SPOILERS: No One Has Written A Scene Like This Before (Maybe)

SPOILERS: No One Has Written A Scene Like This Before (Maybe) - [apt] 16

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Nathan has written his first potential book scene, and it has some mind-bending internal monologue. Steve gives his live reaction, but we also want yours. Does it make sense?
-- In this video --
00:00 Knowledge Acceleration Board
03:23 Background to Scene
05:36 Nathan's First Scene
08:44 Steve's Thoughts
13:41 Manipulating Memories
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Our channel name "Add Placeholder Text" honors the ‘unknowns' in the early stages of writing a book. While we have many ideas, we are also aware of major gaps in our story and our characters. Names, traits, and even plot points are often placeholders that may look very different in the finished product. We also hope that our skills as writers will follow a similar path. Like our story ideas, our writing skills start out raw and tentative, filled with 'placeholder' ideas that we will fill in as we learn. We invite you to join us on this journey as we turn our placeholders into a skillful story worthy of a New York Times bestseller!
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@jonhummel4341 17 күн бұрын

I wonder if the device used to send them back is leaking latent time energy that is affecting Janet's personal timeline. Oh, so the presence of Tyrone is causing the memory paradox she's having. Cool. I liked the structure of writing you used. Or, to put it another way, you seem like you're getting some good practice writing. Keep it up and that book will be written in no time. Maybe before the end of 2030. Okay, hopefully a bit before then. So, you could flesh out Tyrone more in this scene or you can intentionally leave it more vague and reveal more as events unfold. The choice is yours based on what his purpose in the story will be.

@AddPlaceholderText 10 күн бұрын

[ND] Interesting guess! I had told my dad some about my idea before writing this scene, so that probably colored his interpretation of it, making it easier for him to figure out the meaning than for you. One thought we have now is to potentially make this scene a part of a larger prologue, and developing more of both Janet's and Tyrone's character in it. At the very least, I need to have a better knowledge of Tyrone's so I can write him better in the scene.