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We're giving Vox too much power. He'll eventually rewrite the whole universe.

A Steven Universe Fan-fiction without incest, uncomfortable and forced romantic scenes, and even its very well narrated? Oh ma' Cookie Cat!

True to Steven Universe, there is a more-than-6-months hiatus between episodes.

3 years later still want a part 2

Looks like Steven Universe got the Full Metal Alchemist Brotherhood treatment in the thumbnail

Last time I was this early Steven was stress free

"next time" - Vox six months ago

yo why can't i find part 2? didn't he have plans they reached the like goal

14:45 "Amethyst shiftshapes" Getting a little jumbled up there huh Vox

_I want Vox to rewrite my school popularity_

0:33 peri is so short and her hair is so big there and she’s on a farm that now we can officially call her a ranch dorito

Rebecca Sugar:*Writes Steven Universe* Roundtable:It's rewind time

Rewriting SU for me would basically end up being: 1. Have Steven not presented as 100% in the wrong when Connie got mad at him 2. Have a Bismuth episode where she somehow escapes the bubble in season 4, and has to confront her own anger before getting poofed again (maybe she tries to free corrupted gems and they poof her, i dunno), thus not having her instantly be a-ok with everything when she comes back in season 5. 3. Have the Homeworld White Diamond stuff be an entire season

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Enjoyed the heck out of this, personally I like the use of the characters in more main story episodes. keep it up vox!

I really liked Peridot's older design with her limb enhancers, so seeing her find some and keep them permanently would've honestly been amazing.

I would make it so that Steven isn't in every episode and scene so that we could get other's POV

Wait, wouldn't Connie die during hyper space? I'm pretty sure that Pearl or Garnet said something about being worried for Steven cause he's organic.

I think season 4 was made for more character development, introdecing new charatcers, and give certain characters more screen time, etc. and stuff like.

5:11 Steven: do you know pink diamond? Peridot: bro I was born in era 2 so yea 😬

Love that the changes involve giving characters more screen time for development. It was what I always wished was more emphasized in the show.

art with koda has been improving like crazy

I think a crying pink murial would be too on the nose, but pink zumans would be tasty foreshadowing

4years later and still waiting for the next part😢

This is really great! Adding Peridot, Connie and Lapis to the Zoo arc really made them feel like more than side characters, and I was always disappointed about how they said they would go back for the Rubies but never did. I can't wait to see an episode 2 of this!

rip peri's limb enhancers

Why did we never get episode 2? It’s not too late, vox! I’d still watch it!!

Vox:see you in the next episode Me: it’s been 84 years

This is such a breath of fresh air! Most of the time I see people "rewriting" something, ESPECIALLY with Steven Universe, it mostly just feels so aggressive, like they really are trying to "one-up" the actual writers. THIS, however, feels like a genuine love letter to the series. You love it, and have your own ideas about how certain elements should be. It's fun, it's creative, and more importantly it ISN'T attacking the creators. Stay positive, my dude

Honest the first 20 eps of Steven U felt disconnected from the rest of the series. The gems started off more magical than scifi. I wish they'd kept Magic based Tech in the brief.

You didn’t put down the episode two yet 😭 I’ve been waiting so long

Steven:connie Pearl:lapis Amethyst:peridot Garnet:bismuth Lmao I would love this so much I wanna see them fuse

*Overarching Storyline:* [appears in its existence] *Writers:* IT'S REWIND TIME!!!

"Why do you think steven universe is a good show?" Me: Yes

I was kind of hoping instead of the uncomfortable moment where everyone fights over Greg I would've made it to where Steven's side of Stevonnie's earrings lights up and then Connie's side lights up choosening them and yeah

“Let’s save that for next time!” Many months later...

Yes i always wanted Pearl to wear her space suit in the zoo instead of obviously showing her Crystal Gem star. it was such a missed opportunity in the first place

Roundtable: How many more Steven universe episodes you want? Us: *yes*

I love that the show changed from Magic to Sci-fi it feels like we’re living through Steven. Going from believing that the gems were this do no evil group of goddesses to finding out the secrets that lie behind it. Once suprised settled it felt great😭

At first I was unsure if I would like it but after hearing what was had to be offered was actually waaay better than I expected and I began to love these new changes and would really love to see this becoming a Comic Dub series! 🤩

That cool scene in adventures in light distortion probably wouldn't happen with peri on board, as she would know how to callibrate the ship properly

My least favourite bits about the show are the lack of consistent development on Lapis, and that Connie Steven fight and Connie on homeworld

We need an animator to animate these episodes *STAT*

Bruh I've have been waiting for 6 months and still no part 2 rip

This is why fanfiction exists 😅

I just want some cool fights :(

You NEED to make this a series! I'm still waiting for parts and I watched this since it came out PLEEEAAAASSSSEEE!!!!!!!😢😢😢😢😢

Lowkey had a better time watching this than most of season 4

Him: IF we can get 4k likes on this... IF... IF... Us: were about to START this whole buttons career.

Okay, this reminds me: Bucky should have become mayor. It's so small and so pointless and a theory that Vox gave _so_ long ago, but I was so pissed that the episode called "Dewey wins" didn't feature a Dewey actually WINNING.

We've gotten used to long hiatus's at this point, I can handle a year long hiatus. Yep. Definitely.

Dude, this is so good, please make part 2

I would rewrite the story so that Ruby and Sapphire say, "I love you" to each other and we see more of them as a their own gems, not just as Garnet all the time (like, maybe have them separate naturally doing their own thing without it being triggered by conflict. You know, seeing two people beyond just a relationship) It can't just be me that wants to see Steven interacting with his mom's without him acting as an emotional support pillar.

What if corrupted jasper walked over into pinks palenquin and fell asleep and then garnet poofed her so jasper can finnaly feel at peace

I love how he is playing Ruby Rider in the background 😂

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pink Steven makes sense. for him to exist, the physical form of pink diamond would have to be so intricately woven into his cellular structure, making it so complicated that the pure light form on its own is complex enough to mimic human anatomy perfectly. and this complexity causes it to even emulate the brain, giving the light form it's own control that usually the gemstone would have. so no, pink can't control her own physical form, it's controlling itself. hopefully you understand?

13:11 is a must do!! Peridot getting her stuff back will be amazing!! Oh gosh so cool!

I know this was like 3 years ago but, I honestly agree on your idea of the show being re-written in your way. And seeing Jasper as more than a villain is something i wish the writers would have done too. I honestly had wished the the writers and Rebecca would have given Jasper more screen time with just as she did with Lapiz and peridot.

I would love absolutely love seeing these episodes in real life or even if you create a story board abput it and or make it an animation. Just something to qennck (obviously dont know how to spell that) our thirst for steven universe. That will be all. As steven universe is an important thing to me and really gave me the courage to open up and accept that i was bi and many other things so seeing something like this just rewriting our favorite show as a community really stans out to me. So many puns in this comment

I am LOVING all of these tv rewrites so far. I really enjoyed the altered ending of Star vs the forces of evil, which did a much better job at giving a proper ending to the show. Your rewrites have fixed all of my problems so far, and I'd really like you to more of these.

I think the rewrite was pretty great for most part, we needed more stuff with Pink Diamond, Peridot, Lapis, and Jasper and I say you did well.

Bro this is so awesome I’m so sad we didn’t get a part two 😭😭😭

meanwhile: spinel waits in the garden...

This is the kind of content I needed oh my gosh!!! I do have to say I never thought of writing in Jasper that way in her monster form. I doubt it would have been easy for Steven to handle at first with her just considering him Rose, but I like your spin! Also, all the things with Connie, Lapis, and Peridot. Dude, those three give me life! I definitely love the Stevonnie bits added to the Zooman arc as well, and just the thought of the Zoomans interacting with them makes me grin! Sorry for the ramble. I really love this, and can't wait to see Part 2!

I'm sorry, but in the zoo arc, you can't put Lapis here. Mostly because she's afraid to go back on homeworld at that time...

Everyone: *actually giving good ideas and some changes to a plot* Me: LaPiDoT FuSiOn?¿

Its been 3 years there will never be a part2 💀

Stevonnie zooman outfit *YES*

I realized this a while ago, but, you guys know when the Crystal Gems form got changed to the really small size in “Adventures In Light Distortion?” That was the size of *Pebbles.*

Man those ‘you should be a writer’ comments totally stroked his ego

Introducing my new totally original show: Sorta Cool-iverse

I wouldn't mind a Steven Universe rewrite at all. I mean I'd do a Star vs reboot myself if I ever was in charge of the series (with less pandering and romantic plot tumors obviously)

Who is still waiting for a part 2?

wheres part 2

Interesting rewrite on the Zoo arc, it would be really cool if Connie, Lapis, and Peridot came along with the Crystal Gems to the human zoo.

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Loving this rewrite! A lot of the story makes a lot more sense and flows better when put this way. Thank you! Question: is Part 2 up yet? Not trying to rush, I just want to know. If not, take your time with it! Looking forward to its release :)

The only thing I'm gonna change is Steven's Birthday to which the plot point Steven must decide to stay a kid forever or grow up normally and it ends with Steven keeping his tween form. The rest of the episodes(now with his new tween default form) can go as usual even with the Vox rewrites. Although I'm gonna add new powers for Steven as the episodes goes on maybe in "Scavenge Hunt" or add in my own episodes involving discovering his new offensive yet pacifistic powers.

We all need to think for a minute. Some of u might already know about this gem. Hope diamond. The diamond that is the most famous and most powerful diamond. It’s in a museum right now, because it has caused deaths to the owners. So hope diamond would be a great villain for su

I'm excited to see where this series goes; there was a lot of stuff that I agreed with on the video. Love the channel man.

VOX, PLEASE MAKE A NEW PART OF THIS.

That cliffhanger at the end doesn’t matter if you don’t make a part 2

Honestly your changes are interesting! I can t wait to hear next episodes ^^. I love how you put jasper lapis and peridot more role ^^ it s very good and it makes more sense somehow ^^

Me: *clicks on video* Video: *STEVEN UNIVERSE-*

I'd rewrite a few things to allow Rose to speak in Steven's room in the temple, mostly so old friends could reminisce.

Where this is satisfying to an extent I do like how Steven universe played out on its own. I wouldn't stress the wanting to know of pink diamond cause Steven universes theme overall is to be light hearted. To overly rewrite would remove planned conflict. And take away from Stevens perspective.

Thank you so much for this i really enjoyed hearing a cleaned up version of this arc! please keep up the amazing work Vox! :)

GODDAMNIT A CLIFFHANGER I WAS REALLY GETTING INTO THE STORY ;-;

wish this was completed

I love Steven Universe, this show gives me so much creativity and I've always wondered what SU would be like if it was more gore, horror kinda theme, I even rewrote it a while back and tweaked it a little not too long ago, Blue Diamond is one of my absolute favorites and I had many Inspo backgrounds that I thought fitted her perfectly For Example: I wanted Blue to be a mystical terror, like those in ancient folklore with some kind of serpent or threat deep in the ocean. I got that inspo from a CHILDREN'S MOVIE (Ponyo by Studio Ghibli), the one scene where Granmamare was scene floating on her back in the ocean. A couple twists and change of setting/mood and she could turn into a horrifying monster floating on the ocean floor/surface. I imagined blue with big sharp psychopathic eyes that she opens rarely (Inspo from Ballora, FNAF) and a screeching laugh. I also took Inspo from that one scene in SU with malachite in chains, so instead of malachite being in chains on the ocean floor it was Blue. ALSO (one more thing) Blue can be such a cinnamon roll, she is amazing and I think it would great to see that side of her in the show..but I believe that the redemption arc is something I don't see fitting. She was a mass murderer who inflicted pain on others and I don't think it would be very easy for her to relieve that traumatic experience in just a few episodes. So instead, I decided that Blue would lose her sanity and well being after the loss of Pink Diamond, (which is kinda fitting since her powers revolve on emotion and psychological control..) tell me what you think I think this version seems kinda cool :"D

Come on Boss Sugar, we need this man on the team.

This is fun and i like how you rewrite everything in a better way. I never got to see most episodes air at all and i didn't feel what most fans felt because i didn't get to see the full episodes on youtube without paying so i went for other people to provide clips at least so still never a full episode without missing parts. But your version from what i thought is better and more worth my time to see. 😌

*I love The Jasper part. I wish that would have happened-* "Im a hardcore Jasper fan-"

It has been 2 years. 2 YEARS!!! i've been hoping and waiting for episode 2 of this cause i really like the way u rewrite steven universe. It's brings out my fav characters that weren't focused in the original story.😭❤❤❤

"Palinkin" lol

This was a really good rewrite and feels like more satisfying character development and continuity/flow compared to what the actual gave us show. Though I think Jasper being 'redeemed' in monster reunion might feel rushed in just an 11-minute episode due to her stubbornness and need for extra convincing, I could maybe see it being similar to the bismuth episode?

Quick question: If lars and steven fused, does that mean that the large amount of pink diamond energy could amplify future lars' portal ability to potentially create time travel?

well, still waiting for p2