I have always disliked the appearance of the Excelsior-class vessels. The front portion of the secondary hull has always looked bloated to me.

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He was a Geordy :)

aye man got to love them geordie klingons we do get aboot like ha

A Scottish translation of M'artok?? :)

A Scottish Klingon?? If so he sure would love destroying a ship called USS Longshanks in the name of Robert the Bruce or William Wales.LOL...Longshanks ?... really, may as well call a ship Napoleon or Genghis Khan...maybe in the ISS fleet!! Well done though..

oops.. Wallace not Wales ...sorry

I assume the actor who played Klingon is Shakespeare-trained like Sir Patrick Stewart? 😊😊

I agree a little more money for the sets an effects would improve the short fan film but I wonder about them getting a notice from Paramount/CBS they tend to be sue happy these days against fans of the franchise.

Yes -don't these video makers preview their own creations for too much background noise?

@@raymondstpaul4913 As long as it's less than 15mins they'll leave them alone

@@willtabacchi1408 Not everybody has the technical know-how to fix these problems. A lot of the minutia of film making isn't common knowledge. A lot of fan films would benefit greatly from an ADR session, a bit of foley, or original musical composition. Sadly, while amateur CGI and cinematographers make fan films amateur sound engineers generally tend to go into music.

I checked on your channel to see your fan films .... humm, I guess you haven't posted yet.

My issues with most new Trek productions is the lack of acting. I think the folks playing the Captain and the others on the bridge could have projected more drama. All they did was talk their lines.

The Vorch'as fleet was showing mercy. Klingon mercy. :)

Agreed, superb job! Looking forward to part 3.

really good

Custom09, yes agreed! It is good.

CBS does Star Trek for political purposes, not for entertainment. They don't know how to entertain any more.

@Mr A Productions You mean Tardigrades right? The show based on that Tardigrade indie game huh?

@@Artifactsofmars I think if they would have just named the show Tardigrades and left Star Trek out of it, I think it would have been a good show, but instead of making a deal and pay some royalties to the developer of the game they would rather try to pass it off as a Star Trek show, I guess they think everyone is stupid, then they write the Tardigrade out of the show so they can avoid more legal trouble, even though the Tardigrade was one of the most interesting things on the show. So they base a show on a game about Tardigrades and then put the Tardigrade out of the show, so now what? How will season 2 ever be better than the first? Actually I know how they could have really made it really interesting. Season 1 ends where they get lost, well they could have made them get lost in the past somewhere in the Delta quadrant in a strange part of space. The doctor still is out of it from the spatial jump, the entire crew starts having trouble concentrating on things and they don't know if it's from the jump or some other anomaly. The only one not affected is the cyborg girl because of the cybernetic components in her brain. So as the crew starts to turn more and more into babbling idiots the engineer creates some devices which will connect everybody's mind to the cyborg girl so she can help bring order to everyone's minds. So they slip into a type of hive mind and continue to try to find a way back because another jump will kill the doctor. So they travel all around a part of the Delta quadrant meeting different races, having a few battles, and the find that being connected actually helps them do their tasks and battles better. Towards the end of the season they find a race that uses an advanced form of medical nanites for healing and repair to damaged organs. So they think that a modified version of the nanites might help the doctor to make the jump without harm. The doctor now with the modified nanites find that they make him feel better almost euphoric. He expresses concern about the others possibly having more negative effects from another jump and says they should all get injected with the nanites, so they do and prepare for the jump back home. As they are about to jump the nanites have some kind of electromagnetic reaction with the interface and the shore drive overloads and explodes, and that the end of season 2.

They only look like glasses. It's actually an Augmented Reality Condensed Holographic InterfaceE (or ARCHIE). Hey, it's a fan-film, they can have non-canon tech.

I also took the liberty of writing brief entries on the USS Longshanks and Star Trek; Deception on the Star Trek Expanded Universe wiki. I hope that was okay.

I thought a Excelsior class bridge would be much bigger than a shuttle cabin.

Well...SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!! hah

@@k.k.9800 Did you see her command collar buttons go from one side to the other too? I had to laugh but you have to give them an A for effort. Way better than STD (Spore Trek Disease)

One of the scene was probably reversed

@@CaptainM792 if that was true then everything would be reversed, not only her combadge.

Sorry but the professionals actually do it better, you know why? they have the money to do it This production is low budget It does not matter if the people does this love the project, if they don't have the money, the production is poor, not their fault

The problem with modern trek is the high budgets, they attract the wrong kind of people that aren't in it because they love the franchise. That's the reason modern trek has become garbage.

Kerbal Space Command Like it or not, It needs new ppl, otherwise Franchise is dead, CBS won't run a franchise that does not make money That does not make any sense at all, If Star Trek Fans don't love the franchise, then you are not a Star Trek fan.

I think that she is still too demure.

Thank you!! The first positive comment this video has received in ages😅

i was just talking today about how many people are triggered by Spock's beard. It's just a beard.

I read your response. I've been watching Star Trek since 1982 and I'd say I regard TNG as 'my own'. That said Disco is a modern show therefore it's made for a modern audience. Yes it's imperfect but they are working on it. The beard serves an important function in that it signals Spock's youth and distinguishes him from Quinto.

Some people are allergic to Retinax

*The Fuppits* In Kirk's era, not everyone could take Retinax. McCoy gave Kirk a pair of antique glasses to take care of the problem. It's possible that even in Picard's era, some people might still need corrective lenses, and might prefer glasses to contacts. Or... Maybe those aren't glasses. Not the way WE think of them, anyway.

the guy wearing glasses, maybe he is a hipster in their time

Lots of planets have a north! :-)

Hope we get a Geordie Klingon in Deception 3 " Why aye mon, where's me Batleth"?

And broon bloodwine!

Their core as been breeched man.

Back in 1994, there was a Star Trek Con in Glasgow and Michael Dorn was GoH. Naturally, the local Klingon group joined him on stage, in full make-up and military regalia... and they were wearing Kilts! It goes wi'out saying that if they were speaking Klingon, it'd be wi' a Scottish accent...