Thanks for this useful lecture for students, especially for research students, who struggle in writing.

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These breakdowns with actual samples is so helpful.

Summary: 2:16 a paragraph is a "unit of an idea"; the building block of academic writing + coherent: logic within the paragraph and between paragraphs; relevant and sequential + cohesion: linkages before and after the sentence/ paragraph; highlight the connection between ideas

This is very useful to the students who is struggling to write a paragraph. In creating good paragraph, there are a lot of factors we have to considered. (Annisa Maharani, UNNES)

Hi, I am Ludwig from Semarang State University. Thankyou for the awesome explanation of write a good paragraph, coherent and cohesion. That is very help me to write my paragraph.

Very detailed and insightful explanation. Thank you, this is very helpful for me! (Hani Nahdiati, from Semarang State University)

It is a very insightful video. Those tips are giving me a better understanding on how to create better paragraphs. It is very helpful. Thank you (Ailanisa Fistiari, UNNES).

Hi, it's Adila from Semarang State University. This is a good topic! Some students tend to neglect the importance of cohesive and coherence in writing a paragraph. Thank you.

Hi, my name is Mohamad Ahsanul Ihsan from UNNES. Thanks for making this video. As a student, this is very important in writing academic paragraph.

It's a great explanation! now I'm not confused about making a good paragraph. Thank you! (Antesa Cellindho F, UNNES)

Thanks a lot for your explanation for the structure

Hi,I'm juniarta I think this video very help me to know about cohesive and coherence and make me easy to understand about it. Thank you

Thank you for this wonderful lesson! This is quite helpful for research students while writing paragraphs! Unnes (Ria Aldila Putri, Unnes)

thanks for this great lesson! This is very useful for research students in building paragraphs! (Anastasya Regina A, UNNES)

This explanation gives me better understanding how to create a better paragraph, especially about the coherent and cohesion in paragraph. (Essie S. Yuniardi, UNNES)

For me, the most difficult thing when writing an academic paragraph is determining the linking sentence, but thanks for the explanation, I know how to reduce repetition in my paragraph. (Ipung, UNNES)

Thank you, your explanation is very clear now i know what the elements of the paragraph and how to create a good paragraph. (Moralina.UNNES)

Thanks for the explanation, this make me understand what is good paragraph and the coherent and cohesion. (Mahera, UNNES)

It's a great video! this video help me to know about cohesive and coherence. (Lidya Agustina. UHN, UNNES)

this video is very good and helps me in writing a paragraph (srirahayu UNNES,UMK)

I got a new understanding of how to write a good paragraph (M Dipta Aditya, UNNES)

Thank you

I always forget the structure after finishing one semester……

Thank you! The source you provided from Birmingham University does not seem to work now. I founded this one: www.bcu.ac.uk/about-us/education-development-service/centre-for-academic-success-student/resources