you for replying.... I just felt jk deserved a second chance after five years..
@nyes8079
@nyes8079 2 жыл бұрын
@@gukkiebae wait but you said what he said when he drunk was true so still loves yuna???? I'm getting confused... Sorry can you plz explain me... Plzzz author
@umaira036
@umaira036 2 жыл бұрын
I loved it but I feel bad for jungkook a little bit but it's fine.
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